我尊贵的邻居(11)

Justing

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7 O/ m" h( a9 P8 y/ @2 B9 C# e我尊贵的邻居
0 a& c. S3 g; U9 t# ~$ ]' X是我们小区  几十户
3 r2 q/ E' ]$ A唯一的元老
一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
) z2 Z4 z3 Z* G* p; }7 e" I% y白发红颜  不见皱纹
! T1 m! R* O& f9 |开车铲雪  挖土栽花
# ^# r! B. d7 @- ^% v似不识  岁月为何物

头顶英国文学硕士的光环
7 |& Q+ R$ |3 Y. B; S邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
0 u- U! A5 k& f' G# y! g6 X) r邻居的字
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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8 H. ]& s8 e8 p邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
# {- J8 U4 M+ S# g其笛声也悠扬
& ?* }' @1 Z! B! i% h那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
那不知名的曲调
1 ]2 j+ L! u$ A1 @反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
  j. ~) |/ v6 Y0 K, n5 Ntens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
0 {/ {7 b$ V/ }; h' l) [. Dmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
She has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
; Y& h" r) H. Z+ R0 q1 His just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
# w" x8 Q5 i. a- _/ \0 V$ abefore driving her own car;
0 x# ]8 p6 y4 z$ l1 g* zshe digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
1 I# L$ A8 o3 H! _Neighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.

( R9 h2 i& H) I! z: QNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
, ~$ w/ R9 a4 F  F. oShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
6 @* r& j1 g, _/ kWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
8 g; ~4 O; Z# E& s" _) fthe unknown tune is extolling
: R5 D% Q+ [& w( s8 {the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
8 ?' l% W, R. r9 ~! q7 S7 fagain and again.

Justing

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土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

, ^: D/ ]& E' ~% O8 Q2 U5 I* L从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
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( r% T5 A) u# G$ kHer light-footed movement
: i7 `# p1 G; V4 his just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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5 m! V4 s0 G& U! x& U, z- M; l真的是太像朱镕基了！

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+ L0 d' h2 f! l4 s, H) t7 Y真的是太像朱镕基了！
* b9 `/ P% A9 \( p$ N0 F. [hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

0 m' d/ R  Z4 i( w! Q6 V我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。