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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
6 [  Y- L8 D0 N" dI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
9 W. f+ b8 {4 ^) x4 e# h, P; y0 v. tDreamers
. O' d8 d2 O. e( v0 k" x- M6 r/ t( uSavages
, m3 V0 L) T5 I/ W0 oPoets+ e" a) ]4 O3 O7 |/ R  W
Builders of canoes,
" v2 b5 m% \7 }3 m! YBlack smiths7 E2 g4 a' b5 t% Q8 w8 r
Murderers,
; {: X' ^) Q7 H8 k& j( \Risk takers,/ O/ o: e% {4 v$ z0 g. n
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder & w7 Q, [: C* q# B5 {: S9 |9 Q( B4 o
As I think of what could be. - J" s0 |& r6 B/ I: a0 ?
The world is so big to me 8 M7 H: _2 f7 F1 O% I3 @0 H
I wonder what it means to be
# h, e- V# G9 t3 @" n% j$ eI looked up at the star and smiled
- Y6 d% z, [& p* l$ B; O8 L' a9 O& |They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
6 Q4 ?" f+ S( w7 b9 q评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。3 y6 N/ ?2 B. m5 M! ?$ }
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- V% |% ^) Q7 H% j1 o
A poor old Guy;
, }, w" Y' U' e" l. z- L  O/ B. P' |Legs in a bonfire,
- u, Q. ~& x1 [; z  t4 iHead in the sky
, N  g. l/ v& k8 e' F6 ^Lonely, with the feel of betray; N. I! }! e2 ~4 w% i1 k
Heart empty and hollow, |& l5 \9 S7 r( J/ W5 t. a
Alone I stand
/ c9 ^. ]0 b& D0 z" l1 rI am useless to all
# _( i; I( m& Y. L9 R$ p1 l7 BBut I wish I were a dove
8 t* p1 i- V5 e, J; N) Y6 UGiving myself to the world, to the fire8 Z  ^& [! l6 H9 D- e: p
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind9 R6 G, ]5 u' V: }4 e
I sent prayers to my god
% V; O9 m. _( E* QThough he does not answer
  j- f+ c/ \: r# w4 v! eHe bless me with the gift of hope 2 t. i3 D4 D: H  r  D0 W7 t) U
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
* w3 j4 X6 [7 W- O- V* E加油加油,经常写写!
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