SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
% J  X9 w" N) \  zAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
  o; R4 @( U* W1 hTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
" U- `7 _0 Q, I) b6 c5 eAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
5 D' _( H2 x" q( [Tire pressure monitor system
$ C; }% f. a: P2 M2 [9 f4 |( \2 CInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
) s% s! \& t. @7 v4 q! y% JPower locks
: k0 D  z1 |$ }/ \' YPower mirrors
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Power windows
+ R/ J1 Y* L( n# `) y- WChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
+ e1 p% P* y- i" ABluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
  L: O9 t' J9 y, l+ T" v2 gAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

6 I& P! _, f' E9 A9 S+ sIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
/ h8 G1 C- O( I' V5 d IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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) ?( {7 s+ P3 i: u  J$ lDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 [) b% |) H/ u9 A8 H6 r7 Z这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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2 ^8 d2 P' L% k* l) w) c) y. ?7 ]By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
/ z8 a9 @' z; \7 u. QYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

/ }1 `3 n" R4 }0 f$ BLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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" K" l6 ?% y* |$ b"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

. |" W8 G# y6 j6 IThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

6 p( S& h* \: @9 a) ?5 N4 p. \8 \4 zSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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