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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
- N2 F. ]' S, g" A1 `I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* A8 ^3 T: E' E. XDreamers+ U4 u3 s4 P/ j- l
Savages* M* E! q5 `9 U  ]: E8 [
Poets  P7 \1 z4 c2 w2 o; w! @0 a4 M
Builders of canoes,
8 U' L, ^* W* B1 {, GBlack smiths- M0 d& M- i, l( ^0 {# b
Murderers,
% @3 W# n' k; a  [) [) MRisk takers,* {' I+ w" {: `& A7 ^" n% T- H; {
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
1 B% t2 i7 E- `9 R" \As I think of what could be.
- w1 A" S, h! c8 T4 tThe world is so big to me
% ?: |1 _8 T+ [6 S9 \% NI wonder what it means to be
1 A2 @" o" z; \6 vI looked up at the star and smiled 9 v! z& B/ d+ i2 v
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
  x% @3 a9 W  y* S8 O. o评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。; `# w9 }& I! X* @
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,! @  M" W) l) N2 q3 n
A poor old Guy;* K1 A& R- @" g- G# t; q9 \/ i
Legs in a bonfire,2 o9 `! z$ }4 y0 H$ x
Head in the sky
1 B" @; u; ^0 L- E8 s: v: ~Lonely, with the feel of betray
, ]) e- F' o2 b6 q& {+ y! d  LHeart empty and hollow) K1 }0 N/ j0 {  [
Alone I stand
  E% A0 {+ i; s% Y0 yI am useless to all 5 X; K1 `% o  [0 e1 K
But I wish I were a dove
1 j6 d; X5 c) j& X/ w/ }" Q5 _/ GGiving myself to the world, to the fire
8 ^7 d) p0 o$ d3 ]9 MI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
+ Q9 S, ?8 g; H' t3 SI sent prayers to my god" ~6 W) [% b1 q* L: f* n5 F
Though he does not answer. N( q2 }( L% M
He bless me with the gift of hope . }4 t2 r2 _: w; ~5 @9 k" i

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ O" r3 @; n% c# {  I" \7 ~
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