我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
: V. y8 c1 z. t, _4 x# qSummer's Coming
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* F$ T7 n; J7 e& tFaster, hotter and sweater,
, D+ n9 l' V3 I- S, L6 l  KSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
2 m, u+ b: b0 V0 lFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
, o# A! O  Y( J( L+ N# `4 R! Y( ZWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
. _, L, n# E* o5 QMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
& B' T, T& Z! ~0 _5 d1 S
一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
7 ^! l% M! ?$ O- B. ^, t5 m* Q) |+ }夏天来了