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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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7 O1 h- s1 w- s我尊贵的邻居' y4 g0 `9 D( X9 u+ z- C
是我们小区  几十户
4 P- x6 @8 |  }9 |3 Y" O唯一的元老
( ]' P  m8 o" P; A6 R" H0 R- _  U一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
2 O3 j) n) Y4 r, A" a白发红颜  不见皱纹, m, p. n2 I7 T' F7 D3 [/ p! o
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
2 c0 m0 i7 {9 V- T2 R似不识  岁月为何物' r) V7 w  o* ~# P/ i7 S! K! X
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
2 S: q8 L* a  J邻居气宇轩昂
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邻居的字
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邻居酷喜中国文化) X& P. F2 Q. O3 H' v
说她属土龙; [9 u  k) W+ y4 e) R( C" g+ k: j
其笛声也悠扬- x: O( \7 z; I
那是从隔壁传来的
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3 Z! z* Z5 n, d3 E6 [那不知名的曲调0 X  I/ r) k( `6 o
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 + k# F% G& b% E! A- W
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英文版,欢迎指正:: g& n' _) F5 c

" Z/ i$ Y; T; u* B* ULiving here for more than thirty years,  f8 _8 q) y' r7 t, b  [1 t5 ~- U- F2 w
my prestigous neighbour3 @$ S( Z& V" [. ^! d: Q
is the only first owner of the unit properties
# n: {( D/ r3 p" i! Nin our community ---
' _1 P3 D8 v, V; p' O# f" u: _tens of townhouse condos.' g) x  G7 ^/ J* v- N

7 S+ m% n$ |" Z3 J( K4 S( pNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
) b' s) b1 H- A" F: pmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
/ _9 w. G% _$ I; p3 R# yShe has white hairs and red faces.
, ]8 F" ^% }" S% S! lHer light-footed movement# }) W! e( p" }' b! C& _8 {
is just like a flying swallow.
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1 a8 k  c. C1 r* l) UShe shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard. k) b; r. ^0 o2 Y  z/ }
to plant flowers ---% Y; K8 f4 G2 r5 l+ h* b
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature," d, b( R7 K; j0 D9 t9 _
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
7 p, U2 H6 K9 Uas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
# C+ \" D$ T* kNeighbour's handwriting
; p! {8 x; M, v) f. q0 Jis so vigorous as to be the old trees1 t( g3 k6 {$ L/ Y3 [* \
interwined by dry vines.
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1 L6 G- O. W' s/ j) a& S/ rNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply." ]4 P5 j  _; _; H5 o$ `8 }  w& J
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
' b8 l' X/ X3 k7 E8 `7 EWell, her fluting is very melodious ---3 ?2 e! c5 f/ ^, E% @; q
that is the sole sound going into my ears- a0 G  r* l) G6 {, W) q
from the next side of my wall;& X- m! x" w, z( ^1 ~9 ]9 T* I
the unknown tune is extolling# ^  Z- g6 y1 x3 U
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
9 N3 A) l& r$ iagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 - c0 g3 v0 w9 g4 U6 C6 r$ B
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
+ y, w7 {5 a9 w, o+ s% Z* TJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。: M: p. @4 w1 K' ]5 ~0 x/ {! ]& R' e
另外,翻译改动一处:" L, R, h( q( d4 |8 n. |- K1 M/ Y
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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* v3 S8 }; k: G& B3 `真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ( V. g- \. y9 r+ z8 t4 q
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
6 A/ p- }& H/ t$ Xhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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