爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love

' i" p) A2 D% z$ I. a+ PI fell in love with you
& c* C/ r' n# J+ T( bAt the first week we met

2 h& U2 j; o  A" w; w: QYou have charm, you have looks
/ t2 i8 e! M1 |. |2 s1 Ewith full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
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Your lip is so big
9 ?# e# }4 s" Z5 i; c% }4 q: o! N( zAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
And that is good for sex
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I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
7 |" k( m2 x7 _5 g* a0 N+ c* mYou blame me everything and everyday
) R" Y7 u$ J8 X# [5 d  L3 PAnd I think all girls sound like
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You could not stand my eating
& j  j5 A  m3 a& t  {. {8 L0 D' ^9 OSaying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
, R( }% E0 p% S, E1 V  _( m' uEating with sound is a pig
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* x% ~& N) F# Q4 BI fell in love with you
  j( _; A+ |# q" w- `Become a fool to think
7 A- ?% S1 d! K; t7 lAll trouble things you did
And that is the price for love

4 ]( \# z& v% [You slash my heart
: S/ @  w) [9 land I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
4 f3 j- U  D' |) `( M. ]If my heart can be fixed
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$ i8 x; }! |* S: R5 p$ V! ~7 ~1 J# F0 D[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

; g; w* L: N- {$ d0 P( B湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
Falling in love

I fell in love with you
At the first week we met

6 |, l  I, c) W3 tYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars

9 @- M! G2 j4 P5 o7 MYour lip is so big
. O$ s9 ^0 _9 D; a, C! ?; ^And that’s good for a kiss
3 X7 }6 d& \, x( o" jYour body is chubby
6 O: [# }4 q, b& xAnd that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
# L6 ?9 d& K- b! ?: S) tYou blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like

You could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
- z; I( Y% k. UEating with sound is a pig

* E1 A4 {! a' c9 }- tI fell in love with you
- n2 c! {6 [3 N; Z9 F  r9 ^Become a fool to think
' W$ p8 i6 ]; m2 q- r- C0 xAll trouble things you did
6 R, ^0 ]/ a8 ]2 V+ O8 \  R' zAnd that is the price for love

you are deeply in love
3 T4 g$ W  J6 _  K$ QEverything from me is negative
) p( J. g0 Y( a"My man should like this,
$ l* J: C6 d# r, K0 w4 C( H  [3 Cand I am helping you to improve'
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You are loving me
8 I  O* V$ T9 M6 r4 for that one in your mind?
; q1 x; f7 H' O5 ?- _My mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want
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unfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
% [" N$ ?5 F$ X% b, }and I am seriously hurt
* }6 q& ~  ~+ g8 O1 LI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
- j5 X- Z* i; ]6 F; m9 @0 O再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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湿人啊....

/ x+ N9 I7 v' y# u* h6 H3 e' G你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
- p3 g$ u% O( R; _" G够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
7 n" J# c3 v$ T- c: i' j& ?哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
( F* o. {4 ~  J9 o/ k- W9 p哈哈哈...还真长见识

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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表
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2 [2 C. K+ b' n9 e该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
* ]. `6 b) B  Y# t+ ^$ y不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.
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9 ~7 j8 v, T% I/ j: C8 i" I* D: ZP.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
看的我毛骨耸然

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2 s( K8 @/ q* q- A' f1 e有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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1 y3 X. F/ p5 K* o9 P$ p2 h6 J6 {听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声