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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 % X- D! W+ L# D& E0 E+ z# c

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/ g  [2 B& ~( _* s我尊贵的邻居
! l8 Z0 v+ i% j是我们小区  几十户
3 a9 W( u: N2 }; s: P% v, O4 b唯一的元老
- I& L- k6 X1 u0 j0 b9 U* j一住三十多年; M* F$ x* H' F& V
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕2 q. _6 ]& @8 o% U' J! H" O4 O
白发红颜  不见皱纹* n; ~5 {+ e2 Y' V/ O3 g# h
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
  G' @* F3 r6 c+ i( o8 H- D! a似不识  岁月为何物6 l0 k5 i8 J  K; k
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
4 g8 a" d% I# H' x% k! d邻居气宇轩昂% x) r2 w% A" f7 i
如同女面朱熔基8 R3 i- H* V3 d7 p' ~
邻居的字
! e& _7 S! L' Q2 B4 f: U1 _则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤% s: I5 C4 l3 T

3 v0 ?. p$ C* b3 x邻居酷喜中国文化
9 A8 o: s) F. c; i) ^8 c( \说她属土龙
' t  n" Q' d0 J9 e0 R0 a" ^其笛声也悠扬
. {' b9 X8 ]( }那是从隔壁传来的
3 Y) X# w! G. a唯一的声响! Y* b' D9 }8 S! ^5 F% A
那不知名的曲调6 F5 x4 _, h7 [
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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6 o$ c0 P1 M/ A! S2 G- @英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
' p7 t* |0 g7 G+ u3 wmy prestigous neighbour- i# M% B% N1 L: r* w
is the only first owner of the unit properties
$ V, }: b0 p% U: q; gin our community --- + p* ^) Q- X. a; y* q. V" q
tens of townhouse condos.' s3 h/ a6 U$ W( z" y% N

; R  Q5 [7 P3 Z# }" o% wNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
# D( ?8 {# j- Y' z0 m0 ^: Q0 kmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.6 k, l6 l( O. X: w! K/ u
She has white hairs and red faces.
8 G6 [2 p+ [6 W+ p4 PHer light-footed movement$ L5 p* b# `+ B3 u# J5 e
is just like a flying swallow.5 A7 m$ U$ [8 H
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She shovels the snow on her door lane. V7 j( i# ]/ P$ S
before driving her own car;
* @/ s  ]/ ?; ?- W0 ^9 A( wshe digs her back yard0 O- w% z! Q2 `8 b3 P
to plant flowers ---
3 C% w" c! h3 \: f/ h6 `$ qas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature," Z& s# F: L( P9 h; k5 J
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
6 p: ~, q5 |& t7 s" Has if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.) L# @: r) `" W9 O' {  R" H
Neighbour's handwriting) X' L3 S/ F( ?. `- }! E/ ?7 c  w- ?
is so vigorous as to be the old trees" r% N- L# M8 y. B6 O
interwined by dry vines.
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3 y% D) M/ ]$ J* lNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
6 Y* a- J; X- M& A) o$ gShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
* o4 A" [( T6 c# p/ R1 ~- b9 t4 ~& L9 WWell, her fluting is very melodious ---3 K/ R" i+ _+ N# x6 Q# ?
that is the sole sound going into my ears3 f' j# F, m6 a4 m2 P) f9 ^. y
from the next side of my wall;
9 L( ?: ~& C% _+ g+ Othe unknown tune is extolling4 \- ?! ?8 ?5 K
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
% s$ f/ t8 |% magain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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, n/ i# p4 A9 F3 l3 G& K土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
6 |' ?" M* ]  d6 V  I8 |4 ]: P$ dJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

( E6 b1 _0 ?; V* V3 P从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
/ r" n2 t! B' ?1 D4 Y1 }5 N" S另外,翻译改动一处:
- s& p( F& ^4 X( u' j7 f- B; MHer light-footed movement
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修改为:
; s3 V0 G; G! g/ NHer light-footed movement
. f+ c/ l; y4 ^+ K$ K8 N% h" ^is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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: ~/ p" I6 d6 T, w9 s7 \+ H/ j真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ! J, Z  d* K- _- k& }( @  r
6# Justing
7 F( I2 S; ~; Z* u真的是太像朱镕基了!0 x/ ^: L- e9 l3 m/ f. p) i
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

6 [% N0 I2 u" `' O- B5 `我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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