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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 0 [* K& [/ x. M  \+ a/ s8 [
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
# [. a8 Y- t- l& b' `: S; TDreamers
- \- q# G6 x' W; ySavages' p! K+ w! O' C" i' Z9 [
Poets
" }1 Q. T9 T0 n. S6 g/ U& ^! @  c$ @Builders of canoes,! S8 V& }$ w( m- R5 l9 O4 n2 L
Black smiths
9 H  p& y/ L' j2 b5 RMurderers,
! h5 T" _7 G8 U: ?5 mRisk takers,
9 i/ r  l% Q' r4 B# ?. b8 q- tMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
+ y) V: a. Z1 j. q7 l* ?& k+ eAs I think of what could be.
  L0 \2 p) ^  c+ J+ mThe world is so big to me $ M9 h* Y0 m$ T% w9 j
I wonder what it means to be- w6 r4 A2 K. `8 d% I: R# j" s8 V+ ^$ C
I looked up at the star and smiled
4 S+ g& b4 f# c" M9 KThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
" ^8 V2 E( q0 \& L  u2 |7 i评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
. e+ M. ^  g* G顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,2 h: K2 b/ O+ h8 f9 R3 s
A poor old Guy;
) V' N6 F: k  k/ KLegs in a bonfire,
- G/ k& y$ N' I6 ?Head in the sky( z/ Z2 l$ L, O3 N3 ?3 Q
Lonely, with the feel of betray6 o/ k" I0 n7 h/ a; B! {* x) R. Q
Heart empty and hollow5 a8 K6 i( ^% i2 D$ M$ ]& I) o
Alone I stand7 a) L: O7 k7 ~% N8 M
I am useless to all 7 J4 i" i4 J  O( M2 y1 K/ h  ]# H
But I wish I were a dove $ i* l. ~% M( a5 H7 N
Giving myself to the world, to the fire# Y- B3 r1 X, Z. N. T) b
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! x& t3 E8 S" l
I sent prayers to my god/ C; T- {8 T& @9 \
Though he does not answer& b+ j$ a/ I: i& @" [& V" C
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( ]8 u* U5 y5 ]5 O' x
加油加油,经常写写!
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