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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居
5 \  n6 L# X8 q3 `( X是我们小区  几十户
# L3 T* |, G2 [  n& T唯一的元老% `- o" @- m( l; T* Z
一住三十多年% }, j! h5 ?( S: R) i- g
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕0 I2 y: o0 D' {- G/ Z& u
白发红颜  不见皱纹( _- o) R8 q# J3 y# p7 h* ?6 G% Y" l
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
: i( h2 ~, m; O9 h, E9 z似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环7 \* H5 t. b( q
邻居气宇轩昂
' V# _7 E' D6 @0 i3 U" [如同女面朱熔基
6 e) G$ y. X/ i邻居的字, \* O1 \: s: Y
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤3 m4 I% r% \# |* x, O# E7 j

" W5 R9 g2 r1 ]邻居酷喜中国文化7 u4 D+ K1 _  ^4 l' N
说她属土龙# k: Y, m: @4 x7 K
其笛声也悠扬
  h$ s9 o, Z$ T; q那是从隔壁传来的
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$ `' c9 |! _0 _& J) [7 H' b& W那不知名的曲调
7 d( O& Q6 |, P0 O; I2 G反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:) t' H6 n8 J% C

' _: W! s  ]* ]6 jLiving here for more than thirty years,
, j4 b/ d# f2 g: kmy prestigous neighbour( [: n, `! p- J2 `& T4 L
is the only first owner of the unit properties1 d8 M* [3 |; X. m$ q9 ~, N% N
in our community ---
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,7 `9 T5 {9 R9 B9 R
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.2 H) y7 Z6 a' ~- F+ F3 |
She has white hairs and red faces.
  n6 N7 I( D* l6 s) e1 ZHer light-footed movement: j7 F* A, U) @  {% Z4 n! l
is just like a flying swallow.9 o6 I7 u, d  p
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard  m6 U  e: w9 t* T: s
to plant flowers ---7 O; s9 i% J+ X( O( L; r
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
( P% A5 ?1 ?6 ^neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
% E1 I% C. b( fas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
% I, E7 s1 J" xNeighbour's handwriting/ H0 T! s2 ^" e/ ~& z5 z' Q
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
. K1 t$ }) Y2 rinterwined by dry vines.  T- x; t* U  A, w! n% Q
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
7 k( e# ]0 y- W2 m$ g( f4 HShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.8 M' o9 Z3 Q+ N( N- X
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
# ~% `1 z  k- R8 l3 ithat is the sole sound going into my ears
1 S5 k, p, ?8 q; V3 S7 d6 d1 Jfrom the next side of my wall;" k& Z* F! N( j3 u* c' f0 L
the unknown tune is extolling1 m/ W4 Q( S- q
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,0 ]: Z" i# q4 G) l% X+ U6 h
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换' J  g/ C( c8 Q$ {, ^
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

3 k& {0 }/ d' _从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。* f) {( z0 ^. j; X9 ]
另外,翻译改动一处:  ^) F; u2 t; Y& l; {
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
9 F: C: B- e! bis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!6 z0 |. m, V1 @, p4 o
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

1 w6 k2 H  E2 c6 r我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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