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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
5 c/ D  P6 U1 BI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
. c/ _/ b* A5 x3 o6 }Dreamers
0 |/ [# m0 P& w: JSavages3 @0 _3 E. k! l! U7 E( }2 k2 v
Poets
8 Q  K! H4 h2 N. |3 lBuilders of canoes," u7 L! e  J6 m4 T: T" ~; h- k
Black smiths
& O) {5 Z3 N" sMurderers,
% ^( F- r2 S/ A" N, }" k% _Risk takers," B# U9 U! d( I* Q7 K
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
# ?3 F9 g& W% J: O( a8 P: Y3 e2 v6 EAs I think of what could be. $ {7 Q- c5 O" w# I
The world is so big to me
% ]  M( B1 s1 i" n6 [/ wI wonder what it means to be
) R' m  @: j- g3 H" H, y% XI looked up at the star and smiled 0 L% ~5 h' O) S) f7 ]% G
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. # p3 F! ^: D# H5 P

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
  U5 k$ B; y0 _( k评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。' a3 {- d7 x: J7 P& q+ p2 l
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,: x- J: b' b5 M: i4 ?( q2 d
A poor old Guy;
& L# Y1 i* c! yLegs in a bonfire,
6 g! O) B! B+ B# d/ h" W9 lHead in the sky
( |/ H2 d, w8 r# z/ K, kLonely, with the feel of betray
1 C6 C8 v- q+ d0 R. n; yHeart empty and hollow
! R3 I0 |$ c+ z/ x% o9 @2 k5 vAlone I stand
5 O: U2 N9 C& ]) E4 nI am useless to all ) k& H$ Y' r' D" m
But I wish I were a dove
- j# W/ W% i3 |6 e. k+ H/ }: j: BGiving myself to the world, to the fire
0 E0 A) y9 Q' J- eI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind$ _1 q# |1 U- F' |
I sent prayers to my god: t# @2 ]5 _( w. v# Z
Though he does not answer7 V7 b/ a7 P* V6 N3 D  ?" m, O2 f  A: g
He bless me with the gift of hope   r. c9 _+ f5 ~
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& ~: C1 V/ q" k: t
加油加油,经常写写!
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