作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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) r. Y9 N( Z4 [6 I9 ~　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& H6 _; S. ]+ u every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

( R( A. v3 j0 { was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

/ `: G7 V. ?& z6 \trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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  `$ V) ?9 F6 {; A2 A, Qdeaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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* Q/ d- W. R$ ]# e  K) d0 ]) [% x! l[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
" Q9 ?+ k) `) C$ [2 `0 G6 Awe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

GREAT！