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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

/ N  h2 Z- @( F% |- o& W  t% \　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- ?5 Z# R/ p1 i, G: w9 ]: _exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

. L6 ^8 N% d+ s$ h/ l. U' _3 Qput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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: X: ?5 P* w- a& i8 {& r little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

, ^  U0 S5 q! \6 v9 x1 S$ o) Wtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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3 [! d* K) R  M& W on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

/ C  D+ D# ]6 mdeaest daughter.

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6 \8 @- G! s7 D( @. N8 o3 q' A9 KAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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' v) e- z( c- N1 K1 H& L! g* `3 ^. r$ E never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
' X+ c) R  `: awe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

GREAT！