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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 M- K# a" }' {
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
. t) n& U6 [, X) [/ i& qDreamers
3 y( O. b" V4 Z* q7 |- E) LSavages
5 i1 j. Q# u, Y: E% |5 C; Q: pPoets* B. k% ^$ T# P# h: K
Builders of canoes,
9 ~6 I7 ~& M! TBlack smiths
6 j3 y3 z& W+ z6 uMurderers,8 g4 R$ `; ^# i+ K
Risk takers,+ ~, Z- A& o+ Q) d
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
5 u( s: G, z6 m$ n8 ?* Y# }As I think of what could be. 3 |# L# m2 C4 E) W% J# J
The world is so big to me . {5 k& |3 Q  l) [/ J7 i2 h
I wonder what it means to be# t8 _* r( o7 j9 K3 @
I looked up at the star and smiled 7 b% p, J8 ~9 l% q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
' b- [# z' g; x5 r* X/ {3 M评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
( l  k5 U1 f" ~# t顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,8 ~& r  x+ u* w+ A- L! G% m, H
A poor old Guy;8 C% k' \, g4 G  I6 _" h
Legs in a bonfire,: w& {8 V; t$ ]$ }
Head in the sky
: F& {2 k6 ^" U; \+ ?4 mLonely, with the feel of betray! |( v5 }* d, c- W2 y% G
Heart empty and hollow
/ H0 F0 b, }) {- qAlone I stand; L' A! z$ {+ N/ R* V) S
I am useless to all 6 ]3 B# F5 J. \5 s7 I1 E
But I wish I were a dove 9 b# f- b$ s( i6 q8 d' `7 P0 P
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
+ _* p6 R# K- V+ a  c+ ]) C% \I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind+ K6 e' [5 k' [2 ?/ y( v+ z
I sent prayers to my god. N1 R  d. g$ [8 h1 n" q
Though he does not answer# z  f! L6 `/ ?
He bless me with the gift of hope ) y6 R& \. ~4 J2 w1 t$ X

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ K0 ?8 L3 K! _( L. c8 F
加油加油,经常写写!
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