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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
! k- ~5 ?2 O, v1 A- G' g* }I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
0 A  V% c! r( u7 _Dreamers8 f0 f5 q" P$ _$ A! {0 ~
Savages8 W$ Z( o8 J0 ]+ {( T. o
Poets/ D6 |# i# Q, o. D$ Q
Builders of canoes,% q: c" P) h; N5 {& t
Black smiths3 e5 y4 L* ]8 ?0 b
Murderers,
1 y! u, X, M6 b* I; l8 }Risk takers,
( l6 Z4 f1 F. Z+ l/ vMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
! F( w& n" x1 }1 MAs I think of what could be. : W$ w' u2 V1 i9 ]8 A3 F
The world is so big to me - t$ i5 H5 ]8 M; ]1 r0 n/ k, q
I wonder what it means to be/ p$ g* O( _/ g
I looked up at the star and smiled 1 M, n) [: |- e, B
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ! S/ x7 P1 T6 Y6 k0 c/ f

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
. _" W, O! v4 d% `4 ^3 \评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
6 v0 K* \7 ]4 o# R5 H" i: x9 x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,9 r4 n9 C( w1 h! Q
A poor old Guy;
" v# X% W% u, y/ V5 K( YLegs in a bonfire,
3 a; ]( W! i3 r$ z9 `! T- YHead in the sky) t4 J1 u6 p3 L; f( ^  [0 M. W% p3 v8 W
Lonely, with the feel of betray
' t$ ~4 W8 h+ C9 fHeart empty and hollow( C5 `2 }. T4 k* J" C) M6 K
Alone I stand$ b, e+ F1 o7 G* A
I am useless to all + F, G0 Y) q+ G* ~$ @- J" j6 S
But I wish I were a dove
6 A0 \7 Z! z* m* ?1 bGiving myself to the world, to the fire
: R0 \& |& a; y4 m/ vI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
2 B3 n  o3 }  \) }" CI sent prayers to my god5 [! [8 J# h% n8 M0 y0 z9 z
Though he does not answer& _. n& f$ C; s' D4 M3 S( k5 z# u
He bless me with the gift of hope 5 q# W4 U& k* V. v* }0 N/ T! e

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( E$ |" x; X4 ~6 j' m
加油加油,经常写写!
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