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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一): {: K6 L1 n% y" U. X) R

; n: r' x. d+ i) f' @# r7 }     One day I always remember
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8 F1 D$ p% B: w7 Y5 I  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to; L- L* t: L5 g- F
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my8 V/ P' w3 z, G' S+ w* Z  S, p/ I
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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3 a: m0 V4 n2 u# h' {6 mtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing/ Q$ U: Q% X5 k5 v2 z, x
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard . ~& u5 {% d2 a4 R

9 r3 i" U9 _: J& Z4 _7 S. jfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 5 M" m# ?% o8 V" l6 K' }

- p2 @  K; A: x) ~6 n) ]3 Udeaest daughter.0 X- C- U; u% t4 b" E

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6 `8 h4 A( b2 F4 p& K* W6 H0 KAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will* y( Z& M2 G" \  [4 D" A; K
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.& N) D( V" l+ |+ Z0 X; w2 d+ T2 H

% ]5 S; h" w- X[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!& L; C  \! d9 K- G
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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