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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 : i9 ^, o' Q. ]2 ~+ ~$ b$ s

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是我们小区  几十户
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- {  h- z3 F8 }1 J一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
$ p) m; {6 }. a9 G- s白发红颜  不见皱纹& |$ ~: b' C% d& z9 S! Z
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
0 e  L* r# s7 _似不识  岁月为何物: W8 ]/ P/ P8 j& ?# T

/ @+ r$ ~# c8 o9 F! S头顶英国文学硕士的光环: P7 q+ s% b+ P8 j2 n( {
邻居气宇轩昂
3 S. m7 f& K0 C2 ^$ R3 ?) m如同女面朱熔基8 X- [& c# C" x
邻居的字
  n/ X, P5 @6 J( s% H0 @: J1 u% ?则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化/ Q. s( A' L8 K6 e; U  }( I
说她属土龙
- G6 I! b6 f" Z% g7 j其笛声也悠扬
2 p1 E- U4 J$ D: k9 I6 Z! p1 b( q. w那是从隔壁传来的) u) n1 S1 r, \: p
唯一的声响
% ^" U6 x; I; \1 ]( }# H" Q那不知名的曲调
2 L+ u% s9 R  T0 _' n: _2 c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
% ~, S( Z8 A9 Wmy prestigous neighbour7 K' b) b8 L' r2 c
is the only first owner of the unit properties
" @7 i! {; D4 }+ _- W8 sin our community --- ; h5 C5 s, J3 B& H# K
tens of townhouse condos.; G7 e# j  {3 [4 n
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
" a4 ~. x6 `" L: j: Fmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.# \3 p/ v' L1 |' A% D
She has white hairs and red faces.
# v' U2 T; H# x. y# r0 bHer light-footed movement
. U( {) a6 @  H1 a1 m! O/ Iis just like a flying swallow.
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5 Z7 g6 E, o/ r9 r6 JShe shovels the snow on her door lane
$ P; U5 a) F; i, obefore driving her own car;$ p' v! d" \$ h/ y2 @! W" y, o
she digs her back yard. n6 G0 x6 t" v3 p
to plant flowers ---
8 n. w4 F/ h" |- r8 Aas if she did not know what years mean.! E9 O0 o0 L3 [+ o

( M0 k9 {9 J# {7 ^+ f9 x4 eWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
8 F9 ^' Z  x# u- pneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
/ ^+ E1 s0 y4 k. Z. u, Eas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
, a  Y- n* k5 e! ~+ t" S" ~) M- n/ R7 hNeighbour's handwriting: J2 Q& o: Q0 M+ p" E/ r2 [0 R
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
3 F/ k* I4 `$ ~7 E) vinterwined by dry vines.
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$ \2 |: T: a! M# _+ z& B0 \* GNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
& \, N! e8 S4 W& j' S$ D: yShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
% ^( k8 g4 n. G" w2 C; R$ }Well, her fluting is very melodious ---- q2 F5 X: Z. q3 x+ Q1 X. j, n
that is the sole sound going into my ears9 {2 _  d: w& M* ]' a
from the next side of my wall;
7 r8 J, i' p- K! N" @7 ]" Jthe unknown tune is extolling$ D  \) q; Q5 L* Z0 j- D* a
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
2 a! [5 n9 k" {- fagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 % C, q) g% J9 g4 g2 ~& r0 n
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换" |8 [- G3 r: f% A* W) O4 U
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

: U9 ?, m% f& B  {2 \9 s从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。6 k1 b' ]7 b5 x+ _0 A& Y/ C
另外,翻译改动一处:$ ?% B) J) b- s% \9 x$ z
Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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5 \& ]9 ~1 W8 k真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 4 n6 D- n* Y9 t. ^* K% |
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真的是太像朱镕基了!* J$ i6 C! E; q! B; D+ _
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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