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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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我尊贵的邻居1 {' V- h- C  S2 ]; j
是我们小区  几十户$ j# ]2 t+ r7 T4 w1 y. C% z+ k. x
唯一的元老3 d5 W7 {- H0 R* V
一住三十多年% o* R$ T2 @, }( X

0 V/ W( b) s, e, u0 c* t邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕2 B  M5 r3 |* O; o
白发红颜  不见皱纹
, h  ~' T3 \& M: R3 w, ]- M开车铲雪  挖土栽花
% a4 u, y9 \! f/ O! u  `% u; t  _- {似不识  岁月为何物% c! K3 N8 _2 |8 l* t
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
+ @! m* j3 G! \邻居气宇轩昂
9 r5 k7 g- v' a$ @如同女面朱熔基1 {% q+ [  {) F# ?/ U
邻居的字
9 I$ |. R' R* X0 ^则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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! L% ?7 C* C; Q$ T5 D& M5 V6 e邻居酷喜中国文化
6 Y- `" C: x7 ~. B3 R说她属土龙
- @) m4 ]2 U2 _/ k3 Z& D5 E: p其笛声也悠扬
& i: q3 c( q8 F( O# ]; I( W# I那是从隔壁传来的0 ^' W& i  I7 j; P# D, O
唯一的声响
! m, E' `" A. q4 {7 t. ~+ E% a4 R( _' j那不知名的曲调
1 I# X+ W# Z! o8 V3 ]1 |$ I反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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2 ^0 L1 O+ R1 e) G4 @  C7 L英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
% c6 o& J1 V/ ^8 emy prestigous neighbour
- [9 T. ]7 n* W8 G8 ^7 fis the only first owner of the unit properties( E) K- o! I  z) ?0 Z7 }+ V/ I
in our community --- 4 @& f8 [+ z7 U% _' R2 I7 M
tens of townhouse condos.. n( g6 l# t  P, u6 v, r; y! ~

6 E/ H1 K3 c0 z1 O5 Q  t% y% aNeighbour is more than eighty years old,( k2 o+ z$ `5 R, R# J
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
& R9 u  ~3 f: a# t+ d3 Z3 @9 g6 `She has white hairs and red faces.  \( s. k* H. z
Her light-footed movement) R) r7 S! U5 e: w7 v; v
is just like a flying swallow.
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3 B0 \8 I, l6 Q+ fShe shovels the snow on her door lane
3 x9 R9 ~- B1 ]. j5 Kbefore driving her own car;
/ b3 A. j6 E; j. J5 dshe digs her back yard- i- i! p; e7 x/ b0 N* \2 M9 r: z
to plant flowers ---
9 Q! z, L3 ]3 @/ K: Has if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
! ^- _/ u$ B; r! O+ F9 ineighbour has a dignified appearance ---8 o4 r) {- P8 ?- f; r" v. j( S6 `3 \
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
6 N. n" I7 W5 t( H) o, M2 [0 o5 t+ aNeighbour's handwriting% C6 F# A1 u& H8 J6 i  |  |
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
" @, }5 [- R: P1 |interwined by dry vines.4 H5 {) h$ e6 M7 b% X
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
+ S. P5 E6 |4 [: z& }+ [She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.% _/ _  w; Y  `2 p$ U% u
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---1 M4 U3 O  Q3 `- M% s* V
that is the sole sound going into my ears
7 j( i( b" t6 g( U. hfrom the next side of my wall;+ d# E' {, z3 I' ~. L* R
the unknown tune is extolling3 J  f' b. m' m3 A2 L
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 0 S9 E* M' u" |( n" T5 O: q) j7 y

; y: @" x* i1 I" h3 W土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 # C% c; e6 D- S" @+ ~3 H! ^
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
& n9 l8 M! K2 g4 UJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

/ A. m1 ?6 c+ p7 `' f# \从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
  k+ N( v. a6 V  {& w另外,翻译改动一处:
) [6 M% t5 \. N* e/ z3 UHer light-footed movement7 e+ e% I  k- J: y! Y8 F
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement) k$ A+ b1 |* z1 g" Y
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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+ f% q6 \) Q1 Y1 M: v0 I5 {真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 + M% q  F$ V* l( p5 y/ m+ |
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真的是太像朱镕基了!% H2 a% k/ L( r: g7 ?
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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