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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
# f8 B! t2 q5 o% i& oI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! W8 D0 F5 S& f+ u5 S; bDreamers3 ]. J0 L. i% \" g+ E
Savages
. z" q, \" j: t/ }# `Poets4 {/ Q) t( [9 [. u
Builders of canoes,
0 F4 `1 o5 ~  H; b8 l9 n& Q3 dBlack smiths3 e/ ?- z8 a* w
Murderers,: ^2 u" R% n1 b  V3 M: B
Risk takers,. |: \# A3 s& e
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 9 Q9 S4 V( D; ~9 C
As I think of what could be.
& Q& h- F3 d2 a% y+ ~7 D8 ^" Z0 jThe world is so big to me
* W. C4 U" u; U( e) WI wonder what it means to be
* F) O" g' k7 V; RI looked up at the star and smiled 9 V! p1 D0 w' f; [/ `
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. : |! B# \) H7 I: q  I1 O
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
# W' q1 s) G1 s! g8 j8 I9 U- B评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- z0 v* T+ g" H( z2 K( h8 q顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,4 N, A' Z# ]) w2 Q* _, a
A poor old Guy;2 ~8 C) |0 t4 X* o
Legs in a bonfire,
5 D: w- r( o( v/ v: U* oHead in the sky$ b* Y& U; U( v! D: H$ G6 h9 x
Lonely, with the feel of betray
4 ]. `$ q' ?8 M5 O( L5 K7 OHeart empty and hollow  q" |: [" C3 C3 r8 h
Alone I stand
! B0 I4 m8 K; f* N/ D8 rI am useless to all
! z3 K2 d2 d; b5 ?1 S4 C0 V- M0 QBut I wish I were a dove 0 ^. t5 @$ ?, H- @  s, v
Giving myself to the world, to the fire+ w9 E  F3 b4 I5 M
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: u% l+ u) x& U1 L" U4 f* x, ^" CI sent prayers to my god
1 _, B+ ?* Z2 B5 NThough he does not answer
5 v- F1 w6 @: E/ l/ `. G; h# I% C' ?He bless me with the gift of hope - e+ p( B2 W  v3 w1 s- h* X
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
3 P( [- W" t+ d7 x5 b0 u, ^加油加油,经常写写!
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