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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' W8 ?- D# a% {9 d% W
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 C3 H% q6 r  {/ a) w6 z
Dreamers6 y& K, j4 k  X" g2 u
Savages9 o, h+ w; L. c, a& o/ g( O
Poets7 J) l! z+ j3 P4 v- p& w
Builders of canoes,0 s( U. l' [# T* I
Black smiths5 U. M# A7 E+ P: H, u- H) o
Murderers,; r: q, }, S8 Q6 q( J+ p6 x
Risk takers,- j2 d/ e$ q! o5 n9 [3 c
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 e( X% q1 X1 ^0 W" b8 _) m- T, uAs I think of what could be. % I- |5 z! Z% P5 ?9 a5 t( H0 Q7 r
The world is so big to me
4 v/ E- T* T. D7 C" @4 [4 V2 WI wonder what it means to be
2 F2 G' t4 O/ D, a4 a/ B- \I looked up at the star and smiled & ?0 X$ }. z0 J2 O: W" a. _! e
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 1 Y) w/ U+ g) L' `
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! X6 j0 U2 m+ C1 r评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& ]% F% W) h( ^- s8 t3 u
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 z% }5 a" u5 C  y! a& h5 LA poor old Guy;
- y8 E" ~% Y0 L5 q. u3 b8 QLegs in a bonfire,0 E$ j7 ~+ {, ^- Q) G4 `: |1 X' h
Head in the sky, z+ b  ^$ k- Z' p& M( H0 \
Lonely, with the feel of betray
- B: }7 Z9 b+ U# i& f5 ]; Y5 Z1 VHeart empty and hollow
, H& k  A% e( J% fAlone I stand1 p: W8 R& K7 c7 j. X2 j
I am useless to all
2 ^. j! ]# m% z/ v! y! wBut I wish I were a dove 4 ^% S1 U. l9 |" [/ v- R( b1 i0 _
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
- q9 q! z8 m  s; {! X1 C/ L, nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind: \7 w5 a* n; R4 |
I sent prayers to my god7 I% R9 f1 w' J( m. b0 m  k
Though he does not answer
( S/ V& O0 Z2 K5 y. i- j* ]; qHe bless me with the gift of hope 0 u- Y0 R" a1 a' N, j6 g/ R

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。) I- W9 B6 |2 I; x& r! M" `* _
加油加油,经常写写!
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