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I just wrote a poem- {. @ t: D1 f+ d# `* F- c. [
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.9 d2 {" h; c- T, t% ^# v
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem0 _2 L+ E% U- e2 b
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
* P/ A/ u9 g# v Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 7 \6 R1 W' ?- p8 D/ ^ d) X# O
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ H0 W ^2 m) q* o& W$ l0 m0 j' }# h Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
! \. u: Z* Q% t1 e. D' O Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
( j" h: ]# y( P5 w! Y; L* B' P- } Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + D7 e! F G* g. j: s4 m
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 1 Z5 w$ Y( h) ?& v
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
, e1 s% @4 H' r( x0 l somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness1 ]) M/ ]! n6 X1 G' P: h$ }- a
somehow I lost myself inside again 7 \6 R% D& V8 R" M0 Z* b6 E/ I6 }
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' l8 B$ w N4 R! r( h+ q% K& M2 g% t somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion* }( ]% @% f1 T. l- t3 A7 W
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
; t+ @' D6 n9 b' M* fBasically, I almost finish this poem) `0 } M* B' N* p+ @( h
I am 一个人de精彩
) S% u$ Z) } N7 P5 [ I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
