TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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( |5 w+ J6 k" _- A: d(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ X$ l8 n2 l- ~; ^7 p* l/ H, E! vWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
2 @) R9 s5 S: _- q- X3 V# g8 PIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; B, E5 s$ O1 s9 G" f) g" L" I! GFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
/ r* J) [4 n$ ~# ~+ ]# HWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; Y# `4 l5 S% A( A3 T6 c% {0 d3 W6 uFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
* f. A+ u5 k: H, Z% B- Jon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
5 ]$ i7 B5 H: J: R- t8 QFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
& u% d" v, c3 ?9 R/ y  l4 CAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
4 L: K7 k  O4 |4 u8 f4 q+ \5 xThere is no denying that…
: ]6 [3 \/ ]5 q2 lAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 s+ q1 {3 O& [4 K- o% g, Y( K(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
! c; u" b5 M( SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
$ n) e2 y( i5 n: n; K1 W# EWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ c4 m4 g% |/ R* q/ DC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
" G+ Y; H" f# M  {& R  U% jFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
9 h/ O% f# ?' Q+ H7 p: q* k9 zXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
; ?; y# O0 S5 A: v8 Q5 \To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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- [! ~5 w6 y1 x% a& EOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( _2 R) ?5 l) O/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 n/ K3 t9 |( ~a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore



2 f$ I4 `! X, [2 X- mIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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! G0 e% u7 H, k! R- M再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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