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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)! F) W' t5 Y0 L- `. O/ p

' a5 ^. F: j' I& p2 l* r+ Y     One day I always remember$ M  `0 [; x9 ~7 g& \6 i* }
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was+ w) R7 e$ f' \5 Y6 D9 g

) d6 ^. s3 H* Y- @: n' S2 \% u  eexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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9 i; ?3 k' x# U. ]/ ] little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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  J# S( @1 r1 `7 \1 Z was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely & K0 j5 C& s% X. n

5 G1 O; z: ]3 Rtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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6 D) }" Q2 E) f3 bthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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& x+ X$ S# ~% P1 e on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard : V! w' ^% F. t- X

. ^" b# A" ?; G" R- B- C: ofor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 9 \$ x, m1 @! v( q- c# k

8 \. R8 I* ^; Y+ E+ \; udeaest daughter.
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$ L6 s- ^) g6 R# ~5 wAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will/ W7 p0 h$ F8 T# G

5 J1 `2 \4 ?: g" a: A: r3 N never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
# v+ U7 [# N$ Q3 ]' h# ]we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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