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I just wrote a poem0 L! Q+ z9 E1 ]/ K- `- N, F
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
- _* S5 P+ ]6 @) e/ UHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
1 @7 B- r. Q. C* q! O* ?$ KThanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 p% A# Q" u, D* C
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 ?) S: R1 j/ ]; v2 m
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world # u0 W$ i- t0 b; ]% C% w6 i
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
# U9 F7 v: w2 g5 |$ T ^ Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ( b3 a) \' [/ J
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness , U9 x8 I1 L) `5 x, F9 H
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
' C$ ^- y2 p0 i( [% b somehow I realized you were still in my heart 1 b. Q1 l7 l% i4 j0 G! a
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
* R0 V0 a7 R! ~ somehow I lost myself inside again ( O* ?; e S& s% T; X- A6 k
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 f6 L, R! x9 r# a2 q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
* u3 N9 r( ^/ L* A9 @! T4 d6 tFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# s2 z1 Q" j; h# u- ~
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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: k. | z! }8 ]+ m/ g6 ~# i& I9 b6 J5 d I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.0 A, U* B' j$ p7 O7 f
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
