我尊贵的邻居(11)

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# r) e: i% ?1 s% }1 [我尊贵的邻居
3 }$ ^/ K! k/ [$ ~是我们小区  几十户
6 h( [) b4 T$ \6 J* p唯一的元老
一住三十多年

. O' x/ U( L7 E' ~邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
* x) p" ^2 l# ?7 b8 a# e. p$ h白发红颜  不见皱纹
6 J& s' E) X, Y5 D( x- T1 c开车铲雪  挖土栽花
  z) H8 B* M& n似不识  岁月为何物
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7 X8 e. H1 v5 Z2 y; z头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
7 j3 {' \. l+ d# t邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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) M! B% S$ ~- F: ?* f% \8 t  R邻居酷喜中国文化
( l, W6 o$ f9 D/ ~! U( Z说她属土龙
其笛声也悠扬
6 w6 E- H: ^! t6 G  B那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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' s9 h9 V: P- Q* Z( F: ~3 X0 |6 d英文版，欢迎指正：
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Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
! y( Q: |; a4 S: k% @/ K  qis the only first owner of the unit properties
! f" M" b' Q; c% \+ oin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.

Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
: i4 O7 v. ^) B- \She has white hairs and red faces.
# h4 h" O: i: N6 X3 LHer light-footed movement
  J' \1 u/ D7 Z& W# ~6 }is just like a flying swallow.

* n  A4 n& ~9 S0 eShe shovels the snow on her door lane
+ e2 d8 k5 t+ {5 Hbefore driving her own car;
she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
2 F9 J$ S- A- x" j- h: B; hneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
1 O5 [( @2 j5 g7 m3 Ras if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
# }% e5 m4 m0 @# ]) ~4 N; w4 P3 Eis so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.

+ d/ o9 q# i) }! S  m' S; q6 WNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
5 i7 d) }( _; q: r2 zWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
again and again.

Justing

4 ^3 Y# `8 T6 H- q$ l土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

* e9 k5 b( u1 W$ |从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
另外，翻译改动一处：
. p; e7 y* P8 Q6 c. i. MHer light-footed movement
" h$ E9 k1 o. Cis just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
- }5 P" F$ j6 c$ C: ^8 K, r4 bHer light-footed movement
& B+ i1 @( \. S, o! Zis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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! K9 Q$ ^& Z9 ?5 W真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

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6# Justing
! F; h0 a/ k( Z3 p  D' I3 U真的是太像朱镕基了！
- @/ s7 g/ h; g$ U# O- F* Hhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

. |% d% W0 U8 A- x我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。