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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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我尊贵的邻居1 m  t3 i) t( d) _. [
是我们小区  几十户* }4 X& T# O4 l2 N2 l' \+ M# q
唯一的元老
8 b4 g  H9 u1 k2 \一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
7 R+ W5 f- y" Z; H白发红颜  不见皱纹! U, o$ Y) @5 W9 G, W1 p3 t0 ^
开车铲雪  挖土栽花; S! `8 r! P" W* b) a; Q" b
似不识  岁月为何物
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1 e& s, z, s! _头顶英国文学硕士的光环
% C! g  R( n# t邻居气宇轩昂
! }( F+ I: P! {8 n6 l如同女面朱熔基  h0 B" A0 s4 _. P: `2 C
邻居的字8 `1 h' W0 R" G
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤% y# d$ U2 K5 }8 n9 k
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邻居酷喜中国文化
. S5 [; c- a/ H' [7 \说她属土龙
! E. u. [( m# s/ d其笛声也悠扬0 E5 u& ]# w2 n$ L8 g
那是从隔壁传来的
' L9 y9 N7 Y0 F$ B# m唯一的声响
( E  |; B2 x( O4 g7 Y0 L& u9 q那不知名的曲调
/ M7 f# J* O3 Y/ ?1 K0 m反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 # I, [- f5 b9 |% ?: a( g% r

6 g8 M$ ^' `1 t+ P9 E5 s英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,% R; i" V( o% J9 Y0 z0 x. g
my prestigous neighbour* u# O* a4 W0 |
is the only first owner of the unit properties- f  G5 `# Y7 D
in our community ---
3 e0 [* [6 Q4 z0 d  B4 H+ }tens of townhouse condos.' ~% R* D) E% L: j9 X; p$ z- B

! V' a  U2 ^' L2 k" bNeighbour is more than eighty years old,. T" G4 n# \$ x5 X8 w4 l, V, i
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.& i: C# ~/ l4 n, l' _! D
She has white hairs and red faces.
4 [8 a! C* _; b, D% M3 KHer light-footed movement" }3 X. _  W& W4 y& R+ ^( j0 _
is just like a flying swallow.  O* e/ T- |! d' `

& u: o/ J7 J! y2 u0 i. g3 `She shovels the snow on her door lane
6 U# x3 o& y1 G4 o  T8 Abefore driving her own car;
/ R7 [' @/ W. j2 c+ F8 f' ^! l/ kshe digs her back yard. n) B- h  a5 s$ a5 @  r# l
to plant flowers ---
6 J( j. k$ @* b8 j, {as if she did not know what years mean.6 E' I2 Y$ D4 \1 ~# ?
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,4 S: J/ j2 l" |; V9 c
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
" f( d: K: J  q( e7 P2 ^; {as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.4 h1 K# j) a6 P2 ?. J) U' d& y$ @
Neighbour's handwriting! i$ C5 g' @* G2 J( i
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
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/ ~% H' R% e5 _) R+ k, Q. N  L$ bNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
' d# T  U" N  R' Z5 X/ O' q# lShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon./ V6 |! X/ z3 ^! B- K& }
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---3 y: N+ M  @, z. X5 d
that is the sole sound going into my ears  n; C# L3 l! L1 [' g. s
from the next side of my wall;* Y2 S; T* c/ ?: O# v
the unknown tune is extolling
0 v& |4 a# o5 n  fthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
% R- H2 b6 z# S& vagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 : Q6 w9 M7 G+ \2 o) k6 P6 h

9 |# J3 \  @& R土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换) I3 Z% c9 `  Y5 K. [3 v
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

5 Q; L! ^; }$ ]$ `从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。; V2 E* A0 \" b. ]) U; U
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Her light-footed movement8 P1 i7 N, F( u
is just like a flying swallow.
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, m/ J1 b" l& l& s5 ?" y+ LHer light-footed movement$ e( g9 d6 q+ g. z! u5 P
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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8 f; x' B! M7 M% i* s# N+ @真的是太像朱镕基了!
# X  F. v! T9 W* j# A' nhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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