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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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8 I( ?* K% D: T7 s我尊贵的邻居% t2 ^7 D6 z9 |1 r  I6 p
是我们小区  几十户
0 [- r' m2 Z) `4 i唯一的元老! J4 t4 b# F6 Q: l4 m
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕% L$ K. B! X- o) {
白发红颜  不见皱纹/ c( K" \( t6 y6 w7 ^9 `3 t5 d" e+ G' n8 p
开车铲雪  挖土栽花  k; `$ s2 k: }( x" `, }
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环( G) _- l# i' U& C1 S
邻居气宇轩昂
, Y- b6 Q& _3 m$ y9 b5 B5 ]5 T4 ?如同女面朱熔基
, C8 t1 k) F, `5 ^# L邻居的字
, U& H9 ?# B3 n( D" D: f则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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7 r9 z3 h# c* w5 \: N邻居酷喜中国文化' \+ y( \, l' d+ b, T$ ?
说她属土龙
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那是从隔壁传来的
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那不知名的曲调
" V4 H  N- R, X5 @2 ~* K0 z2 V0 a7 Q反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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; D# \' X5 q1 G; v! ?英文版,欢迎指正:
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5 n: t/ @! |# mLiving here for more than thirty years,
0 h6 ]9 U% k: C, \( X5 O# [my prestigous neighbour4 E7 e* T7 r5 @+ [' z
is the only first owner of the unit properties- \4 u0 b5 w0 h1 R0 W$ }
in our community --- " ]' O3 \( \/ s
tens of townhouse condos.
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; }1 H6 L9 n% a! }Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
6 p! s/ w0 `2 G- o9 f5 Hmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
# {- O& Y8 g1 J0 o5 D) m, E1 L1 \She has white hairs and red faces.
1 b/ i; x# @* W  ZHer light-footed movement* S7 c* l& y1 S! \0 m
is just like a flying swallow.; `: J1 p0 a# }/ @

6 f1 U5 I( P" d) ]& ~! s( |She shovels the snow on her door lane% B- `4 M1 i' @$ n* c
before driving her own car;4 h1 v1 M, Z* o# Q) H1 p8 _5 G
she digs her back yard
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" z7 C' U. ?8 [* k0 i, `6 yas if she did not know what years mean.1 y. _6 c$ d. Y; c5 K2 I

1 \0 N5 u5 p9 s# L" i1 {With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
& d1 R( O1 o! B+ [# X, o; Zneighbour has a dignified appearance ---6 e6 ?- V; U( J2 {- E9 }% \' Y# ?/ j
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
% F7 v" z, O' p/ K; @& k$ J0 BNeighbour's handwriting+ y) s" G7 `2 g
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
2 ^9 X7 u7 R  F. g% N: cinterwined by dry vines.& i; X1 Q& J- A" d- p( S

3 C) j9 }! d6 @Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.9 m2 A7 S& I) \
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.; i" ?! E! v! ^2 R# c1 @
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
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from the next side of my wall;: p6 A  g' E/ ~- K* S. V1 o
the unknown tune is extolling+ O6 w$ H, d' s3 r; D4 \' w
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,% L7 F1 C! _" t; I/ W  T
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换+ a0 b* \! V: L' S
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

) B# u+ y6 H, B& s7 ?5 z从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement$ {2 r, Q5 g1 A/ N
is just like a flying swallow.
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ' v* p5 P/ Y% b7 v1 O9 a5 j# X4 C8 E
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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; a1 p! {1 B" `4 W6 t+ J9 N: C1 e( B7 X我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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