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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居( p" l# F. S8 o7 @3 T% k: ]- Q+ O
是我们小区  几十户1 D2 d. `  y' _6 K9 D+ F# p
唯一的元老( N( p. C% ], H, {) \( i& m
一住三十多年  Y6 \6 y0 e5 d. n8 e; h

9 m% [- ~+ D4 W( s邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
0 M2 l- v9 _8 P' ~0 ?7 i白发红颜  不见皱纹
  x; e8 t, {4 @# j: r& t9 F6 i开车铲雪  挖土栽花: g7 u5 c1 d/ f7 {
似不识  岁月为何物
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. y( a) h: R& O+ N头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 p8 a8 v9 I" I# a2 d邻居气宇轩昂
8 l( B$ z# \0 t* F' ~! h3 u如同女面朱熔基
8 Y) k: E- h* C邻居的字
9 K, ~. D8 x$ z. B" |1 t则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
4 a8 S5 v% n7 s* W' J9 h. P说她属土龙
- w9 n7 L9 d% D/ [1 }) k7 U; P其笛声也悠扬1 W/ O$ o( K1 M' S" y: C
那是从隔壁传来的
! w' s6 _( D/ U1 }( \唯一的声响
& D- ?; X8 U8 p1 A; I那不知名的曲调
9 O: U3 \$ p$ _# }' N( c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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! t% p' S) d" }& q英文版,欢迎指正:
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# x) s& d5 l6 c( o+ wLiving here for more than thirty years,1 B1 y1 S, ]1 b, o- y; I
my prestigous neighbour% H1 \2 a& p, S2 s3 @* {# a
is the only first owner of the unit properties" [' s- H' B& o8 ~  t2 H3 V  M* i3 |
in our community ---
0 F5 c0 N! Z% k$ d: O4 wtens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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4 F( w. R( ]" G' \! oShe has white hairs and red faces.$ R) b) p0 ~0 {6 A1 v/ J
Her light-footed movement
+ n, c, o: j) y! iis just like a flying swallow.
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3 {# g. B; v/ hShe shovels the snow on her door lane* a: ]0 C0 _2 t/ d# a
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she digs her back yard, D. B9 [. f5 R+ j: N- b2 Y
to plant flowers ---
. y. ], y0 d! E- W/ Was if she did not know what years mean.
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+ A6 X" F" r' `- Y+ k* IWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
1 d- d/ [. m3 o# kneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
. q7 `& w3 x9 nas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
3 B2 w: b7 `" U" x. r, Y* i% BNeighbour's handwriting
" @! J5 J+ m9 j7 ]& Xis so vigorous as to be the old trees- Y9 r/ y" r! w
interwined by dry vines.; m: e4 u; @# B. y( O" \
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.7 {  N$ ~' ^7 ]3 t- e/ b
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon." G( D6 c9 G' |. i& ]7 I8 s
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---; W; d* z2 A1 i7 }# ]5 I1 `2 O
that is the sole sound going into my ears. O7 h4 O8 B9 x! _- W5 ], \
from the next side of my wall;
8 P; F$ p, E8 N6 v, [2 Xthe unknown tune is extolling$ k" t& |( f% D% |3 S
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
4 X1 ]2 ~; x- Z# m& dagain and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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3 B" D0 l2 e) B- R  G土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 8 m5 o! b" m. ]3 ~# [& q
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
( |/ S2 G: V$ |( D) P  G/ CJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

" K5 y' p& Z# k$ e0 S2 N从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
8 i1 m6 P3 j: e' w另外,翻译改动一处:
1 g! P' W, e9 i0 g# `8 V: h# ^Her light-footed movement
1 f9 R8 j. y) i+ k% ^5 D: p% wis just like a flying swallow.
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& H! a0 j! m) |Her light-footed movement5 V. j0 H4 c) v0 O8 I' O
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 + C3 m0 v, F, H3 p$ J
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

: }4 t4 ]# v3 a, R我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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