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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居4 l5 r7 p: o; r) P7 R
是我们小区  几十户$ |" h! d7 G% G% x7 g
唯一的元老
/ M' s9 D9 F# W* l# x( W1 x一住三十多年
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$ R& {  }* h1 m  r4 Q8 D0 W邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
1 p4 t+ t8 y* Q' J2 M" I白发红颜  不见皱纹2 n" Y" k- t9 q: ^! `
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
4 N( Y- I+ P6 s* i似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环7 v7 z7 U8 D( h1 A5 m
邻居气宇轩昂
5 Y$ I- @# D$ q7 X# J* P1 e1 F2 ]  J如同女面朱熔基4 _2 W) a' X" e
邻居的字* Y9 c2 K/ a- o' U
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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0 A0 P8 ?+ o- p& W8 Z, G# O- B邻居酷喜中国文化- |) E# i0 z5 u% R: E# W3 P3 R* C
说她属土龙
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那是从隔壁传来的5 m. j. d, l# j6 _7 f7 a6 C
唯一的声响
6 X/ `+ e0 v2 }: e, U那不知名的曲调
# c6 Z# `  t9 n2 J6 P' @$ c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 & w# k; X5 {& X  O0 d

& N3 ?; O0 x+ j- Y& [英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
* Z" {* z- ]3 V5 ?1 Pmy prestigous neighbour
7 |& ~# y$ L# d0 }& ~% Y  I- {is the only first owner of the unit properties' V. ^7 T  o5 U9 y
in our community --- ( p9 F0 U- y8 |, V
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.' z* u6 O. c& Z- |
Her light-footed movement6 J7 B4 f3 V2 b& V  U- q0 g, H
is just like a flying swallow.; _4 q8 G3 Y" R* @( ~
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She shovels the snow on her door lane/ N( X7 _# i2 _0 d& A
before driving her own car;: f- |# l" v. @( ^$ s# H
she digs her back yard
  }( m/ U9 e( m% p2 xto plant flowers ---5 H9 r4 U* d2 G* e& N/ f
as if she did not know what years mean.# i+ K/ b9 O, x  i4 W8 O$ D( T+ k

/ [: C( F; G1 [1 UWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
' b/ ]$ w( k9 Y1 R; I7 m9 Tneighbour has a dignified appearance ---6 T4 s2 ]( Y3 T4 H* U
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
# ~. |3 ~9 q  W  Q6 ZNeighbour's handwriting
: z8 U# N6 l  T* ]is so vigorous as to be the old trees: S# P3 ?+ u1 J8 `3 t
interwined by dry vines.; m4 p9 ^1 D1 F5 R

4 Q2 L# e9 Z' d# A4 C8 ]1 dNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
3 o# z8 J! s; S& {0 _4 _She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.( @9 \' q6 {* w& `' C, s
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
2 ?* b& w9 x* k# F$ Fthat is the sole sound going into my ears7 R: H0 ^+ I1 y4 @0 y
from the next side of my wall;1 v' W! I4 P/ Y/ H$ q% O
the unknown tune is extolling+ L! I6 r% _9 Z* B, S0 g5 B- c
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
2 Z/ l% M: J7 l1 l3 m6 cagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 , D* f; J8 P- I+ ]( p
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
2 {/ x! v/ y% ]9 @  W' cJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

, o. _9 p) {- J; X: ~7 N, b$ i从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
5 v+ W! K/ d- ^. K! j另外,翻译改动一处:/ [$ [4 ]' t# h# B
Her light-footed movement
6 f' X0 }% X2 y9 z* ]2 R2 O' Eis just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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4 Z( x/ r  q; e" U真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
4 l+ M2 V" Q' X* d0 Phm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

5 t9 d! n. c' j/ k我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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