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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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* d1 k+ w1 b. v% q; A1 sput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

3 M9 J( Z; k1 H4 \trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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$ n9 L7 o* m' m; c7 z! j1 tthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

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