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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, - y0 R5 A  U) J4 Y
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
9 d( Y# {& r0 R" T9 E. RDreamers
: H6 Y5 \3 c/ T  _& d6 }5 ySavages
  Y7 q/ n) d! u: q8 G9 D, h: L' ^Poets/ o! i# P  H% Y% |/ h( N; X
Builders of canoes,' n6 S% X  J9 L& G5 P! @
Black smiths# V7 G( j" X* J3 i  S1 x- [, X
Murderers,3 A+ m, B" s. @0 @. Y3 V
Risk takers,3 J$ T& \5 V! o5 }" p6 L* n! s# e2 \
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 }, w$ y" T$ L
As I think of what could be. * W, A% k6 Z; j" J
The world is so big to me . ?+ a: _. q) q7 r
I wonder what it means to be
2 V) y' {$ u& v: {2 OI looked up at the star and smiled
0 K% z) C( [* i8 GThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. : s4 G5 y% {/ z0 p7 h
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
3 |  d+ q( u2 E0 R* e评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: Y; n* A+ ]- L3 C! V  X顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 U. v, G; b* v- J* e+ ?. L6 eA poor old Guy;4 g. N0 c) y& x; D1 |' N. B3 x! f
Legs in a bonfire,- t( C4 t8 c; l6 Q  @8 o$ ^" r$ v
Head in the sky; C8 v" N  l# q. [2 W% m  n
Lonely, with the feel of betray
/ D0 H( Y7 B' {5 ~4 _Heart empty and hollow4 a. I5 b& G. J0 J1 w$ g
Alone I stand
) J% V) @' {8 V* t7 Y! S4 fI am useless to all
& `2 U) D4 [, S" d0 G% p4 `But I wish I were a dove   @1 x3 k. g9 t- h. _
Giving myself to the world, to the fire3 t0 P8 H- _/ L$ d7 s0 D
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
1 W) L# w4 {5 L3 tI sent prayers to my god
! [$ N* i; e" D2 FThough he does not answer
; X8 c4 k5 z/ A& i* ?( eHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 i8 P; }+ h' i. Y5 R5 @加油加油,经常写写!
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