我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

" E; U' [& m+ ^3 _7 ^) qFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
, R* X% x# `$ n8 ^From the colorful nature
# h) N5 P8 P# S$ zTo my life and dream.

) C  h1 ^% U& O4 q$ nFollowing the summer's step,
) g) ?) ^) ~8 F3 oLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
) }7 o! g# V% _3 {& \Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
' z9 o( O- w) W' l; UI can prepare nothing;
; q9 i1 O6 k) z8 \2 q; z) E! lMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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8 E% s! r" r+ t" g6 n5 Q一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了