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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居" }( p' L6 u2 K( ]% q! C
是我们小区  几十户( |  t) c9 R/ Z9 ~
唯一的元老' t6 ~" c' A: g. `* D) g
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
6 g; J6 t: W9 }: H! L8 N' ^白发红颜  不见皱纹
; z4 F5 g" N( \3 C3 |开车铲雪  挖土栽花, Z) a7 ^% G, R# o
似不识  岁月为何物
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* J2 R9 l4 b7 F6 p头顶英国文学硕士的光环4 i0 M" y; y! I
邻居气宇轩昂
+ z, G* `9 ?* w  f0 Q$ ?& C- i3 B& L如同女面朱熔基
" L5 d# e. [2 W0 y3 m邻居的字
+ s7 O3 q+ K! E- S' t) k% h则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
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7 n' j# I  M# ~$ r6 T; m' H/ b. ?0 Z其笛声也悠扬( u! b) d. Y. S; F' s
那是从隔壁传来的) X  o; R, F4 _5 p; P
唯一的声响2 U# o" a3 A+ ?3 \0 |# {* J
那不知名的曲调8 y5 y4 e$ m1 |" w( i0 W
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑   o5 W; S  `& C, `

6 K9 p2 d! S! I; \) E英文版,欢迎指正:. x, `! K4 o3 B* ^
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Living here for more than thirty years,
1 G1 t& l" s+ e0 G8 jmy prestigous neighbour
2 F' v  c5 ?  j  W' n( a) [is the only first owner of the unit properties9 U! |% @4 B/ C1 M, }( p$ |
in our community ---
7 a$ o$ `4 C, Q, U7 ^  Otens of townhouse condos.
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& H1 w2 H1 T; Y0 v% ?/ ?4 f# kNeighbour is more than eighty years old,  w9 |& k+ P; c" b
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.; z" P+ s5 O- S8 N2 ]9 a
She has white hairs and red faces.
4 `3 K8 E. t  |& @) @& u$ gHer light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
2 T7 O; d/ v1 j# h$ ]before driving her own car;- L) x& c7 R* m* `; `
she digs her back yard; G3 g! q) x3 \* N6 o
to plant flowers ---
  S! r: N# s  C2 i9 m0 uas if she did not know what years mean.3 ^% a* ^4 J4 t& C1 @/ _/ x

! q/ h4 A2 V4 Z& K$ v) w/ W( GWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
' k$ j! A- D* s3 C- k5 |$ }neighbour has a dignified appearance ---- c" O8 l5 x( s: a, y/ }9 y
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
5 P/ V! D. M2 [# X% k* k3 q3 iNeighbour's handwriting0 ~& @0 Y) a# s: X! P6 l9 |: l+ C
is so vigorous as to be the old trees7 [* s" i7 b% r; j
interwined by dry vines.4 h* F: Y4 Q1 L8 V  O" C/ H
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
: Z! {, I' u5 G' R1 UShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
2 @3 o" ], ^! w( EWell, her fluting is very melodious ---6 ^) S# ^% `: s/ z9 d9 M3 N+ q1 K
that is the sole sound going into my ears( t: I3 D+ G; F( g; ^
from the next side of my wall;; G4 l+ ]( O5 x( Q9 l  P( h) e+ U3 h3 U3 p
the unknown tune is extolling5 P) c5 s$ o) y  J, t
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,2 p3 F$ x' W' z; k9 D" ?! C5 a
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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6 f/ J) u2 a! o' ~( i/ T土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 3 N- D! ^: O  N, q1 w
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换) V1 i7 y* f* H6 y2 D+ ~
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

: q/ O( w) g0 I8 z! F) H' {, S从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。+ g- X1 q3 f, v4 E; R; Z4 z
另外,翻译改动一处:- h/ h- F# s$ o. d% }! ]
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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1 Z1 r% s+ w, A6 [0 lhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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