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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. 4 [" G) [! O( a6 G. i0 W0 d
9 I- d, k/ O1 v8 O/ Z 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 0 @+ w4 ?, O. C
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改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. / G1 m& w) u+ C# p y" j
! Z$ `9 d3 H ]8 ^- ]1 x8 n 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. : |1 E8 C$ {: \+ E9 D& d
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. * W6 o5 w% q! B0 X0 e
9 b4 _! r( S/ P' K' h" f8 m( G, d 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. " I* t3 [: |! n
( {. n+ z5 J: [& O" S6 N1 b 6. Their brain is still very young. ! v: y7 Z& ^" Y/ G, H; m1 `$ G, N0 F
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改进: They are still immature.
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/ H# m/ A5 k/ }$ e; c& Q% P 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 4 i1 i Y6 \& B
" f6 d. c: P( u% G 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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) m$ Z, m" q3 ~ q4 v# K+ q5 _ 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 3 m7 r9 f8 p- p v" [& n+ h
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. , v' H% h) H. o; [0 l% b" k: w% a0 b
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 7 S9 Y0 ~" s" U/ Z: C0 R' k; X) N
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. ! n4 y0 U8 g$ N1 \
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 3 E2 g& W5 L ]3 Y6 m& m
9 i# T$ O; B6 o5 b( L& U$ V. @# `8 p 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 7 w' ?9 l. _5 W: K
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 1 k% L) l! G. H: }
j. k) h0 K8 v o5 R- {$ I: y) A- v 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ) A3 T: |: c& D
" b+ T" m% Q; | 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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9 m: U' m; j1 J- E$ X! t5 H 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. + s- P! K( c5 g0 S9 F5 m
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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9 N1 | D4 ^. j" `! X 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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+ S0 } J1 ^( L$ R$ n; p 改进: Money can improve their life.
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6 F' K& ^9 s( m" m8 e6 p 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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" A$ x) A% [2 M) a' q 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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' g0 V4 V% L8 M* b/ ]6 g5 ] 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. # c5 w; b3 _+ W
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4 v+ o3 y+ `/ d" r7 P 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. + j2 c1 O3 ?! ~ L
2 K+ f/ t; D/ n5 ?! w) f4 {( H 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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- Y9 x: |5 w; r6 E7 ]$ s. @ 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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$ s) z+ i. K8 L" V7 I2 ~ 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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28. What's about nonsmokers? % k6 N8 P* O% F
7 j1 Y: x' _. T! Q0 O: g* H 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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' ?6 s& k v8 i) ^9 T6 s$ R# _ 改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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' k# X4 D% A0 X) S 改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English 4 C* R" n S9 l0 U* a
) P5 Z0 S4 ]1 r! s! N 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? ' }/ R q& e2 Z9 b! u
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33.It is children who clear about their interests. 6 Z2 }4 f; r* T1 f* r/ J1 F
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. , v' n4 }6 g- v F
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34. I agree the latter idea. / S6 }2 y% j) \9 D+ }6 D7 E
' e* T# O( o/ l3 ^ 改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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. k, V$ F; U4 m8 R6 ~ 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. . i4 @5 q6 L6 Z+ [0 G# }( |; A9 u
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. ) z4 {8 r+ u1 a3 b: R
9 J. x% f' p; A7 g0 N 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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, H' H0 z1 q' N9 H- V 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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, m1 L( d/ n* P8 X 改进: No one knows everything.
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. e/ N3 I% i+ r/ l! E* x
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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. y, H" t- e5 ~ 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 5 O! Y8 N* X) s& J; V; F T1 k) ?
8 P* `1 l. s( [ 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply ' _- Z$ c L. x8 a0 Z0 E
$ M+ B; f6 x& b; i" h7 A 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 5 a! {, A4 ^$ M. r
0 ]3 }! \& j& ?2 | 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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43. They will learn the bad habits. $ h1 ^2 {6 y7 u5 p
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改进: They will develop bad habits.
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, J4 {8 l* U( `7 N- c. r5 _, d 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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; N e5 S7 Z6 o# R0 ^1 w 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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- Y& u2 h( l: p, Z6 M 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. " n6 B: \- p! ^0 C4 Q/ a
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ; T0 _, M9 f7 n, [% t
3 c9 V6 t5 b- Y& Y8 r 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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9 m+ E8 c# _5 a% f+ M3 F 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 4 O/ N# c$ S9 ^/ q: E- _
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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! X U U1 A6 W! o/ ] 50. I felt alone.
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: w6 I8 C }: p+ g$ b; v7 \3 P. X6 ` 改进: I felt lonely. |
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