TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
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. r9 C3 @" J* Z8 x" ?+ j(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
9 l3 K6 s$ s4 j( N9 N! YIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 h  {: c8 J4 K5 M3 a2 tFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) E0 Q" e5 J! q: R  Y+ [" m# @, H0 don the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
3 P' c+ ?1 h% t; C# |& Rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
. B/ ]' d$ ~) }0 C" L; E8 Q- F4 xBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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! S# V! e) t  p/ a, [7 j２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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: w- Y+ H* u- S: t8 g(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 E& [! a) P- ^7 ]1 t4 Q' v+ NWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 }: F2 N" a: aA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& z+ b1 T( u: Y: y( m; iThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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4 B: {& H+ q$ ^2 X: Y6 v9 q- \From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
1 i7 F& m- T! H9 E: B" k(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
/ h: B2 P3 k5 j) N& U8 eOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
5 w  L, w- o& W, D" L& k, _To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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7 R9 q4 _2 J3 g3 B& j" z" |& }2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
5 `& i0 |1 g3 c  K( V+ Z/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
5 @8 B5 H# a# r: h: A1 o/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

6 k0 H9 q0 j, M5 Q$ g! L: E[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]