我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

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我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
  z- c8 n3 ^8 `唯一的元老
一住三十多年
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+ p/ ~* S6 J6 j& b邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
7 B1 n6 I) W4 J- o. C( t5 u- S白发红颜  不见皱纹
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
: H/ X7 x, }/ |9 A" s似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
: [% d: ^1 |" a( b: W* S6 q6 y# P( S" r其笛声也悠扬
. v1 T+ c2 S" A! ]( M那是从隔壁传来的
; K0 P& B8 l: u- C( R, c, F唯一的声响
9 ^6 p1 e. F0 \+ Z2 S; o那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

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Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
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in our community ---
! g( a& k3 C' g0 a$ F9 Y5 ]5 A" z! vtens of townhouse condos.
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  }7 }- J( Z9 ]; {  o# D  V% [- ^Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
, C* {; Z2 `  K( \' X( C4 n' rmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.

She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard
8 r" h6 q. w# v  s0 tto plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
; v. L2 _0 T3 M) x1 Rneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
# \! ?: n% y& a! g( b( Nas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
: Z1 g. ]& H$ A3 T1 V, F0 Ais so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.
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3 O( \: h6 K. pNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
) C& r8 H3 j0 r3 }1 o( w/ Cthe unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
5 ]' f7 H5 E& \) Cagain and again.

Justing

土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

Justing

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

6 w9 {+ S; r7 C, O! u' Y从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
5 m4 x9 X0 i, c3 q另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing

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Justing

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
; T5 u: _  w3 c! Bhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。