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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居: I& L9 c6 H9 h1 K7 C7 G% ^
是我们小区  几十户; w9 s, I" Y6 a/ y$ D# l2 ?
唯一的元老
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕8 V, A( N. N/ x1 `6 I' c. e% _
白发红颜  不见皱纹! R5 A, ?* O4 ~/ _
开车铲雪  挖土栽花. h! k8 p0 ], Z3 k: F
似不识  岁月为何物7 t+ b) K% E& X; B, ]
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环% k! f4 M1 f) s$ e, {
邻居气宇轩昂
0 R* r8 [# a1 T  b/ ?* t如同女面朱熔基) F. B; u5 c: Q/ P! l
邻居的字0 o! k/ O2 ^+ \/ I1 E! g
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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( |) S; P0 z' s1 K( W邻居酷喜中国文化2 `$ L+ b$ \2 w/ ~( `% Y
说她属土龙& X4 c. ~% _& A: c( C
其笛声也悠扬+ ]# B# }: @" a& I
那是从隔壁传来的4 o- s+ k4 j% i5 Q) H9 q. B. F
唯一的声响
: l  L2 w* X  u" w7 H& v9 V- C/ p那不知名的曲调
* E7 u) Q1 B  w6 c8 v0 f反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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; i9 Y+ t7 _; _' E! jLiving here for more than thirty years,
6 V+ T9 e" c  Imy prestigous neighbour0 x- H. I3 b* `+ V$ D
is the only first owner of the unit properties
' u* ^1 H: ^5 ?1 Fin our community ---
0 a1 R- G& m: ^) d9 _- Htens of townhouse condos.; i# W+ x% ?3 c2 }0 W+ u

3 d( ]  H, h7 L( a/ QNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
( r, f; W0 C# [* ?8 Hmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
4 @/ i' O. e# M/ OShe has white hairs and red faces.
$ V. [, t5 `7 ~* ~( ^2 P7 @7 hHer light-footed movement9 p8 ?% ~0 j$ L  V
is just like a flying swallow.
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* Z  u1 Z: h- t3 e3 x' q, z+ vShe shovels the snow on her door lane% n7 p8 [# O' R1 K; A( z) v% P0 w
before driving her own car;: |1 k: z' M+ i) j  S4 y
she digs her back yard
6 O" r1 Z+ `( K( zto plant flowers ---- _/ W  N+ n  W9 b* g4 g- n3 L5 w) j
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
' m1 u+ ]! @* j3 n0 y7 tneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
, w; S) h# B# I, kas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.# S  C' U3 \# r  \  Q; M# k
Neighbour's handwriting0 I6 n  c9 A, f. ?. d! h  V- d
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
" R- T: x$ Y# f- ~/ D- ]& W/ rinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
$ f4 B+ x, Q7 D# F$ B+ j- RShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon." N" @# e  t0 u5 @
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---! X. L7 ~2 ^) d9 Q1 |4 R* }; F$ K
that is the sole sound going into my ears
7 q4 L( z; l6 h+ e# Afrom the next side of my wall;
7 `  H6 i4 h5 G3 V  @, M7 I- Nthe unknown tune is extolling  `$ ]4 A9 E! |% o: H- v
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,+ D* W3 w) `; {1 l
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 & m; ]# `0 E5 h: ]. I5 C- M

# A' k4 c7 k# _; F土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换' H7 E' f; z7 F- m( B
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

$ o0 c% }# k/ i$ R" ~- k8 s从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。# V* q% B8 l* u
另外,翻译改动一处:, A) A# H, I: ]% c: L9 f' S5 h
Her light-footed movement
% I  z9 B# Q( c1 m+ [7 Z; \is just like a flying swallow.
9 y" P. L' C4 ], v修改为:
. S0 g2 p$ ]5 s1 c- c+ ~6 l9 jHer light-footed movement
8 M  T( H* D: C. O2 ?7 Nis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
大型搬家
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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! ?' F( s, [- n% Q. m  U% D真的是太像朱镕基了!& P2 \- w4 m3 ~9 U0 O8 r2 T
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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