我尊贵的邻居(11)

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5 @' _, T4 C6 N& @我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
0 F- O6 a: ]  |$ }唯一的元老
. t7 X+ |* P: s; p2 S6 f' K6 x8 i' `/ m一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
: r& H2 }; M: ?! ~2 }+ _4 Y白发红颜  不见皱纹
* f7 m% k0 k$ J开车铲雪  挖土栽花
/ T! B) o) [7 Z( ^. d! b似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

" c$ \/ X' u9 x) E0 V邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
  b# N& j3 g. s/ w& z; H: y其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
5 w8 D$ y  t; [) k, j那不知名的曲调
4 t. c' V! k+ C& t6 ?3 c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：

Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
' S- D* \) j! S" D4 q) ?9 Ais the only first owner of the unit properties
7 s& ?0 s5 E* R1 U% f6 Xin our community ---
& o5 @% b) T5 t8 C6 ]$ T2 A8 [tens of townhouse condos.

Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
  L: b% {8 x6 ]6 d, [" {Her light-footed movement
/ {  x1 `9 {5 v' qis just like a flying swallow.
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1 S) ?$ ~8 j9 U  ZShe shovels the snow on her door lane
8 y& k- M, [  {; Ybefore driving her own car;
) y/ M$ H6 q$ t) Z! M& r4 sshe digs her back yard
+ O' P) {3 A1 G) T; rto plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
7 b( N  j1 f5 s; finterwined by dry vines.

Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
1 D) j8 O; Q2 U2 J; T% Y5 SShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
  o: a! B) j1 hthat is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
. i! q* {, k% ~8 ?* j; s# Hthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
3 Q) U# G2 G0 ?) T  ?$ _  _: Xagain and again.

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4 x, g4 K: B5 X3 r; [7 g% D土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
3 ^" A: o7 K% C* ~* sJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

+ G6 k9 X: m) `$ j0 i2 Z3 [从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
2 Z% M: i; J0 H/ Y2 R. x' p9 C另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
4 g, E! g: _' ~3 \修改为：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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! n+ z2 T0 @" |% Z2 q' S% }真的是太像朱镕基了！

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6# Justing
4 r1 V( ~" [6 Q) T+ {真的是太像朱镕基了！
7 D( F, R5 |# t; _0 ?' @1 E2 rhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

4 I: y: \! Q" y! t$ T我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。