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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 f% @: @1 _, T) ]) UI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  $ P8 ?% }8 F) J9 J4 J
Dreamers* l- h  I" C* N# e8 e8 K
Savages# g0 G8 |2 U* y, l. u! t) Z$ z* U1 O
Poets, k/ }1 q/ U& b0 |4 L8 b) U$ X
Builders of canoes,
2 b8 M0 d* k8 p2 i( V7 hBlack smiths$ K% L. [; s* C* h4 ?5 N! J
Murderers,% [1 l. Z, Q4 p5 |1 m! F: \
Risk takers,
% i3 F/ p! ?' |7 V! t& kMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ) |4 }# z% c- A, K! u
As I think of what could be. 2 `; r4 d9 v; K) s1 }% k3 Q- n
The world is so big to me 4 t$ Z* p2 z. ~
I wonder what it means to be
' a* e, }7 _. P5 F! k. G$ }9 jI looked up at the star and smiled ) M8 z+ R: T8 g% c2 P5 _) ?
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. & I* Q( q# V3 a% {
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
' q: M; m6 N6 C  P6 i评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
5 ^; q6 r  b: q. v- E. V" v# q) v8 n顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
' l5 U9 R2 V: G4 P7 PA poor old Guy;
% O, I5 b3 r; Z, j5 qLegs in a bonfire,
5 K5 L3 s; G" z9 Z& o8 d3 |$ u3 NHead in the sky" V; @* ~  E- ?" j
Lonely, with the feel of betray
8 G* A; p! b+ K+ w8 kHeart empty and hollow; d7 y6 i$ n% ~) C3 P1 l! w( \
Alone I stand; w+ y2 `1 D4 n) ]& c. L( f. q
I am useless to all
/ r6 p2 T/ s0 tBut I wish I were a dove 5 ^5 t& |( J1 ?* u
Giving myself to the world, to the fire, k. i. y+ \5 b4 w" S1 O
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind% L/ [: ]9 g' U
I sent prayers to my god/ I$ f# F' R  H# g: D/ Q
Though he does not answer
: I* Z0 B) x3 cHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; v( Y% J8 o: l5 I& c
加油加油,经常写写!
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