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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
8 M4 Z# c% V7 o4 ?I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ! z+ G- r3 R1 H$ |
Dreamers
5 B8 E3 E- ^  K$ t4 \3 T. LSavages
. v& c7 E. i3 c4 {; ^* q! X6 e3 h% [Poets
% I4 y0 E( ~- J5 a/ p3 @, aBuilders of canoes,
0 ]+ ~( S; Q% X& HBlack smiths
2 p6 a# e4 M0 x/ G% G" hMurderers,7 J! L# e& r9 B& Q9 z3 T
Risk takers,; u4 @* t& c+ A7 x7 J. I1 Q9 I
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ X$ w$ `" R. B) F) @9 tAs I think of what could be.
( t( `6 ^* v) tThe world is so big to me
1 ?4 h- V" g6 m& m+ K! a1 _" UI wonder what it means to be
9 U6 Z, p9 D( s& qI looked up at the star and smiled
3 E  }' Y( Y7 r$ c8 h; q, c: bThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
3 w! i. ~! {, r' H评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。0 @$ X2 Z! [8 f. b. D
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,* z- [4 Z/ `  X( {9 I" b/ R
A poor old Guy;
$ S; F! l1 c& v, x7 Z/ G' uLegs in a bonfire,  u9 V% I: |. r" Q5 H
Head in the sky
1 B$ r' r9 X1 d. D8 zLonely, with the feel of betray
' J9 L& R) `4 ]' ~Heart empty and hollow
' a# [4 E0 x% q& \! U- bAlone I stand2 n9 l& ]" y8 `1 `% U
I am useless to all ; r- ~& C$ z. v
But I wish I were a dove
7 i2 B# K$ o  D7 @) ZGiving myself to the world, to the fire
& K- N# a) I& t5 P9 R8 jI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
2 G0 m4 N$ _: EI sent prayers to my god
* r* G$ v+ O3 R0 n2 I$ l9 SThough he does not answer
+ |0 h! A  W! ?  ^2 OHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。' H, f0 X# L% H# V$ H: ~) }9 F
加油加油,经常写写!
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