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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
% V+ d% }; F, O& _( t% a% mI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
0 @" f% ]( C! _8 a0 c7 IDreamers
! `8 ~. n$ s  i) T: c% O, OSavages! g6 r$ Z. O! c9 A
Poets& N% v9 \9 W% K/ D! S
Builders of canoes,
0 v/ l8 {! p! R1 L: h0 pBlack smiths& X! ~8 W9 n- D- r- U! ]! e
Murderers,7 i0 C9 W6 V/ j2 H
Risk takers,
+ ?3 ]' Q7 w/ m, O6 i7 gMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ' r6 P& p/ y- y% s% m
As I think of what could be. 9 `# E$ a) }8 Z; I( `# K( z4 G9 x
The world is so big to me   K7 a" O2 E8 f  l& x0 j' ]
I wonder what it means to be
* W) q4 f- R0 ]0 `' I" TI looked up at the star and smiled ! w, o, U4 X  s& W
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: {! s/ U' x0 V  y" Q! Y& w/ e评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
! e0 t( ?. s3 ^2 e3 [顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# T; [8 x7 a2 u/ K  \1 F
A poor old Guy;
# d  B% G' o: d3 \" nLegs in a bonfire,
# |( x/ ]6 X+ K( wHead in the sky
: c. l7 G! J/ T; |3 m7 i( A- QLonely, with the feel of betray/ Y( ]7 n+ N  G3 a
Heart empty and hollow7 O$ c! F' |& U7 e6 d
Alone I stand
" q+ p7 \- x* }/ Q1 lI am useless to all
. o% i" |' S; xBut I wish I were a dove
' i# Q, |& j! N$ d9 s0 g" pGiving myself to the world, to the fire
8 d9 N( ?5 x6 c4 M: qI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind# I7 G3 m; Q$ W$ |
I sent prayers to my god  G# X, z$ A! ~( f4 |6 r( ~) K
Though he does not answer! V0 _/ U6 s5 d+ ]5 ]
He bless me with the gift of hope + _# F: K$ n# g) w5 D3 N+ A
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
; T1 j2 w$ w9 f. F( B1 L7 |7 d, K3 Y加油加油,经常写写!
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