SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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- k6 I+ F6 N' vAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
$ H: B  _) F+ L6 M6 E2 w2 MFour additional tires with rims
$ w( F; H: h8 G; J' \7 a6 yAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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Child safety locks
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4 |% y8 u$ z5 f! {( x5 n9 a( k! oBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
$ b1 q; a  K$ z( ^Airbag: driver
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Alarm
Fog lights
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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1 v6 G) k' O8 u! N5 x; m  I+ aPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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5 n- x7 E6 i6 ^. DIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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; Y5 d% A! W6 _2 g2 M1 f5 V% @$ OIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
$ l8 \1 A2 R2 w7 L0 o IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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/ w% J+ p: z# l( r, u0 J# t4 QDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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' f" A6 N4 Z& q. I6 n0 t0 BBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 T& y9 w9 s- q. I6 j1 A# F3 aFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
( n: c7 o8 n" H& l( a: fThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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" J" e* \9 k4 ?2 r! V% H6 kSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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0 S8 Z, M6 ~) ]5 I$ S6 D- y' TLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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- O3 ]( ?+ Z, p' I/ G& O1 K"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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3 o$ a$ s. C. e  {2 V$ p- KThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

' L7 L8 P* F, R/ G, E  mSorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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