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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)3 t3 h1 l6 }* D. b0 x7 F

* J! C! \* i* i4 c     One day I always remember
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) b- H  }" A/ P0 y+ z  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to& B" G8 ?$ S! ~( g  U4 B! E4 [2 h

/ |$ `- z/ V5 v8 w9 wput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,/ q  ]$ f$ d* {) Z9 u

' e/ ]/ r, j! a" n8 R every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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0 I0 J3 g: M6 j& V9 I was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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. b/ [: D/ z) H% F4 {) L6 L4 Xtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since $ `0 }  P9 p2 _4 b  F  |* X% m
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing$ a; q! p  o; g0 i' z
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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, \+ `. o; x. W) z1 LAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will1 ^5 v  \; l4 Z) S# o% g

: ?. }! L: o$ E never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.8 C& `3 `% ?3 A7 ]  I

$ i7 R5 m4 S& z" g2 K[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
* f) g0 o: \; S! Rwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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