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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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是我们小区  几十户  K, ?6 F. ^- F. G, `, T9 U3 [
唯一的元老: {0 U6 q0 f9 G0 n9 Y% c. {6 g' `
一住三十多年1 [' c! z- F& z0 t

( K7 f6 c. z1 d" V: Z邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕# H! O/ T( q: s; _, h. u
白发红颜  不见皱纹7 ]  t! l# \; S, R4 e
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
2 A/ s& w' o1 h& r+ g+ x# d- Q似不识  岁月为何物9 K* O$ f& ~; h
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环" }0 H3 _/ B; I' b7 c: N
邻居气宇轩昂
; F, Y) Z5 o3 r' i/ E7 q如同女面朱熔基
5 @7 F& s" R( |: z& N! m邻居的字+ O- W4 v" J* b( R( |. u9 u
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤+ F$ V4 m4 o0 N  u& z) y" o
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邻居酷喜中国文化$ e4 h) t1 q, k6 h( B5 ~& |/ ~7 B
说她属土龙
4 y9 E/ `' H8 s9 x其笛声也悠扬5 U3 C! _; w* ?0 D
那是从隔壁传来的
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0 h5 F6 k/ S+ U8 g5 l8 a) c: w反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 ; C# S9 ]/ @/ _, Q9 V1 @

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: `; o' `# G( v) @' ~Living here for more than thirty years,) ^$ b, }/ P) w- F+ |0 V
my prestigous neighbour) g2 o( s8 A/ o
is the only first owner of the unit properties: y# m* P& f6 z
in our community --- , E2 n# p# _3 m, w) J1 ?- W& k
tens of townhouse condos.. n" W: N7 k# }4 ~, a4 W
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
5 C( D0 V4 X2 {magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.8 Z% ^7 o" p/ \/ ~
She has white hairs and red faces.3 C! S" b+ y; i" A9 r  G- L! \
Her light-footed movement
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* Q7 [9 r% l+ `0 O; pShe shovels the snow on her door lane
* e7 w7 o) T( D) j% B) c8 L9 P5 s3 G. u; Obefore driving her own car;
. v0 i, H. W: u& u1 @she digs her back yard
8 W0 m0 \, a( f3 f' Q$ oto plant flowers ---
( E+ j4 _- O7 jas if she did not know what years mean.
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2 U& R2 @2 K8 ]) |- uWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,/ K  O0 x) M2 G0 q& I
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
: `5 o, v$ @# n! C* Ras if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.( i1 H, X) a% y, a0 E
Neighbour's handwriting
- r( `% C! A: n/ ^* Iis so vigorous as to be the old trees
+ N: s# g3 Y( U8 i4 N" v7 i' i& {  Ointerwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
2 K# g, @5 Y! y' h# p# dShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.4 ]% p7 w* ^  z4 Q' S$ Q0 ]
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
; o4 S6 D- Z+ n+ R! q) \that is the sole sound going into my ears
( ~. j7 Y4 d8 U, i: ufrom the next side of my wall;- z& z/ t+ w5 ?; b" J
the unknown tune is extolling
! B8 C4 n: ^# |, k# g: Pthe magnificence and brilliance of the life," X1 M" A" e# Z6 ~7 O  L
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
3 L) a% Y  q+ `7 y3 @Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

4 r0 k7 U$ Z) r0 U% s从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。/ t% o; S6 D/ I
另外,翻译改动一处:! U7 Z( b" Z4 Z+ i
Her light-footed movement
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# O8 r& F, ], k( {" d2 B% _Her light-footed movement1 H; {! c% g' n& T% f
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 " z3 T2 T5 |- S3 F4 Q9 m
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真的是太像朱镕基了!0 p- L$ y( {$ C) E- [/ \9 q
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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