大家给点意见建议吧

SENSY

我象疯了一样想找工作，我是今年6月毕业的，专业是化学环境工程，在按大略的大学毕业的，然后就立刻搬到了卡而家里，当时几乎是盲目的，只是听说这里工作好找。但来了之后才发现，只有LABOUR 工才好找，我第二天就找了一个咖啡店的工作，不过专业工作，难的多了。我折腾到这个月初才找到一个地质公司的实验员工作，不过和专业一点关系也没有。
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我觉得我浪费了很多时间。参加了两次招聘会，但是效果枉然。不知道是不是我哪些地方不对头。
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我正在申请EIT， 希望能找到一个能得到相关经验的工作，听说FOR的工作很多，不知道适合不适合我这样的几乎没有工作经验的学生。我不想再盲目一次，今天撞了车，向老板请了假，看了一天这个论坛，觉得热心人很多，突然想发个帖子让大家帮我参谋一下。

我很明白我现在有些焦躁，不过，情绪是控制不了的，或者很难控制。

我写了一份FOR  GENERAL的 简历，发在下面，大家帮提个意见吧。
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我一个人在卡城很无聊，希望认识很多朋友在这里。

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SENSY

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54 Bermuda Dr. NW                                                                                Cell:  (403) 561-1182
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OBJECTIVE:        Seeking an engineer trainee position in the chemical/environmental field
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0 ~9 X% A) }& U2 N# e. U3 X2 [; ?·        Bachelor of Chemical/Biochemical Engineering Science, UWO, 2006
·        Proficient in MS Office, HYSIS, MATLAB, labVIEW, P&ID Workstudio and related industry software
4 }  V- J3 U- t3 _- r( I# F5 o·        Experienced in setting up and conducting chemical experiments
·        Knowledge of designing industrial wastewater treatment facility and natural gas purification system
& }" _) I" B& G! [. S·        Extensive chemical safety knowledge and practice
' g; n5 n$ R, q4 w9 s·        Analytical report writing
9 |/ H! w/ R; z8 B. q2 K+ d·        Highly organized, self-regulated and enthusiastic for study
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5 e: V$ l4 y8 O) }8 zRELATED SKILLS AND EXPERIENCE:
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LABORATORY
·        Prepared solutions of gas or liquid, and sample formulations
7 ^* Q* U  D" L' |8 K·        Tested and analysed variety of chemical solutions using calibration curve, physical or chemical separation and other techniques
& l2 j( F! U5 A- O·        Recorded lab data and discussed influence of pH value, temperature, catalyst or other specific conditions.
·        Chose optimal value for current experiment based on team discussion
9 b4 a9 r+ }- G, N3 b1 q9 a) w·        Improved experiment procedures by eliminating errors
·        Presented the lab reports in PowerPoint, graphs and charts
      
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·        Studied and applied principles of thermodynamics, energy/material balance and heat/mass transfer
·        Knowledge of chemical reactors and catalyst process
·        Compared existing alternatives and made optimal decision
9 t: j# Q" q3 Z* d( |4 N, w·        Familiar with basic chemical formulations or functions
6 o) K, _1 k4 |" p3 y2 h5 w+ E·        Estimated entitled project gross cost through designing whole facility
: d% u+ @- _) P·        Learned about North America air emissions and industry wastewater regulations.
& v8 Y% f. [4 y0 \·        Studied and designed about nature gas purification, removing H2S, CO2 CO impurities.
·        Studied and designed about high temperature methane reformation process
·        Studied and designed about heavy metals removal facility for industry wastewater
        
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·        Clearly demonstrated concepts
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RELATED PROJECT EXPERIENCE:
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Sabatini Earth Technology Ltd  

) W, @8 ~6 h! X/ hLaboratory technician                        

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Natural gas purification system design                                             
9 ]# i2 K# t1 A% _/ j+ e  M! S; jStudy of industrial wastewater treatment facility                                             
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+ |4 q, D* A* \5 y. G- R·        Enjoy working in chemical/environmental field
8 z' c. ?% K/ m2 ?$ P) Q·        Readily relocate/travel.
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EDUCATION:
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# [7 U4 [2 H% F5 {; }; Z       Bachelor of Engineering Science, Biochemical/Chemical Engineering                        2006            
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NEB

the labour market in calgary is not as hot as it was back in spring/summer of 2006, but as far as i know, it's still quite good. I'm not just talking about general labour work, but professional work as well. Where you might fell short is that your resume is rather weak. you need cater it to specific job postings every single time. just quickly looking at your resume, i can see that you can apply for process engineer, environmental engineer or R&D engineer positions, but the way you describe yourself, it sounds though you know a bit of everything, but not a lot about anything. to be successful, you'll need to polish up your resume a bit more and exaggerate some of your skills. most importantly, cater it to each posting you come accross.

. X% ^6 j# h  m, E4 {) h- g) Igood luck!