天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
' j9 t. G& O" ]- a  z9 [  KTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

% B. H& L7 N: f1 o8 l鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
/ R* C/ ^3 Z5 a9 |Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

% q; o) Q1 i4 n鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
9 a# q6 Z& s2 B% V+ r+ j$ FSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

  N; x$ R" p, u  n哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
$ |: \: ~% K# t3 tI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.