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Love the following translation very much:
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"what did i do to you? 扪心自问
. ^& Q5 K- f# ]( A Wish i knew 未曾犯君
+ p. ~9 V; ?& M% ?' a4 n' a8 b- U Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存' J$ b3 I* z8 s
We are all born the same 你我同根
+ f, e+ P/ y" C0 ]* d" l Then we seperate 世起纷争 4 D7 r+ ^. I0 y: M+ I% M
Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分" y9 [: H }# g; u
and blame turns to hate 争执不休
: r$ v7 o1 M* q3 B; Z we must not contemplate 日久生恨6 f# B2 a6 L: n7 L! \7 C; E
how far apart we are 不必担忧+ f8 z" p+ _. e% N( L& N
there is always a way 仇大恨深
" o0 i4 l+ c; q7 j, b' m U+ | to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线
2 H$ q! G2 c N' E) B' Q* w 可通君心"
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$ Y% V% b" j' u3 K, cexcept these two spots are relatively not as precise:
( F( a$ n( D2 y" L3 ~ "We are all born the same 你我同根"1 R& K. K8 V4 c6 `% V! A
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"Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"6 ~1 E1 Q; ~" w8 c3 _
* q1 m2 b! g5 i, ~/ B3 r8 h) c' s同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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$ [( i* i* R% d0 _6 zAs a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.
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5 o( L% f. D8 f0 g/ [ T9 Q( BJust be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔., o6 n* |5 U( ^. M
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