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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 / V- }) [* P  {+ g/ K

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$ R+ K) D# z  m/ ?! }; D% I  f$ ?我尊贵的邻居& W# h7 ]9 e0 U
是我们小区  几十户
9 q2 [5 S0 s, [) N/ z唯一的元老; P0 i+ U* G: ~& A- ]- i- W& ?
一住三十多年) g& t7 T( t5 v; X- p: _
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
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开车铲雪  挖土栽花" m3 ~# _* U' r0 L
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环' ]7 U! H$ m3 ]! O! e; @  l7 i7 A% E
邻居气宇轩昂
% z- }1 n; C1 x# D, l; |如同女面朱熔基
3 g- `" e6 j4 Y1 e. Y+ E! W% v  c4 {邻居的字+ h" M* O( N' {
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤1 z6 M  u1 [5 X- Y
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邻居酷喜中国文化7 [" w5 ]7 M; T" ]1 a8 k) e
说她属土龙2 A& }; J1 \1 q' ]2 ~: M% T
其笛声也悠扬
  ?% t% w+ q$ p, A那是从隔壁传来的
' I8 X' L1 t& Q% X# u# e! `( d唯一的声响
9 F8 }6 G3 J6 j+ f, l# W- i- Z那不知名的曲调
( d( Y+ f( L7 |* q; c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ) U; o6 {# N" N, s! W$ r& ~

2 O; P6 s! J' _3 ]英文版,欢迎指正:* z' Z1 [& V4 R+ f. b
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Living here for more than thirty years,
! }& w" `! P' `2 p, pmy prestigous neighbour
2 C, z- W. d6 }is the only first owner of the unit properties: d4 s9 l. o: H4 z( W
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tens of townhouse condos.
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& _: W0 A2 w( g: b. |Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
3 p2 a6 Z' d' ?* J% Qmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.+ Z: Y$ z# z( ?5 ?  Q
She has white hairs and red faces.9 `" |0 n$ @5 p% w# e9 r
Her light-footed movement" X  a3 K4 _, ?' o" }' K
is just like a flying swallow.  _) D- H' m7 @0 V1 z5 p! n+ B

/ f( f: D4 z9 M6 w9 d7 y* n( UShe shovels the snow on her door lane
! s: C6 b0 j' c$ x3 @6 Kbefore driving her own car;
# P2 M/ p; G1 K2 I- Qshe digs her back yard8 p3 X& j$ k7 f- X7 Y! ~
to plant flowers ---9 e1 j/ k7 Z/ F0 i3 _1 O  g
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,8 r( ^# ~  a* G' Y* G* G
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
% A& ~6 ~, d3 o. \as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.8 N# @" Y, [( @4 l/ @
Neighbour's handwriting
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interwined by dry vines.7 ~1 _. B; U7 U
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
" b& m6 u7 P  H$ y) n5 x7 aShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.& n/ j" Q# R5 W9 T) X1 Z2 q, ?0 }
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---) V4 ?' S6 I$ e* e  r, V9 X
that is the sole sound going into my ears7 ]9 g& B2 X* ?# N
from the next side of my wall;; U2 E0 Z, ]% x- i( m( q
the unknown tune is extolling
) A! P; j3 z2 d5 ?; ^" a( ?the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 : n8 r9 C0 I( ?3 `. g7 X
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 . B5 C* v( `4 P  I. C& G' E
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换. r( i# H/ F" c% c9 T8 [  g; J! z
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
5 W, B* O- X. L2 K; ~另外,翻译改动一处:
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Her light-footed movement) }3 H/ J9 A( r
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 . K- _/ X1 z+ p3 D/ p
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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