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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
: U* d' J8 t3 O2 ?I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
1 T0 e* E! q2 w1 s/ T3 K& {* @+ DDreamers
$ K& Y0 h3 s5 [Savages. I. Z& @! c( M& g, M
Poets: l+ M# S8 b* O- K
Builders of canoes,
' o3 b4 U( I# I2 f( QBlack smiths
( g7 E" F/ b+ y: o" C4 IMurderers,
2 F5 s9 G9 r: ?6 C, n2 W. [' W; mRisk takers,  j  h, k0 z. v0 E3 L
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 G: V6 B" _5 b4 ~# _1 yAs I think of what could be. . J8 \) d2 S6 [" R, l* v
The world is so big to me 1 N% x- w8 R2 E2 i
I wonder what it means to be
. D% [) D4 L! O$ mI looked up at the star and smiled
( w% z  S8 k  K( K5 ^They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。/ P9 ~& \: R3 F6 M% Z
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
) G- A. f" w- O5 ?顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
+ ~. Q1 |. v, F& [: T2 r  XA poor old Guy;
' Z! S4 m2 I% q% rLegs in a bonfire,
2 p2 |' L( O! F4 zHead in the sky4 X3 w& ^( m$ }% ?$ ^; \: F3 `6 a3 G4 j
Lonely, with the feel of betray
% F# Y" B: E1 M7 Z  i0 UHeart empty and hollow
3 j, m' {% g. h) }0 S: O: Q) [Alone I stand
- h& K- t7 m- CI am useless to all 8 _( p# r! m4 m" G8 U/ g, L
But I wish I were a dove : ]4 Y: o' r' T* h$ b! m
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
! ^1 q3 x5 ?3 S  B7 z/ }! X6 iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. k6 d+ \' D% H8 D+ f9 C  mI sent prayers to my god
$ A$ }' U% c: Y& B% xThough he does not answer
% J/ m( ^- ?4 ?3 u! B; X0 |He bless me with the gift of hope * i) `/ N) q; H& C) |# ^  g( O7 q

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。' X; h  f" @/ W0 V4 q
加油加油,经常写写!
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