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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居1 H8 P0 \9 f5 L4 Y4 D( B- |
是我们小区  几十户( k' d8 D+ A; r* N3 D. O
唯一的元老
5 P8 H, ?$ j/ x7 C一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
: `1 Q  ~* y, {白发红颜  不见皱纹- |( B$ m( g! h; s4 O
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
# C# c1 V/ j5 y. s1 V5 |6 z8 C似不识  岁月为何物- _" T5 R$ a0 A

& ]: ]" w6 X  b) ^头顶英国文学硕士的光环
6 t! B+ c2 w6 @% J8 {# t6 @# e3 s邻居气宇轩昂
2 h$ Q; e  F  w* k+ q9 d如同女面朱熔基. W: }; Z1 @. g8 z1 [
邻居的字
( @/ P7 n* o2 y2 ~1 N- P) N则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤. m  K" {1 l7 c9 m& S) T9 a8 m" k
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邻居酷喜中国文化
& i! q, F4 K/ i, U& V* w& C说她属土龙
1 A: i5 N) s; B0 ]+ K其笛声也悠扬
. M2 k$ Y8 @- L9 Q6 e+ c; J那是从隔壁传来的! F0 S! e- P3 z* D2 J
唯一的声响. a7 Q& Z5 N5 A8 V! s5 B
那不知名的曲调
/ y( V* t2 l. w反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 $ J3 i8 G6 Q# h6 q0 ?

3 j) J5 [! W" G  U% K英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,+ J9 y# ]" l- I1 R1 j$ j7 h) @
my prestigous neighbour
. W' y9 k: H" l' N+ cis the only first owner of the unit properties7 _% S- u# a- S
in our community ---
+ ]9 {" p% a) w, Ttens of townhouse condos.9 V" R4 x; v/ F2 C

8 T! a9 u9 V% {1 V6 k6 m% Q2 |Neighbour is more than eighty years old,# j4 I1 I" e, f( N
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
; k% J5 \" d1 V  Q7 Y3 MShe has white hairs and red faces.& P8 k( e% Q, K
Her light-footed movement
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; [6 v+ D/ }" u  ?6 XShe shovels the snow on her door lane+ ]" K- d% x5 x9 x
before driving her own car;' k" P" G7 v& _* \& }2 Q1 q5 _
she digs her back yard8 Q! \  u8 j3 n# d3 z/ \7 e
to plant flowers ---. ?% p8 ~( i! x
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
7 X# W/ q) ?; d& f" L* jneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
: y9 k" h! K# g6 {1 D8 Yas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
  X2 a6 C) Y" p  ?+ MNeighbour's handwriting$ r% f2 k. Q  P- N' s
is so vigorous as to be the old trees4 d  P* Q8 _9 N8 P  R' C
interwined by dry vines.
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! t4 z. J) M) w, X2 o7 }Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.1 ^; U6 d+ g9 d; g9 m" J
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.) j6 k4 \& X) h' b2 ?
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
% l2 N% B# _% E% \; `' ~# fthat is the sole sound going into my ears
# u* X2 f( |. t5 X3 U+ J. ~from the next side of my wall;, }  T1 a2 ?2 g/ n5 z5 I
the unknown tune is extolling
; ^3 A- _' W( g$ M- U& Fthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
; }9 u2 ~: d3 J" zagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 % }* P* z( k5 J& R* I% l$ v; N, L# A5 V

$ }8 I9 |, _+ w6 x5 }& m; O3 F土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换  |9 v* Z( n: S5 Z" M. u
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

% T' P+ f$ f. S) r/ h从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。/ h6 q- j9 I3 r- |
另外,翻译改动一处:
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is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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9 N, K7 e( \  T0 e8 B: g( q真的是太像朱镕基了!1 V  ?" E: o4 O9 f- G! u( V& t; Q
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

0 L! ?) X+ @/ s3 |/ f+ s我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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