我尊贵的邻居(11)

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6 i& U2 A# J5 L0 ?我尊贵的邻居
2 S/ L7 x1 g; G4 h. j* K9 G( S是我们小区  几十户
2 e/ |2 z' J* K! P唯一的元老
一住三十多年

& k$ t) q7 K4 z, ^邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
5 h9 G* ?5 |, y9 J; Z: x3 v开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

3 [, C  L+ B3 S8 [0 m头顶英国文学硕士的光环
! T0 {9 F; ]" M/ S4 I邻居气宇轩昂
7 g$ i- y5 {) e: @5 A0 i: J0 g  Q如同女面朱熔基
邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
$ n, Q1 \; ?+ U/ c' r% M6 V- N8 B说她属土龙
) r$ V1 }) P  W% Z7 e& e, P# U" p其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
4 S6 n0 X$ l. _, M唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
( ]& s4 |+ k4 S' j- o8 _6 z反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

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这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：
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Living here for more than thirty years,
$ a/ l0 r% v/ x, vmy prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
$ w; \; Z2 N. _* W0 ?, q7 Kin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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! j4 v$ b7 @6 O" ?5 iNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
* x7 y" B9 P/ X3 I( o. w6 p; Z5 r5 Xmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
3 h8 O& ]* U) C9 n1 f" @She has white hairs and red faces.
6 v/ n5 W" i* M) X3 ?7 JHer light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.

She shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
( R6 d+ A) f  yshe digs her back yard
: u# h* `3 E2 }; ?to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
" Y/ W, b7 j6 d4 W1 W8 Vneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
! t$ K9 v( z: T7 Y" o* nNeighbour's handwriting
$ D2 g' f; s5 i5 v- ?is so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
+ Z2 B5 b; @5 fShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
: H- S/ P% E* `$ ?, x7 X, zthat is the sole sound going into my ears
9 J. Y' g/ }3 Efrom the next side of my wall;
4 Z  E9 K3 d1 |) g* d0 Q7 z0 T8 [7 A0 Dthe unknown tune is extolling
) J, f3 e; _% @1 @# l4 \the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
0 {7 Q1 D/ U! W- [' p3 magain and again.

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9 i+ q& N6 H& D0 X& g  P土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
# g* K& i! _8 V+ I3 Q% qJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

6 }: ~: \1 v9 V. e; \: {7 Y从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
( k4 o+ D+ T& b4 Y9 b& y; o/ l3 X1 a- Q另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
修改为：
9 q6 X5 M! a. y& b6 I, I" |* UHer light-footed movement
8 D! a- s8 g4 d) I! M, Y0 qis just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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9 f' d0 O2 `2 S2 R! L- J8 ~5 l真的是太像朱镕基了！

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
" Y. Q/ p9 v5 l) Thm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

: [4 a% t$ I; a7 k2 M5 _+ D我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。