SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
% }3 Z6 _8 \; kAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
+ _, q+ r- v6 F' o& I4 C7 D3 [Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
; K; E+ {# \7 y3 w' C# T7 [ABS Operation
; m# \% D( f) s4 f- y( e6 v8 UTire pressure monitor system
, U( U% j: Z  }5 ^' y8 @& UInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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Power doors
  U, w$ B5 }5 xPower windows
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+ O" }1 {/ u/ R1 y2 yRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
! H0 i' R" p, b% OAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
4 h( o) O; S% x0 FAlarm
Fog lights

3 R3 F, m- a  Z" b9 p**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
$ m: }3 M- C5 l" b$ Y- sIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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* v* d0 E* m+ W/ o+ m7 tIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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! q$ L4 ~+ l. G4 ]7 cIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
$ u! M+ x: K/ Z& Z8 a* M这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

3 ]; n, M1 g) E哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
" H9 k8 o- g: i8 f8 ESALE A CAR

' V" D6 e, z. T, i9 `8 F" X# l0 {9 sDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

: S- _' t4 A7 A- c, Y4 F, a$ Y"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

8 L$ V# c- N3 h5 C8 ~" l0 l6 |There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.