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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ) l& I. n2 f5 ~) v% u( l
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( d( K5 g4 A! k
Dreamers
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Poets% R9 w# h" E7 U7 o7 a+ v1 [
Builders of canoes,$ e2 @- ~( R: [6 B, o" G) z
Black smiths
- Y9 u5 C3 y, |! e6 h& `" h. u+ a* I) @Murderers,
6 o7 C/ F6 {: w$ VRisk takers,
, ?' X! z" p& ^- U; YMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 9 f3 r6 U9 R7 c- `
As I think of what could be.
. X* S' \  E* Y' M2 kThe world is so big to me
3 s" I; }% G) LI wonder what it means to be
$ `( x3 K5 q. d% t4 `' S! MI looked up at the star and smiled
) {. M6 b) ]% z( P$ e  lThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. " q  ~: E- {7 i4 k
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ ?) F6 K% [4 m. B$ ?1 z* c. N评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。+ ~% C0 {  {! j
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
+ i+ S, E5 |" IA poor old Guy;! N! L2 W- Q9 D, n% E
Legs in a bonfire,
+ v3 j- G0 Y. R( s* f; f% wHead in the sky, Q8 u! S% I2 c) B. u0 _, r
Lonely, with the feel of betray
4 A" Q3 p9 |6 B* vHeart empty and hollow' y$ o* F! H$ v$ ^: s8 g, S) d
Alone I stand
- p' m: F$ c! x0 b7 DI am useless to all 1 A, ~! d! w! m* q: q
But I wish I were a dove 6 s- O. ?7 D4 M! ]
Giving myself to the world, to the fire0 i1 C; `( l! f0 K- u
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
- y0 M, K) F2 ~# e" Q5 ]9 uI sent prayers to my god9 L+ ^4 e8 ]% [6 w+ ]+ w/ q  g6 Y
Though he does not answer7 O) ^+ D; f1 q  e6 j' ~
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
2 K6 ~& o8 f( l# e加油加油,经常写写!
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