作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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/ F, u) O/ q+ H0 w7 s　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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6 t( V1 K5 ~0 y: w# _6 ~/ Z% _ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

# ?1 S7 R# x" @* q" T) V; K was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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; `* Z" j# \+ ~0 S$ m% QAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

GREAT！