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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 0 t* W6 x. d; A+ p3 f" A6 n. B

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5 N+ B9 q7 X7 g9 j; R/ d5 G我尊贵的邻居
! y2 ^2 h0 m/ m* Q9 a  X( l是我们小区  几十户
; l9 \1 Q; i, U* z3 K2 ]1 U唯一的元老
, o. h0 u  Y* A2 g5 N; H5 E一住三十多年
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: u! }* Q; E6 W! C) F5 B邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
! T. y. r, j8 ~5 C4 D& E+ o白发红颜  不见皱纹6 e* u+ A9 a1 _2 Y1 q
开车铲雪  挖土栽花, y: I: q2 z$ a, J
似不识  岁月为何物, ~" ]* ~0 l8 b: O+ X+ ?9 w

- W& h7 _* w0 f4 B( o# ^" a6 j" p头顶英国文学硕士的光环
; I  |7 T- @0 I邻居气宇轩昂8 ~" J, F- D8 G
如同女面朱熔基
' c# \# K$ C& E6 j  O& u, Q5 o邻居的字$ E& V. L- q$ |1 s# A$ g! e
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化; J* X+ M' w" b7 X4 R$ X
说她属土龙/ f8 ^3 H' K0 B3 D. P( O8 x3 T
其笛声也悠扬
) X# i) o. z, \! d7 V, @那是从隔壁传来的
& r: E" E) I3 B7 n6 H9 _- H唯一的声响
7 E' v9 p. Q6 p9 U1 r6 P那不知名的曲调
+ j9 X5 a$ d% w6 k7 B/ z5 u反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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Living here for more than thirty years,
1 T0 k8 M; ^- M/ H: xmy prestigous neighbour
  _2 h# \% c# E" C) Tis the only first owner of the unit properties
3 u2 }6 Z& x1 Y, J4 h% A5 P$ [( Cin our community --- * M; ?6 {; t5 e
tens of townhouse condos.- K+ K0 R9 t- |5 Z! F
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,- Y( ]0 V; X& [/ P
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
/ A+ a9 i" e$ T0 ~She has white hairs and red faces.
! s- w3 l" U- l1 \) n8 O; [! GHer light-footed movement* r% f+ R6 T1 s: P
is just like a flying swallow.- \8 M9 J) V8 B9 R- v% n/ ?: P' ~
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She shovels the snow on her door lane% l% [0 K* B( H3 a( |
before driving her own car;8 I! ]% v- _; M$ `! l+ l
she digs her back yard
( f  A: |! \* Fto plant flowers ---
  v1 e) }' i. a1 Q" i0 ~as if she did not know what years mean.; o( L$ z. a5 E' Z3 D2 n! S- a4 X6 u

  x+ z. k$ h: E1 uWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
  g$ m7 e% k3 w$ M0 `5 `6 ~; mneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
/ B8 i1 X$ n/ Jas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.! E/ A* l2 F% O/ s/ t. I  Z0 S
Neighbour's handwriting6 S& C% O4 ^" j3 f
is so vigorous as to be the old trees& {" S5 ]( Y+ ]2 H, w% A
interwined by dry vines.: L$ i" i. W' ?  Q

/ y5 _0 m9 s1 y( r; t6 oNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
7 b3 h6 @' H8 B1 EShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.) R$ E0 o7 x, s& ?/ W8 _6 L) P
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---% f+ o( H% O5 u: I2 h" \
that is the sole sound going into my ears1 Z$ J4 S8 B& e6 \% L& g  Q
from the next side of my wall;
: ?0 l% Q% Q9 L) u% Tthe unknown tune is extolling/ X& r- P. H8 c% P
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
( L. U2 x/ a* o% m8 Aagain and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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$ D5 G2 o. c1 V从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
% k5 h1 O- |: U& B. C另外,翻译改动一处:3 G  J& P) B* C0 k8 ]/ S7 T
Her light-footed movement( R0 b7 i' u3 ~
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 % H) f- E- A0 l  H/ t* b3 E4 c3 m
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真的是太像朱镕基了!, r0 A5 i- D* a0 O% [. v4 a7 g$ F
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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