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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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4 o) Y# U$ @" p* J我尊贵的邻居- S8 L2 ^( X$ H6 K+ C% j+ ~
是我们小区  几十户3 ?& z3 ^% s$ D! L6 v( o2 `
唯一的元老5 e2 G3 |( W0 _4 O3 V
一住三十多年& q7 D, F3 A3 A) V4 b9 n3 l2 f
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕6 s" Y& g0 E/ O, m* {
白发红颜  不见皱纹8 {+ h5 K+ h' f8 E
开车铲雪  挖土栽花! V2 x( K1 w0 @! f, v- C/ q
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环" ?* r0 F/ ]2 |" d; b
邻居气宇轩昂: m6 f- e% y; D- l9 c; s
如同女面朱熔基* `9 Z' s. R( g3 v' ?8 K3 g1 W
邻居的字/ P4 s! }* K* o& b* _
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤' l8 ?& P. e: q+ I0 `; _

/ E- @" D1 a3 u4 y$ A5 m( E邻居酷喜中国文化+ s- `- B8 b+ ^' f
说她属土龙% T" e; d* g7 f2 `/ `! t6 T
其笛声也悠扬+ h' _2 o2 R# l7 E( q4 F  [
那是从隔壁传来的, G8 {8 G' F: @  }/ E6 D" R
唯一的声响
6 m, z, R- ]1 {" ?% W/ Z那不知名的曲调0 M4 M5 k$ C( \8 x
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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" `" J. i) [, t; N. v( r2 |Living here for more than thirty years,
% a. o, d, n3 \3 x1 n. j/ t7 [my prestigous neighbour
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in our community ---
! K5 N) }; N8 r4 ]tens of townhouse condos.
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4 k" P" z( ~2 W8 vNeighbour is more than eighty years old,, Q* `- m; |1 u( `; d  w
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
- Q4 e- S3 ]6 {3 tShe has white hairs and red faces.; y4 x9 ?( ^* p7 ^7 d" ?% j! \
Her light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
/ F# r" s9 [, c2 f- s1 ^before driving her own car;6 O/ r" y7 A: s! i1 {. z
she digs her back yard9 e3 }0 G9 r% m
to plant flowers ---
1 l! S4 U+ L7 q  l: @$ Aas if she did not know what years mean.) R7 |3 f7 |3 `4 q8 k
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,: l6 [$ d$ t; e
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
& ]0 g' H2 ?. `3 F/ f6 jas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
( |/ G, n, x5 `$ n/ N, l& w: E& LNeighbour's handwriting
$ t7 t, v+ e6 Uis so vigorous as to be the old trees
- f/ c9 p1 _& j0 b2 c! ointerwined by dry vines.5 _" H) v( i1 X, d1 X; P

, ?5 P& \8 P( ]+ b' Z, YNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
% x1 q7 r2 n- y+ ~' c4 aShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
% Y" D* R) t6 Z  o* KWell, her fluting is very melodious ---( h$ w3 v$ P2 B) }2 h. L6 H6 ~9 x
that is the sole sound going into my ears
3 s/ F# i9 N+ v6 z, k. ]0 Lfrom the next side of my wall;
2 q  Q6 h' h4 j) E+ s$ vthe unknown tune is extolling
, P( M. Z* D" Z% D9 L& \1 ^0 `" jthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
# B0 E% D4 K; ?; ~- g( C. O. [9 _& Gagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 ( P' _8 k- H1 w) G9 ?

- b1 [% l3 s% y" P, l. H土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ) A1 D  @3 g! J6 v
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
: C# [8 @4 `: L# p5 w, YJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

. B/ M* V; R- c4 M' Q2 `从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。8 u% }  Y* k5 {" `: C0 L" R
另外,翻译改动一处:
6 z, W3 C4 k( O1 ^4 T9 x1 BHer light-footed movement& ^( H( i% ~3 u4 m. Q/ u* w3 X
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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- \9 Q' S; n4 L9 q$ g4 E8 \真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 0 E% l4 O" _9 X. K# p4 k3 ~
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3 _. B! U: v* a7 d6 W) ^7 \真的是太像朱镕基了!9 Y5 H2 A$ i1 f- y" _) I+ T
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

: o- p* C5 h2 w0 {我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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