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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 : _  E% p0 [+ j6 f- a! Y

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! B2 B# Q. x' I我尊贵的邻居
- ^) Z. p  u3 K% Z7 E  n( d是我们小区  几十户
7 j) ?% l9 x, B唯一的元老" I, m( E' ?( D9 y- A3 p9 C
一住三十多年, Q8 D4 ]: o' Z( h
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕" g. g# y2 e3 v( k/ B
白发红颜  不见皱纹
0 {& Q5 O+ \( F3 o/ M开车铲雪  挖土栽花8 h$ \0 J6 U# O9 W7 L
似不识  岁月为何物- F' N) V5 r! J" l! j5 K9 O
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环4 Y* G6 w  B/ ^9 F' o8 V! _8 J
邻居气宇轩昂
* Y' n! X; H' z: |$ ]- d如同女面朱熔基
, |. n, [! n/ O, s* \邻居的字
1 F$ I* g( d9 g! K: D则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤2 z# \1 {6 |0 [4 {& F# u. j" V
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邻居酷喜中国文化
: ]4 |. a$ |1 M! }说她属土龙
" R+ S1 U$ T2 K! C其笛声也悠扬+ b1 ~5 x  t) ]: g" f' S, U$ ?# c
那是从隔壁传来的  ^' Z5 H! i5 x
唯一的声响
& \) V( D) l3 p- U那不知名的曲调7 v2 w- j8 U. r+ d3 _
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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# k! \5 o3 N1 j" F英文版,欢迎指正:
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7 ]' v7 @" L7 ^- I3 U+ y- Z) \Living here for more than thirty years,8 k! n0 @( r1 u
my prestigous neighbour
- h) E' ?! p8 x& m; Cis the only first owner of the unit properties$ |9 Q9 q1 ?4 @& [1 U1 }9 e  [
in our community --- % j$ Z7 v  ~& K
tens of townhouse condos.
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3 Y1 `* K* {8 M1 ]0 Y% nNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
% d% g( ~  o2 Z8 w" p! h2 @magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
. v5 v3 A2 z( ?  o2 N# y. J# pShe has white hairs and red faces.
* l# |/ C3 r% Q, f" [2 a3 lHer light-footed movement
: A* y& R' E( t: i3 sis just like a flying swallow.
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7 X4 B. D9 {& J  a: UShe shovels the snow on her door lane% a. N8 ^3 ^# R4 A3 M- F; K2 E
before driving her own car;
$ b# U0 t+ e. Q8 u. Nshe digs her back yard8 p; z6 O6 a* m6 M, h# K, C/ @
to plant flowers ---
2 @# M; h" K% N) J( jas if she did not know what years mean.5 U# Z8 j6 l2 [9 N) F
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,9 G% S/ L* z6 c0 C8 F
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
9 b& T1 B; A$ ]0 {2 y! Pas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.8 f4 \  B( o0 A6 s0 \
Neighbour's handwriting0 @7 H4 T: b2 Y. k/ r# F7 `
is so vigorous as to be the old trees2 S; p. n4 C3 [; `0 _( z# O
interwined by dry vines.( B1 c# p1 n6 u+ t
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.! s6 k: c/ B; `' t
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.0 O1 F% r; t6 A& _+ d+ Q, r) L6 A; |
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---" V, t: S5 @! K& D2 T2 Y( B0 y7 r
that is the sole sound going into my ears+ Z' M$ z* o7 v7 I; g8 G3 Q
from the next side of my wall;
1 _" N8 l8 k$ W: B! mthe unknown tune is extolling
$ H: o# U' V' |- z2 M6 v& Hthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,/ y1 w; N/ Y. F) ?1 H3 _$ D
again and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 $ c5 t% ^- `4 M% l- l, A
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换+ p7 W% _- p0 \+ R6 p7 e5 @1 b
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

4 O. f$ J- E4 Z- l. E) J从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。; s$ f: B) w, q8 ?' i+ u$ T7 V
另外,翻译改动一处:
% m( X% c7 @8 S/ h7 n' x. q% a8 E' lHer light-footed movement
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修改为:
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is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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2 @7 j4 s9 [9 Z0 f. u5 \. }; T1 h真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ) ^  q+ T. l5 J$ ]
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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