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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
# N" b3 K3 q* p3 u% N1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
3 }$ b& Y- v$ w" f6 v7 fThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
- J) ?8 R7 x- H* x! FWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
: w3 c0 Z: P2 VA is superior in another way, this is…
5 a# d9 U2 Z) Q/ o# w6 {' f: O$ XIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 6 K# b0 G& l& `1 K* g9 i0 i
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 3 b1 A1 z3 p  ?+ b9 N7 Y

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) . |8 R( d6 w7 H* _6 @, J: [

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
5 Y* n: j6 ^, b/ Y2 G  fFor A, A 的一个优势 - E; e( ^5 U* `2 K& b8 l3 x% N
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, # s! a( K7 U9 G5 B: p$ _6 F
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... . u  z8 r. w0 b+ U/ h* d& Z4 m% D
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
0 {7 w  n) c1 `* F( j9 O9 omoreover, B的优点2,for example…
/ E8 B7 z- k" y" yFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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$ x* ]- N6 J2 n! [' b(二)单一观点式 ! i, j8 ?1 S; b- @/ P+ `; \  w6 s% H
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 1 y7 n( F& }  Z$ a2 x, Q; |
There is no denying that…
8 I' F" O4 `1 W* c9 Z4 TAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… - g7 e# [: I8 G% y) _( z
Finally,… % R' `9 X, g0 i$ w
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 7 G! v: i; u4 Z9 `. ^" C' z

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) r$ K3 t$ f) h' R, f2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
: h; P: H; L4 k5 m% z/ Z(本类型只agree) ( G( H0 U2 W5 M+ _7 ^- z- i
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: ^: T7 h$ n: u8 }3 D: V(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
: n4 N" c7 w& t" AThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… " w, F0 V8 z+ F  Q0 K; l& A
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… / F# V% O: M9 [, E% T8 A
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 6 p& v2 {" i1 `; p% j9 L: E
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
% N4 l, m4 ~% lThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… , X) r0 I" j2 w1 S4 a- L/ `$ n
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 [/ j, l( m3 U
C is superior in another way, this is… & l/ F, }* n4 H8 r- R
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C   S4 z, b, J  [, `. x& b. i: f2 u
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 0 I+ m: N: t9 ]  n. @6 N) {2 ~* B; M
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型 . _% J; ?4 {) t
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. , O2 B1 G  E0 Y4 I
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
4 v  M* q% _2 J) A8 @; P0 bOne of the primary causes is that…
3 |; }- B7 u6 cXXX also results from… * Y) {  \' d( K# m  Y% U
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 5 m+ ^  q: Z6 L/ M& x$ T
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX & K6 Y+ n% [7 ^

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. " T4 ?1 d6 P% a# N( x. B
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# ^1 v+ g+ f3 q6 ]* r; ]1 hOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… * }1 ^5 i- k# P
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
! W* p6 D7 B) _1 j' ^/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?" q/ X. Y' S) w1 ~) v+ E. q

1 W( S8 ?" O- a0 O" O1 K4 d& `再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.) F+ X* H: `" H3 q

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