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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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我尊贵的邻居
* l, h* Z  I# g+ ^# x3 n: F是我们小区  几十户
& z  [3 ~" G# l9 V, w: u7 }9 M唯一的元老
) m* t  H, \1 N' a; p- o: ~一住三十多年, z9 S/ Z6 p5 Y4 v9 c2 z( y

7 y* M+ O# }" p邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕  v# M4 ^6 y. w$ E/ |: [, U
白发红颜  不见皱纹
9 Z3 l% j& V. m7 D' U开车铲雪  挖土栽花4 T* s) c9 ~- ?6 |1 x% r, Z# d
似不识  岁月为何物5 {3 P, L4 c0 q: j# f

! J, f8 ~) I, f) W) Q头顶英国文学硕士的光环  H8 s7 W' W% O' k8 }% m
邻居气宇轩昂
1 U4 W* o* X7 g: n如同女面朱熔基$ ?8 @, v  V: G  b% H# `5 t' N
邻居的字) r; m+ s* ?6 E4 g$ w2 k/ {
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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7 r, ~6 s2 }# w4 R6 a! V' R1 O邻居酷喜中国文化4 C& k! s* K; `0 |% l+ s
说她属土龙
( X, N, q) L' o& ]$ e其笛声也悠扬
6 J! t% S( `* x那是从隔壁传来的  j. k! l2 t7 B4 X' ^
唯一的声响! f  r' ~6 Y0 b' h
那不知名的曲调
& x+ m3 d: v+ U1 d0 D8 x0 W: p反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:% I7 [3 l8 Y6 S# S# X

4 O) ?9 F! b0 i# W- p! tLiving here for more than thirty years,! r" i* ~2 a8 Q+ m: Q
my prestigous neighbour
' X2 l) d; Z% wis the only first owner of the unit properties: q! O/ R$ U9 m5 A
in our community --- , L% @. S8 q7 `
tens of townhouse condos.
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, @' H: _/ a+ }2 z8 K# DNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
- j: M7 O7 O6 N7 Rmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.- x" V# `( O5 ]3 Y3 u) g- A' x& h. r
She has white hairs and red faces.
2 R* I! h  b0 v$ k4 f, M. w* aHer light-footed movement
! ?' G9 T( ?/ A! S' J7 tis just like a flying swallow.! x, n" G2 v* i! c3 P

) C6 ~) J- h! e% n7 h; KShe shovels the snow on her door lane
4 b, F$ T# Y7 S0 _before driving her own car;8 o& Y2 C$ m3 Q+ o1 W
she digs her back yard
$ [. k, Q8 U2 r: L6 Jto plant flowers ---4 @* S6 @0 z. c/ U
as if she did not know what years mean.$ @- N# }/ p# S& }2 T- ]2 s

- C" x+ d  w8 h4 CWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,4 |& g" l" f6 F  L$ `
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
4 s; F, j- A  uas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.' J9 k# _& z2 @' D1 }( I
Neighbour's handwriting! L7 k# o* [# T, e0 k+ Q
is so vigorous as to be the old trees8 [' t. S% E5 |2 o# o
interwined by dry vines." H+ C" B  w  B" R" @9 ?

. [' V; a0 z3 K! N) uNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
2 P$ V% f' J# {! c3 jShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.; P# J  b; p4 |( F4 k( y
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---  g' Z7 L/ B2 v7 {' I7 H' J6 F5 t
that is the sole sound going into my ears8 e3 ]# m( Y# u" B6 f
from the next side of my wall;* O) ^. T! F) m+ p9 h7 Y) ~3 Q' y
the unknown tune is extolling, g, ^" Y% D/ p& M; y
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,. \' L; b( B% F
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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( ~. e- c2 \, x+ l+ p3 s2 g: l, L/ h土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 2 t1 [( `4 o% i2 f+ n$ P
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
! |- A1 ?+ Y: ?$ l1 P6 x9 A& O& d2 u3 PJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。0 }* `( |: ~% y3 A" z
另外,翻译改动一处:
) c0 v0 {2 p0 h7 c) r- Y+ T3 O& QHer light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
- I; K8 ~- e+ ~* vis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 3 z- g) G3 e! _6 d6 r/ X
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

( `+ y! E% r. i( M  S. ~8 \我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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