锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

4 |$ A) w+ [! k8 |7 W9 I1 G　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

6 w& G& [& }/ N. r9 i& }3 l' K　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

. b6 B7 J: J# C' i7 G5 q0 V　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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( ~/ y8 r* n# T! C3 P0 H　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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( e" _* @( z; L. f　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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& u3 Y$ G& I. v7 R; V5 W　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

& E+ `- _; s0 R% ~% w# t　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  [# P1 \" Z& m- Y/ U, n　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

. d/ r: }6 o- }. z- U+ e& A　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

9 z4 j+ o* f, i" A  H) E7 r　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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4 M) r9 f% x/ r2 m& L0 D! a　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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( U3 Q6 J  {' w" I　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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2 ]( X4 j2 o& a- e$ K( z9 z8 S7 K& f　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

6 F/ K+ d/ e0 B* w* h$ c　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

0 q- _' N6 l% h) u% I  b" B$ n　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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1 J% Z1 l( T! V# R6 d　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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; \- X4 X; B# x2 v/ Y7 I　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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2 h% D) [. U; x% D/ J+ F# q! v　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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% E' W" d. q/ ^  f* k+ w4 D　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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, h% D. N0 a* G1 U& F2 {% p% v5 `　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

% }& d0 U% L" p4 I1 u( \( `5 w　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

* [1 a+ k, h& f$ H3 J. Q　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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+ g5 Q; S4 g% l+ M& F" K+ ^7 b+ m　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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  U! L# l3 z$ m& F  |　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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6 Z9 O- [$ L; \9 F: G& W　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

% i+ Y0 `* Z5 \) c　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

* Y( t" p# A7 E: \　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  z% F, p! L. }; E　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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4 q4 S& H3 L8 }  z+ V　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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  d6 X7 ^, A. N$ i' T' |　　34. I agree the latter idea.

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/ p. [  I/ k0 y- [　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

* [5 h# O) z  Q　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.
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( X1 ^8 S* `. ]% O5 \　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

* q3 h/ K1 ^7 R+ w　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

2 O( m8 G7 m8 u　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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8 y& l" q5 U) i# ?  a6 T/ T$ K　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

# ~; ^+ ~$ |1 b3 h" y) @　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

# W4 K' p' a4 N3 ^0 c) |7 p9 ]/ U+ ?　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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( K- ?/ |# C+ a　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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) `. x0 t: m1 K: h+ U　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

) t5 b- D# e4 S& H, [　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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0 P9 l+ R4 T0 C) Z2 C1 C　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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. s+ b8 }4 \  d7 i) N: a( A- O　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

" u9 h+ m& l% P  ^4 d　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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( O  c) b" E8 j, }1 A　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

! m+ x( b  D! w1 c　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

4 I1 b/ i  x5 j- U　　50. I felt alone.
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, O3 w, n0 M4 F$ H& S) a9 G# v" n　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka