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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架+ \0 j: Q% u8 _* o( Z; ?

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: l- f- J8 M5 x* X(一) 对立观点式 + f: j1 X6 t$ j9 B* h
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. ' y; x, t" Z5 O' p' g
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 g4 v5 L* x( G. [, |! h) u5 mWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… ) e2 ^$ I( J: A4 S$ v- @& r" ]5 A
A is superior in another way, this is… . v8 V7 L% q  B; n! X$ X
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 ~! f2 q- U4 l/ g4 N/ G
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 3 O! E( O0 Q! ?
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
3 U4 a! F& T5 yFor A, A 的一个优势
& {6 x. R, d# P5 e3 c  N1 dWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, % D$ m. u5 ~/ L' W" y  l2 \
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- K* K2 _* C; p% zon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 0 H" ?! [4 y; Z% c" v4 {
moreover, B的优点2,for example… 1 b$ E# M$ X$ L  w6 ]# W
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) - ^, ^3 Y# O: }: V
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1 u: a' _' l' H8 H- {首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
. u2 T6 ^* H8 A" _0 s! K" |% rAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. ' s1 p6 x) r( S. H
There is no denying that… ) K/ q' |6 g& S. q7 |
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… , F/ Z, `7 S  Y' a
Finally,… 1 X9 u7 C& y( |6 E& [$ r" f
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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9 r+ ?/ G" u6 Y; e. H2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) : n! K0 r# B8 _! R7 q3 I
(本类型只agree) , W$ c6 M) w& d; q) \
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+ ]8 }! v% b0 ^. A1 J! L/ C+ P(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. & g0 y" Q9 r; K
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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7 i7 R! I' E! @1 ]- S2 U+ ?& fIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 `1 r# d# K6 R/ G1 X! N- x
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 ; F4 p2 ]$ W/ v

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. / M' b9 F! W7 O8 W
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 7 l: L& t" b1 ^2 _* Y. q
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C   P# z6 }7 s5 u5 a
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. ' H. ?3 A8 |4 N
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
# S9 H; k' |1 T! Y- u1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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6 v- W! C% t* M, i8 ~' eAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 4 Z' N  I& Q, a+ u& u3 Q
One of the primary causes is that… 0 P! n( q% ~) [3 @2 z0 u2 M
XXX also results from… + f' q6 b8 l/ O
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
! X2 N3 M7 V  F; z, _$ }! t" JTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.   d- W8 L$ X0 P5 a1 D8 ?. j8 t
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
. W" }, p3 F) V+ Q7 K! s/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… : b: i$ C+ N5 c  B5 u
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… : ]2 C1 d2 E8 z* L

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 7 A% M9 _2 |' f6 B% @

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/ \) F( h" ]7 I. iIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?2 S9 D  u9 `5 U5 u7 d3 ~

3 U, q1 E3 f3 L4 ]0 I$ s再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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! z" H& u% h. p: S. W[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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