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0 d4 ]* K! n# n6 S4 p' c大家首先要注意,时态上一定要用过去时,然后想一想什么样的chang是positive change呢?比如一次basketball game队友们让你意识到自己技术上的问题,从此球技突飞猛进;比如一次家人生病了,有生以来第一次照顾父母;比如你学开车考驾照的经历;比如你第一次离开家到外地求学。。。只要不紧张,认准了话题往下讲其实不会太难说。不过有一些套话是描述change的时候可以用的,比如:
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This experience altered the course of my life---这次经历改变了我的人生道路;
/ {2 T- F8 n: `3 yAt first,I was really bewildered and frustrated.刚开始我感到很沮丧也很困惑;
! T6 e" L, U9 g+ P5 M! t0 R+ P0 JMy teammates encouraging words really cheered me up.队友们的鼓励话语让我振作起来;
9 a5 Z$ x" |* B, ^3 _0 wMy driving instructor's sound advice made quite a change in my performance.驾车教练的好建议让我的表现提高了很多;
& Y5 \ K0 H) x. ~It not only improved my skills,it also solved my attitude problem.这不仅仅提高了我的技术,也让我改变了自己态度上的问题;
d( P J0 M8 f6 ^- gFor the first time in my time,I found my father so vulnerable and so helpless.有生以来第一次,我感到父亲这么弱小这么无助;% O/ t4 u" A4 L- d" j1 H
This episode had profound influence on my later life.这段经历对我后来的人生有深远的影响;9 j5 B0 h6 ?2 _
I became a more caring and loving son/daughter after that incident.这件事情以后我变成了一个更关心家长的孩子;
' g; C4 @& \, _It prompted me to start working on my agility and team spirit.这促使我改进我的灵活性和团队精神;% `3 P9 F& \9 d$ A0 ]! k
This experience was pretty much a milestone in my life.这段经历可以说是我人生道路上一个新的里程碑;
! s9 A9 y# _+ ]It made me tougher and more tenacious.这让我变得更坚强,更有毅力。 |
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