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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架$ h2 Z" X. ]: o. }$ ~
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(一) 对立观点式
/ j; P, `$ r' a$ m! e1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. ) _3 N' q9 p/ O3 V) j- Y5 J
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ C! N( Y; V1 r& X% {( L) cWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 9 M# K6 c1 K$ e$ u
A is superior in another way, this is… % f( i3 N/ K! F: M5 C
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 5 l3 S" u; ^; j& Z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 5 Z/ J8 c& {) Y* T/ w$ A& T1 s! q

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. K. M/ y3 w( E4 j7 w) Z2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 0 o: F: D. `2 `9 j
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
' _9 Z$ ]" }9 {" Q$ L0 m) yFor A, A 的一个优势 : `6 t  R+ c- B. |+ v* C1 l
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
  G# v3 a6 J% l0 }Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 v$ L* p! u" m( jon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… " Q* W# \% c/ p) t
moreover, B的优点2,for example… ) H5 e2 G' l* P: ~0 O
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 9 w  n" ~* u$ S2 b
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" i& Q7 q; y+ K1 O& z/ Z(二)单一观点式
$ C& H8 U% ~% d0 M( n, \5 W1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 8 b& P4 @. L) I/ l7 ?: g0 {
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/ Y& n5 L( k: [  \$ V& d首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
6 `$ R+ D; K( G8 G! @2 V9 D. [( f4 FAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
5 G1 C7 [& r0 c9 h/ q7 {There is no denying that… : B' T  f$ ?& o+ _2 w; {/ l* Y
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
% W9 P# Z% t6 a) P' ^Finally,…
  o' C- u& V9 h' ?9 i3 YBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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4 ?; v! C+ u; m8 A0 d2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) + ~8 H  j( Z8 a2 O" a+ e, B6 m
(本类型只agree)
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; }: m' n4 `  }4 N% V4 K(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. * V; Z9 u# X* r, Z
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
4 T4 }, a- S9 ]/ ^- uWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… , Y- G* e5 K( O0 C
A is superior in another way, this is…
6 y8 N7 h* M! A5 |" C) f" UIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 f; q0 @0 D) ?& R! o0 `5 @
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... " C: T6 L( p, r! y, D

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: Q8 ^3 D" K* z. H(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
) ~) z0 f3 }' |; J+ x' ~When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& _; a. R& l; \; ~8 @, e6 oThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……   w3 X0 }+ \: C" C5 m
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 i7 w8 N! s8 z9 N% f7 bC is superior in another way, this is… ! p3 u2 }+ ?, g7 S  L
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
. B( U0 V9 V# R$ c) M" \7 hFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" J0 }; U7 G% s2 o! [4 ?+ x(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 2 Z6 O$ g) L# G% c+ p* d+ o

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  ]6 }" I# g* o(四)原因解释型
. T4 [/ v; o' F6 o' y" I- i1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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4 S& Z' y+ S% W3 {Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
: n) K6 o* r2 L4 U5 D8 eOne of the primary causes is that… , U, t. w: w( ]' W
XXX also results from… 7 ]' u$ L) a# {' L0 J
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* [: k7 ^. k; x) ~To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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9 _: M4 G% K. OThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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/ _" ]0 D8 t: }, I5 W8 V$ {One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… - z9 ]% E( F4 T$ u4 V( M/ B1 L
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… ; H- S* g& @# }* {8 g) d
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… " `0 D) o& K$ N0 @

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1 i3 v1 c; @* d& K$ w6 e  ^! f, O& U% oa more subtle point which we must consider is that… & |8 |' ]! Z& K  K
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?# \. t" j9 o& `) k, p  Y* w. \

, c9 U; E4 E& I; S1 Y再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.& p- K' o) k7 k& c7 G) w

2 j0 [: [! H: F/ U6 z[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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