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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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  t1 S- L- J  e" W$ p我尊贵的邻居# K# Y& e# Q, [0 |# k" e0 ^, R
是我们小区  几十户
6 f2 p/ i& ^8 E7 k唯一的元老
5 f" ?5 {! i9 {一住三十多年; I0 P9 B6 M% F# w4 S2 Y  |5 ]
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
# E+ i: Z5 v$ A; p: O) B, J白发红颜  不见皱纹
6 ]: i' @7 W  _开车铲雪  挖土栽花, E6 a) i% W* o  K
似不识  岁月为何物
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" S) a5 X$ U+ Y: b7 f( y+ j& b头顶英国文学硕士的光环
# V! [, j- R2 _' v" \' f邻居气宇轩昂
  A/ ]: O7 Z9 f* n% a) V' s- S如同女面朱熔基2 D( d, p7 P) M; u1 ^
邻居的字
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" X9 R: O" c1 B; \/ c& E* |) G8 d邻居酷喜中国文化
" t# x( X4 O4 Q  c7 X4 B说她属土龙
0 [% t( Q6 b9 B) ?其笛声也悠扬( o2 B, J. ^" p! R4 |: V
那是从隔壁传来的
6 |# R/ X: f7 R+ w- V唯一的声响
& ~) d7 P# ?3 ~- V# g& E% Q. N那不知名的曲调+ I: C! ~" J) c2 h, E) ]' _* c
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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7 Z9 s; W0 R- d8 j9 t6 z! Z9 m英文版,欢迎指正:
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" Z! R2 X% B' P, k) N* ]Living here for more than thirty years,
1 u# D' X1 J0 `3 s5 t+ _4 pmy prestigous neighbour: ~3 H5 w9 d& ~+ i7 f, c
is the only first owner of the unit properties
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/ ^& d& g' J/ N5 H- q2 `8 dtens of townhouse condos.
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+ a& C8 k& w7 g6 I, R- rNeighbour is more than eighty years old," v) b" k3 r, Q( h, Y1 d( m2 ]
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
9 L% s& H9 V: m9 j/ Q4 TShe has white hairs and red faces.5 k+ ~9 L4 ]  `+ r. k
Her light-footed movement( @+ N& o# A8 G5 a% v
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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+ s  H4 ]# r: t6 I1 j3 Hshe digs her back yard2 `+ p' b3 S+ J. C
to plant flowers ---/ B7 ]1 ^' o7 b
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
8 P3 f  R5 t. E0 a1 B) qneighbour has a dignified appearance ---" P7 ^; Y2 c7 ]% F! X+ p. ^& m
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
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is so vigorous as to be the old trees4 o# T7 @, t! R! G* H
interwined by dry vines.3 Z% b  D, J# o4 l* B  ]& ~
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
9 i. m) B' d/ A; {; HShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
8 Z# z; w& p# R6 ?7 [4 C( I7 xWell, her fluting is very melodious ---6 n6 K  |! `& A4 Q, b; J
that is the sole sound going into my ears
$ C2 Y+ U2 E6 s4 D( P: z( vfrom the next side of my wall;& X1 f+ ?! C  p
the unknown tune is extolling
9 E; I8 Y8 D9 x% ]2 \' A# S% Tthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,5 I9 a" j) G. \+ \7 m& w7 Z
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换5 k( n  p- K$ L9 `& x1 X. \1 k
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

' \) V* a9 C; E4 b+ a5 n! d从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
: v% u, k7 L$ ]+ t另外,翻译改动一处:4 I7 N9 n$ o( _" ?1 f
Her light-footed movement
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, R8 X6 `4 o; `( \) }  p- l- qHer light-footed movement' ^' [$ x$ [/ \0 A3 v$ L
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ) j5 `+ [/ V! _: K
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) K1 i" t5 f+ v真的是太像朱镕基了!
; a5 {+ U8 }) w* L6 T1 w2 t% Z* Q$ Jhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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