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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 / A( _6 s0 \1 R* J# h" e0 g* e

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% N) r- a* j- k4 l; D7 W我尊贵的邻居3 V# _4 d9 X) P. i
是我们小区  几十户6 ^0 m9 w# m0 n3 T8 z( v
唯一的元老) k* S+ N. R2 `- M5 M, y% M
一住三十多年7 q8 ^' V( M9 o# h! K8 ?* U) L
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕; G# x2 v1 L* T$ b
白发红颜  不见皱纹
$ y$ p2 u* D! h# C开车铲雪  挖土栽花, r7 f$ Y" ?2 F& K) y" {% m
似不识  岁月为何物2 {  K* q+ b5 b, L- _: Q

, @1 ^8 p& O' a头顶英国文学硕士的光环
4 D' O& B) d0 z邻居气宇轩昂
; Q5 w' l5 D% N; I5 h4 Z! {! m" C如同女面朱熔基
, N" x* i8 X" q- L* G" {# E9 s邻居的字
) W2 v6 @8 K+ O. p+ C3 {! X4 z( x则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
) _, \) I2 f0 v: J# L( d1 w说她属土龙/ |2 x5 w1 H7 o
其笛声也悠扬
: Q: Z  q9 F7 v) x那是从隔壁传来的
1 m* O& T$ H3 e  F唯一的声响
7 u) G! ~+ a- f" w# j# p7 ~# B; I" m" s那不知名的曲调. v4 ?: I- N/ w: K
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 9 I  X, _" Q; b5 l& ^  s
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英文版,欢迎指正:  R+ |; m. l; i) j2 N" b
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Living here for more than thirty years,
- W* ]* c9 W" j. k1 O& smy prestigous neighbour9 v( r. u4 B8 Z. G
is the only first owner of the unit properties! Z% h, s/ j) W
in our community ---
1 g. u5 g/ A) Htens of townhouse condos.& h' H& d7 g4 ?6 d) g# O% V

" `* y/ {) l1 m0 w, qNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
2 n2 p1 e7 N: Ymagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.. g- V5 j; Z. C
She has white hairs and red faces.
7 `% z" a, S6 S8 n# I9 wHer light-footed movement
7 U4 G  L" u" [$ V' p" zis just like a flying swallow.
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She shovels the snow on her door lane# v# I0 w& k% Z4 O  Y
before driving her own car;- @( v$ g. r8 K* O( ?) {/ i
she digs her back yard+ _* e9 K" @' G3 y9 I/ [
to plant flowers ---# K# z8 E$ o8 h
as if she did not know what years mean.
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7 D; d' _( p+ |4 I; B0 A* ?With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,4 z3 @$ u, }0 Q3 w  ^8 E- t; o* A
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---; K) k  P7 O8 R7 A& F# g
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu." V, F6 r6 c' X* r6 I4 L
Neighbour's handwriting
* S  m; ]( Q' M6 }: m! [% u$ L8 Wis so vigorous as to be the old trees
4 _( z  f7 _* ^+ k& ?) q6 ninterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.$ k0 g5 S5 D" e3 L3 X1 @$ y
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.' p: ?/ X3 ?: u& I
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
+ D7 H! P. w* hthat is the sole sound going into my ears
& S/ Q4 u' o% C: Efrom the next side of my wall;
" `% q0 v7 @7 U9 @4 Ithe unknown tune is extolling
( z9 F+ X. M: [7 Lthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
, D8 W2 x0 ~; R3 k# Zagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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& O3 D& V0 W0 h" w土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 7 I& ^, A; b1 w/ E8 j8 Z9 ?
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
4 \, |- V5 U9 S/ `3 xJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
6 Q* V2 O# h: N5 T" C- B, G另外,翻译改动一处:' ?" w2 [- L2 [6 N: R, P) R& \
Her light-footed movement7 y5 s4 |( K( A& M
is just like a flying swallow.( g1 y8 m" Y: j- f0 y* _5 k
修改为:
! v" _2 E+ u% p5 ^  }* M5 r( bHer light-footed movement9 C; @' {# K, J9 p0 j5 |/ A
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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  S, W  B  E$ v; P真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 ; m! T3 D3 ?% k' k0 e
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
$ D' K, X7 G; Jhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

7 F. Y. j. R9 a2 ~1 ^我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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