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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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2 C; a6 {2 K1 Y4 Y我尊贵的邻居
" Q! i, o% O$ K. D/ X- H1 C; t; s5 Z是我们小区  几十户
/ m! G: C3 f  }6 U1 M& l+ X唯一的元老! {4 I; V" S% j* J7 y" U
一住三十多年% h& p3 R/ `! W$ N3 Y- j
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
( {3 z$ F* ?6 L. k5 O, b  l4 J4 u白发红颜  不见皱纹
. W9 p9 |1 e! {* T" j# Z  T开车铲雪  挖土栽花
& S1 `$ n  U4 s9 l+ m, V似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
- Q( X* o4 \/ i$ ^( u4 Y& `邻居气宇轩昂) r2 x) I5 h8 q
如同女面朱熔基
9 O* \5 p8 T3 k" R6 ?邻居的字: x4 g* ^9 m- h
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤- X1 r# z4 X; F

$ c) g& _# L' @2 A3 ]2 ]邻居酷喜中国文化
8 I% v) N0 K' S! G) O- A: M  R说她属土龙3 b# B3 P+ \6 {
其笛声也悠扬
3 t6 g5 d! Y& |* s3 t  y- A! c那是从隔壁传来的
4 C8 C+ ?' z) Q: w: U唯一的声响5 b. d  w+ ]! Z; D/ ^
那不知名的曲调6 W+ `5 {( ]! @. X( f% b' f- U
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ' I6 h; {; \5 b/ C8 `+ l! i
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英文版,欢迎指正:& H" h' R% a- K! w9 T5 J6 M. Y4 A

3 A/ q# M* M5 V1 ?Living here for more than thirty years,
$ H2 }. }/ f7 T" r$ }5 p1 [my prestigous neighbour
- U/ L+ }1 A' w5 s) Z$ a4 ?is the only first owner of the unit properties
0 Y2 J( P) M+ [/ ?0 V0 U& y) Q0 |0 q8 hin our community --- * A3 y+ v3 @: R, q
tens of townhouse condos.1 k+ E! O" X% j3 N! k
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
" K( g) i6 Q+ b5 W4 F/ vmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
7 c& q% N4 H8 w9 YShe has white hairs and red faces.
6 W6 m4 Y) _7 @% ~Her light-footed movement
7 S- A4 k. R1 L. w. j6 xis just like a flying swallow.7 W5 \9 E9 h! I5 b1 I6 L2 U

6 U) l5 {+ ]# Z0 Y/ ?She shovels the snow on her door lane
- g& ?# O% Y/ _* r, L* Cbefore driving her own car;6 k( t0 I+ {* @
she digs her back yard4 u3 E5 a. X; W6 q4 M, P
to plant flowers ---
) |; a3 C% h* _* mas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
# s1 @/ ~6 s9 p- U% Oneighbour has a dignified appearance ---) r1 ]; ~0 }+ g& N9 Q$ Q" B2 s5 N
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
0 |% `! T4 }1 S! a2 ^6 h/ o9 GNeighbour's handwriting  f- X9 d. q% ^4 x. `
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
9 {: V. a& \6 @% }, ~interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
% o. {) D, f/ e1 R- J. UShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
2 `& X- \$ V; W  [8 L1 M2 Y3 i* {Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
) v& M. w8 o" tthat is the sole sound going into my ears
% l: \: l. l1 n# \9 [8 w8 {+ i" V4 kfrom the next side of my wall;/ U+ \& ~! e3 {9 v# H" [
the unknown tune is extolling# g( _! O6 M& e  R: c3 ]$ K; R
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
" r+ Q2 l! a4 L6 uagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 . ?! x& o; K& X7 u" x: W* p- @
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 6 Q3 K7 `5 X2 q/ Y+ M
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
9 w0 b- A  {+ z( q' D4 jJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

/ O  Q7 x" k8 w" L从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。) M) J( T9 h: K) Y6 `
另外,翻译改动一处:+ G4 l5 f5 {4 m
Her light-footed movement
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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3 u$ K# O. Q! X4 K$ {& F/ b真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!* W. y! k7 N) w+ \5 T" N
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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