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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
) M6 ~" F/ C* ^( H+ Q# n7 G% w8 aI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  / G9 d8 b4 A5 {4 k' ?( m# p7 g/ _3 O
Dreamers6 \: U. ?0 v6 f' q
Savages$ k7 w: p$ }/ W) J2 C" K4 m2 j
Poets; e$ S4 M2 s1 u1 O2 H
Builders of canoes,  b- l  Z/ {4 [, @& m8 m
Black smiths* k, ~2 J* Z" S3 _% A
Murderers,
4 E4 @  U! ^6 z- `3 O% tRisk takers,$ r; t+ i2 l2 v! i( a
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
6 x; l/ Q# l$ N; |3 Q# UAs I think of what could be. - ^4 k: a3 ~4 @7 _4 ~8 \! P
The world is so big to me   m' W6 S6 i! O
I wonder what it means to be5 ^  _$ y% p# B% {
I looked up at the star and smiled ; A6 C+ f; @: W
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。9 b5 I) j$ @$ N0 k
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 N' ^; p" a* X% @顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,+ T* _+ E3 D! `0 H4 l
A poor old Guy;- a$ i  j1 N9 u, t. I
Legs in a bonfire,
# f6 f+ X6 t  ?% F. OHead in the sky
7 t( T/ M7 W# s, q& @5 e% j5 NLonely, with the feel of betray& [5 v" v% D- U7 e0 G0 P  O2 Q
Heart empty and hollow- O( D  W: i! H! x) z4 U
Alone I stand0 Z& p0 d+ h  u5 D2 J4 \% N
I am useless to all 4 y3 F1 l  {, X, `! x
But I wish I were a dove 8 y& V1 h' u7 M/ C, u* {
Giving myself to the world, to the fire( q% \+ ^# X& c  w4 E' D. A/ |
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
' g! Z, S6 `; J) d1 f4 LI sent prayers to my god; j  b* |$ u, u+ d3 v/ l8 D
Though he does not answer
8 t( \' c1 f* i% M; ?( N4 LHe bless me with the gift of hope ( I) x5 O+ O/ o/ u0 m9 |, [  ?
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
+ Y/ H8 y! m0 F7 Z) V加油加油,经常写写!
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