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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)* i( w. ?' x& a+ y6 l. o( Y5 O8 n+ @
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     One day I always remember$ A" w1 U& v. j2 S. s+ [: ]6 m
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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3 @5 [. S% Q, ~4 n" @' e; Z5 y2 mexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my+ p" w+ m) R( x9 G
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,8 l! m4 ^, k7 O8 X3 I& ]- _1 E
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 `4 B) W8 c$ }/ j
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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) L8 D4 K& ^9 g4 u% Sthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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" z$ f5 i) u" A0 t: k on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 6 P" h; `" @( [# G. ]! O) A

1 I6 N* o/ B6 v( v6 R( dfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 6 O( y7 B, g& C) k
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deaest daughter.3 u( j" ?9 f: c3 Q
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.& }/ o: u0 h) c. G! ?
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!4 _) K8 X& m$ a3 c+ J: j- M
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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