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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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9 |5 s+ S+ n7 `! n% ~我尊贵的邻居* U/ |/ d- o+ K' E3 S4 s7 i
是我们小区  几十户
3 A$ S0 p1 b0 w9 b! \6 @唯一的元老
" H& G: W6 b* z一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
( h; h' |% w' c+ @2 S白发红颜  不见皱纹
1 t7 x" m, @- d开车铲雪  挖土栽花2 B" s, y+ }! d( Z) O  H" F5 M: J
似不识  岁月为何物1 h* J  s. }0 f3 c0 i4 }) L; j+ H

8 k2 K" ]) d8 z0 C头顶英国文学硕士的光环
5 j- H# m$ k% E' i: p邻居气宇轩昂1 [  g; c1 \0 O! ~
如同女面朱熔基
$ ^- [1 A" x& v0 v! q" Z邻居的字
5 h, i; o3 ~- D1 z4 t则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤& U9 B. \+ f8 ^  x0 l2 l/ X3 _6 d
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邻居酷喜中国文化
& |& J7 \; a" k2 N4 p说她属土龙; `( ^7 X. m5 t. L
其笛声也悠扬
2 z/ Q$ j# U3 B" _1 ^. C5 Q; j那是从隔壁传来的0 P# f+ f8 {5 z% \( P5 _
唯一的声响0 ^; o, f- g6 D7 ]) D/ V
那不知名的曲调4 c- o0 }+ b* ]/ H9 k" t/ y0 A
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
理袁律师事务所
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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+ ~# u  A# u# h+ e英文版,欢迎指正:
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7 O2 J- @5 i8 p0 R% W0 h- HLiving here for more than thirty years,
1 v/ N- @4 X4 _- {1 b  dmy prestigous neighbour( T- W5 C$ ]. X9 Y9 m9 D
is the only first owner of the unit properties+ N$ |9 }1 E: Z  }
in our community ---
; S4 [0 o' w" t5 d# etens of townhouse condos./ O3 m, M2 [5 P7 i0 P; ]6 E* f
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.) F$ A( j; G- O" a
Her light-footed movement
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, _( `1 P- Y9 n0 X# ^  lShe shovels the snow on her door lane
0 J1 [% x8 C' m, h! Sbefore driving her own car;
' c5 [" x# Z5 e' B; H0 G" {" {$ Fshe digs her back yard1 V$ l9 m% ?/ \) {0 z
to plant flowers ---9 w: e' l4 d2 w9 j& p5 n$ A
as if she did not know what years mean.9 P( y# g5 P+ h2 M# [9 l1 t- O
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature," a. t. J  Q* W: |/ V7 j; Q
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---. A: _4 N6 y, S  S6 ~8 L$ w
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.; b4 @+ o' P) U% D* x
Neighbour's handwriting4 S* K3 w( O' e8 K4 s$ I# t
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
: K( p! Z' |% J* U5 E% binterwined by dry vines.3 w% |! Z; }$ P' y+ j& n) _4 ~
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.% O4 @5 g, S3 \& i0 H' P
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.! t  q, I7 d7 F: F1 q4 e" H( d) C
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
8 s* O& s" |9 ]( |that is the sole sound going into my ears& a5 U/ w. o/ V1 |% ^
from the next side of my wall;
3 a3 Z# X/ ?3 W1 e0 b# h2 O& y6 Bthe unknown tune is extolling
' A; T4 K/ E- d1 D7 q7 Z- Nthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,9 U! v& w9 A( r
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 / j3 Y  j$ i+ U
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
1 [0 x1 h8 ^  H* {  XJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。1 Y1 ]) N8 p& |. l; j) p" n
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Her light-footed movement( A' S5 D8 x4 L8 ~( K& F- F
is just like a flying swallow.
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is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!9 w" I8 ]' D$ u4 C' t, D0 J) V
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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