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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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5 {7 e# p% ^% n$ [% W( B     One day I always remember+ o6 p( h: q9 p# o3 K( O
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to/ z$ Q+ _; A; @% P; x* S3 O
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my  M5 f8 O; ^; s

+ e  I! p7 h& B4 P. Z# S little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,+ W+ n( `/ ^) p4 N
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely ; O8 x. B- ?3 j8 S# C! U: f7 H) U+ [) H

+ V8 S6 Y* y/ \# T" {: i: y/ btrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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9 U, U3 p$ R4 B( }5 k( F2 lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard / k# D1 o2 _/ T1 V' I1 X9 m# k
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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1 I9 L, o  R6 g& dAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will& A' }: E" |" ~: A4 p* ?. g

' a* h0 ]7 c$ y5 c never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.2 E" g2 K  Z# X, t/ s

; P; ^' H8 h" C[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
$ b& O! p5 u4 K* zwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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