我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居
) U/ _5 F1 B- |; n6 `是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
/ |7 F+ `2 \' X/ y; T9 F0 s白发红颜  不见皱纹
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

! E) ^5 y8 Q$ p& K" Y- d( W1 W% M头顶英国文学硕士的光环
  Y/ p! v+ |, P邻居气宇轩昂
! n) ~2 Q. v9 E6 J5 v% K如同女面朱熔基
9 c/ c1 L& t3 M邻居的字
$ p" b3 ?, P2 t# M7 W- Y2 N  e5 g则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
# S, j8 T1 [8 d! j8 M3 _说她属土龙
其笛声也悠扬
  }8 i- r$ S# N: W9 H" R那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
6 f* }4 t9 `. m  k) L那不知名的曲调
' C* j* i1 H/ V反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

$ b# _0 `+ s3 @' Q英文版，欢迎指正：

- P9 p9 J' c" Q; S& }1 D1 a, H8 RLiving here for more than thirty years,
# N2 f( w' z7 r+ D6 Omy prestigous neighbour
0 \& L& K$ D8 a1 ^5 @is the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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9 S. {% l  f$ O4 v5 a3 JNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
* w" T- q  N2 i9 H) `- j) gHer light-footed movement
2 ~9 g9 [+ u8 i! k  s6 B+ qis just like a flying swallow.
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% B, f& T; d9 B) h! S9 E0 rShe shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
# f" ?! Q. o; c3 Y+ L$ Z" }she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
$ Z' y% i9 O: ]2 o' B3 Zas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
+ @3 _6 s! y( |: {4 T2 e! Y* his so vigorous as to be the old trees
( ^; B5 y! u; [4 G. H/ `interwined by dry vines.
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3 Q  j, M8 q( R, \! xNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
2 t1 B0 [  q8 B5 r' |0 EWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
6 h; u- Z6 Z2 ^  e& L- r- t( Xthe unknown tune is extolling
; L6 Q1 X0 s- _6 h* qthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
) {% g( a. {: [0 pagain and again.

Justing

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5 z% L; @0 A0 T# v0 G3 n6 @土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

% |$ v; \1 a  ]$ S从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
4 b8 M8 ?/ D& k: r3 h3 b另外，翻译改动一处：
9 Z" k1 H- y1 uHer light-footed movement
0 Z4 u% L" Y$ i2 I2 U9 q" Z1 n, iis just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
Her light-footed movement
* j! X% N9 Q2 l( @: h" n( A, iis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing


真的是太像朱镕基了！

Justing

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。