我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

8 L2 a  q8 l5 e" s+ r% H$ ~Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
1 ]% R  `1 L$ H/ i: _: E& \From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

/ g! I, m1 n( S" i/ j' Q. u9 y& hFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
" S& m2 ?& S9 A; xGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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2 d- K, n& x% {: e* OGood-bye, my happy spring;
: I+ S8 a* K( i9 p+ sGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
% }' W2 L, H$ m% m- C1 vMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了