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I just wrote a poem
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( c0 Z, h- K: T* ~9 B {( mHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem6 _" [: S( c( ]
Thanks a lot!!!
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- _0 i1 u, Y3 v J9 Z' f) O# ZFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
( @& A# ], f1 }5 E, e# G Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
" _0 }( B/ F, d, N( g Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world s0 O4 Q& X7 @$ B! D9 r' F/ d
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 9 O, c) i/ ~% @' j$ N3 c7 {
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind - d9 O8 b0 j5 G4 e8 }# G
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 7 B1 f% L2 H2 v" Y# M- r
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
3 L. C, w+ _ ?7 C somehow I realized you were still in my heart
1 @: ?5 z' @- v& g X7 w; ~ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness, Q+ @1 h X* M/ r, b: V
somehow I lost myself inside again
7 ^1 E1 a' Z8 z' x( _0 CNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ Y' R0 v7 ]% ^1 t somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
! c. k/ w2 q+ zFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# U" u N+ m3 u- O& |' }
Basically, I almost finish this poem
/ b. t' y- N- B c- t+ I* f$ |$ W I am 一个人de精彩
, ?7 p8 v# ^3 [3 f2 ~3 k7 _ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- z5 {: Z" p9 ?7 E2 h9 W! u
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
