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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 / h7 }9 x( @, ?4 @

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我尊贵的邻居
6 ?3 d0 W2 t$ c* S9 i$ Z, |是我们小区  几十户' ]% \9 M* w. x. d# B8 w7 }2 a5 D$ \# ]
唯一的元老! y9 y; W/ f( I  \' R
一住三十多年8 z! }/ @$ ?- p" ~

6 q7 f2 J* {' }邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕& M5 b9 {  P# N- O" t% l3 V
白发红颜  不见皱纹
/ d3 |) j5 b) b2 y! J- L开车铲雪  挖土栽花$ |0 }" v1 h" Z  I% K: M+ ~2 @! W
似不识  岁月为何物
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3 T* O9 {( y% n头顶英国文学硕士的光环
& k$ ]0 {' Q  ?+ b* g邻居气宇轩昂
/ [2 d$ X( {2 C2 D- g如同女面朱熔基. g) z8 X: G( Z/ \
邻居的字
" e2 }/ n( z! B# |( W$ r则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤% Q* i* G4 h+ n4 o; i" {
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邻居酷喜中国文化8 ~# m; [. Z0 G
说她属土龙
# s2 D. C5 [% H/ t! Y2 H其笛声也悠扬+ K9 @% d. t% X" b
那是从隔壁传来的4 d* ~/ e4 s* t" t* [$ \& G2 v
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那不知名的曲调
& t$ h  U* d8 J5 V$ J反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 1 A2 T2 D4 B# X1 K& w, G

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% o4 ?: G2 g& Z- S/ b  X! HLiving here for more than thirty years,
$ S* V: ^0 Q, N+ e0 j! ~my prestigous neighbour
& @- U: B5 g4 ]is the only first owner of the unit properties; |8 q9 ?6 K, q* l
in our community ---
$ K" Q/ d+ \9 P9 E: e" q5 D/ Jtens of townhouse condos.
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* P6 G( e8 ~% j: ^. cNeighbour is more than eighty years old,8 S3 p* l. N* v1 n6 [
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
) i$ U4 i, G" u8 }She has white hairs and red faces.5 S6 {( C' j% B" w) W6 Q: q. B$ t( M  Y5 }
Her light-footed movement4 B  S' B% u* n0 i! B) _% f9 z; L9 o
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane5 s6 h5 l. `' I) V& g/ I
before driving her own car;  [8 o( f7 `1 t) Q% ^3 ~1 F' ^
she digs her back yard
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as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,! o* \0 `6 m* y9 k
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
8 I( W# d4 W! Cas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
& w. ^; U1 j& b5 t) J  YNeighbour's handwriting
& j# r: Q& O8 }is so vigorous as to be the old trees/ p4 D0 n- Z7 }6 n$ R
interwined by dry vines." _" }& v& c+ c

  k5 k( c, H2 S4 p  ~# `6 n/ f" aNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.9 l6 u- L2 D7 e3 u
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.. o) B7 B3 K7 T1 q& A8 ?# u
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
* g- Q! l% T3 h4 H# |) w+ Hthat is the sole sound going into my ears' f8 [3 n( _; \4 E7 W' @+ O$ B
from the next side of my wall;3 q( k1 Q) v3 n) C  K, k' h8 g1 D. P
the unknown tune is extolling
2 S+ L/ p* Z$ Q- V* D: s* v; k2 Nthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 7 \% D" m$ a$ W/ _: A' P+ p5 X- K: G
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换6 ], Q7 t$ T8 c% [+ A
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

0 I* V$ u: r4 c9 |" q从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
! f* g4 M3 Z0 ^! c) U0 ~另外,翻译改动一处:
& p; d  b! F: P+ x3 v0 S- aHer light-footed movement
( y# N+ P1 E# X9 Mis just like a flying swallow.
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- j) a9 D0 ]1 c3 `* O4 VHer light-footed movement
" r. z2 _$ F; _/ kis just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 9 P2 T) x. z; `) j- p) k
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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