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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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. G( q$ q7 y& c  a我尊贵的邻居6 z4 v$ K  E* y% ~) ~7 U/ W/ n
是我们小区  几十户
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一住三十多年& ~1 L9 M/ C! K8 t3 C! T

/ L; j/ t) i. r邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
) I  {+ e0 J$ j+ N9 y5 k白发红颜  不见皱纹
' m0 ]+ N' x: f, ~$ ]开车铲雪  挖土栽花
/ V" V0 I1 n+ L4 V4 A* w似不识  岁月为何物
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; r6 ?$ |9 `, W' w3 j" s$ m  v头顶英国文学硕士的光环- a- H' a: N* D! y1 J6 L) S
邻居气宇轩昂
5 P8 ]" M% L8 i0 E5 F& w9 Z6 ~( }, P$ V如同女面朱熔基
" u/ n# A+ o* ^  y1 [/ J+ n$ i7 {邻居的字& @1 R* t2 m; b0 ^" R: f
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化& y$ F2 h# Q: C. S
说她属土龙! q; G2 _7 c1 G
其笛声也悠扬" p2 H/ T/ c5 V, Q% G
那是从隔壁传来的# q& X. }' [1 Z+ r: c9 V% T$ [
唯一的声响* s+ `/ b1 y2 c2 x
那不知名的曲调: _6 E8 t$ J" w- ~! x
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:  J9 F( J0 r6 q0 t8 |

( @$ s" Z* `$ DLiving here for more than thirty years,
( v1 ^2 ]4 x; a  ?/ }9 r! rmy prestigous neighbour/ ~! v) Y$ w( M
is the only first owner of the unit properties
1 D: d: ?; ?% S/ |! G1 zin our community ---
- J/ B$ a+ A' o4 L: t, Etens of townhouse condos.! X" o+ A( G# d4 Z

+ i! J8 N3 G& NNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
9 _* t6 E* x4 K/ b! ?8 a5 c9 N  |magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
* l( g9 D; s* E% z2 F( Y( |She has white hairs and red faces.
3 z9 E5 c- c& p) z1 B- QHer light-footed movement& ?# q) S( f8 E6 s" L
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane: D$ b: k$ E: T: d, k
before driving her own car;
& v- Q. O* }& Q9 wshe digs her back yard9 g6 S- Y8 ]+ G% Q9 T1 _, l
to plant flowers ---( n' I8 g# \4 R1 f
as if she did not know what years mean.' H; F" ?+ h% C4 U

$ D9 ?% Y4 p6 u7 KWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
' a% |4 C) w; F/ ]7 s0 xneighbour has a dignified appearance ---9 }' b3 P9 Q) ~8 r- s
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.- s0 j; Y& Z7 t1 Y( [
Neighbour's handwriting
1 @$ k: q3 s8 _4 y3 his so vigorous as to be the old trees* d7 @5 S" k; K. U0 k% O. i) a
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
. `  ?- O! F- {She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
) d7 [6 }$ p5 rWell, her fluting is very melodious ---$ J1 k9 F' O4 _% b
that is the sole sound going into my ears" T9 c3 s0 C1 d+ k
from the next side of my wall;& G0 V4 Z! g; E4 {1 p
the unknown tune is extolling! N) l6 t% O' X
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,1 W" L( Z' A2 T4 d- a! w* h/ P
again and again.
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 4 X: I% _4 U* _" o3 [% [) ^# g
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 + Z2 m* O! E% @+ w. H! Q
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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, c: D* Z. @7 B& Z1 [. O. d从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
6 f3 R- `8 e6 \, g+ DHer light-footed movement
7 R. S2 D3 Z6 v3 l3 _) Zis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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; I; K) K0 r. w* S+ i真的是太像朱镕基了!5 v% `2 Y/ c2 d9 I# f8 \
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

# A% o2 d5 t+ H8 u- u1 W: z/ B我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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