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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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4 o6 y, [  N# o" j我尊贵的邻居6 ?' I8 z2 U% V' k
是我们小区  几十户1 `4 c- \5 U9 W! _5 ~4 Y  b' o
唯一的元老
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
# ~& m$ |: P9 v$ f5 B8 `9 y" c; r白发红颜  不见皱纹
4 x* w4 k( V7 G' n; A开车铲雪  挖土栽花
8 ~8 h! Z# a' P7 \似不识  岁月为何物+ s* T; }2 z; z% x
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环" W7 D" M% a  I
邻居气宇轩昂
/ D! P8 o4 k$ g0 Z+ i% i如同女面朱熔基4 R7 o- @. J, Z* B
邻居的字# `& M$ f, y3 n6 x$ ~0 A
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤: D. K5 E0 C% Q3 d5 }
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邻居酷喜中国文化- c  l$ M7 [5 V8 B
说她属土龙
5 n! `4 Q, L1 o- G2 j5 @6 J# p3 C- \" g其笛声也悠扬7 V  |0 l5 l; X0 X7 D2 h
那是从隔壁传来的& U2 S5 d9 w6 e6 H
唯一的声响/ y$ Z1 N- O4 @' B4 e
那不知名的曲调7 e* A3 S2 ]3 e; L, b- m, X
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
理袁律师事务所
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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* h- r: O' z1 \' Q% _, i英文版,欢迎指正:7 [: v4 X  C5 f; c6 y

: B# `9 {5 n8 Z5 n. eLiving here for more than thirty years,
! E& Q0 y. S4 Z5 b8 Q0 T# n  g2 @$ Vmy prestigous neighbour
* o# `8 N. |6 b, I1 Pis the only first owner of the unit properties2 W1 j4 v) o( r7 ]! v
in our community --- # |* }  B7 h6 F% r( h( j
tens of townhouse condos.
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* {7 k0 ^  ?5 \4 Y2 ~1 FNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
/ A) N# Z; B8 S3 }magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.$ Z9 d. S+ K3 `0 k" z; H: |
She has white hairs and red faces.4 \( A  e) M# A- b, w( ]8 A0 _4 x
Her light-footed movement
6 C5 {. J6 S6 `/ A. W, mis just like a flying swallow.4 R& f) u$ L  Q" W

% H% g, {# W9 m! U# ^! O6 UShe shovels the snow on her door lane
$ {4 f9 f6 V* J( L1 i, Ubefore driving her own car;
3 T2 h& c8 H2 o0 Z' w3 J3 k& \she digs her back yard
' M8 V: s/ \$ C6 i. }to plant flowers ---( [( M  C& |: g; x" D- g+ {  x
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
9 r: r/ o* P2 B  s. p  bneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
" J3 Q! a+ L' r( |5 i# P/ _as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.9 I* w& L& k" }! J+ N' S5 r7 }1 f
Neighbour's handwriting. d6 l+ o" D% ~5 Z/ O
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
2 g; {+ @2 H; [& m: d) Finterwined by dry vines.0 a" g% V. B6 ]$ d; l' u0 l( t0 {# K

$ `, ~+ Q# i- W2 _; D4 K$ fNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
9 R. Q; Q3 J' ]9 ~+ cShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
( l0 q7 m+ d9 d$ P0 O- GWell, her fluting is very melodious ---- ^& \4 C- I& V$ [
that is the sole sound going into my ears
6 r, x. j$ T( C$ dfrom the next side of my wall;" }- }+ a9 B7 ~
the unknown tune is extolling% j' E( O! s+ t0 @* {
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
1 U( W/ ]) _3 a  P. s* c; Magain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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* d4 F( E+ d: _! x$ A9 H$ x; P5 `土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换3 N( v' F3 v. u9 o: A3 l3 L
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

) L  n3 ]) P8 I5 }从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。2 c. _4 j- y! _) T
另外,翻译改动一处:1 H$ r1 {4 w$ G9 e6 C9 A: y, z: T
Her light-footed movement/ E9 o, v3 G" x) y9 `' B8 E
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!2 r6 Y( F4 h- ~; t
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

/ ?( V# _' W. f# R9 H( R( P我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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