SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
" B! W( ?& n. O3 [) l: _Automatic transmission
Silver
, {/ i: h  G  I2 \9 K0 _2 ~Remote starter and heat blocker
& g! H. o  ^3 g( q9 zTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
5 K: N5 U. X1 aAir Conditioning
. H: S1 N% {  zABS Operation
. b# h% g! I) ~. ^$ HTire pressure monitor system
, k6 w; m3 N  G  B& HInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
" B% t* \. `6 j& qPower locks
0 }2 S' D2 P! w$ GPower mirrors
Power doors
, Y, U. ^) K( JPower windows
& [# L' j% C) ^+ _' yChild safety locks
2 F5 _  [: s6 q) c: [9 U0 C& FRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
2 r* t8 `! s$ u9 o  Q3 gRadio
Airbag: driver
, `. }8 ?7 e5 c3 {Airbag: passenger
+ }( k. B  J" BAirbag: side
& \  z, A$ w3 N. s; XAlarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
: D! A: n* r: j5 q6 ?If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

) p  L% K( C- J8 W7 q* pPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
1 T) O9 W' B# R# i- YPick up on March 18-22.
; j( v; U  A3 S3 x0 TCash only please :)

兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

' Y1 Z$ o, A# j  v8 _8 E( x2 `% _If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

) R9 M$ e: i2 e. z7 X* ~IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* d6 z  u8 w7 G* d9 @这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
. g* p6 v, S9 ~# b+ L4 HThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

. y: F; ]8 Q1 LSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
1 {8 j; _- W& I8 FYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

3 X& X: a* W! r9 D: G9 P# bLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

0 v( e) m$ u' G8 \& T: n"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

, Y$ N) l2 D  W& a1 m6 sSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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