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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 5 i; }! W& G7 u+ ?9 L% y/ z2 v

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5 @' _, T4 C6 N& @我尊贵的邻居3 r2 |/ p0 N; R1 a2 u' P
是我们小区  几十户
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
: r& H2 }; M: ?! ~2 }+ _4 Y白发红颜  不见皱纹
* f7 m% k0 k$ J开车铲雪  挖土栽花
/ T! B) o) [7 Z( ^. d! b似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环: ?: q# b5 u1 m  s: d1 k- @
邻居气宇轩昂; F. m! Y, p3 [( V2 E
如同女面朱熔基+ u7 U- k8 O% T3 V$ R
邻居的字1 }  T, _2 q+ J0 L; {4 I
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤' p2 h5 p+ K6 f2 v4 o

" c$ \/ X' u9 x) E0 V邻居酷喜中国文化+ N- ~2 i9 I# r, m" @0 N
说她属土龙
  b# N& j3 g. s/ w& z; H: y其笛声也悠扬" k; k% n/ \: Z' Z- d# j' U
那是从隔壁传来的/ g; S; R! D1 R  j  t0 H
唯一的声响
5 w8 D$ y  t; [) k, j那不知名的曲调
4 t. c' V! k+ C& t6 ?3 c反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:# U2 Z/ Y$ ]  Z. M1 k
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Living here for more than thirty years,. E) H, T& G; H1 v3 P; e
my prestigous neighbour
' S- D* \) j! S" D4 q) ?9 Ais the only first owner of the unit properties
7 s& ?0 s5 E* R1 U% f6 Xin our community ---
& o5 @% b) T5 t8 C6 ]$ T2 A8 [tens of townhouse condos.$ g! R# ]4 O9 v7 l' l' p' a
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,) j! b4 s; f+ d4 j7 N  j, P
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.; C* v  u( V' O( z1 ]. t4 @
She has white hairs and red faces.
  L: b% {8 x6 ]6 d, [" {Her light-footed movement
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1 S) ?$ ~8 j9 U  ZShe shovels the snow on her door lane
8 y& k- M, [  {; Ybefore driving her own car;
) y/ M$ H6 q$ t) Z! M& r4 sshe digs her back yard
+ O' P) {3 A1 G) T; rto plant flowers ---" B5 ?( v" j9 g6 U
as if she did not know what years mean.& Q: n. N& i- [+ R% I9 Y# T5 u# X
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,; O# @6 _2 B- E' S. c0 K/ m
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---: L% U' P' j% m& J+ x+ z' \
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.* a9 F( b8 k1 y4 V' ~0 i( \. i
Neighbour's handwriting' i$ x! C# i  i! z
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
7 b( N  j1 f5 s; finterwined by dry vines.& R$ K$ E3 Q: ]% b
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
1 D) j8 O; Q2 U2 J; T% Y5 SShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.8 P2 W9 x6 t( U5 ^. [' a) S7 L
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
  o: a! B) j1 hthat is the sole sound going into my ears- Z$ R8 P' X1 B; s% \. c& ~! ~
from the next side of my wall;3 V# Z: F. P7 H  k& t
the unknown tune is extolling
. i! q* {, k% ~8 ?* j; s# Hthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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4 x, g4 K: B5 X3 r; [7 g% D土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 ) T3 `2 N1 I% V- |- b. ]( o6 H# G
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
3 ^" A: o7 K% C* ~* sJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

+ G6 k9 X: m) `$ j0 i2 Z3 [从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
2 Z% M: i; J0 H/ Y2 R. x' p9 C另外,翻译改动一处:. a1 }. q% x1 G- B+ l$ b2 d# v
Her light-footed movement, C6 C' K6 y: d; O+ U
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement  _" R( a$ c6 V+ t" p
is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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! n+ z2 T0 @" |% Z2 q' S% }真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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7 D( F, R5 |# t; _0 ?' @1 E2 rhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

4 I: y: \! Q" y! t$ T我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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