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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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我尊贵的邻居3 m/ l- k$ |1 C5 M. h: P( m6 u1 v
是我们小区  几十户
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" i* @$ y' x0 `: i一住三十多年3 W. |6 W8 u1 N! _6 y6 T0 r
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕! u$ `: h' a% x9 O2 _. x' a6 {
白发红颜  不见皱纹$ c) l+ K! y1 f1 W& A$ e
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
$ a# E1 Q$ A& }. R4 ], R  d似不识  岁月为何物
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/ v8 w5 q+ L/ Q3 a5 ~! @头顶英国文学硕士的光环2 |( {& X# A% V$ f/ m7 h' K1 L1 R
邻居气宇轩昂: Z* A' J) M1 x. K
如同女面朱熔基' u# |" Q3 Q7 B) y) g0 v* K
邻居的字
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邻居酷喜中国文化
4 j2 G7 H! U0 t: c2 }说她属土龙% Q( s$ z) S& s+ U
其笛声也悠扬
1 h/ g. f* \" O; ^那是从隔壁传来的
( e7 M) X2 M4 u, @  X. k唯一的声响
" J  H, p; O3 z. q那不知名的曲调
! D+ h7 q: M& k' n, [' f  F/ \反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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5 ?( @2 `! D; }6 ]+ n6 `( }+ ?6 ?Living here for more than thirty years,. n0 ^8 ^1 u' I! a
my prestigous neighbour. ^  |# z. b+ z( p
is the only first owner of the unit properties; ~8 C" h! M# C" T  G
in our community --- ! ]$ A4 |( R+ k+ b; R" E( P( y
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,- N: j$ s+ G) q+ [" B
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.8 q0 A- _/ f" I7 o# A; C
She has white hairs and red faces.
* A8 _( X8 N! C" A3 ]$ F. zHer light-footed movement! r" v2 B4 H3 B2 c" U7 r4 _% O
is just like a flying swallow.7 X  E* M- w" S1 Y# t" b
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She shovels the snow on her door lane1 O& a! x( g# ]/ K: M) U
before driving her own car;
" A& [: n) c# {3 |she digs her back yard1 d/ S  P6 i0 k6 H
to plant flowers ---
* @( w- ~1 H/ k$ F$ h- E7 Kas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,% a. }$ A: d& D9 T$ g9 ?
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---* W3 s2 Z0 W. U( f
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.# c# r8 }/ V1 p& F
Neighbour's handwriting
2 j* _' m/ a9 v" Ris so vigorous as to be the old trees
* M8 N! _& Z- j" C# I+ winterwined by dry vines.7 V/ Z. m( |( `

3 s$ {9 q: B9 o, mNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.: s& ~2 V# }* u4 _  b
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
; o& }3 F. a( f# zWell, her fluting is very melodious ---# z: E% E- J3 R
that is the sole sound going into my ears' ?/ Y. Y8 D: }, S+ Z) q8 M
from the next side of my wall;9 k, ~3 o3 ]  F7 b% P' o
the unknown tune is extolling  ~& s$ a$ Z5 G; r6 W
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
; h( V' l6 e8 T1 m/ Y: tagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 5 u% l% n7 w4 R! J* ]% U3 x1 M4 U
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换" F4 {) }1 j, g3 t$ V2 L- L
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
7 n' q* E; |, e另外,翻译改动一处:
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修改为:
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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! b, f6 R/ `. Q& O" O, w$ g真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!1 X) g4 A- J8 v% I
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

, F. T( d' q- V/ s  d我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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