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I just wrote a poem9 u$ `2 _" F }! R6 @3 l- a" Q
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog./ _) T6 ? F- x: ~9 W
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem. h0 i) y! m' B; ]4 n
Thanks a lot!!!! A: b. R+ [& N+ r- G$ U! @* D
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7 c/ n% h' ?7 [ q3 k* TFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you % |/ T2 K* Z- x+ q6 F ?
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us . F6 I, k+ }. n: c- J/ p* [0 W
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
* Y: g5 b/ q! { Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me - l' Q3 F0 W/ v+ p
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
$ k/ B$ [5 S, b9 ^0 F% f9 I Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 1 ], B, ]& w$ T/ O3 R/ R
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday / F, F& v! I) U5 A/ ~) @4 i; Q
somehow I realized you were still in my heart % W2 F) H; Q1 y4 K, `5 V3 K% l
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness4 N+ g8 h$ W5 U' Q1 } I
somehow I lost myself inside again
8 R( R ~/ x1 o$ g i6 XNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
1 B# l2 v9 m: h8 ^ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& L8 g `2 |+ F `+ j A
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
. u& Q+ w$ K& v5 \5 MBasically, I almost finish this poem( X% R& V& a$ ]
I am 一个人de精彩' S$ v0 U# n% V/ M, s: \
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.( t0 b. q, Z G7 w2 k
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
