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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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井忘川
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我尊贵的邻居& b8 V3 F9 h3 C9 o( k
是我们小区  几十户6 H, i8 }% K+ f3 N4 z
唯一的元老
9 Y9 Q2 `. z* S- N: P1 ]6 m一住三十多年- Z0 D6 T% G4 P' B

$ F, k5 Q' ]& Y3 p6 L/ W邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕3 m! r9 `* I+ L- [
白发红颜  不见皱纹5 l" Z# H4 Q6 U) T7 O3 m+ N
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
7 H- k2 V9 R: D1 u3 U. c8 @似不识  岁月为何物
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9 H8 H# j3 f+ P1 ^头顶英国文学硕士的光环
9 d! p5 @( e$ [; P% u) L邻居气宇轩昂
; i: p4 p  Q6 {1 \7 {2 I* O3 {+ Z如同女面朱熔基
. y/ [+ t  E/ ?2 `邻居的字, s" c: q# m; P/ \4 B$ X
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤- ^/ n1 D' @- w+ o) N& g. K
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邻居酷喜中国文化  N7 |9 U' }# @) A
说她属土龙8 Q2 P& p. w9 h) X- c3 h
其笛声也悠扬
% z; }9 m5 ]8 w那是从隔壁传来的
! ?. G# I! e+ H唯一的声响
4 l7 I" C8 m. _: {& r) ~那不知名的曲调7 o& Q: w% m# o6 Y" X
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 + W; L' E- a, ^
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英文版,欢迎指正:5 K7 z! n( W. B! e

: M' l; O( s" Y& ULiving here for more than thirty years,
- @" [; m1 ]7 [/ Qmy prestigous neighbour6 B6 t1 z4 C5 h
is the only first owner of the unit properties
) Z) b; w0 t% q" D( _# M( Sin our community --- 2 Z1 @  P9 x& h7 B9 k+ Q+ h$ L; D
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,5 [+ j4 f0 k% J  @3 f( B' e
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
0 G( K0 g& @9 y8 iShe has white hairs and red faces.' v" r' s4 ^7 M- V" X
Her light-footed movement" Z% ~" O( Q& V8 p0 C
is just like a flying swallow.
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7 ]" g' U3 t3 nShe shovels the snow on her door lane& e9 }9 a$ ]# p. ]5 @
before driving her own car;
+ O6 I+ M; k( \she digs her back yard3 B) I5 g+ V. C# d4 f5 F4 u" J! j6 T
to plant flowers ---4 w" Y3 N0 I) U: B
as if she did not know what years mean.2 g1 b1 Q/ |1 K* z3 t
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,# @, C# v: Z/ l
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---# _. a" n6 K& v/ B3 b
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.# @) P8 f# f2 e0 f* i
Neighbour's handwriting+ G; o' W0 [# t# l
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
/ H* I. w" U7 r  pinterwined by dry vines.
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, |. U# X4 S$ D2 d/ P8 l) lNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.3 S! U, x6 m% o1 b
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
& v- I3 v+ r$ W! S5 I6 hWell, her fluting is very melodious ---8 o1 ~( Q$ X" Y7 o& m2 ~' b) e: m
that is the sole sound going into my ears4 N  i7 ?" |/ i4 x
from the next side of my wall;
, z- B3 `* ?# Y$ q$ pthe unknown tune is extolling
( D, z5 u) m5 w7 d$ j0 wthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,# ~' J- d9 _! U7 K2 O
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 1 a6 U( C0 s! s7 S7 t% K

0 H/ M' {, Z% f' R" s) p土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ) I& K' p3 S7 h0 L% l
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
. i0 {- F) ]7 {4 }  C( z* nJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
5 W6 w: r  z  P- J9 s" C另外,翻译改动一处:4 D! {3 z- _* O8 z/ b/ `
Her light-footed movement: g7 N9 V; ]- a+ D1 K% B7 m4 r/ i
is just like a flying swallow.
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% m9 }% r+ P" l* d0 R3 NHer light-footed movement6 N7 f$ g* l/ W5 h: p0 M
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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" `5 h* o% v: {3 I0 s3 ?7 c3 K真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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# l! }" |9 J1 Q6 g8 |" o% X真的是太像朱镕基了!/ ^" k  m7 X, p5 ?1 Z
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

% d) m" g6 P" ~' v我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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