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Love the following translation very much:
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"what did i do to you? 扪心自问
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Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存
* A5 v8 B$ p1 ~( H; r' d: O We are all born the same 你我同根" C& ]5 F' y1 t8 T2 Q6 Y3 {
Then we seperate 世起纷争
8 N- Q2 f- S% |# G! p Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分4 `; w& c2 b9 O
and blame turns to hate 争执不休/ }- W4 Q* k! l
we must not contemplate 日久生恨
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there is always a way 仇大恨深5 v) k4 z7 K! S9 n8 w) ?
to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线
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- j5 q2 [3 |* v' pexcept these two spots are relatively not as precise:) H& f( o. P' P4 H, p
"We are all born the same 你我同根"
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"Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"
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同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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As a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.
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Just be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.8 o# [( g, d* K6 c# k8 j% D
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。; a! x) X1 L$ K* p2 b$ r' d% q
