TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
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/ {; [% b) A+ |. u(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 a1 G7 N& @/ o( zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
2 f+ M( D, t) KIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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& L) Q- v$ P% j2 e. i0 D' ]2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
# c4 J  m+ j; [6 ~. @+ BFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
. M4 Z1 h3 M5 s) E0 ion the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
! l  @" g* X+ ^5 R/ T( ?& iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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* x! v8 L2 N1 R# m2 ~% l/ G(二)单一观点式
" {% f" C/ O% w* ~1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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# ^( g) I6 W: j) a$ i  c3 K首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
& G$ i9 T3 {6 |  a) ~9 ?6 h: ^$ |After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
. k1 F1 J, x( J9 Z# \Finally,…
9 Z/ L/ @) m" N5 s# a( m0 {7 X3 nBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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! L" e: w# n2 m2 o$ u(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
5 `! X8 l  A' D/ g; [. V" xThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 _' g' _2 k0 I; B9 L% ?; d2 v: tA is superior in another way, this is…
+ e( ~: e  O- `7 n- H6 FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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0 V* m8 m2 n3 G& o# ?(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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- H+ H2 W- b+ M- XThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
8 t$ B# n3 k" D1 t6 v2 Q% pWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
: n, C; Z0 S4 L# B9 S; b6 iThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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9 N( T/ [$ T9 R- H& R' q) DC is superior in another way, this is…
; _! S# `: |( P  _6 UFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 ]! j% a4 f0 ]$ t' {  PFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
3 @7 U8 t# W3 d  Q6 U6 D(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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! U( F7 ~4 f" S$ L! |(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
1 \% c1 h# X0 W0 k5 dXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
% t: l( m5 K5 w, A$ LTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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$ p5 v  S, i% A7 w% N! X/ A. i( Z+ y背景描述
" Y" e% Z# j  bThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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) R8 @6 l( V+ U! g( Y& zOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
, w  t( j9 _+ [9 C1 d/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
6 }  L5 e8 @- v- R+ o: w/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore

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. e, r( }1 h5 ~& c$ S* K! q. iIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]