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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% K' p1 G7 @9 A7 x' d
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     One day I always remember9 [7 u0 G4 i- h

( j  o& X  e8 U$ ~: K+ O7 o  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was- ?& \( F  f% R& ^( C

- S6 u+ F$ O& a, U+ ]  O" _! dexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to& u' D* M; P# p' ~

1 ~5 C; L( M4 J# a6 j3 `* Qput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my0 V1 |. i  \- V. z; {5 b8 s  w

' @1 U  u/ J% p/ k* d2 ~ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,8 ]3 U! y, p* ^5 X& a; J" o

9 z7 z5 S% b/ p4 ?8 c$ ]# |/ B every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid& L9 e& i. {$ M8 \" r) m! P

- |1 X/ U# U% F3 c2 Y! ?. Q/ D was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely $ e: _+ v% h0 _' L1 f* {$ F2 s
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since # x" b% E* ~2 o+ S
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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4 `2 t; a9 X4 L' u5 F  v on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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. k" q) G9 h9 h6 I  Ffor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.+ j9 U  ?0 Y7 ~$ I; |( d: u! \

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will5 ?8 V" k) w; q

3 E; ^, o0 g* y# N7 B: | never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe., ~  O. Z6 |6 M
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!$ B/ M" u- e$ H
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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