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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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4 ^# I6 n( \' _1 l+ b' o, \2 `我尊贵的邻居, F9 U1 N! U9 @2 y$ h; G) e
是我们小区  几十户
7 V, P6 D2 L+ H( ~+ A# Q. i唯一的元老
) N' f* W. }3 r4 X一住三十多年8 l- U& K/ r3 {

! e! |# ]& \: g6 _. X' g5 g6 C2 k4 d邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕# K( Q% Y5 Q# E! ]
白发红颜  不见皱纹
6 X5 M- e4 |  B; [: E/ |2 }开车铲雪  挖土栽花; u7 I/ T$ Q+ o  D9 e% h( E
似不识  岁月为何物0 d. B4 f5 T4 N

! R  j- j; [5 M3 O$ z头顶英国文学硕士的光环+ ^  t+ w. M0 H5 B5 N
邻居气宇轩昂
! L( t( T: ^9 \, g2 L/ h如同女面朱熔基
# i" N6 z) I& x9 {邻居的字" v, J1 L! T$ M& N" g. l
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤% }6 s" |# `( a0 a" T

! }8 t( b9 U) ]* A邻居酷喜中国文化
" M* o: c: j* _, v) c说她属土龙2 @+ ?7 `" S" n0 K0 |1 m
其笛声也悠扬) q) w" O. f3 r8 z; F
那是从隔壁传来的
7 C: _4 V. r; T3 a" `3 _) d1 w唯一的声响
4 r  ^9 j0 }" T6 ^/ }那不知名的曲调, [4 _% K: H! H6 U/ g
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ) p. S7 p9 ~% Q8 G4 j( @5 |
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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  I: b) ~+ n3 p3 ]: P' z0 BLiving here for more than thirty years,
0 f& o4 X; d0 {my prestigous neighbour+ w* x9 o: y% o. \4 y0 |
is the only first owner of the unit properties6 h8 {+ h% [1 x3 d  {
in our community ---
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; K. J% h: H6 i4 \' k* eNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
/ m! \& `: B) X8 vmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.  b) X0 q6 C; |  M& E& J
She has white hairs and red faces.2 ?$ V) W; k3 }
Her light-footed movement$ D$ f2 }, z, [1 \
is just like a flying swallow.
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  t* F0 N' @+ r2 _) S* nShe shovels the snow on her door lane
3 J  w$ d+ j( T, Fbefore driving her own car;
5 E& r. x1 a, s3 P; fshe digs her back yard
" M8 f5 g- x% G: E9 Bto plant flowers ---
" @1 @  O( h% ?' Q  D# Pas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,) Z) k& p, m  o, H3 V+ F+ \% \
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---. h4 R8 j3 g# K; ]
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.$ j5 N! v& ]7 p9 r" Y: [
Neighbour's handwriting2 Y$ n6 `5 Y$ G) X7 b
is so vigorous as to be the old trees5 C# s% f1 d; R
interwined by dry vines.- k/ K; }+ v# t4 r$ D
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
. z6 L) W7 a( @9 t% q' f! v: CShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
. K5 M$ r* d  a* S* eWell, her fluting is very melodious ---6 e9 t4 Q* ?, J7 q+ j, g9 J9 D
that is the sole sound going into my ears
5 V8 R: b& ~% P' Z1 z: v  rfrom the next side of my wall;
, D& K7 w/ r- v7 p3 z2 y1 ethe unknown tune is extolling
' W/ @  Z' L, R* C! Vthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
$ U. X$ p$ [" ]+ }* Oagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
" v. ]( g' O$ {Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

" A. F. s" H& @; x  g从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。" K8 [) h" f. @8 a7 P
另外,翻译改动一处:
7 X9 \) V: h2 LHer light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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' F* V( X3 x8 e7 c9 P# s$ C. w  i4 ahm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

% L9 B7 O/ \) J我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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