SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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- t; ~/ x" D  q4 vVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
. B& c) C. T8 U! kTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
3 V  `: A- K' nAir Conditioning
! [# f& o8 Q; R2 ~9 L2 SABS Operation
0 h4 k+ d# t5 \9 O' mTire pressure monitor system
& B9 L) D6 I3 G$ u) c9 i7 TInformation system
. P$ x) C+ b) M' oCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
- U7 x% ^2 c9 P# z6 DPower mirrors
# }/ Q8 [* z; q1 p1 G+ Q) JPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
4 F) H# i. T6 QAirbag: driver
7 A0 M. I5 n" P5 }/ eAirbag: passenger
% ^* g3 L9 _4 v# fAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

6 Z& b- V+ D2 D9 @; g4 a4 m**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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7 L/ s, }+ F8 R! P, d2 u  h& zPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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1 j8 a0 }- L" A' BDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
1 g, ?* |% L) o" g IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
1 X; f8 }  G$ B: _# Z这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

$ t1 n3 U7 [6 [" X' }哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ Z/ P3 B) |. l5 fDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
, L/ A% A) T. h4 \Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

5 I  k: m5 K3 d8 g. o! l8 pLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

7 K, `4 P. C$ Y( ?" z/ P"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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3 s' b; H' q. P) RThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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