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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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! Q4 E* O6 T+ M) P井忘川
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, j& @: \3 w9 {; ~6 C我尊贵的邻居
7 D" q. V# \1 k! R8 d是我们小区  几十户* ~$ Q. m- F, [& t0 Q0 @
唯一的元老2 I9 J, c6 U" O& Z2 j* p
一住三十多年
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0 v1 A& Y' A& \0 k0 U4 i* t0 O& C; N* C邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕' Z1 d+ i- b: ?0 J4 E* @
白发红颜  不见皱纹
8 \3 V' L% D3 r3 _开车铲雪  挖土栽花
; m0 q" q  Y2 g# N4 y9 A7 s/ r& H- P似不识  岁月为何物' K7 Z/ ^4 {: I6 ?' _

" T. r" s( r9 z" N头顶英国文学硕士的光环1 h" J1 k6 T& Q; C4 {% Q
邻居气宇轩昂& L  X$ t# Q7 U8 P+ y+ F- B8 F
如同女面朱熔基/ b+ p; r5 ^- L
邻居的字2 Z2 T( u) q; q0 T9 ^8 i' z3 ~
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
% [, k4 y+ X8 `说她属土龙4 l& q3 c, F) X2 X/ _' a) c0 j& P
其笛声也悠扬' c8 W) R  u' \7 |+ h; L: E5 W
那是从隔壁传来的
( C; J! j2 E& d. i! G+ }唯一的声响
4 |) _# t, T0 l1 x$ M那不知名的曲调
7 c5 d4 J8 ~: _反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 " |5 z$ b: G5 U( U5 l, o  n5 ~& n" Y

6 p- X" g! b0 t; U4 G英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
/ L" S- i+ C) m5 Ymy prestigous neighbour( O6 u5 T7 V4 w$ J/ m  e
is the only first owner of the unit properties
4 |4 G; q, H2 N0 ^' u" e! Pin our community ---
! B6 v5 p( o0 ^8 Ytens of townhouse condos.1 a. u4 [4 b5 H2 x6 _+ k- m% Z

( ?8 {0 r: i7 @0 L' e4 J! WNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
( a! o. b' K: X" |% q! r* y( amagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
8 ~" |  A9 u! u) @6 ]# j# fShe has white hairs and red faces.
- \6 q1 C" I; \, A8 ^7 WHer light-footed movement
' i# g' M* o' G8 A$ C5 yis just like a flying swallow.; D, B% I2 b7 b8 o3 T/ i8 W* R

( v' b* X" w, G# u9 VShe shovels the snow on her door lane
! N, |- D6 b$ dbefore driving her own car;
' i  U% ^) F8 _3 g% u6 c' @she digs her back yard
, S+ q: U% h* o0 m7 {# Kto plant flowers ---4 ]% a( W$ z, I
as if she did not know what years mean.4 M; ?/ X$ B2 E

( N" @! Y+ y6 q$ B: ?5 Z6 bWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
" d$ T! P" J5 J) g( s5 n0 _* Fneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
# r3 F( i' v$ z- Yas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.+ n4 H. k- _- e
Neighbour's handwriting- ]: |' X( U% c6 F
is so vigorous as to be the old trees/ e% k  J! {2 t$ n( H2 J
interwined by dry vines.) u+ W- T  h: V; f% B/ z4 A5 y' e

# S" y* V$ n+ ?- KNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.  h2 M( d+ h8 N) d! V% }" v
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.! x2 a( \% p( |% ~/ w
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
1 j9 F3 l& ^- j" @* O/ c; _that is the sole sound going into my ears
2 x: h' j1 `; o8 [from the next side of my wall;  s4 M  N& h5 \2 S3 C
the unknown tune is extolling
  W" `5 |, @7 V  a: uthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
) M% A! Z# F: m* b8 E/ c% @again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 + ?2 ?' |  E; p6 d' ]0 f3 E. a
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 : I  P, M' F4 g' @3 b5 m4 W, s7 n/ |
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换+ l9 U2 Y; M4 N6 g4 F% s, [
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

/ w# ], E/ V0 P7 ~+ n从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement" A+ D# C0 F" W/ {! G( r: K4 ~
is just like a flying swallow.  R5 \; |2 h! C$ ]! Z8 N0 y
修改为:
0 ~) V+ `) z: K% f' U1 EHer light-footed movement
$ w5 I$ G# L# @) z; M6 E2 kis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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8 Z6 F" i( o- h4 b真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!  T) Y0 u1 P, H" t" E
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

6 x% O5 Z( R( R1 q9 O- S我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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