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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
+ f+ x5 N6 w( Y,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
- U5 X% r* b& F4 f- D; \零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
+ B9 _: ^4 s. c# q% R现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
2 A7 ], ]; [; ^- H梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
# v3 X' @% o* i3 ]% z眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
8 g% p0 B6 K/ n( l, r9 m3 M夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
) {1 Y3 e5 c' l* k猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.+ V D! v8 W) l2 D- S$ @2 a
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
$ h9 N. j$ |5 Q4 v我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
3 @6 F% Y, J( s那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。) ]* ]1 m) ?5 I u1 K7 z+ B, Q
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
7 W: N; t8 m! [( X5 E- ^, j) [昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.8 Q* S) a$ }1 Q8 e2 z* _
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.* Y* J/ ^: F8 e" f
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
+ S# {+ ?7 r1 F9 J+ n% y% P寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
4 f- O- F6 N8 n% i. E# x5 Z* }醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
$ M" u Z# {$ b+ L迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.$ r$ F' w9 x! J; W2 Y' J+ T+ [
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.) H. i+ k( |4 O" [" L0 {4 V5 [) |( E
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
& W/ _- d' Z: y: SWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
- F+ F: A9 }5 D, \9 N7 Y多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously+ k, @5 h0 j4 o8 ?* L# z2 x
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.1 M% Q( k0 H9 _" d+ x
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, ( p/ ?" R: S \6 C+ X; G8 U
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
5 J$ m! s% m* S# Z: x, m多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
7 s" W+ d, c1 {2 d+ [永难平息的泪
y3 r, W4 ~' {# q每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
( L8 E0 Y- e4 V7 J d6 I~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
4 t" @9 }2 w/ g$ S当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
. T4 Q# K6 |, ]! B7 L8 }( Z- F让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
: w8 P) H' p1 @7 t3 E你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
: e# U! c \3 _% j H一抹微笑;
4 O. g6 z4 J$ V$ ]一个手势;! ]! Q! V! b. i" q: {
一片话语,
0 J. y* j/ Q3 S5 ^8 F5 d4 `, ?愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
9 C M4 n3 a& g/ J2 W明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
2 S% o5 r% @# o: ^6 f5 h心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.' E' m! s; g4 w: I! y/ [7 n5 j
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling8 T% i% z1 P, W6 k: a8 C" o* Z
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..- e' }! R* `0 A; q- q6 \: b' a
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
! m* F S1 J- S" x我并不以为然。
' d0 H% D% A4 _. g; Z可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
7 X* [& M: H. ~* x& y9 k慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
5 x5 Z, Z& |' B \被一种情绪所左右,, B( Q# R" z1 t& ?& [
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .( N7 M1 F. R1 l; f2 V& w+ m1 K* c
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you) D9 q0 i e5 g- W5 v! s; R2 w
也不问我是否喜欢你,
# f+ k; R, k" M0 E对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
6 _4 o: `) ]* t2 r6 M5 i+ V! R只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you7 i, |9 ~" [/ p, r: p
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
6 R. u5 O7 a& o: Z6 r0 t心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil" J# L7 h |. M& e6 K2 A* r! g3 N
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 1 z, N" P6 @, D6 e
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
/ y" u% S# K+ g记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.$ s4 r% }; X# f3 d
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! ( O/ f) x3 K+ T5 Z
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
_5 R( d( L0 M6 e7 R哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,% u) w* D' V, K/ T
一种声音,and your voice8 X" Y* D; j9 O$ T4 V
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
% G7 o; d6 I$ X9 o9 T掺杂著幸福的感觉。' k$ X! t" M3 h; z$ p
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land9 o O. H% I# \, j. ~ d( R* _' p
象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
5 ~# [5 j: S+ O# J4 _( T, o倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
& K% q* f2 o2 ?$ ^" ?* P纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。/ a2 Z7 q8 b- N6 F2 j" a
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss! H# M& C* L- _1 L
有一个能够让思念的人,
' L; g) d9 r8 K% R: }8 T其实也是一种幸福。
& z" ~1 Z& U# j1 q/ W9 L4 |尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. " _( T3 e" s; e" j$ ^
柔柔的海风,8 w/ [9 _' m, m) B
甜甜的夏天。/ B) F, d( B/ L6 @% b- i( t
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy # i, D9 O* R( p6 a, V3 U9 y( E
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
# s. q, I8 T' p( G S: B仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
1 y4 S8 j+ p& Q4 g想和你有共同的情结,6 S3 X$ ?! n+ F( O- n4 U
共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you; x( V2 n3 U P$ T
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
; s( n% g) R3 B- [或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film ' i1 L. p. r+ a6 x0 k
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.: h' k/ f1 z' q0 z- h" ?0 s
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
0 G) o; c( b- Q' U) U- j我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, $ {7 X5 A; m6 U: y5 p5 C# B; s& n. _& E
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
7 n" i( n# _% ~% K或是轻轻的一吻,$ p. D5 g- O3 [/ B
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』) A7 q% r6 z. b
就足够了. That is enough.
1 V; a& @9 T: v/ r E这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
7 Q; w8 X! t2 d. h% T+ e- \2 @) W终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
: y4 B" [) d0 \: u, |萌出了芽,
, N8 Q0 n5 t( A/ Q一如对你的思念,the same as my missing4 `# L0 ^1 j8 U/ h4 Q7 V
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
7 [) Z7 z/ ?, W4 y$ H8 ^: E如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
9 O- _2 o5 X$ ^5 ?( C能够牵著你的手,$ v7 j( n/ B6 Y/ r4 R/ d0 o
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.; _( ^+ P$ ~& _2 |, e( C7 z
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
. ]' x+ X4 C( n) h2 j慢慢地细读,
2 v5 o, ^1 V. y! x我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 2 u# K9 h# C+ W1 L/ T3 M
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
& Z# m3 {0 w1 M. _) ~$ a( D: U我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 4 i+ z0 }, c' {1 e
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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