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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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/ O+ ]& o  z9 |0 E+ r! B/ A我尊贵的邻居. r8 {+ {3 ], w3 H/ q: T" |
是我们小区  几十户
- H" Y9 J0 }# Q$ R唯一的元老
0 Y% x; F, e) Q2 g: m! ]- w一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕* m2 Y8 s7 t# \7 r( o
白发红颜  不见皱纹# X% J# e) D- G6 C. P! G( J9 v
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
3 C+ s+ V: o, K1 {# P1 _4 a似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环, G' m+ D% ~1 D# u* ^9 }. M/ i
邻居气宇轩昂& ]9 w$ a: h. i' T: b0 j
如同女面朱熔基
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则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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# ~, y. o( ?( R! w! H+ Y邻居酷喜中国文化+ c( i# n  v, q7 H* o. u7 G1 e* w+ I
说她属土龙8 [4 P! m( t9 W3 o, e9 L( O* u6 M0 R
其笛声也悠扬
) [" V/ N) R3 ^! r那是从隔壁传来的2 O1 \# G# ?0 W2 C7 T
唯一的声响% B0 [+ f7 {. J
那不知名的曲调+ }. p( m6 {$ Z
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ) K/ `( |9 }2 u2 j3 i1 W2 m9 T

7 L0 @9 d/ C$ i! N英文版,欢迎指正:9 _0 B8 l/ q8 r" l! B* U
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Living here for more than thirty years,! X3 v$ q; d' P: E
my prestigous neighbour' |* |) E! F- [% h
is the only first owner of the unit properties( @1 G0 a! B# K  B* F2 \/ y
in our community ---   B% o: H% T+ w1 |9 N' \; Q0 d, z( w
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,- F) }4 W* A- V& }
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes." B" e& |! U, a9 |
She has white hairs and red faces.
# r4 P% P' @; v: mHer light-footed movement
( E2 o+ i. Y# g- ]is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane% d: y7 g0 f2 z4 P/ a
before driving her own car;
$ {" N. v: c# ]% R$ tshe digs her back yard' J; L+ b6 C: o5 F' Q  j
to plant flowers ---: e( T  p7 M$ m. ]- v. E
as if she did not know what years mean./ t1 Z2 S9 m5 m6 w' q$ f

) M) Z/ G5 D# P1 t% t" RWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,2 K8 N: v/ P- D  z1 A
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---4 V8 W# A# c1 @$ I/ B2 b/ H
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
4 ?1 v$ l! \* ]. _& {  INeighbour's handwriting- {) W: z5 N" W5 ~
is so vigorous as to be the old trees5 E" ~* D! X, i9 w) u
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
0 V" ~$ K% T# m, n5 g' s+ D0 A: UShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.0 }0 s( ]/ c5 U! t$ X
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---; c0 x  u0 |7 J
that is the sole sound going into my ears2 C+ x) ^" n( ~( [+ @- U
from the next side of my wall;9 G1 U+ F. |1 H# ?2 G
the unknown tune is extolling
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6 ]6 d5 ], k1 t' Q* `3 J- _& ]again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 : T: y- F" L$ ?# D/ Q' \# h
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 # i& P" @! z8 X8 q
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换5 j' l* j# S2 x4 {! ^
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

2 X/ ~' X: M  A# H4 e: l从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。3 n9 o+ `/ u# ~3 N
另外,翻译改动一处:1 x) h2 M" |7 I1 E# W
Her light-footed movement# D0 K6 j+ N/ [: m
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 $ Y  [% t1 ~+ j# \/ D' I
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真的是太像朱镕基了!/ _/ x' {' g# h% ~/ q1 ]' G
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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