我尊贵的邻居(11)

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我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
: Y- r/ H" H- @( h: k开车铲雪  挖土栽花
# _: y! D3 ^/ d* e, o+ @5 R似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
* ?8 v/ w% v  D3 A7 Y+ w* R5 ]4 m  d如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
1 k3 y9 \3 [9 N则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
8 T- c5 b7 [, k4 U+ z其笛声也悠扬
( l5 k# m" W3 R3 v7 D. [那是从隔壁传来的
# q( w7 |7 k2 v5 |* w( x) m唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
& p6 A3 s7 x4 d0 A; R7 [+ Q反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

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这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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3 e2 K+ _8 F8 ^' P3 y, }: B* x英文版，欢迎指正：
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Living here for more than thirty years,
$ y" c0 A/ \6 Q# H1 omy prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
. b+ y+ X8 H1 S) s5 Z& U( gin our community ---
7 [& W1 d2 U. {2 ~0 s) P3 {7 o6 Qtens of townhouse condos.
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5 f8 n$ Y0 A0 L) }Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
( K9 e( s) ?: D# tShe has white hairs and red faces.
) A" J: @! }" Z/ C# a# qHer light-footed movement
! s. N  c% ]) x# }is just like a flying swallow.

" F7 r3 N9 \* P! z: ?  v/ m1 kShe shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
8 d( i& }9 a0 ?0 f  ^9 \she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
9 S0 D- l0 U: N# zas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
( v( a* E, s2 b$ B. l9 Lis so vigorous as to be the old trees
" m0 R8 [5 `2 {7 Z7 Rinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
  }1 R) X6 n/ e% Sfrom the next side of my wall;
+ m) |8 g8 P$ k1 y9 tthe unknown tune is extolling
0 G, [* @& i) d7 j+ v+ Othe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
' B* ~+ n  @$ V+ Kagain and again.

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% f; D/ l. ?$ K* k# y9 I$ p土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
- u* c) L( z$ ]9 Y) xJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

3 Y$ H! k) j$ p  ~从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
' Y9 S: z% s: i, u# m) P9 R另外，翻译改动一处：
; ^; p. ~& R$ x* i8 I. Q9 o6 JHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
" W- T$ g% j( u, _$ N; B修改为：
Her light-footed movement
; ^7 [) I: z. R% R- lis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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9 N6 ?* _9 O9 S# P! V/ ^真的是太像朱镕基了！

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- E; g# s- W9 ~0 v9 @真的是太像朱镕基了！
/ \+ f5 U: B  {1 D+ rhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

( Y) k  \, }( T& ~1 ~我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。