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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑   {, N! B. y* ?( [* z. x# q
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0 A7 \# A9 d$ b9 t% v我尊贵的邻居
  F9 l; ~# r# n8 u5 Q/ [* c  [是我们小区  几十户' j0 i8 H/ v" C& C- A
唯一的元老5 ^* ]- }4 [; U: v) m" _! g9 p
一住三十多年0 {2 W* @  b: x! N, n

5 o+ u( f6 J" ]9 S邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕4 w" H* D3 ]7 j2 s8 O* s, F
白发红颜  不见皱纹/ B0 S) v! @" {. S- M' `
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
8 s; {# B) C4 M4 B似不识  岁月为何物3 o8 p; Y. T7 H0 B
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环2 r6 j0 s: T+ X1 ?7 K
邻居气宇轩昂3 \$ J2 D+ e3 Y7 Q; z
如同女面朱熔基
; q5 _% Q' _( }; R邻居的字3 z1 B* ^( |8 l4 a
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
+ s$ c- [' d& n, e说她属土龙+ L+ P7 B# f1 p% M+ S
其笛声也悠扬' K- D" ^, S8 @% S$ @$ P
那是从隔壁传来的
5 W, D/ T+ r( v; E6 T0 V2 u8 e唯一的声响
2 C, s6 w/ m6 T5 ]3 x那不知名的曲调! \5 l' p4 f( x1 X0 Z9 c; Q  q
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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Living here for more than thirty years,( }$ X! {5 u( L6 w3 w" @
my prestigous neighbour8 Y& w; y" M$ o. p  s1 O
is the only first owner of the unit properties% V7 F' V9 i+ E) E' c
in our community --- / D# }+ m1 Z  r$ d
tens of townhouse condos.9 G: b7 `: ?% o- e) B" x9 \

2 w9 V; C) j+ d+ uNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
4 c+ {( L$ O1 q0 r- Mmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.0 s2 S  L6 Q/ ?/ c" N4 z9 y
She has white hairs and red faces.
' S) k1 W; x7 f9 x, L& ^8 xHer light-footed movement8 {8 K0 _9 t4 z% K- x2 d( D
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
9 u' O+ @) z) V  c6 @( v% b# Pbefore driving her own car;/ G( W- C3 r  l6 y, h$ V/ J
she digs her back yard
0 [9 K/ A- W+ Z; Vto plant flowers ---
9 R/ }: U7 J; b6 V/ ?as if she did not know what years mean.3 E7 w: k0 |) h: `$ R

$ v- x2 o+ O4 J' `6 ~0 gWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,4 ~+ X! U' ~" ?; Q$ O  b3 ?8 H( S
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---9 y9 }4 d, V6 h, F4 D
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
4 n- J) R: \1 R  q( yNeighbour's handwriting
0 u, y, t' e( Yis so vigorous as to be the old trees
: I" M% v& N5 F- _) Dinterwined by dry vines.
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& W4 f/ O# t# ^7 M4 B/ {Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.0 x7 y0 q" I4 U$ d* I
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
7 R4 ^$ f0 ~' I) J- n2 |( OWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
7 B6 T* j+ W0 a( M" lthat is the sole sound going into my ears
/ O  Z! d9 U* [$ O; P- J8 b) |from the next side of my wall;+ e" f9 `% T0 W9 {- |
the unknown tune is extolling
( P4 O- I; z; Y5 o# Z; }$ J, @8 nthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,; E+ t4 i3 y/ C& j
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 4 e. h, W: ]/ x5 E# d1 p

* n* M, L5 f2 U3 c' ^; r土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 7 s0 ~6 w' y( q1 R" o
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换: k7 I6 s) \  J1 m, D" K
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
6 S) X2 d: k( c' V另外,翻译改动一处:
4 P& Z2 o( B% E! t1 Z* S: S9 mHer light-footed movement& f& z: }% f) L. C% {0 A7 v( y
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Her light-footed movement% a* {! y/ f) F9 Z6 L
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 , L- o$ p5 Y3 n/ I3 V
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真的是太像朱镕基了!9 h: x% _# G+ w
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

4 l+ n. c8 G1 _( e我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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