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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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# _/ h* p: c, X* |, Q我尊贵的邻居
# _, A. G2 M9 u6 X: i% p是我们小区  几十户
1 J; k8 M' V- N/ [唯一的元老, D* K) g8 B# i0 M. F* }2 W
一住三十多年$ K0 k7 s) E4 y! T

4 v; s) c) n# J. S5 \  U0 B邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
4 F9 z8 N4 _- y" r9 ~5 E1 L白发红颜  不见皱纹
1 z; S6 Z7 a  L& f+ v8 x4 L: U: G$ r5 p开车铲雪  挖土栽花
9 _- Z+ h8 N$ G  Z3 M+ ^8 e似不识  岁月为何物
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& C; b4 T! q6 O/ `$ t7 w头顶英国文学硕士的光环
9 I3 N% `+ v5 c: T1 K/ n6 o0 Z邻居气宇轩昂. x' m" x  ~! D
如同女面朱熔基! e+ e* v/ n  y9 T* t* a4 V( W
邻居的字. x( i- Y7 C5 s  @+ w3 K
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤* f' C( A4 S5 b

. f8 u- K3 Z4 J3 e; P/ t邻居酷喜中国文化0 g' s' R# f. X7 k7 u5 ^
说她属土龙8 p& b6 b9 c5 A1 [
其笛声也悠扬
( u% n; _* I3 M: N* Q$ Y5 v8 r那是从隔壁传来的
& l( y! X1 o5 D6 L7 A唯一的声响' _# r2 j) S- |4 I/ p! d9 z
那不知名的曲调
$ \( {  D- t5 ~1 ~% j: c) f* e反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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' a( J  T2 X7 C) ^5 f$ e/ U$ w英文版,欢迎指正:9 r8 i9 {) R7 b' a

% Y/ q  g3 j: CLiving here for more than thirty years,
+ z$ m9 f; y$ Umy prestigous neighbour/ n9 I% p1 `* \5 s+ e3 S' c
is the only first owner of the unit properties3 P; g; `+ ~0 b  ~1 o0 U
in our community --- ! I9 B4 H5 ^, r7 |/ K& W3 x* n; X
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
& K: C/ }5 M0 u2 R/ k8 zmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
4 E+ F1 \: U; }* s3 WShe has white hairs and red faces.
; J  s& v  w' |2 M% xHer light-footed movement
; K, X- N3 z5 m# Z1 g! H; m% lis just like a flying swallow.3 Q5 l1 O7 A) J( l/ P. n
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She shovels the snow on her door lane" R& V9 d5 k5 u3 _. ^; m$ o
before driving her own car;
5 c0 |: r3 v' ?9 j- @# @; ?she digs her back yard
. [6 i5 a. c- V4 |to plant flowers ---
; S+ b6 b0 u1 E8 {as if she did not know what years mean.
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  D) e9 F$ P* U' T4 c; M* k0 qWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
9 j  w" o0 ?1 bneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
7 r, d0 V. V: Q% ?as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
+ J/ L) n( r- R; f7 fNeighbour's handwriting
$ V' T) A+ k9 j; o6 Z- iis so vigorous as to be the old trees( r7 i- o0 H6 k. z4 O. G
interwined by dry vines.' n1 o  q3 {/ O- P
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
" b$ A" v, Q2 e" a! Q8 w* J1 \She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
( O# o  |+ I7 L5 gWell, her fluting is very melodious ---! ~7 l  b8 G: x* G
that is the sole sound going into my ears
4 L' q) S3 k! N7 a! ~from the next side of my wall;: \" r( H4 L' |# g2 w4 ~9 M
the unknown tune is extolling0 b! g; O3 h: a! f, I9 g
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,6 Y% @) [4 C% q: K+ b) M! I
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 % Q( C  s% R1 `* R5 K

! c' c6 I! w/ z* a2 k; ]% S土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 , E" z3 \0 \- A
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
+ c- p0 }1 D, ZJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。" ?  e. `! x: u; C
另外,翻译改动一处:
  @8 T# d8 P/ XHer light-footed movement! {: n0 i' c" y0 z3 P  F
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Her light-footed movement% r9 D# F7 {- T# u, A3 U" `
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 3 }* u& k5 P7 |8 ~+ C  X- @0 `
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真的是太像朱镕基了!$ w) b, k7 f3 Q/ q
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

0 t: l' |2 W" F. l6 l" k我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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