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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 # ^/ I0 E# i+ D: M: w+ V1 x2 h

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) a% E4 i# S5 M' r! D8 i+ i是我们小区  几十户
: w" A+ j3 o' b& W" u唯一的元老8 |$ [  K' ^0 _
一住三十多年8 c  v, f& {5 x( b

3 T/ N' g4 U. W3 a; I/ O+ m邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
- G" c8 |3 l- ^3 o白发红颜  不见皱纹
4 e) `' _. \0 W+ Q1 F. j# k开车铲雪  挖土栽花$ {% g! V% S& A' J; d" B; d
似不识  岁月为何物9 B: B2 G3 b. Z# E+ u+ a
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
! g( n" @% ^9 ^, s: }8 Y# x$ u邻居气宇轩昂
, G5 ]' j) d6 z- T! D如同女面朱熔基# {4 _5 i) i4 _  Z$ n+ R
邻居的字
% u* D- s0 D3 J9 y( T- r0 ]则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化# Z9 {5 i5 c4 j" X/ \* o
说她属土龙2 W6 P3 v' Z, R, ?
其笛声也悠扬- {" G) N, f8 l+ V% q
那是从隔壁传来的: ]$ v1 [# Q- J2 E) t" d% n
唯一的声响
' K' {/ T- [( _( X" A  o那不知名的曲调
* L  }% H) V( T' g9 G# s' C; e反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 5 N$ o7 {+ ~! l, _' ?" K
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英文版,欢迎指正:4 \8 W2 e3 b3 ^0 f' f

& I$ W8 n& v8 W  F8 v5 eLiving here for more than thirty years,
5 D' J/ Z- d- ~6 I  f/ kmy prestigous neighbour# R! \  h- I8 d5 o6 K% n
is the only first owner of the unit properties
; ]3 D+ n! J. l9 g3 Z$ [# tin our community ---
0 [- m( e8 t: c8 a- jtens of townhouse condos.
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" \0 f" Z+ ~0 Z& lNeighbour is more than eighty years old,3 }1 L" x; j, m
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
5 M( k# e1 t: y2 ~& _  BShe has white hairs and red faces.9 w& l3 ]" b0 s/ m6 S7 u
Her light-footed movement  @4 t! r1 ]$ J9 e$ }% C& u; s
is just like a flying swallow./ ^; V+ f( f* `, m# d

0 P; W& P0 E  Q) l# h5 n8 t$ ^She shovels the snow on her door lane
+ Y! ?# `. Q% {3 g+ r7 Hbefore driving her own car;: |1 }/ H0 n9 b" h( c( ^
she digs her back yard
7 n# [; }& H/ o* z9 d4 lto plant flowers ---/ m- Q* F# J) e) E0 n. m& ]
as if she did not know what years mean.  K; _' z2 {! E% x4 e+ ?5 K8 E

' {& N, E/ K" f2 `, C3 XWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
8 ?) T9 o9 Q1 K# b2 `( Rneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
) L1 U/ q) |9 {as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.7 i* F/ Z, L' p9 v! |
Neighbour's handwriting
# R! c6 M% R, S; N1 V8 zis so vigorous as to be the old trees: X  V& b7 M6 Z" E" @+ m
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
2 U" o$ j: P3 k& CShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.9 a# b! l+ a' k! ]) ~6 d
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---! I9 Z+ t! \* |0 ^9 E! m* d
that is the sole sound going into my ears
: ]8 ?, b8 a% ]+ H8 Afrom the next side of my wall;
& x! b3 p- y& D- B& C4 Rthe unknown tune is extolling
0 Q  N1 n4 y3 t& y' o8 rthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,' q# }, ~1 n0 N" ^9 Z/ e
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 4 @6 ~- U6 w7 T

, I$ a9 q+ Z( G& |, h土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
1 W2 t3 R$ m0 L$ @/ [% P( U* q: ^Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

  \2 ~( F( G& I" ~8 l$ ?; x从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
/ q: S6 H# n) l# J# R0 c3 D另外,翻译改动一处:! R5 t# d& d6 Y6 ~$ F& r- i% i- y
Her light-footed movement, {' a3 I+ P, o
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement$ a2 e" q  l- O7 i
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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" D; [: F' j# M真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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+ O1 c( p6 I; J真的是太像朱镕基了!6 D! C& S% P2 j. _* K' I
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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