我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

8 w& P# Z( {- ]! LFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
% N# v0 e% x/ B8 sFrom the colorful nature
4 v0 C; N5 }, gTo my life and dream.

/ ^8 {- f) _* g' y6 p/ }4 V5 G+ zFollowing the summer's step,
# Y5 O/ C) Y8 Y( j0 L4 U. E6 f" XLet myself go ---
& ^, ]: ^, I# D' n; k$ PGo to the wild rain
4 O5 h: T" r( M; E" jWashing my heart and soul.

& t  i; x# |: [- [Good-bye, my happy spring;
+ K! A6 ^0 D5 E$ F: [Good-bye, my childish dream.
. J8 l# Q9 B8 Y- V. BI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

* u0 J% p7 d$ V% q  @# C& |+ p# x8 E[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
3 |: e% i3 p) K1 f& gbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了