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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 + U# m% H+ n5 y0 q) [

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我尊贵的邻居; k' L8 d0 l7 C9 W/ |5 u
是我们小区  几十户9 V# [+ m4 T3 |. v0 v  g. i/ F; B/ Z# i' U
唯一的元老
3 y/ f: c3 c: T) @/ k( L" S3 n一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
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开车铲雪  挖土栽花
" |( k. N: U" X( Z1 I似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
) m: x4 k# X0 h5 C邻居气宇轩昂
! r* Y7 Z' u) Y( S3 |' F; `* B如同女面朱熔基
) o% Z  Q* D/ P4 G( V邻居的字7 j5 V3 ?' M( q
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤0 {: G( p& M1 x; [: ]- v
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邻居酷喜中国文化5 c) k& V: |- q9 a
说她属土龙
8 c0 }/ s$ C3 b- u' H1 B其笛声也悠扬1 i' Y8 G7 ]- x" n
那是从隔壁传来的7 k5 q+ M) i5 L/ ^
唯一的声响
) P8 t* g% l% n; |% L: T$ ?* U8 b那不知名的曲调
9 Y1 p2 o7 A; Y% L' n. T反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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! j& h; T6 o' y! K* S  ~/ G: T/ `Living here for more than thirty years,
( l6 P7 @' `# W, t- p% w: Cmy prestigous neighbour2 q" B' w5 a. U- O' }
is the only first owner of the unit properties
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tens of townhouse condos.
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4 D  j% C: x( g" B3 gNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
- q( b3 B' b8 n' Bmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
; j4 M* v! X+ E) m6 N% KShe has white hairs and red faces.  s& x  c( r: c
Her light-footed movement
. H0 L; d) [' r4 j' u7 J2 l" Y3 {is just like a flying swallow.  g0 t* W, k- h- w8 t) D

( A1 l% I* g; a+ K( _She shovels the snow on her door lane" G: ?# g" R0 b
before driving her own car;
1 h# _' K! k0 L6 w$ Y$ v7 A2 Zshe digs her back yard4 ^, t! d4 Q2 g+ p
to plant flowers ---
/ Z6 I$ v/ w, G7 o8 Vas if she did not know what years mean.  W7 e& |1 r. |
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,6 Q3 C/ h5 Y* `9 u- f. r, G4 s) }
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---: c6 c; s! ?+ ]3 f$ C
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.8 c0 r% S/ r3 a+ V6 ]: d
Neighbour's handwriting
! R# D' g4 Q3 v& \4 bis so vigorous as to be the old trees/ Q$ U  S3 V$ X. J
interwined by dry vines.+ T/ X2 O; F) l

+ u5 I! m, u# Y; u* E. _7 n/ {Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
5 j+ P* p0 T1 B# d! O0 k0 vShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
& d$ H6 k6 z- i7 vWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
6 I! [) m5 P+ X8 N* B! Wthat is the sole sound going into my ears  I+ F5 q$ C8 q# Y- R% p" C
from the next side of my wall;
# B/ h) G5 W' V9 P0 |7 z& s3 Pthe unknown tune is extolling' M1 Y, X, o' c( O( z, P$ D) }9 W
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,' f5 R1 Q* E! T8 a
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 % N3 N9 h- R6 s1 w! j0 D7 S
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换$ K8 u0 T8 E4 g5 `
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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! v, a! n4 [8 I6 @8 @" a修改为:
: |( P5 @; t9 H. F; y7 i' |3 P" sHer light-footed movement1 l. g! C: b) |4 t3 U
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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9 e; d/ h8 n* @5 g真的是太像朱镕基了!
大型搬家
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 5 F9 @& x" H6 a: O9 ~0 [2 T
6# Justing
' X- x0 i3 r" I) a真的是太像朱镕基了!
* b0 @( l& v# c' ]- t* A" }hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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