SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
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Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
: Z+ m0 @2 \+ q  l- bTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 Q5 t" @4 u( G' p" J: d% d1 U8 X( bFour additional tires with rims
5 j( A8 u% C+ L1 }7 WAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
3 k( [- E$ ~. D" q8 h, KCentral control locks,doors,windows
7 O3 D/ R8 m3 m/ T6 YPower locks
8 ^; y& u9 z% a. F% ~9 O' WPower mirrors
  i/ c  j) y6 S" K+ q4 \: s, A4 [Power doors
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3 i4 y' c# A# B+ S. V3 \Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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. i) O9 L2 H$ h9 mAirbag: driver
# m- x7 h2 a  w. w8 HAirbag: passenger
! g# w; }5 j/ f' m  bAirbag: side
( F1 j6 O' r0 w3 I8 b& S8 GAlarm
Fog lights

4 I! {$ l4 }1 V( w& B# m& T**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

4 }* ^5 w3 _, ?! `% t# ^Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
  v3 N) ~4 }. @/ }3 p, g# B4 _Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

; j& V* d: j, ~% o' y1 S( A" MIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

6 T1 j5 Q/ l" m0 gIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
7 m- S8 Q( l$ w) r( I IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ t- v$ Y- X5 u& \7 U! @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 w) V' C: U, E" a2 g% d- R* ]" aFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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% q4 G0 ~6 ]- B' QLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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