我尊贵的邻居(11)

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  f9 J$ c7 F+ R) y+ K1 a我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
! m. \: e/ q' C: c+ E3 N唯一的元老
一住三十多年

, B4 s' o  h1 u2 |邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
) _, d2 x& k0 R5 Z7 Z开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

头顶英国文学硕士的光环
6 Z& \" @, H2 P# |$ v邻居气宇轩昂
0 m  I' Q! E2 a* t如同女面朱熔基
1 r" O  D2 g* _9 d邻居的字
7 {0 i( K5 L7 P3 z3 t则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
5 a4 {6 F, B- v$ z1 E* i1 g! e其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
1 k7 x, X7 n0 `( ]" V+ {反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

英文版，欢迎指正：

6 y  E! z, ^+ v5 tLiving here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
# P4 ~8 N5 a5 Q8 s/ L7 Z' Ris the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.

2 F$ [; b1 c5 t; S& |Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
5 B* K) r* ]* P4 u, H  N5 e7 i6 }5 Qmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
& T  Q% J- }! Z" uShe has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
7 D, ^! }2 D" D2 E5 q: z) @she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
6 |% z. T+ J1 n! I2 M4 linterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
1 y2 M0 J- l/ d- XShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
2 u/ z: q# A8 J  v# \Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
0 n- d+ L# t: Fthat is the sole sound going into my ears
' m1 n* X; R" t% Sfrom the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
$ h. A8 Y6 L5 R; Wthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
again and again.

Justing

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& }$ A7 t4 R1 V% o% A土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
% I/ O: V1 r# M" j2 TJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

* _( X6 T' f- ~* K5 v$ f0 Z  J从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
, _8 m7 u9 l. }* ?  _. x另外，翻译改动一处：
/ N, M, z9 P5 D0 s9 {) _" gHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
Her light-footed movement
: G9 I. S9 j- M9 _( C" \is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing
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真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。