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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)* M2 C: p( N- Y
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     One day I always remember+ L! R9 r. D: B( r

! ^/ s6 x( `2 J! a! F) b  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 I$ M; z. Z, U8 F* Y

. C/ T+ r" a4 p& J3 f9 Lexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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' w2 u  C6 {7 D+ |put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my9 M& t# }) H% h

( ?! ?% @+ s5 v4 o6 B) T+ J$ I little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse," X0 ^) r8 G* z; D$ v( d

6 G2 C' k4 X8 A* o every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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2 D2 p2 G: P) ~* ]' \ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 w" T. G% K8 F7 B* c+ v, C5 n  g

" Q) U3 k1 q+ w7 d6 E, Gtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 K* b( s' E' L2 H$ S

# i2 m' `' U' o0 D" Ythat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing  @2 N: L2 d, r" n! e8 e% i& b

1 ^: J3 }% X3 {0 c1 r3 L+ M7 @ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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7 ?* T: z: a& B. b9 Rfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my . v! \" Y7 \7 o# O
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deaest daughter.
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% n+ V" E! b+ Z) V" f5 T9 FAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ W+ ^0 m% l% f& f% `we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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