我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
- s+ v/ @! d( D3 I4 ]6 Y1 |Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 i8 ]- `, X# y. g4 K/ m0 EFrom the colorful nature
( v( e& f5 j- G/ nTo my life and dream.
- K3 X5 S1 c5 v: V! x, D
Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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8 Z: J: H5 S/ [Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
- b( v  L* r% O! i' T& RMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
3 I. I9 m+ x" k5 ?" qIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

# |( R$ X2 ~4 B# [% h4 P4 K0 Y( r( E[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了