我尊贵的邻居(11)

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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居
% a; N0 G: o8 F, ~9 ]- a是我们小区  几十户
2 p( ^/ P9 T2 [; h, H& @* \8 s唯一的元老
一住三十多年

邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
: }: Y  h( t8 P$ q& y白发红颜  不见皱纹
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 G; K- r7 }5 h- {7 g; N邻居气宇轩昂
/ B6 r: f- K1 m  V- L2 k如同女面朱熔基
8 m$ v# u6 f% A! {2 ^# z+ V邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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; Y) s! |6 Q+ q1 w# q. v9 A) [" @# V邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
0 j4 z) G( X; m! d% ]# B0 k其笛声也悠扬
& K. y% D0 S5 k6 c* ^6 d那是从隔壁传来的
* J& X9 m# a5 s8 v) n- ^/ J& U唯一的声响
4 b8 q' `+ @( ?8 s那不知名的曲调
' e* O" K* g) n' y; J3 o反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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0 D( o' z0 x# g4 o. g1 E, ~  q- u( O英文版，欢迎指正：
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Living here for more than thirty years,
1 S( r$ o. J1 P& }  L9 Wmy prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
5 \0 ^% n% P/ b! f9 Z8 [% X8 kin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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8 ^% |7 I- A3 t0 F! P1 Y- g3 c/ Z4 TNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
, p8 I2 J4 {  u' ~magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
" e" [8 i0 \" M" a' |$ aShe has white hairs and red faces.
( U# S/ Z; P9 @4 @9 z8 y  KHer light-footed movement
  e) Q4 n! L$ e, Jis just like a flying swallow.

She shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
7 L/ I1 I9 l: D& ^8 N# r5 vshe digs her back yard
7 v% Z/ l1 V% u- nto plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.
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8 ?  O. e* ~: J3 HWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
, L' \# U1 F7 n, v% l* dneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
+ _9 T5 T/ O& f8 `& b. m" dinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
# u( H, x6 x2 j8 z2 [5 hShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
1 ?/ u( |5 l6 [7 ~that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
- c9 W8 s4 _8 u+ t9 f6 o, wthe unknown tune is extolling
- U/ t- w& s7 {/ W5 Z) Ethe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
! _' a+ E* {! o7 X: k: Vagain and again.

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土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

" L: w6 X" }) ?" @4 Q8 M从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
$ K9 c3 q% z% [- c. y另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
/ V: v3 F; o; C* z! lis just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
6 a; R2 c: Q8 y; z3 v0 tHer light-footed movement
: T9 @6 R, d5 V5 ris just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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* [# e3 T% e; Y4 [3 K真的是太像朱镕基了！
- K% y: Y- G0 t. phm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。