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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 % R& G& L# o% Y. u6 r) }

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我尊贵的邻居
$ g% |# \& r& e3 \: ]4 o是我们小区  几十户
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一住三十多年# \2 z1 a. K# y, B
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
1 T; S4 g6 o0 \% t1 C& h0 s白发红颜  不见皱纹
3 k2 m) P' J3 \8 m" d开车铲雪  挖土栽花7 Y) o; `; z4 S  e, i
似不识  岁月为何物& O$ C7 X/ C2 H  ~

% _& o% v$ G: Z* Q) a/ p  r头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 u) @! i% D( R# N# j邻居气宇轩昂
6 f# [; n2 b) f# }2 L如同女面朱熔基# ~: X$ ^$ k$ R6 n! |7 G" w
邻居的字1 W6 I- w. M" V( ?. m( ]
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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& J& T1 z: f  ~7 B邻居酷喜中国文化
7 Q/ J% r! Y' Z6 O2 V# Y说她属土龙
5 d: E. G3 ~# z& b. d, y8 t其笛声也悠扬: p7 E1 S. Z% d+ h1 ?
那是从隔壁传来的" W8 I2 R' N1 ^8 F+ ]- ?
唯一的声响
  P7 R6 R7 [; Y. |那不知名的曲调) g; Q4 b8 E- X4 E  V9 P5 J( P. [7 Y+ K: D
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ) R! g$ `' a5 c) O1 N; R: W
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英文版,欢迎指正:/ P9 h- i- q$ S+ r" H$ ~% z
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Living here for more than thirty years,
0 b- J0 R3 Q. G. k, q; u( ]my prestigous neighbour4 R$ E' d1 l# T$ {& e0 f, ?
is the only first owner of the unit properties. E. M7 ^9 T( d5 D9 A! n5 n* k
in our community ---
3 n; K4 c7 P9 {$ utens of townhouse condos., ?8 d2 i. N* L
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.
' p( \6 \; }8 v% ?Her light-footed movement2 H5 b# C- @  l& N2 r. s
is just like a flying swallow./ C* J3 a" S/ R8 t0 |- U

! d$ [5 A$ W* p3 T3 A( G5 Y% e* DShe shovels the snow on her door lane7 G; Z/ v: Z, L( N- C9 x8 p- r
before driving her own car;
- m$ K' v% l, T7 N/ G# S: {she digs her back yard3 u  k/ ]* M2 ^& ^( S
to plant flowers ---
. b$ B$ O6 S# }4 Q$ N4 D# T( pas if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,$ c1 I2 R+ T$ l2 K: W$ i
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
! A! |3 e) x" a% Sas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.! \: y+ F5 |1 N3 A; ?8 C9 W
Neighbour's handwriting
/ }! n5 C7 H! t, M6 Jis so vigorous as to be the old trees
" n) T3 `8 a6 h) h2 @8 |* H* Zinterwined by dry vines.
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0 T- C/ y% H. f$ FNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
2 Z; B' X# z( l2 i# tShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
- i, j$ d5 |7 C( iWell, her fluting is very melodious ---. D$ C: ]( }/ C. U2 @+ ?+ [
that is the sole sound going into my ears$ N$ W) M: |/ U4 A. B4 u
from the next side of my wall;
1 Q7 G. [0 |6 `% W5 M) kthe unknown tune is extolling  l5 s" d: V9 ^+ L' K7 x2 F0 k
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
5 i& n/ H' F1 S6 y- o" vagain and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 5 e" b% ]4 L/ z
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换, Q: d/ w& n% q. R+ j" a! m
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
- @; ~) |1 L0 p/ w& o另外,翻译改动一处:
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is just like a flying swallow.  Q) d  ]( q) \7 [4 W$ c/ _: W' c
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Her light-footed movement
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鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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6# Justing
8 r: z) \+ w+ j, E: m) c* F) W真的是太像朱镕基了!4 N( |5 k" A- O5 d  A
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

5 [& b& ^3 z* n# N$ ]7 t& ~我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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