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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  v1 d7 L( y2 B! v7 N, j3 }I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  : a2 [+ r( T! Q6 ?/ p$ _
Dreamers- ^/ Q: ~4 s  B+ X  s
Savages
7 J. V, l( ~6 E/ i( X) B, O% QPoets
2 ?4 Z" v6 s/ jBuilders of canoes,
- o) c2 n: S) x0 ^, u  `' PBlack smiths
0 B' i5 P" ]/ S. hMurderers,
. y: l" `* J1 z. }% U4 ARisk takers,) s' z' S6 l( L* H8 I9 J) m. e
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder , ~6 t8 P4 X# J/ Z! B* l* h
As I think of what could be. 9 n" i7 f7 q! _; L9 V6 i
The world is so big to me
7 {2 \* a9 S3 n1 |; t% @% oI wonder what it means to be4 O; \5 m' l; }/ L' s
I looked up at the star and smiled
* O& I+ x4 Q4 v. G8 p; l/ e/ oThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ; H3 T$ I# G6 S+ F8 g

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。( |% N$ U3 U+ \/ s. H( {
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。- \4 g& f$ e6 Q9 j3 H  a
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
) E/ O- W9 |) u7 i* D* ^( K4 bA poor old Guy;
" O! _$ D/ }* @0 ?/ c8 I0 j. c, CLegs in a bonfire,) Q3 g2 F) |1 G7 i6 w9 E
Head in the sky
( K6 q3 c' h' z. j+ L3 @0 kLonely, with the feel of betray' x& G1 q4 q" o5 u3 z
Heart empty and hollow
% n+ O0 e0 S. `+ ?( O% N: kAlone I stand
9 C: h# b5 A) \- P% RI am useless to all
( ?% t8 @' N; d3 o0 XBut I wish I were a dove
3 }9 M- A* k! |+ w4 o( PGiving myself to the world, to the fire
5 D; X: v) z% }( [I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 Z7 i! y! p/ I. W1 C8 V& t
I sent prayers to my god
/ O# t7 q# _; @% d$ G" a: J3 w! oThough he does not answer" m' S8 ~: C9 V9 R6 H* T
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。/ _; _( T; l4 I$ P( R% @* P
加油加油,经常写写!
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