TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1 q- x- u, j/ z% h* L: K; Z1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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. q" N" {4 ~% B0 {2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
* k1 `4 B' I% A- K% H/ aWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
  x6 I+ C/ x% [+ MFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
4 L- D% g4 ^9 n" @3 d6 K' gon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 i. s/ x' [/ k0 O/ zFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
" ~* h# F1 p4 _1 W. [4 \- I+ z0 i1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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+ Z% Q* l  y' \- \8 x& m7 F8 b; P7 YBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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8 i$ ?8 s: S  ~6 D8 b. o; b２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
2 ~- O1 G8 O/ K$ @, K& Y# TThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
. E" x- b( e8 z* R' U/ YA is superior in another way, this is…
) d/ L5 A$ G: k" fIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* ^8 |/ K% }! |# d/ H7 RFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




; g. g5 L- @1 M7 J(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ ~# d, X+ w& g- D( JThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
2 @1 w  z! y$ o9 pWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
% ]) U' a- ^0 h3 iC is superior in another way, this is…
; \/ o6 ~& _! {" aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
1 k, n8 [, O! h3 a3 d& OFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
0 {7 c& z& U) _: L3 H; q9 ^. `(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
# A' m1 e; \% ?* @1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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2 O# D- ^) u* _. I/ ]6 Y# T3 I陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
, \8 ^- H  U# |5 eXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
- e. o. U/ ~" H" oThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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  [, J+ b8 |: {5 T0 \In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

4 X2 t8 M7 B- P) _: q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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