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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)+ ?! a& x5 r: i# `1 n

6 L6 o, \; h: J     One day I always remember- a3 u+ O$ G0 A1 w( P$ ~* }
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was* C- T1 J4 l; @6 u' k1 \2 e- M
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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- R; t. y% z* @9 S) mput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my& j8 O$ D5 l. G- g

/ e* f+ q  G2 F* j little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid& @1 B+ }- P5 O/ V9 @- x5 O

' }. y" N/ g/ L) [ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing; z8 Q# T6 G) Y' `
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 5 m, K5 i( w0 @/ M) y3 N

0 ~; c7 v* F" o1 |8 X' Y% E9 Vfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ( Y" {6 F' f1 w; Y7 x
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deaest daughter.
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/ e8 b% x+ r- _/ p& S* mAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.) L/ W% ~8 b: u* |+ D+ L* d
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
( Y+ H! T% S0 j. @. G' m" [: k0 n; Jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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