ZT:送给喜欢高雅文学的人行明镜同志

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竹枝词 刘禹锡
The Bamboo Poem
2 u* s/ P! G. gLiu Yuxi
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1 @) l( Z: }1 K杨柳青青江水平,
The willows green, the water even.

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# |% A2 X* p! t. ]4 ?1 d1 ?4 X闻郎江上唱歌声.
The song he's singing, with the river flowing.
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东边日出西边雨,
; y' E  Y7 F+ I8 |/ Z  LThe east side sunny, the west side showery.
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道是无晴还有晴.
Just like the weather, his love towards her
# F$ v$ L1 D( u* Z, Z3 Q4 d1 t5 sClear or not, hard to find out.

* G+ n, V6 t1 k% u+ ~9 ^6 ?*“晴” 字最难翻，是“晴”还是"情"，clear 可作天气之晴朗，亦可作感情之清楚

冰山上的来客

也许英语的水平实在太差了，虽然意思理解，感觉不到像中文诗中的那种意境！！

人行明镜中

竹枝词 刘禹锡
The Bamboo Poem
" x) I$ s8 X5 K5 \0 I' x3 R9 wLiu Yuxi
! E: _, P; N$ u  `5 W

; n- Y) T2 U+ p% f6 T杨柳青青江水平,
6 }7 H; B* M9 H  Z5 k- v8 g+ sThe willows green, the water even.

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闻郎江上唱歌声.
& s4 _2 j- o( q6 AThe song he's singing, with the river flowing.


东边日出西边雨,
8 z1 a. [, c0 r, S- y5 ?4 L, gThe east ...
! V, J* L. \  O3 nsuvescape 发表于 2010-8-10 23:33

诗是最难译的，可意会不可言传。

Marlin