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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)- J& z$ ^1 S# `9 g) k
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     One day I always remember3 i/ q' ?/ z. L4 B' m# G0 s

; |) X( m4 Q; U2 U% g  W7 E( Y$ E9 j  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was% ~+ Q$ W3 ~/ {

- \" S% i" F8 Q/ m- n/ s) |  S. aexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to% C( b- k- u& U8 b7 F2 I' M( u
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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. O0 z& {0 |. ?: ^" e little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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4 S, H3 r5 b+ e! t; p( [9 [, r! m every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid2 J) M) N0 h+ {( @

  q# X4 l% z. C4 w was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely . L* x4 P8 `" k" S! |7 _
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my $ h' N9 n" P  j5 _! ?

: W% ?! L& }. g7 e" K3 B0 Ideaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will; [2 o5 |! f3 C3 S# v# O  [
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
$ Y6 p6 t1 w, E- z' jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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