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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 # e, m" ^2 V5 Y) P! Z7 r) O2 D

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7 L# k8 \( v: ]! p: E我尊贵的邻居
. T% W0 W% z9 Z( s( }+ X是我们小区  几十户0 p  w  |/ J" K" W' N/ k1 r/ S0 {
唯一的元老, D# J( q& ^1 ^
一住三十多年+ z- c0 X% j0 H0 X8 I) n" @
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
7 v, q' b" y# H% ^白发红颜  不见皱纹
/ v4 ^3 O! L8 F开车铲雪  挖土栽花' w. }" a- h/ l: f, C
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
% V  }6 b  a( g7 w邻居气宇轩昂+ |; J8 ]* s4 o* Q: u" T
如同女面朱熔基6 I- }2 H7 B( D9 v* ?
邻居的字: O% Q+ h! d+ m8 K
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤( i. |- e+ p& m

) U, c1 n. a1 I. _0 x3 O" {1 g邻居酷喜中国文化8 [! B7 g2 a4 ]# I6 k# e
说她属土龙6 b  V$ R, I8 _1 a' `$ U
其笛声也悠扬* ^( B! |! n! A
那是从隔壁传来的0 e$ g; t& K6 R
唯一的声响8 Y* Q6 E* r( S, {4 v2 X
那不知名的曲调. z# o& _; z% l& E/ }" x+ S3 Y6 x. l
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 % S+ ~9 |9 X" R5 B; P7 a
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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9 B+ E. u' O# G" LLiving here for more than thirty years,9 J: r$ r$ p4 U: d/ N
my prestigous neighbour
% q; N) Q' S; u4 A+ t! w; _7 ~+ Cis the only first owner of the unit properties( V% |4 K/ j5 @7 O( ]1 O
in our community ---
" W& ~! r) V, M! Ztens of townhouse condos./ _1 N0 H1 l6 ~; f) Y* A
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
  [$ v5 G  R6 H0 p& ~/ A& mmagically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
/ R% M1 @  g# rShe has white hairs and red faces.
. s& X$ L* Q- u" j" gHer light-footed movement
. r, o; F! E9 Bis just like a flying swallow.
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; E4 O1 [, T5 q4 P6 JShe shovels the snow on her door lane
0 K0 p, t, z6 F. I( _before driving her own car;$ ]: k) o& O# \: C2 N# O3 g' @
she digs her back yard, \# F# \: e; n7 o7 z8 i- c
to plant flowers ---
1 c& T6 Z0 X6 n& u$ l& Qas if she did not know what years mean.
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4 z7 g% F1 Q, s# n, x: IWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,, L3 `# d/ a/ L- l, M
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---/ u' `/ `  k* B' E
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu." Z' q5 Y+ W( i0 P, i, F
Neighbour's handwriting. m6 R$ `1 S- @% R! W! M5 D# ]
is so vigorous as to be the old trees$ t" V( p! Q: [8 T% z
interwined by dry vines.$ [" ]0 @5 {6 c: [

0 F. g2 F- i4 N% t6 @, _* X. RNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
, o6 g6 K9 T$ f6 RShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
  {: v0 I1 \' @" o" w/ d- N  TWell, her fluting is very melodious ---% v$ Y* q9 N2 b3 y3 M
that is the sole sound going into my ears
: U6 X: y) e' s# o1 F- m% n+ gfrom the next side of my wall;
& L" e( T3 l6 ^  N* U' B+ Zthe unknown tune is extolling9 _  A# K# F6 k5 r+ j
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,( L1 o6 n+ H* S' E* g) f
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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, ~3 u) a. H- ^$ N* p( U5 ?土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
8 N+ h# [; X" S' ?' ?# T3 @$ N/ {Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

4 H( i$ P. V5 D  P7 _从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
; v& h8 f9 l, r( D+ C另外,翻译改动一处:7 I4 y: S+ A. }9 i& ?& I8 |* }% m
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement, L5 C$ M  `5 h1 b- x, q9 H
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 7 c8 L3 ?$ {6 Q0 i1 Y' b# q& W
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
& W7 R5 E' S* t/ i7 g& W# v0 Uhm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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