我尊贵的邻居(11)

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$ Y/ a* P4 @" U1 f我尊贵的邻居
是我们小区  几十户
  ^$ t1 M% z) z: T4 f$ b3 v0 U唯一的元老
* v  A# a) b7 s2 J4 G. O" \一住三十多年

9 e4 n1 C4 e; k8 f4 X$ d6 c邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
7 F6 B. n9 u% G% b: }0 Y' Y$ d白发红颜  不见皱纹
% a* B' P) D$ c5 D' ?开车铲雪  挖土栽花
& b" E4 W5 ^& M" x8 I8 _* X: f似不识  岁月为何物

. c0 v- _0 ?: x5 i头顶英国文学硕士的光环
! z* q  F0 x; U* m$ S0 l: z邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
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4 }0 e- `  t  O' k+ f则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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% B" z: @2 F6 p" o' b7 c邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
+ K/ Q; H- X: t' U其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
2 V# y6 k8 Q5 r那不知名的曲调
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：
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* A5 R& B3 T" c8 {% [2 _* r* rLiving here for more than thirty years,
2 r" k& N8 a- T, B/ F4 imy prestigous neighbour
; g! g" H' o" U3 C; ^6 R* Uis the only first owner of the unit properties
+ g$ s+ U6 z! U! \5 J$ ?in our community ---
3 N/ y7 S8 A- ?# G- D* g- w1 htens of townhouse condos.

Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.

- P. P# V5 _7 AShe shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
8 |( L  f- p% x4 Y) [4 hshe digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
% `% d. z; {- I) |as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
; N+ z- v0 z2 X3 P3 [( @% das if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
# O8 T9 T3 s2 D! u  eNeighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
% N6 u& q9 u4 X% @. d8 _interwined by dry vines.

Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
9 s3 F; S% D. O' P$ IShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
4 ^6 ~- h5 f( C; E/ ?Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
' k) G$ E) V: z; l5 ythe unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
) r+ k  {' @! `- fagain and again.

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$ Q; N$ ?1 n8 w/ a) F7 A7 x+ t' u土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
3 `4 S0 C3 {5 W: {& d3 N& \+ Z4 BJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

% l& o5 w7 \0 t( a) x) L8 Y从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
. O( x% [9 `* x, C; @5 H& R另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
8 @, s; k; T# D9 g& His just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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! r6 u4 s. ~' Q真的是太像朱镕基了！

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: v; R/ k6 J! W4 c真的是太像朱镕基了！
$ I4 R7 Z7 {- L6 lhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

8 w+ C+ I. Y6 L0 c我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。