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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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: Z$ H4 ~7 U: {  n, a4 ?! U9 P# ^我尊贵的邻居
7 W" m3 K3 _- _, k1 O4 |' e. u是我们小区  几十户9 T* Y. R' X: w* R
唯一的元老4 O% z/ |' J3 ~1 D% [
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕" x+ v+ |) K2 e$ M7 Z1 w
白发红颜  不见皱纹9 ^0 p3 W3 }+ o8 x) x; @
开车铲雪  挖土栽花& \0 X) J/ e& V  V4 ]- ~% S# J- S1 N
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
: `8 J- M- |3 y: B0 a! c/ o邻居气宇轩昂
7 X1 Z& P% ?* e' ^2 j( `$ R如同女面朱熔基
9 ^, `1 ~# j& R3 N9 @邻居的字
6 Y, ~$ x$ y" W4 ?则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤+ q5 ~( L7 h) y8 H4 O
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邻居酷喜中国文化
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其笛声也悠扬
( Z, X6 p# C; N: `. l那是从隔壁传来的
6 E$ r  M; o5 g; J; l: p0 W1 U唯一的声响
9 y$ E1 ]7 C, S, Z那不知名的曲调
# H$ |+ [9 z, u% ]# n- z5 G: p0 ?反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,: T' }9 q- ^) |; T, P, x* V- x  g
my prestigous neighbour
" d$ K# K$ L6 ris the only first owner of the unit properties% t6 A7 u7 t! w+ I
in our community --- ( B7 K% t" }% i, x6 j: \9 l* ]$ E
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old," [4 y2 M* G1 Q: T( k6 n6 u
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.2 P- d: H- @# p+ K: y
She has white hairs and red faces.
/ @; A0 T1 I+ t. ^' T! M1 R3 ]Her light-footed movement& m( U3 m$ J( V7 p; o: m! A
is just like a flying swallow.5 ?4 J, A& A* S6 O7 T) v/ a
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She shovels the snow on her door lane3 M0 V9 R! X5 D; A+ L$ ]$ [3 m; b, j
before driving her own car;
' _! X) L$ \  e3 X) ashe digs her back yard! G% j* }5 N3 [* }/ C! A, J
to plant flowers ---5 F+ t% y( e8 H) D% |; \. {
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,9 u! C$ |" x3 O* G  n
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---4 z+ v" S9 s: {4 n
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
+ W) \  ~( {2 iNeighbour's handwriting
4 l2 k; V$ _" g3 x5 Eis so vigorous as to be the old trees0 [. h: w6 z% h; Y
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
0 K2 c9 a6 N8 h+ E5 aShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.4 V; X: C% y! {# y7 V/ {7 m
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---5 b2 P8 }& ?5 q$ f4 `4 X
that is the sole sound going into my ears+ T4 Z7 q" K0 h. _; C- C3 K
from the next side of my wall;4 ^0 y8 Y( e$ b/ O, E! X: ?
the unknown tune is extolling
' N1 y# W# K, e7 [- Y. zthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
4 D' t8 O+ [% |8 j1 Ragain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ; y# @  j; @5 D) z- ~" j; _: o
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换# i9 @5 F( C7 Y9 a
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

' }6 \* o% M/ }& M- \- _从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
2 ?. T) x+ C& a6 B/ H# ]Her light-footed movement
3 W2 A6 @" Y) s# ?& ^' Tis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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真的是太像朱镕基了!# k4 J  q& }: F
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

7 D( b( z2 p+ X我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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