儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

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1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

0 k2 k7 ~; i6 f/ v7 A  LI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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4 B7 s; Z$ I# o" y7 Q* G2 F9 L* RI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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' x; H& j1 s3 v0 \- i9 wYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

% i7 u7 t+ X" h# S4 GI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

, d1 j& D5 n& T# W6 E! r7 p  lI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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5 U, t% Z- L& `: O/ d( rYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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5 O, F% {1 t+ |# _! UI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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4 d* }5 N$ q9 ^# e- M  VYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。