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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 9 h7 @8 a$ o; q+ `( w# r7 L
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! x5 }$ h; b& t5 t$ D我尊贵的邻居
* k: H. ^5 f; L% @是我们小区  几十户- ]( H/ P- k: |' m
唯一的元老
5 o0 y4 D& L6 a) ~% N8 f一住三十多年: {3 b3 h$ _8 Z5 X6 `7 o8 H$ _
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
+ e3 r, b3 p: t) ~, f7 }* S白发红颜  不见皱纹+ B/ d; T' v; Q8 d9 [: ^4 t
开车铲雪  挖土栽花3 G) q/ R7 I3 i7 K7 V4 y; ]
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环+ `  N& s  a: I
邻居气宇轩昂$ {, }8 {4 J, x& S
如同女面朱熔基% J3 c7 Y8 O5 q  ?1 B
邻居的字
& t& y1 c+ S1 j. d; t0 j则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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2 A$ n% b- Q2 L- l7 t9 \, |! D" A邻居酷喜中国文化' r" v1 c. d* V- a8 |
说她属土龙) [8 |! S& `. Q. w- c
其笛声也悠扬$ {/ A  |& a3 d$ K) @2 r' M
那是从隔壁传来的; b$ ]. \" S6 ?% ?/ I4 N% j
唯一的声响3 U' V% m# g' e+ l5 O% {9 u( r1 ?
那不知名的曲调! P( w0 o( f6 i
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 0 n# E1 ~) j  X

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Living here for more than thirty years,# z/ V( m- O/ }1 G( ]2 o4 l
my prestigous neighbour5 |6 x; g' I/ V' ?' S* G1 j
is the only first owner of the unit properties
  I, [. ~- O+ u* w( X6 P. c) zin our community ---
1 z- L/ M' s7 W" Ktens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,1 ], N( k5 f; n4 f( B. m, X
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.$ u( [9 n: W! D/ v- z, h6 W9 o3 ^
She has white hairs and red faces.  }* `$ p6 h$ X2 N3 l7 N3 @+ f5 v
Her light-footed movement( D" |$ s+ c+ E5 |$ L& K
is just like a flying swallow.
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* q' {$ D* j+ k3 Y' WShe shovels the snow on her door lane
( g0 N. j" o& T& n! }before driving her own car;2 F# h* Q% \0 f- [
she digs her back yard
% V! [! @5 C3 k, e! W* ~to plant flowers ---
3 N% r+ K! g. Mas if she did not know what years mean.$ |$ B& I  R# @! @1 T

. f8 Y1 h% I! A# S8 N# A) K5 RWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,% W/ D% z# Y" z
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
) L4 S3 H0 ]' D; I+ [0 w* W& B8 `! zas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
* U- M- x- g' V4 a9 lNeighbour's handwriting
7 P) S3 K( j6 X3 E) V7 Zis so vigorous as to be the old trees8 J0 r7 u* ]- ?: N( R# g
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.6 q9 d" a3 }% k& M
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
: _  V5 `7 u% P/ w8 J4 JWell, her fluting is very melodious ---: Y4 o+ u9 d2 @7 g3 g% G
that is the sole sound going into my ears2 S4 \& m6 M% Z# }7 O1 P' W" a
from the next side of my wall;% k1 T2 [" }9 O
the unknown tune is extolling
# B% U' A) _% b( S3 j) R0 r: Bthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
3 C  F0 P" F4 e3 C5 w0 L( zagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
+ U6 V- b4 X& k. B4 p5 WJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

& x" I# Q. O& t, J# q从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
# c2 q- i$ ~9 v  Q0 \/ h另外,翻译改动一处:( ~( w/ B- n0 z" C7 u
Her light-footed movement
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7 C' i3 F: M# uHer light-footed movement
& h6 G' U7 S. _: ]7 vis just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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8 z8 |" m1 u$ q- Q6 ^. c真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 # G: {0 M6 e5 l1 o  ~
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$ @' u4 P3 a: j1 _' A9 g真的是太像朱镕基了!
# r' V2 J1 s$ F$ E: d9 K% @) V5 e! M- khm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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