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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
+ P/ H' I3 a5 sI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
1 M8 a" B) K% h2 I8 \% D! p- S/ eDreamers
" w+ A. u  n: o0 W+ mSavages
. v" b+ g, Q) Y2 a1 R7 a' G# CPoets
) ?7 [$ p0 S0 F& u. Y0 IBuilders of canoes,
+ I: d; Z" g. U3 j1 e' }9 w8 bBlack smiths4 ], c* s8 o! W& l  B  W- ^& L
Murderers,3 J0 y; @" h* Z. y; ^3 D5 G
Risk takers,
" |! w- A$ }# X* FMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 J, L* X+ y+ B$ ^1 b) K6 R; y( H
As I think of what could be.
1 ^; e1 W- i: }2 ]The world is so big to me 8 W& b3 g& T$ X' p
I wonder what it means to be. ~. f+ I) x$ Y% U% q
I looked up at the star and smiled
4 L& N' c1 [0 k; Z" fThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
& O+ T3 E" O; W评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 S* H' Y$ Z' X4 t3 o8 r4 O顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,+ Z9 y/ f9 a1 M- H
A poor old Guy;
1 O9 A8 |4 X6 Z+ d6 NLegs in a bonfire,
  p; @8 H  i) aHead in the sky
( Z0 {$ y+ Y" l! A; b8 ELonely, with the feel of betray
! Z+ U. [( E6 s* y* C+ A8 T! u9 xHeart empty and hollow
* Q- l) b: c( {7 y' x1 yAlone I stand
. ]0 N& K2 P! b$ }/ `7 s3 oI am useless to all ; a1 }0 O# {! s5 p, o! W
But I wish I were a dove 0 ]6 H- M* G- j
Giving myself to the world, to the fire  {0 E. z* |: ]+ B0 D& J
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
+ W% ^/ i# E; ?9 @I sent prayers to my god
5 @; o4 \$ v4 a( k( B: ~Though he does not answer
9 N- f9 F, ?4 m3 d+ }8 j) `" O; UHe bless me with the gift of hope # O) k  a+ {7 v( O% q0 K
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。3 f2 _  @$ }) @5 S& k7 S& j- o# C' y
加油加油,经常写写!
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