锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

! r3 t! b" c  C% w9 \　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

2 h9 d0 I% |+ h( B　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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7 E! m- @+ {3 y9 C9 K8 n9 j1 O$ P　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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& O% K4 |9 s* b; c. L　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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% m3 w  j/ q0 r　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

6 \+ f4 r" L8 n, B- E# r1 q　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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; S' u, p0 C% x/ z　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

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# Z. c5 j: L; t5 i; Q6 T# h2 N5 J; L　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

5 Q  l5 `0 Z; U+ `. X$ @　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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5 K2 m: F# e7 C0 C, G! Y　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

' ?, O! Z+ Y3 r" M0 u/ O0 i( t　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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) @3 z. n) {2 n! B) l; Z* m# r, y! s　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

2 c0 H/ Y" C! M, E+ W　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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* W% q) h6 e6 o2 C8 _) T* ?　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

; ?/ V8 K, J' ]: K　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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* r- r( t: Q  ]1 \: o5 j$ a　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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  Z+ ~: k3 {8 D7 C# f/ O9 ~　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

( z3 o( l; {* D, x$ X/ [　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

+ Q- C# T2 h) V  F7 ^　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

' X1 \- Q* O5 o' v  R; Q- a6 k" k　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

- t' ?, r6 R6 [0 M　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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% B; I. n9 V& u  g! u3 |& \　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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. R7 g' v) I2 y6 Z　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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* j' e$ p! U& k4 O5 e, R　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

: i. K1 y3 T% L3 t% ^　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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7 O2 \9 `2 a1 ~7 O　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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1 W. F' T$ a# S6 ?$ Z" F1 o　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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; Y; C; n% @1 ]4 H3 ?5 P　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

; H# g: n) \& p, y9 P; w7 W　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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9 i) J) h, v4 S- N& ?4 ~　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

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4 y% y: V3 \; d& ^  G　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

8 q1 c% r" \) n: A& Y3 Q4 a; _) W9 p　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

3 k2 |1 o' c& O+ Y* ?2 f　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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- z9 H5 m8 J; K- D　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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) `/ H% q7 L) T( Y) q2 ]1 _　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

6 c. E# M; T1 M　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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* [7 X& t! t; q+ B. A4 j3 p　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka