TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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+ N. i  |, U$ e9 a$ B+ f/ N" s$ ~+ J% h(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 b$ D  k4 a3 F9 R: AThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 e( h/ @) }) K, Z; LFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
, h0 r* D! O4 h  W/ v- U0 }3 \- Son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
# w+ {2 T' _( k' _: B' T8 dFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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# m+ |( ?. V4 B5 }) I1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
6 T$ R0 g* o+ W" C7 ?After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
) n. N$ u( a5 F- i2 R, p$ ?There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
4 A- H* h8 [4 m1 T9 hBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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1 V0 n$ }) {; p4 c２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
* U& r/ |' s/ M) ]$ R; TThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
* c" N2 H& r% P# C, n( [What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( @. @/ h8 x" Z; u9 f/ pA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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! I' E$ R' ~1 l& C(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  h) J9 |4 u- e$ [. Z) _/ xC is superior in another way, this is…
* V! g: o9 {0 u: c* S2 B1 [From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
) f+ n* {4 \' s! o6 U3 y8 V8 g* wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
: g0 H1 a! M( X/ l(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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" S7 |! j* I" o) p, QAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
% t/ ~& H1 p! j6 x0 p… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) h# p8 [, h; N! f9 U/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]