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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, $ [, [1 n: d" q; w
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  # f" r2 }2 k0 o+ _8 E- P2 _. j7 T
Dreamers
& P. k, k/ Z7 n( l- _5 cSavages* @% _) _8 _, b- y9 ^+ v
Poets
7 m# a  z; F7 }& T3 BBuilders of canoes,  R% u3 D1 |& c) d4 ?# m% T
Black smiths* @" j! O( T: L; w: D0 y) a: S
Murderers,5 M2 b  E- W2 `  l. d1 _
Risk takers,9 q- i& R7 M" q4 G
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 0 y* l  e) U5 N
As I think of what could be.
2 H( j; y: `. ]The world is so big to me 2 m9 Q* M! N& G
I wonder what it means to be2 w0 y; l0 P% G; r$ L- T
I looked up at the star and smiled 8 g! W1 D. L6 |& a% G2 ?
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; g6 P8 {: J1 s评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。/ E0 ]6 ]" p. g% u, n- R: j! E
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 c; P6 e( C9 \/ ?  n9 z" p/ r2 gA poor old Guy;
9 P7 E& e" I$ g; h0 Q; R- B- ]Legs in a bonfire,
( P% J) B: ^! ?; V5 hHead in the sky
% u1 a6 x% p/ m" s* f0 O* jLonely, with the feel of betray  J  d: A; |& v: {
Heart empty and hollow
7 q6 V' ?/ E! E6 EAlone I stand
3 I  Q! {! r! @3 fI am useless to all
+ Y4 [2 q% u1 @" I" l. Y) KBut I wish I were a dove 3 D2 G) t/ ~* x' D7 U$ C) W0 D
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
7 Q6 X. e9 S; ^- b6 LI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind1 L; ~- [* a4 ?# D
I sent prayers to my god
$ k" w# {! m% b! m  l8 [3 o* ?* q* wThough he does not answer
6 V! f! I1 h/ j8 c* R5 g8 OHe bless me with the gift of hope & W( O5 r) Y$ y  J+ t
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。+ O. ?1 o( ?/ M! ], B9 c% U3 _
加油加油,经常写写!
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