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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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- @& V. P% c3 u  _$ Q我尊贵的邻居' ~4 o5 V; B7 H  l, Z3 c
是我们小区  几十户
% s1 D) \6 v! N, e, K; ?3 _1 u唯一的元老% L1 P0 {4 F+ F3 r( Y8 g0 F. y
一住三十多年( f( U( [0 V) D" z/ ~5 A

% Z, p. L5 ?& w4 T邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
. z6 z1 m" }% M. A9 T* T. v$ I白发红颜  不见皱纹0 ^* ~$ [. p# H" v; h: d
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
9 h9 ]# L' P3 N: S# v5 q* p; a, V似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
$ p) _" W$ M8 X邻居气宇轩昂6 z8 u2 u8 X8 F5 E/ W
如同女面朱熔基0 |- T4 i. g6 c
邻居的字4 m7 `" ?5 Q. O9 S6 k& v
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化6 j4 v9 z" C6 N- W! H  h  l; ?# B3 E
说她属土龙# Z6 Z% X! S8 X5 [* i9 {
其笛声也悠扬6 R  L0 w1 q. T4 F- v
那是从隔壁传来的
  D4 B2 B/ H6 V唯一的声响
2 U' I# |( _6 @8 c: A那不知名的曲调# r& A3 B5 m$ N; Y
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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, _, P* v- }# N9 i英文版,欢迎指正:- R, y9 ]& a. b; R; p

: N2 u% ]1 r! ], c3 TLiving here for more than thirty years,
' ]! l! k) E& A, R: l! Q% hmy prestigous neighbour
3 i; G1 _- ?- c8 T0 bis the only first owner of the unit properties- @  r( S, U" ?1 V& Z/ J
in our community --- 7 H: y& m. _4 v. e6 S$ L' Q
tens of townhouse condos.: Y2 n1 {' q) q& Z( c) W; S
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
( q8 z: F- w# }* L! jmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
" M& Y" z$ j1 Y* W5 d; kShe has white hairs and red faces.- l: {8 d/ h/ T3 `0 T, g8 o6 N
Her light-footed movement8 \/ e9 A2 q1 X5 L4 H  t1 W
is just like a flying swallow.2 H2 q0 P* M9 M/ e

& R5 M( t3 D6 E  ?- I/ lShe shovels the snow on her door lane* y4 O0 N& a+ }' I7 a! n2 L
before driving her own car;
6 b) Y; U$ p+ E, c9 U4 v5 r3 zshe digs her back yard
6 D3 d9 d6 w: ]1 S( J$ [, kto plant flowers ---4 L6 C; m: e/ H+ `
as if she did not know what years mean.
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4 O4 w6 W0 j5 m/ lWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,, V6 P  j7 e" P( F
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---1 S' ~' f$ A7 t" _* r
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
! _- z+ V9 u& s; k# x* l" `, lNeighbour's handwriting
" u, L& F# s2 ~% C- b9 j6 ]1 His so vigorous as to be the old trees% g! ]* S3 Y1 d! x- U7 {8 N
interwined by dry vines.4 u% @3 d4 D6 k' ?+ K

" C4 ?1 R) _0 g$ A. g6 T0 kNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
) E2 x9 o2 G9 R3 E3 sShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon., T# }8 m! q# r5 g& G1 l3 D
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
% ?/ q+ Y6 \( @that is the sole sound going into my ears
5 I7 K+ Q! h2 [3 i  J8 {) y" Cfrom the next side of my wall;
7 v! w/ S/ B5 [) pthe unknown tune is extolling" D+ N% @0 F4 b0 {. Y8 d4 Z
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,. _  J7 U* U2 t5 A3 w) X7 ?
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 2 U; C! M2 b5 [. @) z# O! h
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换6 @) J3 _  A; A" {5 R
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

& T6 {0 S3 X5 J  b4 E从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement+ l3 B9 J' @6 x) l+ o) h. z
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
( \4 t! u" N; o+ x4 Mis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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6# Justing
) R3 B, C( Y$ D& u1 @真的是太像朱镕基了!
2 r- r% U# e  F0 v5 F- O: i2 Lhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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