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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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( {8 d2 I/ ?, [6 }7 o: a' ]我尊贵的邻居, x4 J! M: p, R/ K
是我们小区  几十户
& q+ d7 @# Y) A9 `- G唯一的元老
9 I" v! \* o. N一住三十多年+ X" y/ D9 b1 {: X' s

0 o7 D! E! e7 ?3 l6 _! {邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕( R$ a9 @8 P( M: F- G
白发红颜  不见皱纹7 l# |7 {. h) f& G+ x% {( Y) r- i
开车铲雪  挖土栽花& z5 r2 j: D7 F2 ]5 y& t; }
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
# ^1 |' Y/ ?+ `8 Y3 R2 M# {邻居气宇轩昂
5 a& Y# Z8 e' f* ]& B( }  M如同女面朱熔基  b9 C$ [  X& P( o7 i
邻居的字: B3 r* p6 i, }4 D: l$ C
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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- ?# f5 B5 c% h2 Y+ W7 U$ @# e* u( R邻居酷喜中国文化
) i$ i* b$ l0 J6 Y' A3 g说她属土龙7 [* }  b1 P7 E% \
其笛声也悠扬
* e1 z' \: z& C+ w4 G+ C* O那是从隔壁传来的
8 i3 ^! W; v' ~3 L$ z唯一的声响6 J5 U" B+ [  L7 g) O- i$ u
那不知名的曲调
1 l! I: s) e6 C( ~' Y" M反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
) D- w; N- m) dmy prestigous neighbour
" M& v) c, e- f/ g. Ris the only first owner of the unit properties
5 S2 X' ?- }& e9 p8 W' @3 `* Din our community --- 9 `: z: T$ M" b
tens of townhouse condos.
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; \4 `. w% G- n+ ?' [" z# YNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
+ m7 c! M; `9 _/ L; K, }magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
+ a+ ?0 h& d' K. d  _She has white hairs and red faces.
: X1 s* n- t% E! n: Z8 N- f. Z4 DHer light-footed movement  S2 Q3 @* g) N) L
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
3 f. f  @) K* T1 \* _. Q$ bbefore driving her own car;/ g9 o+ Z+ F; j7 l+ i
she digs her back yard0 B* d5 X3 ]* Z9 T; z
to plant flowers ---1 v3 ^0 _( M( z
as if she did not know what years mean.* j# ?- i$ v( F" {
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,2 s4 R' g7 h- c7 `* j. N) D
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---: [0 z9 e( b/ k. l8 {) K; |
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.% q( x( _- z. u% p. T' N# a
Neighbour's handwriting/ P0 W) b7 ?( \3 Y/ K, s
is so vigorous as to be the old trees, P2 Z" B/ y7 L' s+ h# ?$ @2 s
interwined by dry vines.0 o. J2 T5 l" Q. A; ^
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
" |( K% O6 w4 l; m* N/ e4 D9 Q; n/ tShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.! ^) ^- q( h! `' c
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---7 Z1 y- B# S9 N. P& k
that is the sole sound going into my ears
# O* J0 I) J5 ]- X. n% dfrom the next side of my wall;; E8 L, p% t& y/ u
the unknown tune is extolling
4 e/ k$ y# ~5 d! qthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,% @5 X! S/ ~" m+ G# @
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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( [. s# B: P- r* x( i土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换1 }: K; X  O) g! j
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
- g/ {4 w9 r5 `$ t另外,翻译改动一处:
5 U" j* R; w+ w/ |$ s  bHer light-footed movement
0 P+ P% t) c  }7 Wis just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement2 _0 `! F# c) F2 B
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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- h1 P: |! ?; t  e, [% S真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑   K4 k6 @7 {* _$ j+ c. u0 V
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真的是太像朱镕基了!2 p. X# H. c' I) V
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

1 ^) c; s2 t1 [$ G我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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