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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 2 S# q6 x5 @/ {6 `# I) w, w

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我尊贵的邻居
$ w  k, m! L5 I) Q8 |7 [7 Q9 w是我们小区  几十户
- V4 g' y% h, b唯一的元老
0 e  ^* P! v5 p, c一住三十多年' `( a1 s& `- E4 N- T
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕2 G0 {  B, l$ _# x
白发红颜  不见皱纹7 G7 V8 Z, _' v3 ?0 \- o
开车铲雪  挖土栽花4 M" h; b. v! b2 J7 D
似不识  岁月为何物
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# f8 X3 s; U" ]1 {& s头顶英国文学硕士的光环
" e6 ~1 u+ L# h8 H. }1 r邻居气宇轩昂
: ^2 K; Q* L: c" I. v, _0 c8 H, e1 j如同女面朱熔基2 o0 ~. L/ n  x& W; `* |8 \$ w( p/ `
邻居的字" u7 I4 C1 w$ `& A4 F) }
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化5 j; K* W/ S- |, b
说她属土龙
3 T+ `! ]1 @9 V0 _9 R( v4 D其笛声也悠扬* u) C( L/ `$ d  T% g
那是从隔壁传来的& v" p; ~2 K% |. i
唯一的声响9 ^7 Y3 v. w( _5 U1 ?+ G6 j
那不知名的曲调
; B9 C/ |8 l: d$ s6 w, C' A反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 7 h" a0 _3 l; {4 _- X1 K

6 |0 v9 x$ u5 U' k( u" a8 V英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,6 I; o. K  v4 ?- D3 R
my prestigous neighbour
5 Z3 T2 W, ~" R0 N$ Z8 x# his the only first owner of the unit properties- I" b* S$ E' H5 H) j! j0 x, F6 e
in our community ---
, W0 x* G0 M. A( n9 O2 @6 }tens of townhouse condos.# t5 _: Q. ?0 W: V9 }# h; H
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,! O! e" N! ?" w4 ~! Y
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.3 p- }  D" |6 p1 v7 c- f. }; f
She has white hairs and red faces.
: G5 i, c1 j' yHer light-footed movement
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! C, [% i+ W5 l' NShe shovels the snow on her door lane
6 n4 I* R, M# f' Dbefore driving her own car;! v' D, \8 \$ @6 u; Y. A: m
she digs her back yard
3 ~2 U' m/ r/ Wto plant flowers ---6 @6 K( N% U0 Z7 w& J
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,# r, ]8 r7 v2 B! P$ J" H
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
- @3 A( F! `! X5 G% t7 ^as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
& S, D( K" R# N7 zNeighbour's handwriting
5 I4 _, S7 s0 k6 Y! o. |2 N+ c% wis so vigorous as to be the old trees
2 m! f- u2 o& p  P# I  g7 \interwined by dry vines.; j( A, U) y/ O/ k' x
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.% \8 W2 V' t. b/ M2 a' c, ]9 x2 d% ]! U
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
8 [5 l5 V0 m3 R9 J5 x. VWell, her fluting is very melodious ---! Z6 K- G! ^( d5 }
that is the sole sound going into my ears
3 g* q6 W3 |6 A- U: `& E* S% cfrom the next side of my wall;  Z, {' r! Q0 r9 v8 J
the unknown tune is extolling# }/ l# [. E4 m3 ?& L
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,& a# u+ R! o! \4 |3 K
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 : c) Z: p' k9 ]5 [
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ' N& o; ~, W# I
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
$ l$ E; G" l( |" o. xJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。9 f2 g! Y% A. M. J; N
另外,翻译改动一处:
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修改为:6 m' [& X4 r+ j$ p! h  ^
Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

' q( D! o% D& f我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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