SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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, \1 i& p1 T! j' ~1 H$ p8 YAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
4 R8 F# s4 A7 I# ^- D! @0 vFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
; |8 Q0 \9 [2 h5 r+ h. d" k! ATire pressure monitor system
Information system
5 V* o/ O+ G) J3 w1 pCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
7 W2 E$ T# L' X" }* O3 ?$ s' n) fPower mirrors
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Power windows
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
5 ]" b8 q  Y: RAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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8 ~+ q) ^" e( J9 S; ^9 APlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
! S# U( L- n6 X* S# W5 ^Pick up on March 18-22.
. G, V% c: R# ^8 ]Cash only please :)

兰君子

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9 j( s, s1 |* _! }/ I! IDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
6 d' p. D5 k  c) Y. d IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

$ N" c6 X% @( O. }; K' }2 ?By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
5 d" U0 p& o+ {Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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! I0 N( V- s4 L2 k, i0 q  ~. g/ ~, cSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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( a* w/ t# I; W7 T( b+ a- bThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

. j3 y) t7 _$ \& ]' I0 O1 q: k' HSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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