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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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2 Y( M( l7 c; @# Z* q  E8 r- v/ G2 q我尊贵的邻居
4 c8 d& r' I8 Z! X4 n. I是我们小区  几十户9 M3 q2 ?/ Q- w6 w! o. T% _
唯一的元老  q& f& {5 i$ I! p+ x: L% E
一住三十多年9 l& C- H0 c1 Z* u; F

; Z, l# b% N  _4 x, @' {; _, [; I5 r邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
! `% o. b5 U* T" k6 |4 L- B' z: e白发红颜  不见皱纹# a) j+ K" ]$ J3 E: k9 R
开车铲雪  挖土栽花6 x5 C6 o3 M) `
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
5 l6 U# {: l( B* e邻居气宇轩昂
( R/ v8 c3 i! O# t4 h如同女面朱熔基% W, W( n7 p1 @2 b" }
邻居的字
6 f% g7 N1 k0 n则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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" G: G  S# O6 B+ ]: K3 \% \邻居酷喜中国文化
, [/ I; \) M3 X/ T0 ]0 q, D! }5 o/ b说她属土龙
; i3 K$ t; f( j; V2 e其笛声也悠扬
* m2 ~. J& ^; |" G那是从隔壁传来的4 f8 V( t+ P: Z( `$ q& @5 Z
唯一的声响) `- u7 B7 ?" L8 D' |2 L0 i* N7 v. e
那不知名的曲调; D, v4 z+ |9 G
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
+ F) Y8 i/ V" P8 I6 emy prestigous neighbour
, Z3 E4 _* z: K" l, r- Ois the only first owner of the unit properties! v) C5 A/ O* \% @2 x4 |+ E/ F
in our community --- 4 K) z( Y5 C) @& K" G3 K  c; p
tens of townhouse condos.* A! F( z; l  q( o" c% s

9 V: z/ f; K/ C% v$ `0 YNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
: g- f8 r" M. \( g) rmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
! S; I" {/ I' K6 O9 I) iShe has white hairs and red faces.
+ ^  t( M: O9 b' ]Her light-footed movement
$ d$ s  q+ F0 n" R! Mis just like a flying swallow.& t& N: E) M7 L* M7 W, j
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She shovels the snow on her door lane- i( s! z/ r# F% N1 v2 |0 d' @
before driving her own car;
/ C3 y) V* _9 a  |7 o$ fshe digs her back yard, G% g* m" c: P0 T5 ?7 R8 ^
to plant flowers ---
. B5 L' _6 X) _1 T# S* ?as if she did not know what years mean.& g8 [2 ~  c# A
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,; R- i2 L; E' A/ R/ j8 \
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
& i: I# c$ p8 K: j  z% was if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.- v0 s. y+ O: }5 o
Neighbour's handwriting4 R) S3 C# i/ z" x) V1 K
is so vigorous as to be the old trees# S' l" ~8 o  e6 O
interwined by dry vines.
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" X# l  w  d' V* F6 C( ENeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.% }9 E2 u% B! u+ {5 {
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.5 b$ j. {+ |' E; V) L
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---+ {0 A/ U4 W2 V6 T
that is the sole sound going into my ears
6 Q: o( d  a  `# [from the next side of my wall;
( B' |' q5 s# x5 R# Pthe unknown tune is extolling
) E/ \5 X0 d) S2 t$ y5 A' _% uthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,3 X; Q9 _# J7 S8 K8 N) v6 c
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 . N9 U, [0 [/ w% S& t) B
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换5 h; o+ \! @3 S4 M" ~( n2 p% t; g+ `9 p
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

; M  p' U  T: ?( L* i' u9 B! c; V7 L从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。4 ^8 [5 f4 M5 U! _
另外,翻译改动一处:5 x% A1 ?9 k. ]: a1 y( ]
Her light-footed movement5 J2 M2 F0 M( Q9 b. X. h
is just like a flying swallow.& @  E6 d* R; g
修改为:
5 E) d2 B6 Q% W/ EHer light-footed movement4 F+ h: n0 O$ d& }1 n
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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/ ?! U, \' \% ?' ?9 D# F; ?真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 & [$ Y- ~7 B8 C$ P3 M
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真的是太像朱镕基了!* z" D- h" m5 ?4 G
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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