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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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我尊贵的邻居
: E( F& y+ f' a是我们小区  几十户
* [' y/ B7 d! W1 l! h唯一的元老
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( k' M- X8 B+ u) E$ [邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
& |# q+ l* h  C- |! o白发红颜  不见皱纹, r- _# t% L* q& f! p( c
开车铲雪  挖土栽花6 \0 A4 t: D) g& O
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环# |8 ^0 r% B1 L" I
邻居气宇轩昂9 _% n. ~* |8 r1 o
如同女面朱熔基
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则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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+ v! t$ m0 A& G- {  {8 A* I6 b邻居酷喜中国文化  t6 G, g. C& ^1 r5 X; D/ g
说她属土龙
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那是从隔壁传来的9 }2 U" T) U+ O2 }( f. ~% d
唯一的声响
* T4 Z, Y0 |' w4 k那不知名的曲调
" J+ B) ]7 l! Y* X0 ]; S反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 & F( k: W9 O  @. ?! Y

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Living here for more than thirty years,
: w6 y. [" T( W; x7 _& `my prestigous neighbour
5 i1 A- c" I- l3 ^is the only first owner of the unit properties
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tens of townhouse condos.) f# j# h2 Z8 }) k3 x. l4 _# s
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,/ _4 F" k1 |8 X: T, ?6 @. H
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
5 Z& m! j; |" G  n# eShe has white hairs and red faces.' }, K# j: X' `3 m: u, u$ R
Her light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard' T7 R- e$ W3 c  C" v
to plant flowers ---* t( U! H# R/ w( D
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
- a  W( s6 \6 M2 Dneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
- [; g3 `! g0 E/ vas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
% m3 ~6 k) [2 \- P8 `6 mNeighbour's handwriting
5 R7 d) @# O2 [1 F' F7 His so vigorous as to be the old trees* I* @# F' E) p& ]" c. |
interwined by dry vines.) A, R8 h. E, Y* a# G* |
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.1 T: J4 \4 Q4 S7 V; g
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
0 }0 i, S2 [3 r! y1 c* _# i4 lWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
7 s- y, S+ d5 r$ Qthat is the sole sound going into my ears
. E8 p* t  O4 v1 m& I3 y1 Z" N3 xfrom the next side of my wall;  ^7 N4 h2 P* _0 U5 ~1 i
the unknown tune is extolling: Z& g( f$ f9 a
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 7 s2 f, [, V1 A6 G2 T2 y
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
大型搬家
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换) `9 i8 x& a1 ]* u! `
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
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Her light-footed movement
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修改为:
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is just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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0 T$ c" g8 d! Z" ?$ Z# Q& Q" k真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 " p& T- l. ]8 d; e5 w0 ~* p' h
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% c; `) X  X2 v真的是太像朱镕基了!, f) \4 ?) N9 x: B6 n* b2 Z" I
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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