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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架4 k# h6 }3 _" ^4 ]8 ]& h, c0 Q
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(一) 对立观点式 / P, q3 ?+ l; w1 L# I( P
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 8 l# c) B! y8 P/ c; |) a
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. . a, v5 T( Z+ m# `8 z3 b
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ) p8 i/ l  ]7 v1 }7 ^
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… - o7 T! }. r0 r8 B) U) z5 J2 \
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 9 w) V5 G* c3 y& Y% T+ o) q- E
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) : c% ^" Q& b6 [+ h* E2 u2 t
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: d3 ?) \4 \& A6 Y& b' NTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
4 t$ R9 B2 C$ a1 jFor A, A 的一个优势 ) p( l& ?7 e" i: o7 i3 X
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
, }( ^6 Z5 D( J# B9 HFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... % B# {7 X  c  M- [3 t! N
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ; ]' M( V( j. `( _1 ], {/ }- }. m
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
( ~9 G- n: A2 w" C- d& n# Y! GFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. . ^# U5 q$ {& R; H) @
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: q/ R7 U# r. f- }; E(二)单一观点式 : W1 p( C7 k* |9 s/ u4 ~( H3 y6 u
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. % A2 z" y0 I1 \  Z: k
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 5 C5 i8 [9 [7 _3 o2 A
There is no denying that…
+ ?8 ~5 j2 L0 o* E$ T6 oAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 0 I/ G  G8 P3 }0 j2 X, M3 e5 E0 R
Finally,… + F" h- U( z2 W$ Y
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
' O% M: C, F/ d3 ]' r3 c(本类型只agree) ) Q) M- ?# g% \; D, d  O

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
7 v; C2 `3 W  F5 ^; @7 |# Y' o6 I/ JThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# C" ^1 x  N# n' ~  {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 g4 {5 W& e: i8 S6 o/ jA is superior in another way, this is… 3 B; }4 f% S% k# u) b& l
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… # U# X3 }2 J1 n
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
0 a" A- Z" u0 P& cWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ' c/ U! X# F" `3 _+ V; L6 R8 L
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
! k  X# l/ B; D; k% t. TWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 3 G4 n: d3 Y4 ^- T  X
C is superior in another way, this is…
3 a; T, k& @# F1 K* r/ wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 4 K4 L) Q' g9 a7 ~; ~& X/ P7 ]. r$ M9 T
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. & V4 F8 u2 W4 Z  R; u5 F. B8 d
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) , `2 \) |; n3 R7 A' x- x6 _8 N  |, Z

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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. & `6 N9 d3 z: X0 u2 @0 v& K( s# I

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  ?& M2 q7 M3 R* H9 cAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 P, Q8 @+ r5 _One of the primary causes is that…
& X: B* `3 r" W2 o+ V1 yXXX also results from…
9 m( o" [/ i. H% }… is responsible for xxx, as well.
! A4 C+ d/ s- C, Y$ L' ETo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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: E: s' U- @2 `: G* ?+ k2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. $ c2 s5 c8 I* H- l1 ~

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! {. o$ F. `4 f: w& ZThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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7 v5 N! @4 P: Z5 ]4 }3 YOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 1 q  r" i8 E- x( ^
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
4 b6 x$ J% g  w8 E" ~$ i: _% }/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… , V- E! F2 x% `  q; n% \

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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" X. o! K5 R3 pIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?) b& M2 s/ x# [+ ^% m

7 L& g2 L; Y! F; W. W7 {* m" v再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.1 u% @0 c. x* r, r

5 H! U9 r$ K1 v  n[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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