TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: x( r1 ^/ v7 F. o% BThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 X- D) X% E, U: Q7 P. ?9 LFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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# W+ g) @6 `, S6 C# I9 _To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
  V9 G6 x" m2 [Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
) q% J  ?- W! e* r; \- a3 X. Q+ wmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
1 O/ V/ ?  u. ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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$ \. g+ l' O7 A! J9 a. l4 a首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
: a, }( I& n# g7 y6 g, b3 @After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
7 `% r7 _7 |: a) W" D' w. J& qAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
) X- J+ s( O; b; K6 IBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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0 z; D1 ?& Y. ]* O+ ?(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
1 Z# C  Z: y! d$ X+ _+ }4 ^The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 d7 S: B1 }5 r5 CWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
; Z7 b' T" V/ ^& tWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
9 O6 T" \4 h, d, j8 }7 l' TThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, t- Z! i4 i# A" cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
! T* q3 o) _/ o" j1 c0 R1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
4 c) v6 {* d& Y' b7 hAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
" N# ^# h( d1 ^/ O1 XOne of the primary causes is that…
$ B0 E8 N' t9 \4 k8 O" W% C" `XXX also results from…
! f, s1 r, A+ E8 I) `… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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8 a! |0 ~/ C. V* a; A! h* V9 [One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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4 K# b; ^. H) tIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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  h+ o; R( N/ q: y2 Z" `再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]