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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居
% }3 |& O$ f( k# z0 a: {0 X- B是我们小区  几十户% q$ c0 M! _7 E$ x
唯一的元老
2 y7 L+ n9 V2 A2 `, z2 ]4 N& n6 c9 x一住三十多年- [' g# R& P9 |: p
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕, v9 @( [% V7 X8 }. [
白发红颜  不见皱纹$ [, S4 E# P; \9 _" K, R
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
& @. U$ K8 |. F$ Q似不识  岁月为何物
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: a8 [& Q$ b3 K6 v" C* {头顶英国文学硕士的光环
* t1 E" d! f5 N" T+ k邻居气宇轩昂/ x' ^0 B) v' w/ A' l1 _
如同女面朱熔基9 y1 A3 W# S8 ^0 d( v+ a( B+ {6 d
邻居的字# f) w4 ~+ T& Z) o1 l9 C5 u
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
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$ s0 t* @: p; I8 ^其笛声也悠扬
# a+ U4 e8 h- M' @4 M那是从隔壁传来的$ q( r. ^5 f4 @0 e
唯一的声响
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反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 " L9 e/ H8 S) n, {" C

( v# L# ^! Q' \( h& i英文版,欢迎指正:3 r, @: w5 d2 P3 f  s
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Living here for more than thirty years,
) y8 ?, ~' s. h# J" S; Q5 {my prestigous neighbour# K# U5 M8 l/ F5 x+ ~
is the only first owner of the unit properties
( ~3 {7 s( k8 A+ s$ Kin our community --- 3 D# P4 u7 y% G- |1 X! J
tens of townhouse condos.; X1 s$ o+ a' X2 g( X; [

6 T- W# ?0 Q4 A, G7 S" y) d6 ~Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
8 I- A# X6 C6 p1 lmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.+ p3 C& Q& J( c( X" x  k7 M
She has white hairs and red faces.% A* {3 t+ a- N+ R8 i
Her light-footed movement( o: l' k" a+ b$ _$ Q
is just like a flying swallow.- M1 R5 }: l  z* v
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
1 @1 |7 k* ?" {0 P) h) bbefore driving her own car;
8 a( }' Q1 U0 k% Lshe digs her back yard
8 T- [1 M4 |- a1 fto plant flowers ---
2 h" |. Q7 ?, ]' Z5 e+ a: ?! tas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,8 p! a' w- K/ A3 o9 G
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
" g0 \5 G+ I* Z5 L4 T2 c6 K) t8 Mas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.2 M1 }7 [  T6 u  F# v5 q$ N
Neighbour's handwriting
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interwined by dry vines.; \7 Z8 m4 |; r( S: p
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
  V3 _, c0 `1 A! @She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.. m5 m3 s) B" G& A' A& F/ i' J
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---. K" ?& |/ ?) M) j4 x' g3 _; ]/ ^
that is the sole sound going into my ears* _+ w9 |0 t& C4 b2 z5 n# c
from the next side of my wall;3 ?: W  V7 i; F9 t! q
the unknown tune is extolling9 z( H9 W' n8 m% R/ J) h7 l0 f0 U3 S
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,' @( E  N" n/ P+ M( c
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 - b" Z- F) c) r9 `2 A2 |

) @% |7 V% J0 C$ `' W  M& s4 x+ O土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换/ b* h# u7 [0 `4 v7 Z% _! f
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement/ |) h+ _$ ~' C
is just like a flying swallow.
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is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 & _0 k' f2 m8 a
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真的是太像朱镕基了!+ ^' v. x4 q7 g! x; R
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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