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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)+ ], {" ?5 Q# P" R+ p3 D
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     One day I always remember3 A0 S! I3 X- ?( ?3 r( O

- Z+ I. h+ S7 w& W2 x  G, p  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was# \# T4 i- B8 p/ R8 x, M$ ?4 v! O

0 @  B) t$ \* W! R/ u# E+ B& ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my4 l$ H" t" {3 V' I

: h) N% |7 F* I1 q little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,5 Z1 M) }9 D! I1 g+ c6 L

4 p2 L3 e( O, v7 C1 r2 K every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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7 t* A" {% n" b was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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( T- @2 t8 X$ H& Gtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since . f: e+ h) g0 V! N. e

3 |; I3 r$ V7 I6 A8 x- w6 j6 ethat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing0 J% p& z( m  J% a5 X+ B
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard   m/ ]  z3 Q! E- b

+ p+ |, E- ~, m# U0 [& Yfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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! W" o' M8 T/ Z% G7 ?  r" Z, i. ^deaest daughter.6 m, [4 R# A' W1 [  J# z& ?: W" L

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0 u7 C9 b" Q* Z; \After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
1 s* j0 z8 i7 [& y$ @2 owe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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