我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
9 S+ K! X6 X" ]& s  ]% [8 Z1 FSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
% h! |) |% L' Z5 H! pSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
, }" ~: H' H2 i; aFrom the colorful nature
- j# l1 K( T+ ?; k; DTo my life and dream.
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3 n& y- U& A& G8 o) sFollowing the summer's step,
" Q: B6 ]& {& W, sLet myself go ---
3 X/ J3 Y! @0 s! u, i, d3 A1 o$ rGo to the wild rain
& B. {% w3 p) W5 s# v8 J* P0 W! }Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
) s' b5 N, U, K: LGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

* ]& q+ H8 [6 n. j一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
2 X7 d, @7 [: u: q' H9 fbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 F$ ^* d' @- G. K% F夏天来了