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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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我尊贵的邻居
+ u1 n) z6 [" [) z是我们小区  几十户
5 G3 G6 G/ F2 Y- A唯一的元老- ]' i8 ]% {( c# b: l  ^
一住三十多年% d8 x. p2 D$ W+ @5 e  ]$ l1 r( w% n

+ ^- i* R. a* h* u- N" K邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
, \- T- D' E6 m) T# Y白发红颜  不见皱纹$ U4 _+ G7 G. L9 p% y) k& O; w
开车铲雪  挖土栽花! p. p. f$ |# j
似不识  岁月为何物, g/ B% \3 X, k  ?+ `' m
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环, F- f& b, [2 R* ^/ T# k' y
邻居气宇轩昂
) {8 {8 Q( Q7 e8 k如同女面朱熔基
8 [5 u7 u" j7 ?$ x9 ?) ]邻居的字: u& U( H0 C+ p+ H4 P. g- K
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化" G0 U! z! r/ b! g- o
说她属土龙# G$ }$ {' q! e' G4 ~5 Q
其笛声也悠扬" Y. n$ k8 u; o8 u: f0 q9 J! C
那是从隔壁传来的/ ^2 M" D" ]# ?+ w
唯一的声响
/ h7 `0 m, _; R+ ]0 ]. e, `; u7 p那不知名的曲调8 e5 y& {5 S2 d" V4 A2 r
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
大型搬家
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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" R4 I- K1 u- f( S5 O7 W英文版,欢迎指正:
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3 |/ Q1 x+ \# dLiving here for more than thirty years,
! D/ @, G& `  E# d) U- f& q- D' W8 @$ l# Emy prestigous neighbour
9 q6 ]  M% {; _. ]3 n' qis the only first owner of the unit properties1 i9 G. u& B, X6 `) X- N- }5 e
in our community --- 6 e" d" K/ t" f! h
tens of townhouse condos.
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- C$ }" \. b" u* `  q+ I" tNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
; ^( B* V. I5 Z1 i9 h3 R' l7 Tmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
; g: x7 I$ F! N. f7 mShe has white hairs and red faces.
9 X- a, x4 y! @* h6 GHer light-footed movement% p) c# B9 K2 M) Q1 _6 t
is just like a flying swallow.4 |. s! s0 k& X- x. T% o) M  S8 m
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard
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as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
. e( [' s+ L. b: u6 B6 y, `7 Q, ^neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
& E, m+ p( ?1 w0 {as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.7 c. k0 R: M" `- o2 k
Neighbour's handwriting" A1 Y, d1 [6 U" p5 W. `" d
is so vigorous as to be the old trees5 d; ^9 c" Z6 p% r$ x7 G
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply." A4 w8 ]. H6 i! i( H
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.' |; P' m/ `# q
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---9 z6 b4 ?0 S8 r0 f
that is the sole sound going into my ears
0 p2 W: S. ]2 C2 s' Y" q5 |4 ~+ x. Qfrom the next side of my wall;8 l+ J& d. m/ I. ]# W& s" S
the unknown tune is extolling
1 ~' \  w! I6 K9 \6 ~4 }1 N1 Vthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
  G& k0 H+ L* Fagain and again.
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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/ L( r- V3 I: M* x. z9 K土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 : v8 G8 t9 v' j  G- `
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Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。& g) |! k# U7 h! y2 N* x8 X
另外,翻译改动一处:5 m1 f5 Z2 H% w& d4 |( r+ J& Q
Her light-footed movement) }) n2 \0 S; f5 W6 A) V3 l( i
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement7 j1 M/ J9 a1 o1 E7 s9 q
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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3 k2 y% t! \" x真的是太像朱镕基了!
% u$ k0 Z7 _; }  G4 `hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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