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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.   U+ D1 T, u0 Y

- N! P2 U2 R" I' ^  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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- W8 `/ s, o6 V: ?8 }  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. 2 Z6 p6 J/ R# {

8 P; b2 U8 X0 D/ w& b  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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8 i, B5 Q' O0 A7 N3 g4 K  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 7 f! g, Z4 X% Y* p
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. ; Q( A# j! Q" i& V) @
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  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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  6. Their brain is still very young.
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  改进: They are still immature.
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  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ! i- E  d. e: H! W" S5 v8 Y9 b

$ ~/ o! H( n& n: q% i, d7 E1 q  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. % h- q! b$ |4 r# e) S

1 u( k; f8 V% ?3 Z5 {# V3 ]  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 7 G: l: H6 b/ h( o5 I
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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' d; n0 {4 P  F4 D: T$ M& p  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.   o4 O2 O2 a3 e9 n4 o( K, r2 _

8 p& y* f: c; z, Q0 i  j) C  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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% N4 p" \6 e* k! E* Z  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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6 E2 y; z9 Y. I  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. ! M, W0 w! n& b' W* z

: _( y2 s% z5 w9 a$ ^7 a  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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" p* T6 T/ E* l  X  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. ' A7 y7 E! t% D3 p1 I' ?
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. % X, D6 j& h/ }/ Q7 b4 s, u" Y

6 P. G& Z! z$ A, V, |  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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. W* V; Q" Y/ Y7 h1 _7 q  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. " |$ F3 x* J; K7 {. e0 O

. ^9 |" @0 ]% f$ }( }: l1 W! W  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ; ~! z6 V2 i  M; ?3 C: F

6 o4 }, Z, H: D9 S9 i7 G  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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4 \8 l; s& [" a* u( ~& P  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.   }. ~2 M+ D0 I- H

" U% z, Z) c2 ~+ y( P) s, a  改进: This knowledge will become part of you. , Y: _3 l0 _; Q; [" m

% ~7 P6 I3 W( }2 g4 p4 F. |% o  19. They cannot think clearly. 2 N0 R8 [* U1 j0 @! F& {$ ]
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  改进: They cannot think straight. & S* @" s& h$ h. w/ O) c( A: ?
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  20. Money can improve their living standard.
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; d1 X' P5 i! o7 E+ j  改进: Money can improve their life.
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, P  o8 X& E7 I8 p! z  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 2 ]: M0 Q; o3 |; a# J% ?

, ~5 z" W) x( o# P  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. ( g: J  ~& \0 \( u! C) J& ~/ T3 V

+ ~+ `; z- [) z2 \; V& c% E( @  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. 6 u' S9 o, p/ Q& Y/ B7 o" D

0 }% z; a. b- t8 E  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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- e$ _3 D; w/ ]* a1 b6 b# X& @' X  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. 2 Z# P4 f+ y& e2 u% M" I+ D
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. 0 ]. H$ M. M' I( W6 T

$ `( r8 A1 @( r- I5 Z. A6 [  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. ; d7 F, A3 h. f( T; d

# n; `( Q% [# q  |4 S  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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( m, w# ^  r' h9 W3 @0 F  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. * K8 H8 ^! Z: t  t" ~9 w

  l5 E* \3 c7 z- Z) o, ~  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. $ W) d3 ]' X; H5 s

  o/ b# K7 ?) w  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 2 F* C. p, w5 I4 a

; y, j( Z& D6 D2 P( r- v  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. + {8 T: G* h; H5 _6 |

; T* q+ H1 v5 F2 l0 t  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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  28. What's about nonsmokers? ! s+ u4 n3 f0 r, b; c

* k& A0 R. R# L  改进: What about nonsmokers? " ~: H: m3 m: f2 G
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  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? ) i8 L: Y3 t7 r  B' W0 V
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  改进: Why not be a non-smoker? 1 U, s: V) I8 U6 M! s
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  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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" V7 d0 c+ P1 O0 h8 u  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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0 d6 d' V# u7 J5 R  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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  33.It is children who clear about their interests. * ?. B) L5 W  z! G  z, ?

* T8 O4 u) Q: @2 B  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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  34. I agree the latter idea.
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  改进: I agree with the latter idea. 6 o$ I) x0 b; s9 A/ v; X
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. $ v" m7 u2 ^$ l4 x

5 G# |8 \& G6 }8 g  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. + @3 o! l) E- c+ o$ L

7 _9 D0 k- c! H) c7 M  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. ' W6 O- z! D- T% V4 i

5 Z, d8 K: k8 D* W  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. " S- Q( n1 |1 o7 W8 @# j
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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  38. No one knows all the things. ; b  M* G1 p; F0 ^

+ u0 q2 S0 \% }; }3 ?  U, @- b3 e$ u  改进: No one knows everything. : _1 F- ]5 B& c; m

: C# w5 {4 l- M- u- }3 h  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. * A7 T+ A3 R8 L; E

4 D9 J, j6 y' x8 k  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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8 j& ^. M* P3 `% P  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages / S, V/ s% |6 Q$ K. c
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. # e8 }- u0 G" a( C
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. ) C; k/ f6 p  G8 `6 K$ c$ B
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  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. " ?$ @+ P! o# t* `: A- X

+ G$ t- \: _. r" ]; i  43. They will learn the bad habits.   N! j) }- s# c7 N( R3 [7 C3 w
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  改进: They will develop bad habits.
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- Q* K5 Z, M8 ]! K  44. In this continued process, people make progress. 3 E! @" C  a+ |. N' u" X7 ]; l; n
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  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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1 w/ N. g+ {1 L* a# z' ]  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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$ [7 K4 [* p5 h9 n: _3 E  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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4 ^/ u% \' b5 u8 O; D$ d- F" o  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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) \5 G  Q7 L9 `1 |1 ]  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. 8 L$ U( F/ Q; m
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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: P6 D6 S' ]9 i  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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, _" P/ q+ }/ m& Z3 `! n  50. I felt alone.
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$ u% A" U' b! b; f. a  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks
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发表于 2005-2-24 09:08 | 显示全部楼层

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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