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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 2 N7 O$ S5 `" @% L4 h: L+ A

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我尊贵的邻居
8 {! `5 |" C" x2 Q& n9 ?/ `0 M是我们小区  几十户: b, j. S% n, K2 K% m
唯一的元老
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) o+ i+ ^) w! d邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕" z& N4 i8 O% _" }
白发红颜  不见皱纹
4 j0 k- t$ k7 H! X8 I8 k开车铲雪  挖土栽花
) {0 z) u& _2 z. m似不识  岁月为何物) D8 |- }% V' O. I

5 O8 a& [* c2 J0 v  B2 j% R头顶英国文学硕士的光环
) s# X, k5 P6 K& J. a邻居气宇轩昂, K" Z4 F: y& `3 L/ x8 d9 p
如同女面朱熔基& g; G+ I6 P$ k
邻居的字
+ ]$ A3 P, @$ P" K$ ?- ~则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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2 r: P/ P+ M  C' ?4 L) ~. x% c邻居酷喜中国文化
$ W) j* x8 k/ A说她属土龙
- B& \9 u2 _+ ^! n0 R其笛声也悠扬& s0 f! c8 e2 c( k
那是从隔壁传来的* i* U& z4 p( B9 ]7 f* |
唯一的声响
1 z( `" S8 L$ ^$ W# {那不知名的曲调8 M' f  [% q, {0 h% I% C1 Y+ B
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
1 \+ H$ l4 c7 @# g3 hmy prestigous neighbour
" l* ?! n3 H* `5 e' xis the only first owner of the unit properties
& `; y  N+ i; a* kin our community ---
; L# G) Q; s! htens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,) S5 g5 _& {% X# V# W
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.1 r7 q6 ^: g2 U; l
She has white hairs and red faces.' Q- f7 i& H& Z# ~. i" X# G
Her light-footed movement
4 y9 h+ G9 b0 B, _0 D. Mis just like a flying swallow.
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2 ]( W. z* b; ^. ~  W9 }She shovels the snow on her door lane7 ^) z0 k+ Q( d2 @. v3 O  p
before driving her own car;
# _' {6 V. E0 V+ a/ ^6 y) o4 kshe digs her back yard
2 s* M8 v- ]2 ^7 N9 {to plant flowers ---8 H$ V' Y- n$ j3 v
as if she did not know what years mean.5 c* f9 C1 Z- e. K4 I# H7 h

; w& M, Q' h# k+ \6 o) R2 M) H3 Y3 {With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
5 T. q5 g* A  X- L; X: Mneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
5 D- V( {0 t4 l& w/ Aas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
+ m5 v$ M+ h# L/ lNeighbour's handwriting
! T1 s3 A' C+ D7 Y" e! }is so vigorous as to be the old trees* |1 _! y; |% H( h) _5 v& ?# Y
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
4 H+ i- y) O& N; W$ u7 q; nShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.3 [' I$ z; G0 G* A2 x4 G. o) [
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
' }0 k* j: g9 r0 B. f/ ]! Lthat is the sole sound going into my ears% s) U+ [% T; L
from the next side of my wall;
" V5 }6 o+ E0 ~* V8 p( Cthe unknown tune is extolling
$ ~0 I, e% X+ K& o+ D+ J/ Qthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
/ {  T* R! R7 Q7 W7 yagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 ( O4 A/ |, Z6 N/ x8 x2 f* X

/ }& H; M. P" W. G0 h土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 1 G# E1 @3 M; n) E
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
% u- y5 N6 l0 c7 m1 W8 ^Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。, Y+ [4 A1 ]% S$ l1 j. a
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Her light-footed movement
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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( q! @: E# Y/ J& n% n9 j, D) M( Q  H0 m真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 # k) L/ `' r. B' l
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3 Z# {# R$ U# e- \真的是太像朱镕基了!
6 A3 W# c9 h" p; B/ v6 Dhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

$ x' H4 x5 C, {" _$ f# `我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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