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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ; X0 z  h, X# W6 A% m
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
" h: \6 i5 G" }; s# iDreamers
; t/ v7 r. u" O' Q6 S! r0 {+ S7 D) G- \9 ]Savages
8 s) Y6 _, ]& D7 z8 Z) J1 r, [Poets
& ]  t! d6 e/ i% f0 I% PBuilders of canoes,1 c" n1 A3 _- h  y/ A6 f, A7 Q
Black smiths
- v8 Y  G/ \6 v* }9 CMurderers,
: V& J3 J' [& u% i7 }6 u8 YRisk takers,
3 }( J  B" B1 g, \$ M: Z7 B$ QMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
* j! ~+ }0 P0 s& D& J# WAs I think of what could be. $ n1 ?& U( W) d" Q$ w7 ]' p. b6 X2 m9 g7 v
The world is so big to me
2 G  ?8 B" m) x7 K& @1 ]0 [/ m* N6 EI wonder what it means to be3 d2 N/ G4 `" [  [3 |4 I
I looked up at the star and smiled , @# O7 n. ^# L* f) b
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。3 r6 ~- W$ Q* @) f
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
7 A% U5 p) m: P% c顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, \9 |' Y& F; P; tA poor old Guy;# ~0 A7 w( S* P7 @( z# F/ ^# ^4 W
Legs in a bonfire,
5 N; m. A* n+ l$ a; [" LHead in the sky
. Z0 h: h4 F" r$ }1 jLonely, with the feel of betray; u# ^3 L. c# b: Q5 @7 ?0 S3 ~0 K" B
Heart empty and hollow
, p% e1 k1 `+ C% ?+ {' gAlone I stand
4 e5 a) G1 L5 [  E4 K* o; Z; cI am useless to all # |/ R5 x4 }3 E4 Q" O
But I wish I were a dove 5 B0 Y2 \. l% a- r, p
Giving myself to the world, to the fire( D8 V1 I3 W% B
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
+ [: q% A6 }8 k$ V# kI sent prayers to my god
: z3 P+ E  a) t' V+ p/ oThough he does not answer
4 T, D4 _9 s' MHe bless me with the gift of hope # l# x: P9 W2 n# F$ H
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。% v& I5 H) y# ^% A
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