天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
  P3 L* ]6 T) v1 y( ETouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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$ D& a; t9 E( b+ Z鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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0 G0 I# b6 z8 j% q; ^SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
' C; c: j5 Z" x* N+ dI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.