SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
# J8 W+ G% W8 ^! N( p# J6 ~4 NAutomatic transmission
3 m, L6 u6 G9 g8 PSilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
3 S# n3 L+ V7 F8 ^# m0 [' R4 mTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
7 p9 u6 k8 [) U  E. V0 I+ A7 Q, EFour additional tires with rims
2 C, g* v" F& A, ?# i) A2 ?* l! [Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
0 N' o* j/ J  I% X5 o+ `! ~Power mirrors
* |2 R+ Y% x& n% NPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
1 V0 i1 k" q5 _9 x) h! oBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
; b2 q6 k; s" j) a9 VAirbag: passenger
6 \& N7 ?' C1 M2 z% I# l& jAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

4 F& `' v8 g' d* y' Y5 e& c5 g' J**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
+ c& @! W: |4 r& I3 K  qIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)

兰君子

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5 X, T* B1 Y0 d! LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

( s8 r1 q( I, tIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 f4 o4 ~0 j0 M3 h这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

7 w$ u' V' f! n: g哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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, Y- @+ y9 P" o! NDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

" K: W; E% t0 I& L$ yThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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/ f6 y3 D8 [8 H8 s4 y+ pSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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