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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 4 a( h$ t; O& T' S
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9 {8 m& ]3 D+ w6 R8 P我尊贵的邻居
( v5 f; ^# h$ z/ m) ~是我们小区  几十户
6 ?" d0 j1 @8 o, V# w. R唯一的元老7 U( m& o0 b# K3 _2 d9 n7 I9 y6 ?6 ?
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
& t) S; N: Q4 P! s9 |白发红颜  不见皱纹
* Z1 Z; Y2 Q7 m( x1 s' x开车铲雪  挖土栽花
3 C( R  D) p( ^3 t. d0 a( [似不识  岁月为何物6 m+ d+ W+ H2 t; g1 x0 z" X# P

% f4 x1 @; k/ r1 M8 j头顶英国文学硕士的光环$ ~6 v5 E6 }  T+ V/ R3 W' _
邻居气宇轩昂
/ c8 d" K+ X) @, U) S如同女面朱熔基
$ Q) p+ N* U9 N" v) X0 w7 m邻居的字! Z: X/ Z5 k6 c7 o) ~  R
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化( {" l" A" t+ Z6 V, w7 D. Q% F
说她属土龙
% i" u1 s$ G( h3 ]% C3 A) v* C- ~其笛声也悠扬# M8 n: ^4 ?, L/ j4 ]- l# A
那是从隔壁传来的
5 j, C! s$ f7 F2 {3 l. b唯一的声响
0 X+ b! E0 U7 h/ J0 k那不知名的曲调
" o# N1 B  M. }$ w反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:9 n2 n9 n7 e/ Q* y- A& v. Z
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Living here for more than thirty years,  [$ r; m9 o, f: A0 h( Z
my prestigous neighbour& J; z9 Y2 C7 _5 @1 w
is the only first owner of the unit properties# P2 c. Q( u5 M, Q$ o' T
in our community ---
9 `! @; e1 b5 V, k0 V: I- c5 Q+ gtens of townhouse condos.
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( j$ I: t% M+ l" r5 `Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
9 [; P) O% q/ T% J8 ]magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
* B8 C! V' ?$ Y; ZShe has white hairs and red faces.
2 u* G7 g5 F4 {3 uHer light-footed movement6 B, ^9 n) c! u& U3 A6 p, e% m+ Q
is just like a flying swallow.. C1 Q8 O* @; }" c' n3 G$ c5 y. j

* J6 a  z2 l2 q6 s3 o% kShe shovels the snow on her door lane; M! G* P5 @3 E& b% i4 U
before driving her own car;; C0 z1 j- ~8 v" m+ V7 M$ `
she digs her back yard
2 A3 P3 s) k6 P% l; @5 L! cto plant flowers ---8 G; d' x( L$ h% j- W  n
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
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as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
, t1 Z0 E% V# B7 K1 s$ qNeighbour's handwriting
% e! _5 R' d; K; d  t( d6 I- s# {is so vigorous as to be the old trees
( ?4 P8 `- T* T1 X6 finterwined by dry vines.+ G  P; o. S7 j

! s6 R/ P6 A, f3 BNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.% K' o. z. }0 u2 e% b6 D. \  w# i
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.) G$ m, I" R' |1 t& C% [
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
, w) b' f6 N5 `$ Pthat is the sole sound going into my ears
/ D7 f6 W/ C  [9 h$ x1 z* Afrom the next side of my wall;+ I. l# g" W  c) Q  \
the unknown tune is extolling2 R8 R- z! N* x0 t
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
4 D  v* w) a4 w. K* F8 `again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 * y9 ^/ I. n8 |2 c- L  y: b: A

0 w7 v5 n0 o: T4 z( ~土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换  u" \' u+ e$ |, a5 v6 j
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

4 f7 m/ p0 O% x1 t$ U5 f从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。% g) R* `# s4 i. q
另外,翻译改动一处:9 L+ U1 I$ G5 m/ k2 \7 R/ \
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!' L* W  `- _! p
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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