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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 3 `7 e. \- B- s5 y, r6 _) p

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是我们小区  几十户) s- @' G" n9 u$ q4 W
唯一的元老
# g) K! U3 N0 ], d一住三十多年
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# E( j' o3 s+ k' x6 }邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
3 v9 z& B: C2 v1 t) C白发红颜  不见皱纹/ |( ]3 p) o/ C. v/ X
开车铲雪  挖土栽花% I6 h8 |; O$ o" g( Y8 N6 r
似不识  岁月为何物) ^( [/ q+ W8 \4 n

3 \  e% L; ^7 y! ^头顶英国文学硕士的光环6 n0 L) j& d; \$ A
邻居气宇轩昂* p: ~0 ]6 a: S0 I) {
如同女面朱熔基, I* A# P4 [0 w9 l7 z
邻居的字
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邻居酷喜中国文化% A6 f! L0 G" p/ \8 n: X( }; Y
说她属土龙
( E* [" K" Y0 T7 P% P4 ^其笛声也悠扬, [. }. d7 y, [% y
那是从隔壁传来的
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那不知名的曲调
( u6 x6 ~, J# l4 ?& {反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,
4 s- Y) x$ ]2 B: q' _# \my prestigous neighbour/ Z1 a9 [6 H0 Q9 C
is the only first owner of the unit properties
+ o; f+ H4 o- ^8 Cin our community ---
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.
# ^  p; z# G# r; M" J  jHer light-footed movement
( |1 ?- C3 o8 T, T4 X; p4 Zis just like a flying swallow.8 e6 ^' [. q7 P- F$ j" t+ P

, J+ {  J! x% T7 r' SShe shovels the snow on her door lane
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/ W- d: c! v. ]+ Hshe digs her back yard
3 }* M3 |/ ?( @" S1 h8 D5 Zto plant flowers ---1 {  H7 Z8 a. z- u
as if she did not know what years mean.
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, G- ^2 r7 U# B! W4 e+ [1 i( EWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
  d& N  Y* Z  c: F0 z, Jneighbour has a dignified appearance ---8 l( A2 T/ ]* D2 F# y( [
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.( b8 x0 S/ [: G% |5 |6 o
Neighbour's handwriting
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interwined by dry vines.8 p" f! s# f3 [8 h( p

3 j( ^$ o; y. I* z) F" z' {Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.: q% L% q) g8 }! I& G: f/ v
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
8 f+ ~9 Y! C5 l' n9 ^Well, her fluting is very melodious ---& y7 t" ?1 @% C2 a
that is the sole sound going into my ears( b+ [  C9 D) a4 W2 [& ]9 X
from the next side of my wall;+ k9 C; ~0 S" B- q  @# @% k2 d8 S
the unknown tune is extolling. ^0 W; _6 m3 h# P( h9 S* F
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,3 d# r2 r9 A  v: y  u. R3 V
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
. I/ O0 B4 K1 z8 tJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement  K- V+ ?8 T; ^( J3 u' ]
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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