TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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5 F; H9 A6 I% C(一) 对立观点式
. l% A7 n: x9 N  W1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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9 A2 g( D/ n$ b/ j; v, D, @1 Q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
! m; G: U) |5 c0 }* G/ a; B; ^) I% ZA is superior in another way, this is…
, J2 j3 O9 n7 i$ ~+ q$ l. H; aIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
, Q4 H6 _0 z) bFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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; ?3 q/ a5 g6 ~/ [& g+ E* Q- s& z2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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- x2 V3 g2 K. H: jTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
9 S% |- G) D1 Z8 Q3 \& I7 s2 ZFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
. L* l+ d% l7 ZFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ x- Y, X% j& _+ Y6 HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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(二)单一观点式
% ?- ~$ f4 F! J# y1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
; U4 I% p4 s4 m  f6 m: E3 o, FAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
# Y# D  ~! r4 P2 hBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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" f+ H, @6 K/ n" G* P6 h) M' C２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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% X+ Q& h8 s2 m2 O(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
5 G4 j6 z+ M' ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' E' d3 @( j% P( D# h0 rWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
# v, D2 J1 h0 x! W# AIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
5 y1 L2 h/ m/ C8 O8 E. yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' u: y; B: S4 a6 [4 N% b8 e(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
/ u( T* u- U2 B9 V1 M/ uWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ e' u8 j' ?& N# t# g' aThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
5 L* q9 @( p; P2 kFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
/ ^( [1 T* i# V8 T7 \8 w# d(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
  Y: e: o0 _2 ~) `  COne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
) A2 S1 d1 b& A  \4 qTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



) t  @5 d* ?8 k* D* l2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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0 s. g; T( Y& D: q9 r9 w* m/ X8 ma more subtle point which we must consider is that…



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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]