我尊贵的邻居(11)

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井忘川
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4 _3 G0 ?( W+ y8 o% Z我尊贵的邻居
3 A+ A7 k# a3 O是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
一住三十多年

邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
. O( b; F+ }) N( n; I白发红颜  不见皱纹
8 E5 P5 ]9 s. ~+ Y* S开车铲雪  挖土栽花
- M+ \8 ~, U+ m0 c$ W2 W. k7 W  b似不识  岁月为何物

头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
# o3 n$ j4 p. Y( n如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
: }/ ^) w# ]( ^则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

6 `& D$ ?/ T# t: B- v8 a邻居酷喜中国文化
# k& b/ \" L/ W# U4 R说她属土龙
( K: Q7 _; E" r3 H: t% z- ^. v0 ]其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
- ]3 h* b+ C( j8 k$ H( D唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
; B( S. h- u6 w: A反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：
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+ w! c9 ?% S& x4 e; p& SLiving here for more than thirty years,
; X% g4 W( o. o! K/ pmy prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
; F# \( q' a4 Z" A: Ein our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
4 b- C' r6 S1 C" Kmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
9 ~9 ^8 J, ?; i2 w7 k! P% I% nShe has white hairs and red faces.
& i1 F1 u- s* w4 v& b. g3 qHer light-footed movement
( a0 W7 y' U1 v  R( i- eis just like a flying swallow.

She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.
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" [# {* `$ }. S4 Y* o0 ?5 iWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
! J& i0 U6 z$ |9 G$ b4 Yneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.
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5 J0 s2 J$ h8 ~8 J$ uNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
/ q/ f- l$ u' p- i& L, L7 |Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
: U5 @. o4 P6 S& W; cthe unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

5 ~2 I8 Z, n) D2 ]7 E3 ~: L从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
! L' M7 i0 y0 `另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
9 G, n: z9 T  s, |2 H: b; S$ Gis just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。