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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
, K' ^1 K7 v. o0 l Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
9 h s- ^5 F; j2 _0 F7 {, X+ h Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
+ Y( P% L+ [( \- F' n# i2 a Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 7 U$ G& m# G" E( c' z
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
1 [: y4 C' l) K) b" T, Z Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + Y3 P! S' Z0 c5 i) _, J
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: }) ?$ i2 H8 F' d" ?7 F somehow I realized you were still in my heart
% T/ [2 I1 B5 W9 j X somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 L9 d; q- G. P8 d somehow I lost myself inside again
4 J M3 g' \$ U; D0 {Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 3 A1 M) _3 _5 j X+ c
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion4 V4 j$ a/ A# o9 P- r
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
# o7 V! H: D2 m5 CBasically, I almost finish this poem
* x5 l7 J4 T2 z9 D" _ I am 一个人de精彩
( f' K; F m V# ~, s I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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