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First of all, I believe you are a responsible teacher, and a enthusiastic person. And thank you very much for you would sharing your experience and knowledge to other people who is currently looking for high salary job. But I have a few questions for you about your advertisement word.
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You said "您想进入高薪阶层吗?SAP就是最佳选择!!"
: x0 R9 ~+ [+ ?I can't agree to your advertisement word totally. Absolutely, every one want step in high salary class, but I don't think SAP is the best choice for every one.
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9 o* N. g% G E1 D# ~You said: "SAP SD是具有企业管理、物流管理或销售经验的IT及非 IT人士,进入高薪阶层的最佳选择!"7 Z. V# `5 S: v6 r9 h
So in your mind, it doesn't matter have experience on ASP or not, it doesn't matter communication is how comfortable in English. Anyway, I still can't agree to you on this.
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You said: "Edmonton在加拿大,如果通过SAP认证,基本年薪都在7万到10万。", |/ R9 r7 l) p& Y: |& m2 |: d
I believe you all of your students graduated from your first and second term have got their certificate already, and I believe most of them still in Canada. In my mind "基本" means over 60%. So my question is how many of them have steped in the high salary class 70,000 to 100,000CAD? Probably you will say, they still need time to get some experience and chance./ _+ W h$ g* E
Ok, so do you know how many vacant position in Alberta for SAP, and how many people have possessed the certificate? 2 a. ~% Z* h ~9 K9 H
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You said: "Alberta所有石油企业全部使用SAP。中长期内无人能撼动。选择SAP就是站在巨人的肩上起步!"
0 `! N) B" h1 W" c3 SI still can't agree with you totally, "中长期内无人能撼动" what's mean?
8 }) r6 v5 L `! s1 }& QYou mean you can forecast short term, and you still can forecast long term. My question is how many years you think is long term?
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Anyway, hope you have time to reply this post, and sorry about any offence!
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