SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
0 a0 _# Z4 n; tAutomatic transmission
4 D  ?+ @" Q3 {: X0 B8 A( A- c$ nSilver
4 k* r# ~( d1 c( Y* p: i' I  _& URemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
8 a( S) y" r  y5 cFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
  n. {  Z! J5 ?1 t6 n0 X% WPower locks
4 U2 Q) r7 P( X/ pPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
' ?% N4 [7 b- W( q1 S( `Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
3 ?  e1 b- G% p9 d+ VAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
5 H; P& v- L' @( p) AAlarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
1 p. p# F+ `" K+ A' v, EPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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% e. R' U) A6 ?% EIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

- C0 d) F1 T( O这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

% z! i+ t) X% u2 r哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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1 `0 F. p% j) j9 A- ^Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
6 _. u! S" ^" t$ B  D: k) _2 oThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
, @, ~7 C5 R0 W1 MYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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1 P9 H( R% ?, i: ]Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

5 c- {: [: W; C9 g/ C% g- q% I"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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: Y0 t, r- e+ o* gThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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1 A; u- W, z. X0 N8 _- USorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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