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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember5 o/ d0 }8 p- W' n# s/ M/ w
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was$ l; t# Q7 A  S* X
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) y% W8 ]- x  v/ W

5 J1 s4 ?7 j  _ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid6 o! M% y% [6 n4 o5 v8 w$ b
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing: \5 S7 F! g) ^$ p5 v( J
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ; p2 a0 O+ ~$ d% ^& D

4 w' {3 s" F  U* ?' c# Bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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( y6 I8 [9 w+ m2 |9 ]% k/ F0 s5 zdeaest daughter.
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1 d' R; j4 v! o. eAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will8 N3 R( W: D' b3 \

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!' C3 r. V' Z# A+ \: Q* ?
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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