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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 P. Z' U; r! `" ?+ qexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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9 D% [' Q' y  ~% U every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

* ^2 L. W+ W+ v8 `trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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7 Q% |$ a. r' s- I$ q, Bthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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& Q# Z. r7 s4 m2 i* a on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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2 ^% e8 o0 B2 N! m3 X, @3 S5 K* {/ B. {for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

( o+ M. G0 o6 F" C6 F* Q4 Y[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
- T' p% y8 L3 awe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

GREAT！