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First of all, I believe you are a responsible teacher, and a enthusiastic person. And thank you very much for you would sharing your experience and knowledge to other people who is currently looking for high salary job. But I have a few questions for you about your advertisement word.
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* Q. g4 T8 E% w+ b4 r/ \You said "您想进入高薪阶层吗?SAP就是最佳选择!!"3 U& T$ h0 o3 U' j6 T
I can't agree to your advertisement word totally. Absolutely, every one want step in high salary class, but I don't think SAP is the best choice for every one.
7 h; t4 [% c$ L+ Q3 I2 C1 ]Do you agree with me?
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You said: "SAP SD是具有企业管理、物流管理或销售经验的IT及非 IT人士,进入高薪阶层的最佳选择!"
( Q1 r; g% [7 v: RSo in your mind, it doesn't matter have experience on ASP or not, it doesn't matter communication is how comfortable in English. Anyway, I still can't agree to you on this. k) C$ }$ V/ }# x8 e% K3 X8 X0 e
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3 U4 F7 h( ?# t2 K3 u7 FYou said: "Edmonton在加拿大,如果通过SAP认证,基本年薪都在7万到10万。"1 J5 U1 N9 J9 j5 K* E t) X
I believe you all of your students graduated from your first and second term have got their certificate already, and I believe most of them still in Canada. In my mind "基本" means over 60%. So my question is how many of them have steped in the high salary class 70,000 to 100,000CAD? Probably you will say, they still need time to get some experience and chance.2 z% [* {* p. q; m" `
Ok, so do you know how many vacant position in Alberta for SAP, and how many people have possessed the certificate? % W+ {2 F F$ I% m) u. v; T. X) U
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You said: "Alberta所有石油企业全部使用SAP。中长期内无人能撼动。选择SAP就是站在巨人的肩上起步!" S5 M2 f+ T7 R$ u2 a+ \
I still can't agree with you totally, "中长期内无人能撼动" what's mean?$ m6 r- R1 S# W% ^
You mean you can forecast short term, and you still can forecast long term. My question is how many years you think is long term?; B; D" \! K6 a& D1 ^' B
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Anyway, hope you have time to reply this post, and sorry about any offence!
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