锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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7 t) k( U- G8 h8 _( v4 Z　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

. A/ J1 P  I7 [" A/ ?　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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1 N8 u# n( X0 Y! S　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

8 a  U$ W  N$ a1 g　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

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% L! ^) a; `+ f7 z# W　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

; L0 |! F) E- {" u. L+ g3 i　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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& V3 U' ~3 X$ M　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

8 K3 x6 I6 I& n4 P　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

! V: a. X$ ?' M) H) E4 p" W* y　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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6 M) @) q6 g" s- C- ?7 k　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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5 X: \& z- }0 P; P$ ]5 X　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

8 Y* j+ O2 j1 l; F! ?7 B　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

. W  J# L, T2 r/ X0 l　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

( R* j/ [0 L4 A& [$ S　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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/ _+ J2 g) I- i6 r" {& \- _　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

- R$ \: I1 n7 p/ J  w　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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( t' T, r8 M4 U- c" N　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

3 \: w$ A7 G0 B' Z; I! {7 a# [　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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4 a; V& T% A6 {! X; o( c. d( o5 w　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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% ]! K+ D& O# W5 w　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

2 g7 x2 E2 L4 L! j  h4 [) ?  P2 _, k　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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8 Z. o( q& X, _4 C) b/ E) t  o　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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# u# F! B9 O$ _2 i" ?3 s; i　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

( t9 e' g  }0 u$ ]! E　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

  w( y3 r5 H4 a2 `2 @/ U7 r% |　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

9 X) _0 o* |" S1 ^+ ~1 J　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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2 a5 @+ w7 p* u) H; a　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

- d2 f8 t. s8 u4 T　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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) _& Q; H1 M4 R# y9 M1 p0 r　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

4 k+ Q& n& C6 y6 I. @9 S　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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, E  l1 q6 k  R# }% F2 ^1 r　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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# L! X0 }# C+ l3 |0 |　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

( d! N. Y$ Z2 F1 `/ j8 s　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

2 I* w- v( r7 T) [' H# C　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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, ]5 F7 E& e. H8 X3 x- E% r　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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- l1 W1 \, _  T　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

. @( f7 q& ]6 C3 o; J　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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" ^: [% p% Y$ d$ H3 D5 b6 M& a9 a4 d8 M　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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/ A2 S+ G( u# d6 `　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

$ ~2 W% O0 }" W! o　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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' _3 c7 `4 W( F　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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5 a* A. s8 [$ o　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

, }0 s7 |+ j' F2 k& B7 ~$ Y　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka