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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 k* O' m9 F% p) J0 H& y$ D
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  9 `' S- V. |* {/ d( s5 ]. S2 d
Dreamers
1 b4 x  ^) Z& s( y* M! U$ l! X. XSavages
' W* Q. W2 o$ G! t/ M" ?1 dPoets
0 i' c: [2 Z3 [( hBuilders of canoes,& O0 {5 t' M2 W
Black smiths
- z4 G* }- R, i( ZMurderers,% [* P" V. f/ u6 u& u& \
Risk takers,
, |+ G' Q5 m8 ], RMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ' p7 o4 \7 D8 x4 y/ B* b, Q3 s9 n
As I think of what could be. ' B4 B' a/ `4 r+ N, t: P: ^
The world is so big to me 0 X/ i' }( `. `$ p7 o/ w7 Z5 q
I wonder what it means to be
. U  i2 V0 X. q; OI looked up at the star and smiled , z+ g8 V: w/ `( Q5 m- e1 ]0 [6 [
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ' z# V" v' b' Y& X/ C% w

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。( L( B+ L' @0 O
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 G) s/ Z: Z0 k. Z! b* _# b顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# e. m1 @; h$ h* H& I
A poor old Guy;
. w$ ^+ ^" [" k( |2 MLegs in a bonfire,
& S; }" ~2 n9 @2 p9 G2 g1 X: FHead in the sky
8 ~0 x) l% J1 x9 ?  E% }Lonely, with the feel of betray/ ]/ `( n+ _% l. `: Z& V
Heart empty and hollow
& v* z" X- P, q) N* `/ T% {Alone I stand
" E) |7 n, o9 {( |) \I am useless to all
4 d4 u, E* c  W/ v8 B* }# nBut I wish I were a dove
& O4 B4 ^, L: x' J" W7 hGiving myself to the world, to the fire5 G$ q* g0 v# X! O9 i
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. V  j& Z2 ]# @8 E7 d1 l3 [I sent prayers to my god) W$ {0 ^' f3 F
Though he does not answer
( r5 S8 a; J! a' w* y8 c3 [He bless me with the gift of hope / \4 P9 o5 `2 i7 O+ f( k

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。  k7 I# R; `6 ?6 J1 H& f
加油加油,经常写写!
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