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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)8 u) R2 u7 E8 f: X9 K0 o

" ]9 S6 B$ M6 i+ U     One day I always remember* ]: Z0 `/ }" g2 S" H- _, P! l
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was* d/ V3 e; R( z! v; m9 h
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to8 [: ?' P9 i" \# U- p
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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3 M5 }( z' [8 W) K3 P little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,9 H+ Z) h1 @: `- ?; G( O1 |
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid# D- U3 q3 M+ c

6 i5 |4 {% L& ~! z- \1 m was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : w4 R$ C6 \8 ]  U* A5 T$ D

) f- ?8 b' n. E' Othat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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  o* r# a2 v& D2 l* o. ~! y on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 9 P9 u2 h6 W( T. A* w+ q7 D
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 3 I$ H6 S2 d; Z% L2 W

- u0 p0 [7 T  J6 U4 r/ sdeaest daughter.
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. y* e; Q% g8 h1 Y" e  NAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!) T2 r0 X% N6 z. r4 u
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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