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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 : ]5 p, S. D( r

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我尊贵的邻居
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唯一的元老- n/ i: T# j8 i  H- u* F
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
# W. P. d7 \+ v白发红颜  不见皱纹
; x+ n5 t9 r0 s7 W开车铲雪  挖土栽花
2 A" K2 ]. p0 b2 o似不识  岁月为何物6 r0 S. r+ k" s7 B
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
$ k9 J6 q" k7 O3 i邻居气宇轩昂
4 u3 Q; k" B) T5 n: D如同女面朱熔基
" @1 m- s# c8 j+ @; ?邻居的字
# K0 r6 @1 S4 j9 S4 `" R则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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7 n) T( I+ k, E) n* m* E5 l邻居酷喜中国文化
# w" x$ ^5 g, g! B说她属土龙
( @4 i' a$ O' t# F1 s. ?其笛声也悠扬
! T2 k3 L" D5 d) T4 Z4 I那是从隔壁传来的$ n& [4 h7 n' @. M* c: W# _
唯一的声响
" A6 g$ n8 M7 o  o那不知名的曲调
8 g  j1 \* @1 E) G/ w( R反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 : X: o6 f0 x. V

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Living here for more than thirty years,! A$ |( L4 L3 S# J. W6 J4 S( w
my prestigous neighbour
- D$ K4 d$ o( A, v6 q) Wis the only first owner of the unit properties
1 R  D6 Y# v  E) k* S9 oin our community ---
1 h( S. A8 S' I- Vtens of townhouse condos./ d  a/ v7 z2 K1 r, o

0 j: t# c7 @9 D1 U1 Q; c8 lNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
+ V8 \: i! m+ R. _6 Tmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
. D4 A0 @$ S% Q7 B( T( ~1 E* mShe has white hairs and red faces.
  ~% r0 y- T6 i+ X& qHer light-footed movement2 }5 G( U3 r1 A1 t7 O* M6 }1 m, d! Z
is just like a flying swallow.
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% [* B! Y" e+ a9 U# L# ZShe shovels the snow on her door lane
5 |' A8 f, m/ @& {before driving her own car;/ ?% W" d, Q5 U4 ]$ s: g4 R
she digs her back yard
* A: o  Z9 L" G1 V7 y% {; `to plant flowers ---# k' z" ^. g4 U3 N2 j
as if she did not know what years mean.( _( P! B9 S# `& ]( `
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,% v5 s% T. Y: E( s# Q, Q# a1 e
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
3 b: x/ N9 T3 r  Z  cas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.- t9 ]3 T* M4 B/ a) l- ~9 l" i9 g
Neighbour's handwriting2 @5 ?: v! H, Y( F' P
is so vigorous as to be the old trees1 S' P2 I! V: p# ]9 p4 K
interwined by dry vines.# P# Y) c* B( q$ {; H

1 p- r/ P0 I3 ?/ h" \4 ZNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
) H2 g- C9 V# l! Y' lShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
6 k7 E* d# Q) P! HWell, her fluting is very melodious ---0 y5 E3 `- L% m' O! |& d. d" o- k
that is the sole sound going into my ears5 l* n* `) B7 Y: X7 S! f* n6 {+ K
from the next side of my wall;- Z& U% i0 _4 v6 ~: q: E$ K
the unknown tune is extolling2 [- k+ j4 T+ }" ]" o% W0 ?9 o$ Z
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
  p& w4 }+ r* e8 I- V" t* c0 Q1 A7 iagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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5 |" K" R/ I) V& j! p土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 / o: h" `3 S0 m6 M7 W% s' R
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
2 {% |8 T$ b, ?2 v# Q2 s# hJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
- a1 J" ~$ [* N) [# Z( T" y另外,翻译改动一处:
3 w' B% W- a2 V: p4 GHer light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement3 d, W( |$ x' V5 O% U
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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$ ?+ E% {- j6 T6 I; o# Q真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 & X- q8 j  a' T$ h
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* T! C+ }, n9 P' A  {我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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