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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)$ W5 [* @# f8 k4 ^3 e  ]! [

2 T% E7 ]8 g& b4 ^# D     One day I always remember" P: \% f% f) e0 V
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' j9 h# X  c% c
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,: k& C/ ^+ D2 u1 \

9 a( v5 V- U4 s) c every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid$ I2 b; G0 z0 K4 W! e1 f8 o# C* o, a

8 |: X7 Q. s& m! A was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely % }5 Q1 q9 i; p5 Q. w

, L% J  i6 W! L1 x, @trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since # X% R. D; N+ v$ E  [

+ t7 X0 G. b) A+ ~that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing% l- N0 ~. G( |  i

3 @. C6 t- K4 q+ a4 \: g on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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' l0 ?/ M$ t5 _6 C# zfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.) {: L+ m& R! w; \; [% u

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% ^" ?% ~; ~+ D7 f5 k! ]After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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" ~7 E5 [: v. ]5 [! ] never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!  [3 d# i5 P8 E
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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