我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

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我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
& p$ h1 x4 B2 }一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
0 V9 `1 R5 ^: O8 t" H( o  D白发红颜  不见皱纹
: {. \+ c3 |, y, }2 S; }) `/ c开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物
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7 U3 _8 ]1 E. ^- u# @7 o( ~+ G, ]头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
4 Z% \4 U8 W* o6 w9 @; s7 O/ b& u邻居的字
3 Z4 @% [5 v- O# \% E1 `3 G则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
. d. N. o0 K& ?说她属土龙
# \. A% Z* l  x" E. h' N其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
5 }; u6 a4 T) z; w唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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( O# }: J& ~7 R: O, S- C. I英文版，欢迎指正：

# l9 z' t* I/ ~/ P) K: T6 sLiving here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
% ~2 p, ~8 Z( \" T1 D/ `1 Gis the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.

" Y* }8 K7 g7 R! ^Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
0 w3 M4 R3 ^  O: z9 v8 WShe has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
she digs her back yard
( S9 D# L, a( M4 Pto plant flowers ---
3 Q* |. N7 d6 A  }4 r- jas if she did not know what years mean.
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& v6 }# u- T, e1 nWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
9 f. @( l1 D7 F: S6 j  Bneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
, K) b2 |2 x% a$ k. ?as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
! j: j4 R* e0 ^/ R* ?4 ]is so vigorous as to be the old trees
0 `# N* I! @2 S; L; @interwined by dry vines.
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9 g( {8 u/ H' _+ [+ X6 fNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
1 _  S# w3 p/ y4 x% x6 h. ^again and again.

Justing

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9 w  R3 ?$ L8 m土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
' p& g  Z) G5 S+ \: D! QJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

- e. Z5 y) M8 Y; F0 W- g从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
3 d4 I; {7 w( o. \9 X9 B另外，翻译改动一处：
3 B5 h9 W' t& W/ F/ k/ n) a. `' m& u, BHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
- R- o8 Q) p2 R# X4 X8 }Her light-footed movement
6 {8 d. \# o- \& l0 D0 l6 [6 sis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing
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4 B, f" l; R  T真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

6# Justing
& L5 o" A) o# o! _真的是太像朱镕基了！
( I! ?( x  U- a# ~6 A, qhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

9 N7 ?; @0 q  B- K  u我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。