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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居
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唯一的元老. A1 A' T; |; X1 P5 I( a+ W/ p
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕- d% S1 {& b0 @! M% D- q
白发红颜  不见皱纹: W2 l. }2 g# S" k: N
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
$ b2 T# m' ]- y0 S) L% f似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环' R; m* p5 X% q, r1 y! J
邻居气宇轩昂2 B. J% ?0 P4 z0 Q! c7 r; v
如同女面朱熔基2 J! |7 Y0 h* f! Q
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则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤0 t( }4 T4 j% E! J
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邻居酷喜中国文化
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其笛声也悠扬3 a; p, V; X& w. T. A
那是从隔壁传来的9 L( z5 D  u2 i; X& E4 [+ r
唯一的声响
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反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 , Y+ C* G2 a0 X# f
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英文版,欢迎指正:$ f5 d' Y$ i" k9 T% ~

. i+ L: g* s5 ]/ ALiving here for more than thirty years,' @. F! d$ B4 s3 l# D& T8 |
my prestigous neighbour: G" s6 ]0 O4 K- k& ~8 }* ~; U( {
is the only first owner of the unit properties0 k0 |. H# T6 f' V$ F- _
in our community --- # Z  w+ D! J/ a2 z0 y8 M8 Z
tens of townhouse condos.; {) B& T! }. T! e: T/ \9 O, h

* L0 s( B# z  @Neighbour is more than eighty years old,  o& s1 K/ Y8 a# o1 O6 `7 a
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
& z. H# K; E, _4 n; o2 yShe has white hairs and red faces.# `( q# L; M: m4 o4 l4 q/ y: ]! i2 i
Her light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard7 y& C( u  H/ q, r8 [* E
to plant flowers ---
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
3 W( z- @( h; d1 a8 G0 Ineighbour has a dignified appearance ---: ^8 v+ @) R' D( {, g+ y8 d
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
( L% H9 p/ y  ^8 A. c1 m0 fNeighbour's handwriting2 E( R- F5 |6 P& E' v7 _
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.* P3 ^1 @. Z8 R+ `1 O- w
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
8 O0 d: T2 ^& D8 }+ TWell, her fluting is very melodious ---6 j. N# a% \. b) {/ M" ^
that is the sole sound going into my ears: e$ t) {$ [! R3 T
from the next side of my wall;# P5 f# M4 l( @0 p
the unknown tune is extolling
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again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
0 }6 k( J; {+ M- c7 d" C8 ~Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。" k% v7 u) M* p5 o( c9 M
另外,翻译改动一处:
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is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement/ T1 F; ~3 {6 ~0 S
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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; H) X' J; n: m$ R" m1 k+ y* S真的是太像朱镕基了!9 |  m) @9 n) B. q
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

" j5 D9 e6 v3 r; H. I我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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