我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

井忘川

0 Z% f) ^: D3 o; t4 i我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
0 F* M1 C/ w" f0 g$ H唯一的元老
一住三十多年

邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物
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, I: d; u& e2 ^头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
4 U! x. C1 Q' P则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
7 c; a* b$ C7 V' d# V5 u( J1 v5 X说她属土龙
; R1 w6 b& ~8 Q  r  j其笛声也悠扬
% u/ \, D8 V& M那是从隔壁传来的
" ]8 C; {7 @+ w/ H! H$ I唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
5 ~7 H& U1 t0 q/ A* e, j. [) r* e" s' u反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

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  m& v3 h$ }4 O; t# D+ u英文版，欢迎指正：
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& v* x+ G+ M# ^Living here for more than thirty years,
. T2 e3 k# @. o2 `my prestigous neighbour
  `! P! G; L& r$ g3 His the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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" i2 ?. F* c: a; b2 xNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
3 X6 H7 e% R! O6 P$ }! `: a/ _6 K$ tis just like a flying swallow.
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8 {, a  U! s: t/ g2 K' U7 ZShe shovels the snow on her door lane
0 x7 y) }* ]. `  [' m0 o6 W# Wbefore driving her own car;
/ k+ V4 h" f2 T, |9 v; z5 Qshe digs her back yard
8 X% I1 m, R& H7 b5 }- Kto plant flowers ---
6 z9 s/ b* v# ]" Q1 r8 i0 x$ ^% @as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
' c: _) I2 b" wneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
9 s5 p: Y+ I. Y4 a3 w, @as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
9 ~6 V- V: z- ~* G' ?. c" Qinterwined by dry vines.
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) C$ N7 n, U# x7 ?$ ZNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
* O6 D+ K! W$ L. iShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
# S6 v! Q% Z% DWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
2 c4 F  j8 f' A+ nthat is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
" O) u- `+ c  ^! J" |  d( f2 Lthe unknown tune is extolling
& K: b/ {+ R' H6 O' xthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
again and again.

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2 I& Z* T  M# F% [7 M2 K土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

7 D0 `; Y8 O' ^1 W* I' ?从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
- L) y  l  ~& I( `- J另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
8 B* D& @5 O5 D1 E( N修改为：
# }& G4 g. _# F. p& J% K: V4 O( ?Her light-footed movement
+ `# M% S- @5 u5 lis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing

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真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
) S" G8 D7 t' y1 ^& N" g6 Qhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。