天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
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3 \; c2 C, o2 W鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
" @, m" h# Z8 mTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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7 F- n/ S. @& L. |# I* K% Q鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
: e, q- M4 ^( S1 W/ a% h3 @I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.