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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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% k, |0 |! T& h0 {% l" c5 a" B# v我尊贵的邻居& R5 ], q9 f  M- l; Z# h% q' [# h
是我们小区  几十户
! C9 ~& X1 K3 k8 U9 y唯一的元老
6 Z% V# |8 V. g* p7 ^3 \一住三十多年  Z: M6 d2 R; a9 k. T

2 n) L9 v' z1 @# W% f2 Y邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
( d( H6 ?) j9 o% W8 e白发红颜  不见皱纹
( o5 I7 o, Q" F1 Q3 g4 l开车铲雪  挖土栽花8 V) @. H  L4 l( |4 V
似不识  岁月为何物' p, X0 ?( F1 n6 Z7 e8 g
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环  u! }0 ?9 K" e. ~/ _) m
邻居气宇轩昂
* e! D( z7 K2 r% ^如同女面朱熔基
( Z  r# q' @& n4 \; m# W& X; o邻居的字1 Z3 n  q1 j$ i0 z
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
& U2 o8 W! t, f3 j6 u说她属土龙
" h6 }8 E, o1 T其笛声也悠扬
/ B- r4 y/ d: J. Q0 S那是从隔壁传来的2 O% ~+ ~7 N% N
唯一的声响
2 G# G" P8 f, s0 B那不知名的曲调
' S  J5 i- Y2 D$ c, X( |反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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% d( P0 Y  N3 ?, m英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
, u, j* p# ^" omy prestigous neighbour9 n$ U, _4 i% K+ a1 s$ T
is the only first owner of the unit properties
8 t& E7 s1 ~! gin our community ---
" H! ]4 c/ o7 [. ]tens of townhouse condos.+ p2 Z: ]) R. B

/ M0 ]  i$ P4 u0 l( ]0 ENeighbour is more than eighty years old,
' Z4 o$ M& u$ o  umagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
) V# F; I, p1 j3 S$ c9 m8 gShe has white hairs and red faces.  h3 r$ O8 n; o0 E/ Y# s
Her light-footed movement
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- M, Y' X, Q5 p: c! `She shovels the snow on her door lane
4 ?( r& e% h, H  E; Kbefore driving her own car;( |% z9 s: @( ?- g2 W& W
she digs her back yard) x$ v7 U0 V5 \8 F
to plant flowers ---
& R4 X" n. Q7 E% a( kas if she did not know what years mean.
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- m. B9 E+ t% \, g( A) @* ]. UWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,$ b) X: d3 J; M! @
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
& O9 V( C' e" Z! c+ v' V, d. Uas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
2 U+ G" p/ s/ k- Q0 S, F/ g7 _Neighbour's handwriting$ z: u" B% \5 D, h
is so vigorous as to be the old trees& M& H) d* y% X
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply." s- r7 J  c6 ~2 o+ [6 i
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
9 b. v; T& `1 |* c" V5 cWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
0 _! y- `1 P4 |( x+ R9 q( |$ ~that is the sole sound going into my ears7 n0 Z- e+ ~2 D" @6 r* I4 `; u* E1 I
from the next side of my wall;: }8 z- V% W" Q; w/ Q6 J
the unknown tune is extolling
1 b! ?) K7 I5 i6 N% Qthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
$ S" {5 x4 |7 {2 m% J3 c4 ]again and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 % n7 C: x# K; o7 J/ v" V$ U' z* d

+ x; b" q9 y' ^" z+ f8 D! i土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 4 k/ u+ ]9 y) I% C8 T! Y
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换- n$ O( U+ b$ B; g' X6 S4 a5 E
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。3 }, ^: m. e3 S0 J
另外,翻译改动一处:$ k0 K* y3 |2 Z$ T4 e$ D) m* c
Her light-footed movement9 Q8 h& N' D/ Y0 s- V! b
is just like a flying swallow.6 G* l% D: v. P
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 3 T: {8 A. [1 I& \
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真的是太像朱镕基了!0 [0 G0 T# J$ z2 X5 B9 l
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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