SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

$ N+ I; s' D2 p+ Q. Z9 GVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
# a, H! V% q! z9 @. y; p' @Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
8 O) q9 U3 I2 p. \Air Conditioning
" T& W! S2 U: `4 |' g1 yABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
8 G7 A8 r/ S8 \  nInformation system
1 q8 Y7 Z. t0 o: s3 t7 r7 bCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
# S' m1 ~- n( r* u1 h' a7 jPower mirrors
; `7 t% ]/ b4 i4 m' lPower doors
' k! B" T) R* K6 q* `" h' LPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
' h4 T& J% \9 @Airbag: driver
* N6 T: g% K4 G' T2 w; D& }Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
* l: [+ a7 X& Y- i! v: {If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
# _! z' N% m" S1 P8 Z/ L/ MPick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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- @$ T2 v  E8 @( C* B5 h$ WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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0 s+ @: \5 r' u' l' V$ w  sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% Z) n- c8 j1 h( N8 b这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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# y, l/ _8 P+ h! X3 U  oBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
' f! G6 y% l" G" Y5 y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

# C( }+ h  W3 f' n0 D! ^- I哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

0 w$ ^* r; v1 {! D+ N' i  dFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

6 r' U" R/ z! e0 Y2 [9 S9 f* ISorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

# _" M7 D+ W" dThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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