我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
% N8 Z: f" }6 a) s是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 z* B; p3 P* I; k# U2 H% nFrom the colorful nature
1 @6 d( T  o- f, K  D5 x) JTo my life and dream.
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6 S. X) ]: M# z; i: G' SFollowing the summer's step,
* o7 V6 f4 C6 c# ULet myself go ---
! S; H. v8 A. ?* J) G5 q2 `* ZGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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- V6 x5 P2 s+ C7 H% p4 k0 y; Q4 UGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
1 F9 l; D6 q7 M, q0 ]6 IMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

  H0 ?) t0 i; `3 z% ?; S0 P一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
  E4 [2 y: H7 S! p夏天来了