作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

# Z: U2 _6 j3 Y' x" f1 ^. D　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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! j. T, \- L% Y/ I( D9 d4 A4 Oexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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3 I0 c/ B7 e% {& |% |7 dput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

/ v' S/ v/ e4 p5 }5 X1 | was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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& h' d+ Q$ {# ~5 N9 Z) A  T* Jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

3 X" A+ g4 a+ e7 \ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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# t, c) @+ v& |+ f# _# Sdeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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, P# P, Z  K" L& P[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！