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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居: c4 k: e$ |' m# ?
是我们小区  几十户3 l; `0 F% G2 B: [3 w
唯一的元老
. ]  Q2 H! C$ s一住三十多年; J9 L5 o, J# N+ ?4 m8 Q# s

: d. |) n0 q% t- O- a6 ^& v9 h' C邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕% D0 \6 m; K2 D' v. D6 A
白发红颜  不见皱纹
* z# |' }3 d. x7 W3 |开车铲雪  挖土栽花2 p2 ~6 ]' D# M9 D
似不识  岁月为何物
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( {, ~9 s7 r7 P; R% r9 n头顶英国文学硕士的光环+ j: k; c' [( d  C5 T& E6 g
邻居气宇轩昂# Z" A7 l7 x) d: {
如同女面朱熔基
7 W9 V8 B+ m0 s9 {6 a  r$ e邻居的字
/ H9 u$ e. o( H' k- C) x% X; W9 F' R- W0 @则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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' G5 a6 V9 }3 o4 ?2 E邻居酷喜中国文化- |8 B0 x- G  z, f+ t, n6 m; j7 a
说她属土龙% |! }8 j! `0 P
其笛声也悠扬
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唯一的声响
$ w# z% r2 K6 J8 n那不知名的曲调, _2 {3 b2 y2 x9 H+ [; r
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
1 H8 ~7 n2 [* X2 c  x# w: |4 `my prestigous neighbour
( h! s# W( ~5 {' Y- H2 jis the only first owner of the unit properties* }2 {3 c3 X" G. |, C
in our community --- * t) N6 l/ j0 \' W
tens of townhouse condos.
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. g- {+ Y. y3 y/ ]' VNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.
1 c$ P1 S  i; {) eHer light-footed movement
5 O" w% I7 X5 T: w: tis just like a flying swallow.1 e* u- v! Z" i& B
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She shovels the snow on her door lane+ G$ k4 A# J+ G
before driving her own car;; `/ g& g4 w! S* v+ D6 ?
she digs her back yard: u5 m( R4 t, L8 H! \% ?
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as if she did not know what years mean.$ z0 ~+ H% g# u9 S! E3 i2 s0 Z
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
: |! e& `, w4 \/ f+ k6 vneighbour has a dignified appearance ---- W$ A# R& H5 P! \8 Z2 q
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.7 ~, \+ w2 _# l& ~1 Q. s( U
Neighbour's handwriting% ~$ f" j+ W1 r' `6 V1 u: C6 c- H+ Q
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.! A5 u. l, J0 G' f, o
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.0 o+ e; ?% L1 i: u; v" z
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
" I$ o5 _; G1 b- D( f! Zthat is the sole sound going into my ears
1 s9 j% S8 _' i* C& `from the next side of my wall;
  F; C" o: x1 x! M5 S0 Sthe unknown tune is extolling
$ c# E1 n* }* s0 h+ z. Q, othe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
8 n" b$ ], I/ q1 wagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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  [1 X5 m" v8 m: s+ i土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换2 `* v+ p# W! A  \; ]
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

- J2 F) h& q* k从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
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- c# \* V! m9 J0 @4 E) Q5 @9 Fis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!* O+ S  y3 U( g, a
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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