TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
/ ^& h) G$ S' Z, W2 F0 CThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  e6 r* F2 F6 q- u: ]  M5 AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
3 s, r% p9 |' X/ V, _/ n1 T" UIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% E( M4 b) m$ h9 S4 V& VFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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! O6 F' R3 x. o- U; L# z  a7 [2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
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Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
3 H4 L. E& ~- q3 o$ Gon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
4 d) r+ C6 S0 O: f' E/ Zmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
& o3 S9 Z- }5 `From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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) U8 M8 F. s3 i(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' T2 R" E' x! k* ^0 pThere is no denying that…
! b3 x( }7 h! `  \8 O5 oAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
: d* P0 O- s/ }' t6 K3 gFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ `) n7 A$ c* ?; GWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 X& [7 O0 W: [: W# h1 E8 VA is superior in another way, this is…
5 Q3 |- y& v- R- k5 z) I7 e1 SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# I4 N; m+ A: ~& m$ NFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ F6 p) N4 o0 f. ~1 ~6 W! B. ], {(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ H( e4 U2 r( B) v5 g& y& t. sC is superior in another way, this is…
" H2 ]' ^5 Y9 U8 w9 z; E' tFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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0 R9 w* D0 Q/ l% \5 b1 U' L; t# B6 z(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
- n, [0 x+ `, \1 ]$ GXXX also results from…
4 P5 b% i% u; m… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 q2 S$ |: S' P0 sTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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. [) q1 z, z* ^6 D- |: [, a  ~2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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0 R& E" r+ z. p5 G7 J' vOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
, l, C7 y' O2 I- Y  }1 |. n# m" ]/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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  p" s. L, z5 C" a5 o+ Z$ G. la more subtle point which we must consider is that…



: V8 v; \, C+ H! wIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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