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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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* F, d; p' W7 s我尊贵的邻居
/ w  J0 ]" j( \1 D, G; A9 w是我们小区  几十户
# F. V) \0 I8 {/ S唯一的元老
0 t' o3 I* `6 H. `$ V2 ~$ M. n1 G" `一住三十多年9 l, i  @4 w+ m) Q7 D3 @$ x/ o
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
5 I3 a: q7 x4 N2 C% m白发红颜  不见皱纹
8 u0 n; E* J& Z开车铲雪  挖土栽花, D% u8 ~  s; M, k' S7 L( G
似不识  岁月为何物
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) X7 W+ I4 k8 _. h* O4 n; K头顶英国文学硕士的光环
7 a+ H7 X, d6 L# a5 ^- y7 `邻居气宇轩昂
/ u3 U6 [* @; Y$ a. y如同女面朱熔基
+ g% H, D' w; E6 [邻居的字2 o$ i6 c1 O6 C* a+ ^' E. }$ E8 [
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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8 U2 i- g1 Q0 }$ f9 D# f* c4 J邻居酷喜中国文化$ p7 s1 a1 Z; r6 F/ n6 A
说她属土龙+ t6 |' h0 V( v. ], y. \
其笛声也悠扬! R) [0 \- [2 p7 X2 z: [3 G
那是从隔壁传来的, [8 i) W: ~( R9 `
唯一的声响
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反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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; t! r8 }7 Y5 N* [, ^英文版,欢迎指正:3 w' ^& F5 R. R/ J. k
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Living here for more than thirty years,
. s: W+ M5 z; h6 y- kmy prestigous neighbour9 K' P3 g1 L% b: w4 H, y. v
is the only first owner of the unit properties
& O+ P1 W( X  W) s9 P3 @* Pin our community --- / U' }2 p, ~, V
tens of townhouse condos.3 X  \; m. B: l, g2 m" H- |% N
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,; y9 d/ {4 L1 ~' X
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.  ^5 p6 c& l+ ?" X; l5 j0 L
She has white hairs and red faces.+ R# [3 Z0 C3 k2 i' o1 z
Her light-footed movement2 r3 {$ t/ T1 {/ B# V
is just like a flying swallow.
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* d& ~& I) d0 }4 XShe shovels the snow on her door lane1 m3 S) T/ F' \5 ~3 L* v  ^
before driving her own car;
: ~" R% }* S; K" Y- o' Jshe digs her back yard
: m) I2 A) e, ^; R& `9 Ato plant flowers ---& ~5 q( h/ w% @: @
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,( x6 a( q, f$ |! k+ C( ?
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---7 `- D7 _! v+ r  U: M3 z6 L* g5 J$ Q
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.3 G8 }' d0 y) I5 \4 z: |  S
Neighbour's handwriting
: v2 P1 H5 p2 n3 j! l5 Mis so vigorous as to be the old trees9 e+ V" y% R  r, \9 ]
interwined by dry vines.0 K, o' ], F1 o/ X1 x6 J
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
5 A6 o/ e3 ^7 T, M/ Q* VShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.$ A, J0 j4 [) A( ^* M6 l/ N
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
7 i( V8 b- p8 Y/ s% B- T3 tthat is the sole sound going into my ears5 ~- k+ S5 A  e& h$ g# }0 y
from the next side of my wall;
* E. y& v0 l5 G& Bthe unknown tune is extolling$ G/ m3 ^$ x" I3 Z2 g9 W! K
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
( l4 u1 E0 s) i, w6 uagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 * ?  W( V4 }0 h/ P' r& ^! H6 E% x

& [: i; r2 r- o土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换6 s" x5 b- D* I
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。1 f9 M$ q$ R  X1 F" s
另外,翻译改动一处:5 ?+ x+ r; C0 x  r" l
Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
& N2 t& r, |0 H/ q. S) PHer light-footed movement) u& C7 U( `" d* Y8 Q: L
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 & i* {+ z$ R+ C; d8 ~/ l
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+ C0 p. L& f7 q5 q2 l% K真的是太像朱镕基了!
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$ U. c& m. _2 J我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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