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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, - _9 `# |2 I' ^! o1 t
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! P4 t4 v* u) |3 D* cDreamers" N% L$ n, D3 ?9 ?
Savages
# G/ g( |4 b, h: dPoets3 J- p0 @+ U  D& ]
Builders of canoes,) f. g/ }3 E; K2 k  r, h" k
Black smiths2 p* u7 ]& E' s5 Q$ L$ o/ m
Murderers,
! y, Q7 ^8 Q3 a( H! tRisk takers,
, t6 x% G! L+ D# {My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
' L4 \0 t" O% K) n" P" P/ i) p4 JAs I think of what could be. 3 j) `! z9 h& c) [+ S
The world is so big to me $ G6 ]6 W$ D, ]
I wonder what it means to be3 Z' \' C4 J2 l4 E- W
I looked up at the star and smiled
; I" W# ~( }$ _0 n* b: v& KThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。6 {4 w3 _: I* E9 ~2 y& V; @
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
0 @7 r' {9 r* c/ W3 [: ?0 i顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
1 p6 ?) H7 d) f& c- x# q" d( F  J; U0 }A poor old Guy;
' F: n: N3 L. \3 i5 @' G% A( m8 SLegs in a bonfire,% U1 ], E7 _7 d  e" a* t( E; y+ w. R+ Y
Head in the sky8 f# K8 \- E7 b. X
Lonely, with the feel of betray4 p0 i5 e* p" w6 _* ~; F( |( k
Heart empty and hollow
, U- s& W, S5 _% nAlone I stand, ], Y. H9 n- K# `7 L' Y2 @' d% k& N
I am useless to all - \; V; [# y+ c# Z* s6 R1 V
But I wish I were a dove 5 V7 _5 F2 b. m- g2 r
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
! t$ j: F4 W* m! m0 t8 J. [I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* A- K) {2 W/ _& ~
I sent prayers to my god1 T+ e4 n3 {: b! L  w: k+ i
Though he does not answer
+ B1 f4 x; @, AHe bless me with the gift of hope 5 s% b  D+ U# X

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。, b; w- Q" B4 Y. U
加油加油,经常写写!
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