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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 % d# e: \0 `! x8 f; _

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我尊贵的邻居
# H+ g+ N2 x* C5 B! P. C是我们小区  几十户
/ N7 f& C/ e; S* y5 z9 {5 ?唯一的元老
0 [9 h& ~2 q9 f* q, C9 c8 ?一住三十多年7 o/ h5 F- J: B, o1 }6 O3 X3 @7 K
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕$ }% q  W* D: l# p. O5 ]( d& Q
白发红颜  不见皱纹
$ s' u4 K, w: a开车铲雪  挖土栽花6 h7 L/ d8 w% E3 s9 I7 g7 A) m
似不识  岁月为何物( X9 Z! o- g2 R. Z# |

3 A- X, s5 o) M( I头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 `7 R. y" J3 F5 B4 t) T邻居气宇轩昂5 z& X- U( M1 ^0 M& K7 U8 i
如同女面朱熔基4 ^# U4 `, S4 W5 T' F
邻居的字
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5 Y) I! e1 j; _/ i" g邻居酷喜中国文化, g) f( x1 f# B* X; |: C# I
说她属土龙+ ^! i! y+ I+ P6 `9 o. t7 B5 e
其笛声也悠扬
- z7 H3 i$ S2 h) B, N9 d那是从隔壁传来的
. {5 o( ]/ u* M8 Q, Y7 j唯一的声响
, `+ ]' {5 l& @2 k4 Q- r9 l2 ]1 {那不知名的曲调! H" s& _6 o/ V6 b6 T) V
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ) p( G- o' e3 I
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,  V; n' K# y' Y7 S) L4 V; Z
my prestigous neighbour
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+ j6 p% c3 H. ?3 o& Ain our community ---
8 l. Z3 t% Q( T6 L# R& }- V: Ctens of townhouse condos.  t+ c0 i2 A$ s7 o* l: ]
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,6 H  ^( O  x- b4 s$ ?5 R7 g
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.# |9 t6 x( x# [, v. J) a! n$ q
She has white hairs and red faces.3 |- N$ @3 Y* k
Her light-footed movement2 x: j! V) B/ R/ {- U, ~  `
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
6 G; u) H- G4 xbefore driving her own car;4 e, m, z$ {) r# j2 h3 }2 _
she digs her back yard
* b7 k# M- O- ^# Ito plant flowers ---
+ [0 w; T2 G( L# W& ^as if she did not know what years mean.0 O, C3 q1 H/ }* Y  j8 P
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,, V7 N; k% k- x- D. O7 m# n
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---# p6 C" [: b+ g# s2 a: A4 V/ V: w
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
; |! W' F/ }, x, d" A6 _Neighbour's handwriting: W/ C5 G5 [9 W' c" `" A! `5 Z3 ]2 X
is so vigorous as to be the old trees4 I7 c( a" K" {. q; w, n$ x) ^
interwined by dry vines.6 I, h; B/ {) q0 l+ D" i

' k2 q! X, Q5 H/ B# f2 nNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
$ N, \: ~& p+ X2 }1 }* HShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.% G: `- t6 i: a7 Q) Z. ~$ r; i
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
5 p& s" y* B) Z1 K6 Ithat is the sole sound going into my ears' Y( v8 x% U; `) @: |5 ~
from the next side of my wall;
% g* I& G& ~/ T2 g# I0 Zthe unknown tune is extolling
% h) `7 C2 N; `3 r+ S4 ithe magnificence and brilliance of the life,3 q; y* B: T0 H# O& }1 g
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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) _: g1 j- }) k! p' @& K4 p土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换3 Q) l* Q1 [% r  a
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

, Q/ f! Q4 O8 w4 R从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。& R. Y& k4 D- h4 N3 |( u7 ^% d4 Q
另外,翻译改动一处:% S9 t6 z& r* F; p% R
Her light-footed movement. N0 u8 \. x0 P! S! e" `3 y& J
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Her light-footed movement, i/ @% C  G% N# Q) S
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 8 p6 M1 w: ~- N; @) |9 b1 _
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真的是太像朱镕基了!) K3 h3 S# I2 N2 d. B9 ^6 f
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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