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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居
' U% r: t9 k8 L; z" s) L是我们小区  几十户
) f+ u' Z) U1 Z8 D$ i6 j% s! @6 r唯一的元老' J, Z* Q) j6 D/ j2 k  W( `
一住三十多年0 a- C5 w* P; w5 G0 b5 a; u8 D/ v% h) J

* r" H" Z$ P( ?: B邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
- H" k1 [9 g7 J2 l6 E; L6 _% O白发红颜  不见皱纹: ^+ u1 H7 ?( Q- B6 P
开车铲雪  挖土栽花& V/ J. ~) G2 U. t: V; A8 z1 `  m
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
# e& Y& u! D$ C. N邻居气宇轩昂% ?( V& H, c4 @2 [4 r8 {* x9 s2 k
如同女面朱熔基
2 j# Z% k& q" X0 ^) ?9 A. c0 D邻居的字, O1 u8 B, H) F7 k/ g5 W
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤& ]" u0 M# w6 V7 \! R. e3 U' ^

% V4 f. C4 {: P$ r7 p# [邻居酷喜中国文化9 {, m/ |' a0 Y* V: N* U! |* M2 A8 p
说她属土龙3 g. P3 F' h  _3 N- z) N
其笛声也悠扬7 \7 [$ \8 K' T2 q) K7 s
那是从隔壁传来的+ I! @: j( _+ D' d0 e
唯一的声响# k. V# s# u' \
那不知名的曲调
$ n# ~2 ^6 C' L% T1 I# A& B反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:& i" p& R+ g! E6 \# @3 O7 W) g
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Living here for more than thirty years,
7 R2 ?$ u) h) [0 D7 l. P% \my prestigous neighbour+ S! J/ c: R1 M; E( s; Y" N
is the only first owner of the unit properties
5 P2 l6 F: {, e4 _. f6 Tin our community --- ; [6 S7 m) Y6 h, @7 Y) l( s) i6 O' M
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,# [7 ?4 f8 y8 V* E$ v' ~& S; V' V
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.( m7 n/ o6 i) x, d5 P* E
She has white hairs and red faces.) s1 z( G; `& @. {* {( S
Her light-footed movement( O) s. T; e9 I1 C7 ^7 T; j. k
is just like a flying swallow./ ?& R. @0 c7 F6 M5 X, l2 ^, S

- Q3 _( N) Y1 {She shovels the snow on her door lane( w, N8 Z. Y" Y) i! e; K0 J' f
before driving her own car;
, t6 E2 B# |& P# L9 g# k! o" T5 q' a2 ~( Yshe digs her back yard& _) X$ \! U' |( L/ V; m
to plant flowers ---  [8 T7 i  q; v# m
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
8 b6 o/ e: D. Y% v5 G, ?: jneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
5 o! g, ?5 S7 c( Xas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
8 h* p' H; [/ G" @$ l& \' |Neighbour's handwriting; ~4 u1 c5 l8 k, O6 r# W
is so vigorous as to be the old trees9 I6 ^( }9 k! ^/ B5 x- D
interwined by dry vines.
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, g0 n5 j# A& `Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
; W! Y$ \1 W5 Q+ x4 V9 oShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.# _+ R6 G; y- T
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
  P  t7 D: l+ @9 j4 Y8 k# C5 gthat is the sole sound going into my ears2 d- ?8 D9 L. Z- L
from the next side of my wall;: w% k* [9 r" B5 D
the unknown tune is extolling
5 p% @6 J3 f( N2 @, @1 [the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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% I, B" N) c8 T) W8 n土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ) S  G  G. p. l" I8 H% f  W
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换8 o( f  p& v" d+ G! Z( k) i
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

% W( [( |7 p3 I% t' `! z. F; _从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。0 K$ D+ h# h) u) y- E
另外,翻译改动一处:
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is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement" V: h; z6 r( V) z- [1 K) \* E
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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