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annieyang 发表于 2013-2-3 13:23 + }' T1 E7 X, j" T+ y
Good enough for a second language speaker. Some recommendations:
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First, Pay more attention to the ... [* R" G, m& e0 ~- t. Z
thank you for the encouragement and more thanks for your advice, only a true friend will point out where in my english need to improve and help me make progress.( r. v# G) q) F$ k
i'll pay closer attention to the pauses in the sentences. s1 E1 Y: G3 s, B+ }# P0 }9 W2 o
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