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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 ! R9 o' F4 ^# @8 i

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# R+ _* l" r. k9 T我尊贵的邻居% A6 o0 d* l  R- h! B
是我们小区  几十户
1 I& u: k9 e* I" m! T唯一的元老
* R, Z$ w" w3 A. V. d, b* o" z0 a一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕. `' p' |% [3 L  r+ o0 d% B
白发红颜  不见皱纹7 ?: R6 P/ j- }; E- C
开车铲雪  挖土栽花, F7 x, u3 R9 n* y# v0 w) w
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 d; Z$ i& B7 p' O; u+ d8 m邻居气宇轩昂
3 ~1 e  X6 s! A- m7 I如同女面朱熔基& ?2 z, Q0 Q: o3 }, Z7 G8 |
邻居的字
/ _4 F5 s- G! J) E4 ]% j6 E则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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# \& V& G$ e0 R' c  ]% W) g邻居酷喜中国文化
7 a* ?0 i0 h; l9 c3 Q$ s说她属土龙
) m  z4 ^" F, f8 D其笛声也悠扬
2 I" r- \( P9 ~0 t那是从隔壁传来的
" y( A% |7 ?3 @  c( h! k! y: S$ p3 v唯一的声响
* q2 [% Y' q  q5 Z. m+ {那不知名的曲调
, i7 @% z: @7 g8 t' m3 A反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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3 q; a8 |$ n. p英文版,欢迎指正:1 y# a6 U1 o) v& S3 c2 p

0 r& x$ M! h& W# F# A  yLiving here for more than thirty years,3 z) n" e. j6 d& k7 e4 f
my prestigous neighbour' W  y+ Y7 b' [
is the only first owner of the unit properties
7 W1 V+ D4 I, |- r& }4 F5 lin our community ---
: s5 l" r9 R: b: h; G% Qtens of townhouse condos.5 T6 `5 m7 n6 A$ u  k1 Z" G
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,1 i) f7 R, b' O5 `; H0 i" J  Z: D
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.5 g; K* Q" @1 c+ ?
She has white hairs and red faces.9 b6 B2 L# U  R$ m
Her light-footed movement5 E# c2 k7 c% Q. Z
is just like a flying swallow.5 Z$ r  ?6 M' B

& q3 ~& w: i2 Y& j, CShe shovels the snow on her door lane2 ?0 \- w; Z5 N" b( G
before driving her own car;, r: ~% N, S1 |8 d. n7 L
she digs her back yard
- @) ^! J: o; u$ H" J' T- G  tto plant flowers ---
' ^  n: H! I! \: \3 mas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
( I  p7 @$ r$ Y# b2 w5 n" Uneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
9 r) A9 h7 k. b0 A/ ?3 J" Y1 Was if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.3 P# Z1 q' u  w, C
Neighbour's handwriting
/ K& w+ p( ^. _' qis so vigorous as to be the old trees
) ]' Q3 u" B  l1 m1 ointerwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.; |+ r4 m: N5 |' K' x! {
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon." D# I( z: l$ [- {! n2 S
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---1 x- J/ D( ~* E; u& u" X
that is the sole sound going into my ears* P( I5 ?$ H* c# f
from the next side of my wall;' e% J1 u6 ~+ W9 d; y  l( N" h: U
the unknown tune is extolling
0 q  d" j/ h7 Jthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
! E& x- k9 E; b. J# W, Kagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 ' P7 Z9 l) E! y6 J9 I5 |
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
9 }; [+ O- w6 z+ ~Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

5 I$ s# _5 E9 C5 f从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。, p- u. ?' {5 i" `- k
另外,翻译改动一处:
/ i8 t0 D3 a1 l+ IHer light-footed movement+ f  {7 D- H- H9 {8 a
is just like a flying swallow.% E: f& f7 r+ l
修改为:
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑   [; |" y+ `& }2 _' y
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1 K. s/ e$ W3 N  W( r/ |真的是太像朱镕基了!
) o& b7 M7 F' g" O! f+ phm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

& t$ @5 d: u: E1 }+ m6 p我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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