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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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4 m8 M$ y5 d1 {我尊贵的邻居
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一住三十多年( g$ K) ?3 Y) w6 m- O
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕: C1 _: n8 T* e% w
白发红颜  不见皱纹
( ~, S$ c% u7 u: ~' H开车铲雪  挖土栽花
" g* l3 k& J. c5 O8 }; w4 j似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环5 |5 I8 Q# ~$ v1 ]: M. j5 C! M% X8 ]
邻居气宇轩昂
% S6 R; t* _3 R0 o1 c8 o. a如同女面朱熔基
9 g( [% N9 y$ h+ V邻居的字, K! S# Y$ v: K! q6 ]0 C/ l
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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8 c( E- e) r5 Q: W5 I9 Z: y* `邻居酷喜中国文化3 t! Y; \! v6 A9 `8 K2 I" G
说她属土龙
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那是从隔壁传来的9 ]5 L1 [( S" P( R# W/ c. J
唯一的声响6 F& y  l: z! `1 k- u. G
那不知名的曲调7 V, i8 F0 o4 d& _  V  Q
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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英文版,欢迎指正:8 |) G8 U! W* m6 I
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Living here for more than thirty years,
; |6 t& r7 Y# g" K/ [' k* R5 hmy prestigous neighbour- s; K) W+ Y7 {; J, e+ x
is the only first owner of the unit properties0 k: p3 g) M5 t/ o" L2 ^1 e; t
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tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.0 p1 E2 K5 I3 f. g6 c/ y8 D  l& [
Her light-footed movement3 T1 Y" [+ [6 U; H( `* @
is just like a flying swallow.
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: K0 r) a- Z( t/ sShe shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard: b8 Q  [$ \+ [
to plant flowers ---/ f0 |# Z9 @9 Y+ y  X
as if she did not know what years mean.
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4 }" _/ m% [8 S$ S, }  e4 M4 bWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
& q7 D8 ^# S6 ?neighbour has a dignified appearance ---  m# d  [/ L  i3 W; @; ]
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu." z7 z  o0 i6 l; ]+ C
Neighbour's handwriting
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.3 ?- {  b4 s& H
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
( b/ w. p3 Q# D0 e3 DWell, her fluting is very melodious ---  u6 X; ?6 E# |7 H/ R/ `
that is the sole sound going into my ears
! Z+ h7 V9 p# t) s& N. c% O1 Wfrom the next side of my wall;
* k: q1 q0 p4 M. J; @" [the unknown tune is extolling$ y3 i* b# _+ J* [& F4 `
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 2 v: M2 ?' `! N+ f! f' S. f
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 8 W9 ]. Q, k( t' y$ l& E# y
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
& k6 z1 T; @  A0 K4 [9 M1 pJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
9 z* r4 B" l# m7 k1 d# y, t4 t1 G另外,翻译改动一处:
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

2 X# n+ L1 W. a9 C8 N7 P0 u" q我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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