天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing · 发表于 2011-3-26 04:48

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿 · 发表于 2011-3-26 05:05

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
- `* J/ p' y6 g0 h' mTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.3 @+ T& ^$ k F/ P
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...2 Q; x* p0 ^) E0 h' v0 q
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润 · 发表于 2011-3-26 08:58

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo · 发表于 2011-3-26 17:19

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.

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