我尊贵的邻居(11)

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井忘川
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/ a" O6 V+ R; k, d3 }4 g3 S+ R我尊贵的邻居
- n( O- K( W7 x0 C是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
/ s, d; j2 m2 A5 f开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物
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. w2 J# E  \0 O) t头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
# g* H1 l( T9 ~: G% W$ a7 y如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
$ _4 t$ |7 _) a4 r, B6 q2 M  n$ V其笛声也悠扬
) Z" Q* x4 J3 J2 ^9 L* x* t那是从隔壁传来的
: \9 _- B2 c8 L- y7 t唯一的声响
3 L* |3 Q# h. n那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

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这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：

Living here for more than thirty years,
! |$ F1 J7 {/ V# \# C' k# i  Bmy prestigous neighbour
% ^( t# ]3 W* X3 mis the only first owner of the unit properties
; m! T- u  ?- y# F6 I* vin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
/ o( c" `) Q+ S. u, g# jHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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( f' `4 P( c/ v: B/ IShe shovels the snow on her door lane
' P+ T! L4 \2 m8 N& v5 u! Y3 Z0 Ubefore driving her own car;
$ ]$ \8 E/ x$ k' t4 a) Hshe digs her back yard
# c# n$ v* q9 e% A/ ^& Rto plant flowers ---
1 _& u2 Y* W! L) _: ~& }as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
% m7 A3 O6 T; f$ {; \; fas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
" V" Q8 s! j! CNeighbour's handwriting
: W2 R. ~2 E) K" h, G. Eis so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.

Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
/ p" t( \) k. M  d4 w2 a& A! H3 ZShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
  v% l+ N/ R) Z! D- w" rthe unknown tune is extolling
9 [, R# M# A' s4 W5 ythe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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* w6 ^# n) G3 ]4 f土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
( h2 |  t  Z* m& w9 WJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

: }+ v; d3 n) c) s4 V3 |& u7 T从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
) _, n- y/ u" K' G5 {7 e( xis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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真的是太像朱镕基了！

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。