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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 / E+ @4 A- M0 m
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我尊贵的邻居2 h9 \2 g" I* j$ I8 f/ L$ r3 c
是我们小区  几十户
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一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕7 s0 r; q% t/ \0 \
白发红颜  不见皱纹
7 w- @: T  P6 f/ X; d开车铲雪  挖土栽花
5 a% Q: D* t/ @. G) p# {) N7 p似不识  岁月为何物: I7 t& T) y* h- l/ S

; {2 F1 W% I# b& S头顶英国文学硕士的光环
" H; N$ P" o8 M& g0 D, s邻居气宇轩昂
7 X7 X+ @- Q2 y- I3 w如同女面朱熔基  l/ G( o5 ?/ U4 h2 ?5 g4 P
邻居的字
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$ {0 ?+ Q& I$ y: _; a邻居酷喜中国文化
8 S$ N- F6 I; P# [# d4 Y0 _+ U5 |" e4 A4 ^/ `说她属土龙
- @" N: j) _/ V8 ~" l* o7 N其笛声也悠扬
3 ]& Z5 t0 A9 c  z2 D+ F那是从隔壁传来的. B5 l% d! x* M% ?7 p
唯一的声响
8 u+ i9 z! U0 }那不知名的曲调+ j$ D$ X2 `5 j+ n5 t+ H
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 2 v- o* b, d+ ^) `1 Y3 ^3 y
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英文版,欢迎指正:4 A4 {& W; ?- r0 [* G

8 Z4 q' m/ Y4 }( CLiving here for more than thirty years,$ [1 t; V: G9 E) L
my prestigous neighbour0 ?5 n# {5 D6 R: C! _# I% h
is the only first owner of the unit properties, g3 h6 C3 ?* t( \
in our community --- 1 j5 [" F& V" q) X2 f+ E' P
tens of townhouse condos.
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) T, z; v& S  ]Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
' F, I. H+ Z  N" xmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes., _; ~4 v4 Q6 i2 N" s
She has white hairs and red faces.$ u9 i# W! @# T8 B4 ?
Her light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard& P# q, d$ C) ~) C
to plant flowers ---
2 F$ }, i: ^$ J" Was if she did not know what years mean.
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9 L' w0 Y" ?( \) h% \5 p- |! XWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
2 B2 j% D5 J& M) nneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
2 Y; b" l' y' N* D# M4 @as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu./ V3 V& O5 a3 N6 f5 F+ Z  u: X0 j, M1 _
Neighbour's handwriting+ B) }9 X% F. V; b+ ^+ y9 x% p
is so vigorous as to be the old trees1 d/ m) ?, w1 N  d! B
interwined by dry vines.
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& f4 {/ c" G0 E$ s3 M2 PNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
8 _0 Y& ?0 _$ x( y7 p/ wShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
$ u8 u$ b5 i) v; U6 v- `Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
8 U$ T# m: O5 Ythat is the sole sound going into my ears+ ?# x1 Z! U* ^# E
from the next side of my wall;1 w5 A  X: L$ f9 L- D
the unknown tune is extolling
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again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 * m; L, L4 M' B4 b1 \
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换8 j) t- I+ M8 I- e2 B
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

5 L+ [$ N+ P! h% d- Q, G8 p从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。0 j4 L- f2 d* R5 @
另外,翻译改动一处:
  u( r& w+ P& d. w  Q& MHer light-footed movement! k  O2 H: y! Q0 v- [
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement' [; F$ N7 @8 [! r8 o
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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" x% c; w( y. e7 n* U) S# m; ^真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ; d6 v, U0 V7 Z0 S; ?1 y$ y$ W
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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