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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 ' b' \, m$ d: o  O' z+ z

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+ }; G/ @6 Q$ F0 G我尊贵的邻居
* h5 J6 P' o  p# ^( [) t+ G1 J; [是我们小区  几十户* `" J+ l: e1 M% \
唯一的元老
  C. ]9 t# Z2 W. |' w一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕* [* f% Y* G+ z2 w
白发红颜  不见皱纹6 B# N/ ~" o$ I& Y5 d- m
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
4 Q. G/ P; c9 U) t; m8 O似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
$ P% k5 J, e) [. E- k/ E7 V6 _' f, f; h邻居气宇轩昂
4 S# {( ?) d9 J3 i  [" a如同女面朱熔基4 |# H4 G9 n. j* |
邻居的字5 P1 N$ R& M+ k9 q) u
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤1 ?+ w5 ?/ a9 Q8 ^
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邻居酷喜中国文化
0 y! M$ N) z& L+ N5 t说她属土龙
1 U4 z" {: f1 e; p  u( y; }其笛声也悠扬& R! W/ }) k' q* j  a2 \( h
那是从隔壁传来的
. F1 l/ u9 A9 y$ F7 N唯一的声响0 `+ t+ O( R. x( Q. k) @
那不知名的曲调- k) Y* p; t/ C. K9 ?3 s. w
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
理袁律师事务所
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:5 x) T; X: H0 d3 g- W3 n9 D

+ Z0 M0 x& H& H0 t0 d# JLiving here for more than thirty years,
* i) W5 g+ J- W" O0 Qmy prestigous neighbour
! N7 m! K9 ~9 L( yis the only first owner of the unit properties
- O( ^1 e3 L1 Lin our community ---
( ^: F- y, L0 v* [tens of townhouse condos.2 M) J- G1 \8 `3 ?

! a: k9 j  Z- ^# M. e9 K& ?, _Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
" C, k' H( k, y1 D% G, U. i, omagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.! n& e5 d1 d+ X+ w* h2 e$ Q/ {
She has white hairs and red faces.6 {0 T9 ?9 z' v0 w# ^
Her light-footed movement6 m) d* H* r- B, p  F5 P* p
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane. G2 H2 z8 ~6 Y( C
before driving her own car;  b1 r7 j) H' {# u
she digs her back yard
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as if she did not know what years mean.' q5 E+ j+ W/ M0 `% n" I

% t2 ]6 z" p0 z! u# M7 ]7 uWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
: {" ]) e0 D7 S0 B* {7 X6 eneighbour has a dignified appearance ---8 a* [% l6 G6 S& \1 G  u7 p7 ?
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
6 a" m: p5 h- K$ SNeighbour's handwriting% a, W( J9 r  f
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
& ?7 \: r$ H$ n, ]6 N6 K* Winterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
5 {+ r+ [( X5 i1 d( D" w# ]She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.1 Z9 u8 ?5 d8 s1 a3 s
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
1 F( l5 Q% u/ D8 |. N0 {" u* Xthat is the sole sound going into my ears5 N& s* B, D7 n! O4 H* |' P
from the next side of my wall;
2 l, Z7 N1 W5 X) D" {& zthe unknown tune is extolling- e, I* A2 U0 R0 G, v" x
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,) D( ]- k2 R# C* s5 N" G# m: W
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
5 O, v- A4 L" |" Y  _Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

9 J7 A2 c+ }) Y, z7 |1 y从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
  f( h: `: d- I9 h0 h2 B2 }另外,翻译改动一处:9 ?* H' e/ O5 \; l( j
Her light-footed movement+ \2 ]: Z* I- y% n( K: P
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修改为:; R  v6 q) C' B# q7 Z' ^( `. H
Her light-footed movement
1 m" o! m( p4 ^, [) J! B; yis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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$ O9 _% r, W0 |2 d; {6 ~" M真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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6# Justing
$ k9 Y+ x  c- \; j真的是太像朱镕基了!2 \! A- g2 m6 y  W% z" o3 v
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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