我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
3 }( c8 m/ r* [% M, v
) p/ ]9 @) Q6 Q9 X) |8 R. r- T, e  X- sFaster, hotter and sweater,
6 d7 T5 q3 S6 U9 ?Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 _( e, q* P, {3 z! z& lFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
$ i. W- d0 f4 O, p3 \- i5 e# t5 ^Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
3 L* d+ m1 L, l5 q9 ^- y) NMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

$ P; d5 ]5 y! B6 ~7 m( F* q& _一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
0 n- R: B: V) R( xIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

& A9 ?7 W& F( h0 E5 |& g* W[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
& j/ k5 c2 l) [1 M; X2 l) ]3 Q  E夏天来了