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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

7 m$ q/ c4 s9 ~  p" O. w! A4 I; J　　　　　One day I always remember
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9 L! y) F: p- U7 s+ x0 K1 n0 j/ r　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

. p4 C- V) F, e. [ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

* K# M. H" V+ \; y was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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3 K1 C% N/ Z7 H8 @: T1 D% N/ g0 qtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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: e7 q, f. _) L4 q/ Dthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

; @& V; P. j7 Y/ g7 P4 E on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

# G7 l- [5 I+ v# vfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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6 ^4 b" q, X8 G7 ~' swe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

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