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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
3 ~  y# t" I5 N7 r0 U+ x4 tI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
3 H0 U& ^  p9 m6 vDreamers( e' l# A% B' S" S6 e4 D
Savages* z2 P; h% l/ Z" B4 Z+ m
Poets1 L. O& z  M% N) `2 Q. w% ~8 k
Builders of canoes,; C. Z( [. @8 w4 @
Black smiths
8 n' ?% h  o, F" jMurderers,8 s5 q  n* O; I+ d, I8 t
Risk takers,( B! p% h6 M& P* x: w* h1 o
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
' a2 E: }/ l; A  M- `, UAs I think of what could be.
  t* H7 X  s( h1 h- ^3 WThe world is so big to me / g; m- C3 C6 J; _
I wonder what it means to be
# r# ]7 y* H) \0 H1 \, @4 }$ T' N& |I looked up at the star and smiled 0 I3 h: H* X3 U+ F# O7 b" O9 ~
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* h& u1 K1 Y+ g( X6 k5 t
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
& |- r* U0 G0 j' ~# B3 y1 D# B& H顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,' K/ c- ]% b9 |$ `6 Z
A poor old Guy;! c$ R) P  i2 m. U
Legs in a bonfire,
- B2 q( D4 g- ?0 |8 z2 uHead in the sky
4 {2 v2 ~/ l! M* O9 ^Lonely, with the feel of betray
( m" X1 f  l: @3 j0 pHeart empty and hollow3 O" V" B$ l* i) F, Y
Alone I stand
! t3 @& t9 {0 S" G, k1 oI am useless to all
# Q4 f" T% |5 i7 o7 ]# eBut I wish I were a dove
' X* L5 h$ j( |3 Z% CGiving myself to the world, to the fire
3 s8 `; Y# J2 L- |+ R3 M4 g# SI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
6 |- Q9 u9 @- P7 f* \" b4 G  CI sent prayers to my god
# r" Z  v- E" E" \5 lThough he does not answer
) h+ q8 o1 @" U* x/ bHe bless me with the gift of hope
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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
" C1 p( f% n0 r1 l+ q1 G加油加油,经常写写!
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