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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,$ p, U) |( A$ N. F: c, H3 e
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. X- h& y- q c
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
' Z; S3 _& [) d* c# h+ Q! G' A4 J现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
* s* z7 q m% y" W! L* ]* N1 H0 n梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
; y( @" m4 o" o. N9 ]! a+ W, S眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.+ K J. @- e" d, A( _9 ]- ^8 ?3 y4 i- t
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
' V' M3 f0 Q s/ q3 E9 r4 h6 u猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
7 J7 r; Y- K2 B( `2 m) U就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.. l( s/ B6 ^, n2 `+ {, q* R
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及3 B; `3 o0 w$ R0 g" @
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。. |' c* g8 r/ r* e
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.4 D j v& j. o1 f- u8 T0 U% ]
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
/ \* S$ u4 @$ [6 U% l' `想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up./ f4 p' c2 D+ U2 N' E g
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ; r6 z+ S# I4 X( Y6 z, u
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
# B8 j4 O& ]% |6 F8 B2 h醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold. s3 |7 s# X6 e8 L5 L4 I' b5 z
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
8 o" S0 I( ~9 _& D9 R# r最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have., _( ~5 G7 ~7 D" m: f) b
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
! b |: K, x+ U# W* RWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
/ d5 l6 r/ y0 C" Y8 b多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously) k7 a8 T" [+ E8 R) _ ?
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
8 ^1 B, i2 B* U多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, j9 K+ L8 N+ z7 h7 H W8 W
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?; L9 A+ H9 K& i. t5 J* d
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
) t4 V3 a9 Z( \2 Z* H永难平息的泪
+ P2 ?3 S) O1 A& R$ C8 y1 E1 b每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes& ^- N7 h0 w) W T2 p, R
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
. H( E7 D. r- Z: u# c4 M" [当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
" M2 }" O3 B! \. m8 D, m让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
5 G# C, T. }( ?你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
/ V* g* T: P- }7 t一抹微笑;
( m6 T4 \- j2 C) |3 e4 F: Y5 `' {一个手势;. p* p* K: E( a9 h9 a
一片话语,
+ `. {5 A$ ^- m5 t$ p) C) \& N愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
, o$ K$ G4 M5 z4 P/ a9 X明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner
: B5 y- a( h- N# L" g ^# |% w心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy./ R+ x, e5 X/ r- C$ P6 V
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling4 l6 |8 Z3 [* }5 R, ~8 s% O9 D
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
/ R+ @: _5 S3 w, Y, q起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,2 I) L/ t3 U. H: I2 [: n4 O) U @
我并不以为然。
4 Y0 N8 R" G+ J3 N可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed % d) W- X. e- A' @3 D
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
. @, R' s2 y: r/ T& W被一种情绪所左右," d3 c% k$ d) T/ \1 x6 r2 ~4 ~' ^ l
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
$ m0 W; @" d% z即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
+ H2 z6 F( `) ?3 r& s- w. j也不问我是否喜欢你,& n i$ H( R, K* u* b& g
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
$ f, o8 I' @# {% ]只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
: r; t- J, h2 Q* w4 b3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you9 @) X0 v0 V3 H) [( u; O z# O
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil. v7 w; H6 I6 c, a7 T, H J
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere & `5 g. _, O! U- Z! ?) k8 T! w
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
5 O6 i( m% f0 F# F) I& I5 h2 f记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.' n5 U' A. A* t: J v0 {8 q
你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 2 E9 f0 n& p' e) e! J+ y1 X
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字3 `$ p+ s2 p& f s; ~
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
! ^8 c5 b7 }5 R* I. ]一种声音,and your voice
4 N5 D7 B- S4 A也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
5 A0 w Z. k2 n% v3 M- ~# W2 `* \# V掺杂著幸福的感觉。) v/ Y0 C; w, h& ]
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
7 d' R! R8 I) H3 c/ r象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
3 x- T& H* s. P: e) W倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
) P- F* a" d) a3 h纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
% i5 \- K5 {- _- b" E9 P你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
! f( [" q D0 T有一个能够让思念的人,% r) m( f _* Y( @" g
其实也是一种幸福。
( t" Z4 I2 \% R5 R1 r尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. 2 ?) t5 G: D/ l5 ~4 O3 p
柔柔的海风,/ ~" k) v& L9 u
甜甜的夏天。
& R9 e f' U$ ]: Z Z; S" D5 g5 C一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy , v2 ~. B/ T% h7 Z& u
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.7 ^& I0 k# T2 K9 E3 i
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
, Q1 q* i: u4 D( Y: L# T% ^$ i0 `想和你有共同的情结,
6 W) P, {2 p% r2 h2 E9 I共同的心愿。( H" S# p+ ?, k! c
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' q9 d( A+ d* F9 i) Y好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
+ o" }4 [5 N1 U) Z2 Q一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together$ h) J. H- G& e! V. h
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film ( @2 B, R7 h6 ~0 E; O
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.9 Q% w" U5 v6 y4 O
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
g0 E1 q. p1 j; }$ B我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, - p k3 t: M$ y Z; Y
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”3 y2 F+ r7 O9 I' b" B2 P- |
或是轻轻的一吻,
: E, l8 N. N7 t) w& l1 r再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』3 k3 Q. J2 H+ [! s9 {8 M
就足够了. That is enough.! j6 E* M0 F7 S
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ' R$ @; j2 M8 R
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
( \; f! u @) e. T) A# ^! Z萌出了芽,4 b1 a" c/ H9 [- C* m$ I& d% F
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
: e4 v( d3 @5 g! d/ ?3 e C/ ?' s浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
, w- f) @) \! z t* U0 e如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
l& _% x2 U7 `% L. @9 }) g6 Q( c能够牵著你的手,
7 ~0 v8 \9 U) w. K% {7 s# W+ z4 `那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.7 X v" u2 u+ `
让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 9 j% |$ z8 O5 j/ z. r
慢慢地细读,
1 ~9 H! P P- s# l# w我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
2 {' I& A: D5 [& a. G1 B# j! `在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me 4 p! Y( H' s7 M0 N! D
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 0 C) m1 M8 U' {
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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