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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)1 ?: K2 Y' L$ L. `2 A0 V$ \

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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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+ u: v) y3 G# W7 N" y1 Pexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,4 P6 Z. V1 G- r& Z( E) M. Q
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely / @1 ^6 b2 G5 L( R7 P# E
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since # l- G( ]5 p" Y) J. p8 R" r! X

- _: t  v- E: h  Gthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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$ [/ M) c  S4 u4 j on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my / p' L) Y4 ~4 N/ ]+ d

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% q6 t* H$ l8 C8 h$ D) p* H- R- xAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will, m( e# ^' Z- U$ R1 f
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
0 R! X* a2 ^6 H( Y( @. Ywe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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