TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
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3 p; P- B5 u3 b! J4 ^0 RWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 }- h& T/ [: ]- O# N) K& T6 Q' K% f3 gA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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: E# `  @  D* J/ S$ }To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 O' \1 k& i  KFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
" @* S, V$ a4 a0 [% b& n  oon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
  c! o% A4 I5 f$ V4 s* @moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
" A2 _" d( g/ {+ o; zFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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  I6 e, i* U1 ?. r(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
+ l# v6 r8 ?* a" U) _4 qThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
; o0 T* U; p' e  m" c! K3 zWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 Y; x$ f' R) B" aA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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8 y! {8 `6 S4 M% h  f4 m! U/ [(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
% x  [$ O. j6 s, I) e% JWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
6 N+ |! z8 e5 J3 z" u& uThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
* O8 r3 E" S3 O/ AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
3 V1 k( n# n* E2 Y" ]) pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




* k, s) \6 b0 n/ L(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
/ s1 F! F% W0 JAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
! T" A" a3 x6 U  f. T8 ^2 oTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



# Y3 v; X& p7 }+ X4 v' w" t2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



! c+ E! e6 {5 P: V/ N& k* jOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
; l. Z0 a, O" P$ w, ^/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
1 \' D4 n- K6 g/ O/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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8 v0 H- E' s, O9 P! DIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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. c( a: j- }1 F- f* q& V7 S% S[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]