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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 ( T. x; f2 a* W! m( s4 I

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我尊贵的邻居; g  k) c& _4 R- x
是我们小区  几十户
( @% B5 q& ]8 p: s* _# J唯一的元老  F3 l9 n3 u2 r
一住三十多年  @7 e3 r, D0 _7 k$ Q, a4 f& t5 f

4 V! J& y5 U  E$ I2 d4 y# @  Y邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
1 D$ g' j! _7 ?. p/ o白发红颜  不见皱纹
7 w" O, i8 _( g8 _/ G' \. w: a开车铲雪  挖土栽花) @3 l8 D; D" j6 i
似不识  岁月为何物
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8 @* y- P5 P+ Q' p1 N$ I1 \; d头顶英国文学硕士的光环& P, c* y# K" ?! D1 |4 Y! T  D
邻居气宇轩昂
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邻居的字$ R* Y% q2 z0 H9 T0 t
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤) g# z+ X, |0 P- C3 n6 f
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邻居酷喜中国文化' }* \# i3 \. j) v" S/ Z  w
说她属土龙
3 \& d9 E: z+ h其笛声也悠扬
% R6 Y# F' ]  I1 L8 H. v. U那是从隔壁传来的# \/ d: n' R0 O! H, |$ r
唯一的声响
' A  t. N' @. E9 r, v1 o/ a那不知名的曲调
0 h0 @2 E8 e8 ~3 S反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 # w, u$ A2 J( m% q
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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4 l, l# Y$ ?0 u% q$ V7 |: |Living here for more than thirty years," t4 ~) {+ N2 ?8 |' y2 R
my prestigous neighbour' o9 Y$ @: K6 j0 H6 M: {
is the only first owner of the unit properties$ z1 p( |! ^9 G# x* O5 O
in our community ---
8 K3 g; W" S* @* [7 Ctens of townhouse condos.7 g: `; `0 q8 ~- N" F7 r  G! T

5 h* Y( V% Y  s  N3 |8 G: fNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
9 m0 x! G3 u5 P, Rmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.* Q2 l$ H( {  g, ~' J2 q8 T
She has white hairs and red faces.! e- J  v1 S  Z9 C* g
Her light-footed movement7 _" U1 Q( K* j3 J1 |; ?) h
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard- k2 n# C( v5 x/ n2 l9 i; B# ~4 B, }$ N
to plant flowers ---  S" U6 Y7 F" ^7 \' |
as if she did not know what years mean.
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, j- H6 Q' m5 T3 dWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,% `. f6 q! H& c! Y: n
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
$ H1 C4 i/ ~* Z! b0 Cas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.& ~" b: J/ g! r; ~7 Q9 {
Neighbour's handwriting
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interwined by dry vines.
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# K$ ?1 ~8 E  y7 QNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
# |6 R( B& e4 E& w+ D% B5 [She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.& M& r3 S" c  e7 j
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
9 c. R& Z, j& @# `+ H: [  ~+ L' C: ethat is the sole sound going into my ears
3 l8 V' e+ u. l8 j( I; B9 ^9 yfrom the next side of my wall;
& T* J+ X' d$ ~- x% Jthe unknown tune is extolling
8 P8 L( H/ O- `# X& V2 kthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
. z1 J+ F& r) f# o2 v7 kagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 : T( w! y* o( F; H
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
, Z/ T" ^3 Z$ U1 tJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。: V& m0 ~; r( N% `% o8 ^$ f  x6 W
另外,翻译改动一处:
& N3 j1 \' V" W4 G- D( E, wHer light-footed movement6 p6 M2 M5 n6 ?5 C& Z: g
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement5 C  u( p' j7 t
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 7 d& s" Z* t& u9 `3 _' l4 X
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# S) i6 d4 H; ^我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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