我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
( h3 c/ G4 P( b, o* x4 X是十多年前的作品了——
" K7 [, R3 _+ {5 q' Z5 vSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

$ F# v3 h4 F% F8 h1 {$ sFollowing the summer's step,
( f" _5 x) N; c' ALet myself go ---
5 K$ f6 [# h6 E$ OGo to the wild rain
) u4 t, h+ [6 Q, t5 m3 vWashing my heart and soul.
, ~$ c8 H0 t9 {8 y
2 j& L  B2 B: K1 }- K3 DGood-bye, my happy spring;
1 I3 i2 J4 {! M* n5 l' @% QGood-bye, my childish dream.
) }  k. u: U- W. \& B2 qI can prepare nothing;
; a5 x. I7 g1 Y- O5 n6 X4 o. NMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

% B! c! P) r+ @0 d一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

4 s1 L7 T( i) V. Q6 D7 w0 f[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 }0 f4 |: O7 K' s# Q+ h7 q% J5 A! M2 T夏天来了