我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
( {  v; N% l+ b# W! |' k是十多年前的作品了——
6 R2 n% S0 w& l1 rSummer's Coming

1 k  b: ?9 T, k- {: \; ~8 E) ]Faster, hotter and sweater,
2 p# d9 J3 E+ H; ^: y/ k+ {1 p9 MSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 j/ J& n$ C4 ^+ v- QFrom the colorful nature
/ J$ ]' _, I; h' t2 G! t0 \9 c+ YTo my life and dream.

2 |1 q4 ^/ I$ T4 c- NFollowing the summer's step,
+ [, @, z- s4 ?0 _. iLet myself go ---
/ A' e' z# K% }4 k  c. k+ B& s: B$ QGo to the wild rain
5 w6 H) ~) g4 S( \Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
  n3 M  |( {/ S: `# W/ n- b: TGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
6 T( s4 z0 E" A( E* _& \3 U! AIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了