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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架8 n/ u+ p, L4 F3 ?9 ~

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(一) 对立观点式 . _2 n# j: P% c7 \* r+ B
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 3 |9 d7 s/ Q/ q

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. `* F2 V! y% W& C! H3 W8 D) i(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 1 o" k! t& r  p- ^' u
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 6 c: c( I/ }, }) O+ m7 Q, f  Q
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 [, y/ G# G+ t& S% {, D" l$ t2 fA is superior in another way, this is…
  d1 v' v: {% o7 B/ NIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 L- ]- @) W2 Y8 E0 M% m- i, Y
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... + U' U. n) k' `6 V" y
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) . Z  w/ q. p' s6 @" W1 F
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
; B' |7 V1 l3 M) @$ @* y5 Q$ Q, N% j6 `For A, A 的一个优势 ! A- j, |4 w5 W
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, & a7 _$ P1 P- l  X8 l$ Z$ i
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... & p( M( e8 [* E% r1 [, V% w
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 7 y( t& w& H2 T! p4 U( R" y
moreover, B的优点2,for example… + ]* U+ E1 E" @& Y" M6 i  p- }
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. $ w0 M' @3 q3 a3 c! s

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(二)单一观点式 5 l0 C& o. D* F
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
: m( W5 u. u. FAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
2 A( \/ I3 e, WThere is no denying that…
2 ?2 a  q2 p/ m+ A. K1 S# SAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… : e/ X' O$ T0 y6 n
Finally,…
% ?$ ]  N: y& b3 C4 F/ fBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… % w) r, A3 ?" r' u  X$ p' c
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+ K, z2 s$ s. g5 f# `  J2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
4 @) x) D6 n/ D! K9 a(本类型只agree) + \" E) x1 N9 s4 Z4 G# G9 t' g

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 7 J+ A. \/ o5 x1 Y6 T
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 4 D! b6 q4 O  o% V* w
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ p7 `% I. Q& S# w4 u! lA is superior in another way, this is…
% F% \. h) X0 }$ G3 F% Y8 z- oIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… # a7 N8 |+ ~4 C# f
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...   L0 u1 Y; s3 \' \$ i. z# x  W  e

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 7 I" t! W$ k! M) Z
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. # J7 E6 ?- ~1 i0 f; P
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
; Q* {% u* ?6 a2 a, F6 F2 V/ BWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… $ G/ {# _9 v' K  Y: s
C is superior in another way, this is…
9 l6 c0 h' d8 x8 G+ Z$ p' u1 A* O5 {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, a$ b' F0 j7 k5 }2 J& i3 @5 _From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
! {9 ~* U' f7 y. N8 v' [9 P) m! a4 \- x(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 2 m4 `/ D/ `8 |. T8 |- Z/ j8 z# h

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5 v: ~4 p- V# u8 H/ E! @8 h. d(四)原因解释型
# L' ]2 x! G" _: o, B3 t: K1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
. Z6 j: d& ~( _7 Q3 [One of the primary causes is that… / J! d' \" h* U
XXX also results from…
. s" s& n; j8 Q1 u7 ^… is responsible for xxx, as well. & M/ ~. ?: r/ T( U
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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8 ]5 ?1 h( R, G- V2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. * Y3 I- C7 R. J% c2 J8 v

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背景描述
! k* i, a: d8 L8 J# }) k% CThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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, w5 ^# S& a* D" u# h0 `One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
! K+ G' J0 |4 }% v/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… # ]4 ]' r% K. [8 r5 X% X% l
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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3 k, b3 ^% U; u7 S2 G! Ka more subtle point which we must consider is that… 0 I$ D, S" L3 U- D
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6 v/ `- Q0 Q# T1 q) ^In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?: \2 \, R4 r; ~5 S
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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( F8 H5 T  l. c+ M9 B6 `; a[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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