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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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井忘川
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# O, h% P2 {% e我尊贵的邻居
3 I. ]/ f# ^' s+ o; j  V是我们小区  几十户% ^0 V& }! P+ O% {) I6 d
唯一的元老8 r- X  ~0 ^- r' T& n# x
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕) N: I2 M7 a. Q1 v$ V" p/ h
白发红颜  不见皱纹# w& o5 I- c+ \# m  ?% T
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
" ?3 n  E4 p' j0 B, r: A3 ~3 N似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
! H3 w* @8 c$ G! c; ^& W8 \* R邻居气宇轩昂
+ i" \3 h1 ?& c: \+ Y如同女面朱熔基8 o3 c. i0 }% C" Z# Z
邻居的字5 {5 t" m- M( _% V0 K
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤/ ]6 B$ W/ }0 @0 G$ J6 b
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邻居酷喜中国文化5 D  y& t4 t! i* d- M& {* C
说她属土龙1 L3 o9 R; a' u! x$ Q# S2 B& |1 S: H/ _
其笛声也悠扬- x/ t5 _7 m7 o5 @8 U$ i  J
那是从隔壁传来的
* Y, E' q, D/ b; F3 j2 x2 V唯一的声响7 x6 Z4 |, ]; M' Q8 o0 v  s
那不知名的曲调7 k1 b3 o" T( s+ O8 g7 {
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 6 ^4 c4 @. ]" I5 k# u/ p6 x& ]

: y& _: [$ ]1 ?9 T: d9 J英文版,欢迎指正:) s3 i: m1 c; X1 a' i& i! @/ X

' H4 W1 {: d3 }7 ]2 NLiving here for more than thirty years,
4 b: ?+ `! F! A5 |5 Jmy prestigous neighbour/ x+ X9 _: x9 F7 ?. Q
is the only first owner of the unit properties1 B8 d3 k3 Z& C! k$ j
in our community ---
; F( A1 }0 H* S4 W1 N7 T7 Q3 t4 T8 Ftens of townhouse condos.1 K7 ?$ L. _# A$ c' Q7 z0 `0 v
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,; N0 s7 m" R+ K$ \: j" u" a  Y
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.6 c& Z) V; l/ J
She has white hairs and red faces.
1 U: `; m' @7 ~7 v& oHer light-footed movement/ A0 G: L3 |0 X/ s- J
is just like a flying swallow.
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+ u4 Z+ F' w2 v$ L) _She shovels the snow on her door lane' D* y6 e% c3 c8 j2 i
before driving her own car;
- }% |: \' f5 G7 Pshe digs her back yard+ {/ J- a6 T4 f& l3 H  H: g9 o
to plant flowers ---0 L* y4 ~* Q! G4 c  x/ A
as if she did not know what years mean.  u4 s, W* j& w/ w3 Y4 m
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
2 S& q& A# E% n( N; fneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
. J6 Q) I4 Y! g9 P* w& f2 U' t5 X" yas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
4 A! Y2 P! B; p, _( oNeighbour's handwriting
: j  ^! X9 j' R+ F9 Z- t6 m) ]7 Pis so vigorous as to be the old trees/ @8 u' @. U, a+ n( d5 E4 T
interwined by dry vines.: b. {5 p" @: r" x

7 ~) t% f7 O0 ~3 H: t) N, L' CNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
8 e* M7 g& |% t7 {: tShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.% i2 m1 _5 @" R" u( `! b5 E( H
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
- P* }% V3 V- V! Q+ R* ithat is the sole sound going into my ears
& [+ m/ O# m( V  bfrom the next side of my wall;
6 J. O4 v! l- R- R# A1 F, Xthe unknown tune is extolling7 e, {( O+ w5 q
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,, O/ ?* R/ S$ z& c" D0 R# v+ W
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 " c) z( Z/ n/ }; m, C: d4 D
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
理袁律师事务所
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 : p" \1 P7 Z- }7 N
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换, }2 B; v0 b( w, X% ^% B' s
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
) M, {! ?* [" Z- `: w另外,翻译改动一处:
; W9 ~3 d% l" w( |( f4 THer light-footed movement; \; Y8 x% i9 O( o! I' A8 g
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 3 L9 M/ m3 O) O$ N- Q
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真的是太像朱镕基了!, A  b5 l  e, j
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

/ u0 w5 _6 E4 K/ p/ @3 ^! T) j我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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