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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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, K8 n+ R3 V  {2 }7 R* j" ^     One day I always remember
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- t8 O. I! B' Z! g' L/ q  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my  E% z& w; A6 x4 h
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; w' {" {1 _& c3 M1 d) v
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid; U% d9 j6 z! j  Z* B

" y) X9 ], D, F  `. Y0 a; O( \" V was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 I1 e/ e; s+ r  B2 y9 ~1 k

1 g6 \; [+ O! atrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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( V" t7 ?+ A3 @/ S: {' C5 uthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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# b. }" K: s% B* s! M  H on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 6 w1 B  G  u2 \
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.0 y. {4 |. h, S+ N% G/ |( u

6 Q  a# s4 U8 g8 n5 p[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!' P8 l  q( N! l$ @+ J2 G% U
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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