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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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6 S) i8 Y8 \' Qexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to- c5 N" C7 l+ w/ d5 Y% u1 Q' b

+ l: I7 p  z& o" M1 Cput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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2 B4 P; q$ q% Q& g3 [9 `' F9 Q9 m* X! F little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,' e  u. F; R6 g) Z' J/ ?2 [. L8 w
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 i5 @: ?1 u8 F( h0 }/ H$ V
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 4 e$ m: }. B+ s2 B
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 3 p, b# `% Q$ `

- y" Z% ]- @/ v, ?! Ffor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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0 r7 }1 `" l" o. n$ N: T, adeaest daughter.$ L; q) u% q1 G

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will9 [0 V1 ?1 I. j' ~/ J# M. j2 u+ ?
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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# v7 c: d+ r+ n- D  t[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!( G  |* u% t0 d4 i9 _  W& t! A
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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