埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 2349|回复: 4

译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

[复制链接]
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
译文欣赏——沁园春·雪
- Q+ O; W" c4 A9 Y  S: D
  G, C( C. U( V' k1 r( }
0 M) m9 G& Q, w+ c
+ B& s' ?1 V9 s% TSNOW% D! N' B, \4 D
, l5 @, x! ]! |
                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
. V( \) f+ E* q  `! g; O1 Q* w/ t7 {2 e$ z% R
                                       February 1936
) t' {# S" [4 V
# e4 T7 c; ]5 T: q- y7 m: k8 f+ I# X- U8 N8 z' \! t
  North country scene:
$ G( r1 Z0 S9 p7 M. \, ^! z                                                                                               1 r& D* ]# d& C1 z6 r) F2 y' f( K
  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
3 u# `0 _1 M& ^( k% @! |) s% r
$ q9 `; ?% V4 N  q9 E# @$ ^" ]' W& U  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
. V' f8 y9 e$ F7 ?
+ n9 f' w) j2 S  Both sides of the Great Wall
" j' w, w0 [% C& ^' \5 s2 ]' P) b, E3 j5 k7 _
  One single white immensity.) C8 S! e3 H, ]* u
8 Q' I: E8 ]6 o0 i
  The Yellow River"s swift current
/ `4 G, X  Z9 C& `5 e8 j9 I) @2 D! ]! q! t( C7 b; e$ \- C
  Is stilled from end to end.7 c" l  |( b; P0 t  ?4 r

0 l7 x' i: j, M) M$ T7 e  The mountains dance like silver snakes
  M# Z" w/ ]1 p2 f
* C# h& T5 o8 F  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,+ o' G& ?; G  T2 U5 z4 N

/ h7 M3 a9 U  q$ d# k6 n  Vying with heaven in stature.8 ?# Y, t: ?/ M& }* l2 r  d. |

/ K; u% {- S; Q  On a fine day, the land,2 j6 M% W( u8 J
9 D8 C7 A' O- L
  Clad in white, adorned in red,
) K5 ?2 Z% G4 Z! m. F2 ?1 _9 v" ]
3 Q6 I1 j3 G8 D: d+ L" }, D7 @  Grows more enchanting.  f& k* w" f" n& n& d
  E7 t" m) h* j0 y# @. f' ?/ q: x
  This land so rich in beauty
' f9 o% ~1 {  ^0 C3 w
. A! r# x$ G& R  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.
5 {2 k7 G, {: y7 q4 U. c, N
3 D; q2 \+ v0 G: G* l4 W1 ~% W  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti) s' [" i4 f; G/ M5 S$ @

( U% P& `  V0 G  N* V  Were lacking in literary grace,6 H/ [, J" @" V- n
8 n3 H" B8 r9 W- E
  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
2 R6 h1 w9 z* A: u
1 l1 V6 L3 t8 M  Had little poetry in their souls;
1 Q  T" c) a, C: r/ S  And Genghis Khan,8 C/ o: j: J) T

6 t8 \0 {/ i" I  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
, r7 U! z0 s( c  y# v% j
1 w3 X" {: O% U. I' E3 m  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
& _# M1 ]0 P6 j- Y% ?4 R: s7 ~# R, o% o* G5 F# |. W; H
  All are past and gone!
' G8 L  O9 v3 o
; b# m/ x) O- m+ m6 r2 {, K  For truly great men
6 Q2 f$ r2 b' ]" {; i; ^* q5 }7 f! n1 N& I+ q0 n2 t: f5 H2 W' a
  Look to this age alone.! Y! e- j, N- r; g" ~: _4 g. n4 N( k5 y

& b# O) T4 b8 c: D) F% y( _  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
3 S" R0 a  O( h4 D' I1 M7 J4 T4 G9 R4 H
  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.% v  @, l7 J* c0 v4 p) \: [! U
7 n3 K& C' r8 l- y- j6 p
  沁园春 雪7 _+ N4 v* B# P' L+ s* N; n
; L7 M; M- }0 f
  一九三六年二月
" I  l% t# {5 M6 |1 x  |7 x, r8 M- x7 P+ ?, w' k
   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽- V4 I9 v( D) q" N0 _
: X4 |1 ~) h' \: D/ Q% U9 x6 ^% P
  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高
( v' d, Q% t8 Z( y& \: g! V% n. j4 ]# ^
  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆
# f: n# M2 C  Q- R
, j& V2 _/ @! b( d6 R$ o7 C  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
( K. ^6 w% o$ j+ y7 M  `7 {9 f  q* C3 ?% c3 q: K
  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
2 |; q9 L& d5 t/ L+ {( M( f; }( `9 O; W& J, O
  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
! e4 O" w2 \0 R7 n8 L5 c) ~1 |
3 m+ H. N3 z. G- T4 e3 t( ~[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
鲜花(6) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

老杨团队 追求完美
鲜花(13) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2025-3-15 02:52 , Processed in 0.122127 second(s), 16 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表