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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  {! l' @8 b6 l- E; ?. R/ F! o6 sI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
1 f7 ?, ?7 Y9 k1 e9 FDreamers
0 n& ]' Q2 \8 L" n: dSavages8 y1 C3 j) @* j' y
Poets" A! S& q2 j1 O& t5 F) g0 e0 y
Builders of canoes,
, L( X6 G+ m9 U& ABlack smiths6 |0 ?. _1 A4 M4 Y
Murderers,
. z, ]$ m( i% f  [  D6 Y5 qRisk takers,. D! a; n4 {9 P# n  d, H
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ Y3 [5 ~' ?) m1 MAs I think of what could be. ) v" J2 t$ H2 u8 h$ ~$ \: R6 Z
The world is so big to me
2 n" c2 _/ e0 k  ]+ t. W& oI wonder what it means to be
% e% K. C0 }9 z1 o& z" n7 |3 HI looked up at the star and smiled
$ E- F, m. G# m/ O2 e% f' CThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 6 Q+ U7 |) B' H1 q, e! {( |* T
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。4 d3 t: B" s, n5 q1 }4 n5 Y) \
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
4 E4 q( ^7 Z" m; _顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,2 D: c6 _, d; G0 S: J
A poor old Guy;: r+ i* o9 w1 G
Legs in a bonfire,
& G% }) p( l# p  w; fHead in the sky
* L* t( t) b! {& U" G, TLonely, with the feel of betray5 Q' `( z0 [4 N( J# D, S/ A9 _! Q) ^
Heart empty and hollow2 N( D6 a1 u5 r
Alone I stand
% i7 d- l  |3 f2 uI am useless to all
7 V, Z. B6 |8 q7 r$ ?$ cBut I wish I were a dove
0 B( u7 P. q$ w" hGiving myself to the world, to the fire
) v, Y$ g! ]9 D8 c) u& f( I+ p8 |I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
6 B& g5 T. z( j% ^- L" X; JI sent prayers to my god
' k  Z4 n. p0 j! V, [Though he does not answer4 S# b* I) R( |$ b7 b. i# V9 y4 U
He bless me with the gift of hope , `. h1 W+ g# K% @6 f8 v6 o6 Q
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。' i1 S3 h. E( W0 e' w
加油加油,经常写写!
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