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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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( c; }* B. e- L9 k我尊贵的邻居; F) B1 ~1 Q/ G* {. \0 y3 k
是我们小区  几十户; S6 Z% L0 m" d& X& r
唯一的元老
2 [8 o+ i' o! C* }+ O: v; ]' }, c* H一住三十多年8 M: P" |, Y6 ^# T7 v& \# t% h

7 C- K% r: x1 j' R/ i邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕6 G0 I' {1 k+ k$ f
白发红颜  不见皱纹
2 l0 K% y8 n) v1 C/ P开车铲雪  挖土栽花
. T$ `: j  F+ ?' {' u' E9 D2 ], P似不识  岁月为何物# Q  u- V) Q! s  v3 a4 u

( ~2 u% E; o! Q: ~/ o头顶英国文学硕士的光环2 }/ g) g1 P7 A( N* {" E
邻居气宇轩昂) a5 _% ]% a9 E5 }  b$ F
如同女面朱熔基
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则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化4 S/ e7 B" r3 S& `* u7 |' u
说她属土龙7 N- O9 |9 r9 d0 A2 T: Y
其笛声也悠扬3 C" u* a" {6 ^% [! j7 ^; p
那是从隔壁传来的- C1 O9 m! q3 p1 `
唯一的声响
+ E/ \- D6 e6 H; T" j: W那不知名的曲调
0 `0 i# K8 m1 X! y反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,2 S0 M8 A. ?5 H0 ?9 S0 }' i8 m
my prestigous neighbour; p2 P! O' p9 h- D
is the only first owner of the unit properties1 M$ q) U. i6 t3 P8 H9 a
in our community ---
/ l- u+ e4 C3 v( \+ atens of townhouse condos.
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4 v- S6 }/ P! D! e7 b0 wNeighbour is more than eighty years old,' {1 \$ ?& N+ q, w
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
. |! N8 S9 S/ W) M1 q2 hShe has white hairs and red faces./ h! G9 r( y1 y- y
Her light-footed movement- u0 X% A$ D* h% X' Q
is just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane5 Z- n  _& V+ ^, ]' j9 s
before driving her own car;
- y6 h% K$ C# P5 N( i2 _' q! Pshe digs her back yard
" `4 E. ~. Y& e1 x: Jto plant flowers ---
+ u$ p+ X. V# F2 vas if she did not know what years mean.8 \% {$ g% i: f, V
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,0 N/ |- z* `& b
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
; H0 x) `- w6 m. r+ m/ B" Q: w, t/ Uas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
5 ~. O% Q( `, m. R8 p8 XNeighbour's handwriting
# p# S2 }, T# J; }is so vigorous as to be the old trees
8 r4 G# F+ H; G2 r% iinterwined by dry vines.
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1 Y- Q' m- E. S( q( r8 f9 L2 J' w) f- VNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.- M+ S$ G+ r* T0 y9 m
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.: Z/ ?9 w8 S# g! w0 p
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
% k! x, K5 U4 c* H4 q' J% R* Bthat is the sole sound going into my ears
& J4 H3 z+ L% ~. d9 vfrom the next side of my wall;
  E) f, C0 K5 mthe unknown tune is extolling- A5 e. M  J9 R4 l8 o4 D
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
* u6 N) ~- m9 g6 vagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 2 a, a$ O2 p( s4 |9 z
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换, k) }3 k1 M$ C( m; ^& \) J
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
- G5 y2 F3 O' R7 U' A( e; y另外,翻译改动一处:
$ ^) Q/ p: {+ yHer light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement7 p1 P1 n( J7 W" F! P
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 : N+ i; J- L1 d1 P% G2 G
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0 \. S" S# r7 N真的是太像朱镕基了!
& h, S/ c3 N; o& u; X9 ^; Mhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

3 E* T' ~$ s( F9 y3 [我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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