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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
" E. ^/ h+ A, O. J,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. / v* n8 R/ d3 A
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
) `5 R0 w7 ^) h现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
! i6 b9 d3 k3 X; u梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.( h v, \/ L; o- l7 E
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
# P ^$ Y( B9 m9 N夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
0 O# \) D" J9 W7 ?) ]9 c猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
! T4 j( F; r2 ^ L' ]9 N, ~8 M就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.% f* o! }# ]% x! l6 w; W* N
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
' ^7 [: m: v( n2 l9 q% g那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。! l' U" C& E2 H
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
2 j4 ^ w/ K! u7 y+ J$ C+ D/ c' ]昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.) _$ Z5 M. ^+ w9 e$ f) }
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.9 f/ |+ j* ?2 w
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. % A# ^1 z9 I& y5 s" ]. `- s w
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
( \) v+ h7 u& F C' [3 f醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
d( A2 J. z* X+ w' Q$ q" ]迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.4 e2 C3 v' i5 }" Y
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
+ n1 e# p! d9 i) K2 M7 }" W5 ]- b$ \多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? b6 K2 |4 I. `# @
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….# v, {- t$ ^) C: g9 n4 R$ }; _0 ?
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
1 e0 o: ~" d" i不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
9 y6 X! @# f1 K0 h3 Y多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ) V' ?1 j7 H/ b( x. I* y5 l
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?1 G6 E$ N1 S$ I0 S9 [& \
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!) U/ | C! l* t
永难平息的泪4 G j" R2 [1 b1 O% H% D8 _
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes9 N8 r! Y" W- J: e' ]
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.1 i) q: _* W* W, r
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.+ h. H3 q3 k7 _/ ?
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
0 S8 I {: P5 r你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
3 U) b% l' b% T% R; U一抹微笑；
/ D5 [1 Z8 _9 J' g) |/ }: d一个手势；$ \ {1 R- @8 s' P
一片话语，. {# g. {* }4 P+ k
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、3 i8 Y/ S0 J3 q% y! e1 r
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
" j9 a/ i' ^5 u$ i心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
/ ` r2 D5 m/ {, Z0 q7 P' Q7 e8 ?这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
! B: c1 T4 M9 ] H0 y也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
/ P/ q- b& z( P( X' }起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,& s# V3 U, z9 |5 _# X
我并不以为然。0 O! C" O. {& L. d7 n2 W% }
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
. |7 @. r1 Q0 U慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .* |4 w4 M8 T( ?2 c) [# i6 @& x5 a
被一种情绪所左右，
8 _# @! ?% D. p. \2 E9 g总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .4 U- s% e2 \! g; a
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
- T! l+ p0 o$ B' b也不问我是否喜欢你，
& R2 v! b" C6 E0 _+ X对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.3 {! V: F' M0 s! I9 z1 M
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you% ~% `/ D! ]8 r6 e8 N" o
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
! h/ o; t/ w9 ]; ^+ S, [; D心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil1 `" q- h6 H5 H& S) l
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 2 `% L7 J8 q" A
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
, H( B2 ], f% V0 m' ?( N: P记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.; c* g( v% p7 T2 S
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 2 P7 ^' Q0 ]1 Z2 d+ l7 x8 W3 [
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
$ A6 e4 W: m V! t哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
# P# w# ]& p7 f一种声音，and your voice
! g& x* h: }3 l# j5 x& k# g$ U也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.# T7 n ?+ s& @# K2 w, t
掺杂著幸福的感觉。0 x9 T7 {2 C$ f5 R8 h
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
- `6 J7 _, E6 s7 X象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
% `) [6 ~) k* Q+ m倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; W- m& ^% S4 O2 f3 k" ~
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
5 f6 b3 I" S0 i6 v2 ?- `, Q你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
% x' U# l7 ]9 U0 l5 v有一个能够让思念的人，7 }! W4 P6 u& B2 d) @; Z2 K
其实也是一种幸福。
' |$ }0 y3 }$ Q- U+ l尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
4 k$ U0 R+ g7 d: S# K柔柔的海风，. w. A1 K( k% u5 _
甜甜的夏天。% Y, [: i% X! D2 b6 T/ `
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 6 t1 F0 `& J D" N5 P; Z1 v1 @
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.
9 ]. Y8 u, V5 ]. Y& |4 R" m9 b仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
3 B( ^: I+ @9 ~8 g, F2 g想和你有共同的情结，, v# }- E0 O7 {& [
共同的心愿。; h6 O9 p9 m5 z; Q% F
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
) x. {- ]" D" v1 _% \8 E ~8 ^一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together" }2 u& |2 o5 ^! G
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film ( ]' V* r' y5 u% f& E! S
或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.# a* ]; G4 t# ]( c
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?) a" P I0 I+ U$ Q+ ~$ y# S0 N
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
( H7 C6 f2 d. t1 k5 u2 i浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
0 q. `4 p' m5 ?% e: C; J或是轻轻的一吻，$ |" A; k' w) o/ G5 d n4 z5 |
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』# A3 G' R9 U9 i+ q
就足够了. That is enough.
/ }) d: n1 k) a: I |/ H这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! . K" z) V6 M1 P: g5 q
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.$ _9 V) U! h1 }$ R* Z( A
萌出了芽，+ p! \5 a/ I" @! w8 M
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing% u2 ]# Q) |; s1 J
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure., F! C; A4 V0 y# _7 H% L
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand4 w6 ]8 v# V! L
能够牵著你的手,
6 |2 n; V, E9 o$ B1 _+ T9 h那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.% i0 }/ t" b& l) S0 S; O
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
! C/ w8 X; X# V, ?: j慢慢地细读，
! L5 |4 f! ^5 ^% t* Z+ D: ^我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. , Y3 g& u/ P" ]
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
! A3 W. O' Y* [8 a2 G( g我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor Y3 K" a4 P# [- G- S7 V7 L) w) C
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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