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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
+ j% v% a) ~) O5 W/ x2 l,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
- S! _) r9 J% k" M零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 0 w5 g- ?5 v6 L( g8 U
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name." L% Y! m& Y F0 u$ F
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
8 f8 Q5 N" d: a2 [眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
" I' y1 v9 y, p$ Q7 z2 u/ F夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.* C" [5 `+ Y3 X& J. e; p% y; |
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.: d3 ?: p/ p) y" o7 }1 R! ~
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence." m4 }$ X3 f& n4 O; j! i4 o
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及4 j/ G4 E& c* r0 _% j5 v
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。- L/ E) L# }8 w8 C/ n1 x; O
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.% Y. ? m) I- Z: U; T
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.. w3 L7 g( m b, p% D' l* Q& L* N
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
" _& \1 B$ K) O9 ?最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. / M- d% Q$ z4 S' [- ]: P. c
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
- I. Y. }5 \8 W# Y! R s醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
5 \0 l! ]7 i9 L9 J迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction./ I8 H$ ?/ j b2 i8 @8 q
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
1 E+ h5 ?! D5 U3 W' W* G多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
2 p, O* k) m, f3 hWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
3 S# I. P/ p! j4 H3 O6 p3 _多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
1 U6 H$ P( e( [. H/ W不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.5 w3 I9 l% v+ v- X' T) }
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
/ J7 ^: ?, \5 u/ J. b' n为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
0 [% c; F4 k9 i: ~( `0 A多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
) ^4 T5 L2 M/ Q- d9 C) `永难平息的泪3 x' } W" c& X- f9 o
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
6 T, u; n2 {9 V$ J$ `4 ]~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.5 M' M0 r, C/ Z; P6 D+ v( o+ P7 ~
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably." ^, g/ I: o. F6 R" W9 I
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
, V1 @# V1 o; e" L你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul + Z: O' w3 U5 M; M; p! H
一抹微笑;
6 X+ d3 V- \+ e一个手势;6 t, A. C% Q( l5 u" z" P# K; h
一片话语,
: t, a* s- ?$ o' b, u愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
( \, @# @0 J9 f5 N% ?' ?" k# @明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner" _# v0 B" {1 x1 {9 x* l
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
6 A0 `+ U! o: o6 s9 ~/ h5 o这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling% e0 h t' O" y0 A9 o' v
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
" U2 r( X6 L% [ c* d; ]) |起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
7 U0 O% n& F- u- H$ e我并不以为然。
: g4 g n( ^% s8 |2 I8 P4 F" S可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
4 }2 J% \1 t- a( Z' d慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
4 V5 B6 ] s9 _- H6 d6 L$ a, M被一种情绪所左右,
: W/ W; Z+ v( q( R" ]( ~0 u6 c/ w/ `总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .' l9 s. U7 A1 @/ T$ K" K* C$ Q
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
1 a) ^6 G6 n3 r5 B9 M" D6 K+ A也不问我是否喜欢你," Q5 C1 U8 j: i. ^4 D G$ p
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
0 |) N" A3 ]( l只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
6 o$ u( A' Y7 [; a8 d* c, F3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you& V& ~# B1 F+ w2 [
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil. E8 {0 i3 u2 |7 v7 ]8 @2 H5 E
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 2 G. G- @8 s6 Y* a! I+ k
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
# A$ x9 K) r- T; T; o% w记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
) {" b2 R! K- ^9 T( F3 ]你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
- S* r/ h( H$ ~) r/ O/ j随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
) n5 A5 U3 {% Y2 w+ E9 b# R哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
4 m& |4 l3 S9 \3 U8 y6 W! {$ b一种声音,and your voice
7 V; Y2 b6 l3 r0 B- B& m3 N也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
9 S3 o- X2 i" L- Y( V% ?掺杂著幸福的感觉。4 g0 J( g% l; n! i% e
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
2 W! `4 N1 o8 z* d! [象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
7 F! [8 t/ }8 ?倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; l f7 s& b9 \3 |0 b3 K Q, W( ]$ b w
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
7 u0 B( B, V0 r8 H. }4 v你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss1 a/ ?" w4 s9 O* m( v4 p
有一个能够让思念的人,
3 A y1 t% S, F' R其实也是一种幸福。
, o. B/ U0 f0 T( D尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
1 \+ \. M! P- \柔柔的海风,
( J$ B; L! ?5 y0 Y0 `甜甜的夏天。" c# N8 |5 W/ g# e L7 M
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy - W+ z- g }6 m/ [
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
/ \8 ]' o0 {1 u" }7 D1 o0 `3 U仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do./ ~* W& z2 b" E. p' a
想和你有共同的情结,7 ^# `% M x# N% P# c# Z, C
共同的心愿。" _1 n) w( v: ?, T) [7 Q
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, s5 ]/ j& o9 H& c" L. T. G好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you9 A7 @4 H; z# a" @$ ~% Y6 d
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together1 K; w/ q* h$ O
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film $ G! m. [' ]9 G1 I/ E$ s9 E* h
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
+ J8 A( V7 G& H4 C『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?+ M9 Q7 ~- G, T _' N
我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
+ x) b, B# K, @9 C( [浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”2 a* i0 ?7 K& F& F" y# `
或是轻轻的一吻,
, l7 M+ _. \! B6 f& c0 E再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
8 g5 C' Y- o# \6 F& ~- \, L就足够了. That is enough.
, P/ H! k* C! ~这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ( B3 u u) b% g9 P& D# O# q% \
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
( j8 V8 m! r$ C" i# z$ E萌出了芽,
' f. J/ ^4 O* j( M0 t& S. Q) [一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
% T+ l7 g1 ?4 o; K浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
7 m- u# t4 t! @7 a6 l, l如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand! m" e: s+ s; r1 v) \& u
能够牵著你的手,
i( u* ]) Q8 e/ \那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
; O$ C0 d9 Z4 R# z2 m6 Z让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 6 Q/ x8 c8 v. \/ C1 e' m# J
慢慢地细读,0 o9 X1 {, J$ t, D$ l9 N7 C
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
: ~& T d5 S' G9 a% o在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ; k3 ^/ N" ]' j" Q$ Y! |
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
. n Z1 G' R! i2 O z2 {就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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