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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 8 I" p3 T! B6 c, Q* _0 {
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  5 s6 @1 U% x; k4 _  F0 B
Dreamers
. u+ L7 a+ y, u# P6 d( f: [! DSavages
. {& y! g; [0 u4 t4 ^7 H' MPoets, s% \+ ^! o3 T* O7 e, F+ |
Builders of canoes,
- l2 E4 w$ P$ E3 DBlack smiths% @( v  T: c: M, E
Murderers,
1 j* s% w0 }2 Z( Y) p0 y8 {Risk takers,
+ D$ F8 p. t5 o/ M' qMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder / ]# U9 ~$ P% v( K1 c6 r0 b$ s
As I think of what could be.
* {1 l/ Z' Z' {% }" nThe world is so big to me 1 \/ s( C* r) N5 L6 U
I wonder what it means to be& C& l; W$ m" ^
I looked up at the star and smiled
2 I/ W7 @$ \; i" U1 A. HThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. & T! G! h" E( |( C9 ~, }9 v0 g7 K

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
- C3 X9 p# H$ O3 z& ~. u+ ?8 [: _评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。4 e$ k! \, e; ^2 ~8 A
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,; Z7 G6 ]' Y1 t1 h
A poor old Guy;2 y( c; S' q0 Q/ g9 n3 O2 D
Legs in a bonfire,
. @) U2 u2 k2 U8 q7 Q$ [Head in the sky5 X1 i- m0 r( {7 ^+ I5 v
Lonely, with the feel of betray8 \. f& e9 `; ?" N, x$ u
Heart empty and hollow
. `6 g& F0 q0 j" i7 `- `Alone I stand3 u* {. k8 \1 k2 C2 I* o1 A
I am useless to all
: i3 V6 B& h, Z+ d& T5 ^But I wish I were a dove
" N3 L, L0 H' ?" S2 d" a7 q0 oGiving myself to the world, to the fire
5 y/ y. e/ u$ v$ AI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind, S; w; m1 @+ `7 o6 g, H
I sent prayers to my god
7 ]  _/ g5 y$ ~! ?2 YThough he does not answer  |, c1 @7 v3 N2 I0 D# X
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。% U) f- x4 [) S" q$ t! G8 y
加油加油,经常写写!
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