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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
* M  i7 c# i( ~I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
: Y4 O7 {* ~+ SDreamers, f8 u+ M3 t6 o. h9 X6 H
Savages. ~5 Z# S$ {5 H' S
Poets
$ w+ |3 l( y( E* t* v# BBuilders of canoes,8 m# Y4 H2 G+ [! F  T
Black smiths
: T) u$ @( b1 P1 I& j4 V5 S5 l9 m+ |Murderers,
& X: d6 X: n( |$ d  WRisk takers,
5 r# L- e3 P: S1 b* rMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
3 U$ L: P  m" FAs I think of what could be. ! e1 N- M9 _2 G9 t: a
The world is so big to me 1 t: z6 F+ {- ^8 g$ F  D( J
I wonder what it means to be
/ s$ C8 e, h. II looked up at the star and smiled . L$ A: o) G. j7 A0 t+ e( d
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
/ Q# c& T' t! \% O( z评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。* E: l( `, y+ q+ ?
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,% U' N! Z' \7 H* V. s
A poor old Guy;* M. W- ]8 o1 I* M4 y8 |8 r9 p$ ^
Legs in a bonfire,
7 F- M0 O! X2 C" @  o, aHead in the sky& H; G* B* C# M; Y( L
Lonely, with the feel of betray
" H. b2 ?1 h% p1 Q2 R2 \! |3 F" WHeart empty and hollow; ]2 A9 C9 y7 m% {9 F! u+ _
Alone I stand
% d% D& `8 {1 v: aI am useless to all
% |1 D2 X4 c8 I% o& k; i& |4 L3 nBut I wish I were a dove - z" ^: }2 x$ q# ~: [! }
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
' Q: L- X5 s. J# }I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
( P" }6 T& G. i/ z2 h  j/ y/ ~I sent prayers to my god8 ?; N* m5 r  S- t, {9 X% f" `3 A" o8 T
Though he does not answer
. _: U, K' e6 e* \( Z1 HHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
% N0 F8 p" c8 d0 H, z: l加油加油,经常写写!
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