我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
, B% |6 {" H6 f. y9 ]. [4 R是十多年前的作品了——
* f5 m4 y" N2 o1 I! r4 uSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
4 C+ Q1 x, g5 x. C# vSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
/ b+ x8 h: [4 Z( rTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
' S) h  @9 V+ I- I8 CLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
: A5 A+ I0 Y% M0 J2 Y* l5 eWashing my heart and soul.

: g5 b* p: u! r1 f9 |" M$ {Good-bye, my happy spring;
3 h5 E) v8 N, i! zGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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! o4 O6 \3 m7 l' M8 H2 J( d一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了