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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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5 ?: x2 A3 w; I0 o$ n* A我尊贵的邻居, H* L$ h# c& p7 a4 l
是我们小区  几十户9 V5 H: T  k8 \* [
唯一的元老
2 a2 R( Q5 S# D一住三十多年3 B% d% U8 V: g/ N  K
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕9 a( O" F3 j* X+ J; y2 a
白发红颜  不见皱纹
) A- @% R; K  s) l; k开车铲雪  挖土栽花# N! r. {8 z2 {
似不识  岁月为何物" w5 c9 Y) }! m
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环0 \4 o* I' t0 q$ v: W
邻居气宇轩昂3 O; t$ @* v7 B) _' Z4 |' w0 H3 I
如同女面朱熔基
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则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
3 m% R: a4 U& N& z, C- ]说她属土龙) d5 C3 f7 F1 e# u) i9 b
其笛声也悠扬! X; f1 n) j! t
那是从隔壁传来的+ {+ k3 P9 A1 `/ \" o" D
唯一的声响$ F0 [6 a, Z3 G+ ?0 }9 b; T
那不知名的曲调
  b) Q* o5 |( Q反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 $ B! J- _# v& u* f; B

" ]2 l! O( B; I6 Y% E英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
; T4 }( q4 m; y* S% `% m: [% Mmy prestigous neighbour
; m6 G! {% |7 fis the only first owner of the unit properties* Z6 Q1 \9 z0 Q7 a' _  U  ~; T
in our community --- ( P0 s5 N! Y+ T7 P8 k
tens of townhouse condos.
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9 j( p. K( P! l- _5 HNeighbour is more than eighty years old,4 Z5 f# Z+ Y8 D% s. e, v  ?: z# n
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
) _7 f, e! q( r; Q3 g8 t) wShe has white hairs and red faces.& [! M7 z' n- ~" o( F
Her light-footed movement+ c8 u0 B6 p( @* I; }& s( z
is just like a flying swallow.
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# i' H1 V  r# n3 h) TShe shovels the snow on her door lane
* q% Z# U8 J/ a' f5 o6 H( s, ebefore driving her own car;6 e# U- p6 ~% Y+ {
she digs her back yard
- W! w; \  s; s. ~to plant flowers ---! H. O% n, C) r: b% p
as if she did not know what years mean.
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- w, {& q8 C; j; O- XWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
/ m6 {" ]" O# Z" ^- n8 L8 Mneighbour has a dignified appearance ---7 b/ U9 E% _; l" e5 ^
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.1 C- E& `$ J7 p9 v2 W5 S$ I) `9 f
Neighbour's handwriting) l  O8 F1 a7 H. I; w7 b
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
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0 R- M2 I8 K% [Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.) B  a# ]/ e* X. z
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
4 ?. g3 C3 C' A6 VWell, her fluting is very melodious ---% O' p, k+ Y! |7 e
that is the sole sound going into my ears
8 [$ b7 j5 m4 {% l! f0 k: ]from the next side of my wall;3 u7 e. [/ T% X# D7 z
the unknown tune is extolling
! X1 L* r: V/ q, B$ v/ Ethe magnificence and brilliance of the life,5 s' R' N2 D6 Q2 G
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
& W: d( b5 I' |) MJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
- \, q) ^. _. F! \另外,翻译改动一处:
9 p6 J0 _' a% V/ B  H6 `% HHer light-footed movement6 s( s# z# U+ a" q- b6 @' U
is just like a flying swallow.$ N( k! G& p5 h# s. |! ^
修改为:- b) f7 P* k' S- }
Her light-footed movement6 M& M) g' e% N* n" w& {/ [
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 & s% S  }$ J) ^2 ]- u
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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