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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember/ N$ |' k9 |0 T8 M
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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) E0 j; a6 r& B& R, ? little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,3 E+ L5 n/ @! O5 {- ]) ~: E
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely & t: \- C  I; |

5 @" u( h3 C4 m2 o6 S) Htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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- k7 l+ _- s$ e  i/ Cthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing/ N  t7 F+ M5 ?; ?5 j) v6 z3 i
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ; p- J, C. Q, C5 M5 r8 j. n

1 |! J5 c8 Y: L; F. {% mdeaest daughter.3 u3 b  w/ d( [1 `6 ^! W

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$ b( x4 O) z4 h( l8 Q# d. C5 vAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!) E7 t7 g1 U4 I+ T, r" ?+ t
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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