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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 X$ ~. M7 i5 J: }; q
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
- j& W1 k$ `* r/ I$ pDreamers
4 @, Z7 E; r( k* s, `% O0 JSavages8 F6 x" l. |: x+ x) Y. Q
Poets
2 Z  }$ y" v1 N6 A# A1 SBuilders of canoes,
+ |5 `' a8 K& GBlack smiths
$ B2 x# _3 P2 f1 P4 i( j8 XMurderers,
- p7 _  q9 l2 A7 KRisk takers,
2 U! i" i1 j8 m/ f5 bMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ v  |( P( i; g) C0 p: wAs I think of what could be.
% P) H1 ^( j! W) @& JThe world is so big to me , P8 O0 N2 f1 P, r% T' B1 J
I wonder what it means to be* T! D4 a# l9 j, M6 Y. T' i* c2 R1 C
I looked up at the star and smiled " U, j( Q7 Y1 K( `6 n2 J& Z, Q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 T/ I' B' X3 L: z1 R! X评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
$ X1 P1 R, w: R0 l+ j( i6 P  ~顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
5 ]/ m9 w5 h( O9 P; i$ A3 }A poor old Guy;. K+ c4 r3 m3 ^$ D6 v% |- {! x
Legs in a bonfire,
$ X: W  j* V9 f- C4 ~8 x) `Head in the sky
" R- u* j( z, L. o" CLonely, with the feel of betray7 M+ m9 E' V  R2 w
Heart empty and hollow4 W0 a; G- z- M: E6 {
Alone I stand- H1 @8 ]# U" K! q: b! v* z
I am useless to all
5 H/ A- W& G5 m. |6 s, v. ~But I wish I were a dove " U6 H+ c  A4 b. w- A
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
1 n' z; L3 c" lI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
$ p6 Y. e/ c/ TI sent prayers to my god7 |$ Z9 k4 M1 Y+ z
Though he does not answer* h0 w) w* Q* U9 o
He bless me with the gift of hope & l5 V& H1 `0 v/ {( g

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 d0 Q: k( R; l+ P加油加油,经常写写!
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