TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
% R* m, h6 D; t# T9 A" z1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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! X. K( h9 \  T* f(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
$ ?5 l6 t" ~/ k- z7 n4 O  y$ Y( AThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
5 y" M! K4 L6 p, W8 Q9 AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
! Y0 t- Q. H* N. ]% z9 i# h; c: IA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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. F( g9 q3 d1 E$ F* nTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 q( Z% P1 m; [  c# oFor A, A 的一个优势
8 y) u! O, P4 r; ^& F9 W3 C0 O- VWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
, a. R: s& V( d; PFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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. D7 q- U. _/ s8 z; F* [* H(二)单一观点式
  m; u5 |" V! I. e+ v2 q& Y1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
# o8 c( ?9 b) b9 Q6 t3 W7 oBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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. P& G5 _  k/ m- X& a! J  h(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
9 \) K1 a  H) Q  K4 M: C  v3 sIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. P) s( P+ c8 J1 b) W3 i8 M  gFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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* W2 s: G$ f# [2 [(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
$ P8 L! d! Z' }) F, a" OWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
' A( d6 `! H4 W+ e) M: kThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
, {4 s' X4 d" {+ b! w& oC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
3 |9 G, U" B7 E7 F) k3 _4 @  CFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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! g; Z7 v4 B! I. s(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
9 _% O" Q. |+ m* t* Q… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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6 P9 I, }4 q$ w* Q' I2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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6 U! j$ a3 h" kOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
" ?. T- m; @# A+ O) l: p9 w/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) z# i- t# w* w( h# e/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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+ E) D7 X3 M2 V- ?0 h& Ua more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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, c" h3 W; ?4 J. @% p/ D: u& OIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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7 l1 h8 F  n4 E4 p[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]