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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 * z9 E3 o! p4 R8 s; W& y3 o

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我尊贵的邻居
  q! {, T) D8 W+ p! D7 s* G是我们小区  几十户9 h( H* P" B5 ~% L0 b. U
唯一的元老) l& y% J) l5 S4 F. I+ h0 Q. n
一住三十多年% i4 s6 |9 x  h: h

, T2 K0 L3 c& |$ M+ r邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
. d0 k  X0 Q* Y* F6 ?  G4 B: j* B白发红颜  不见皱纹' z3 v: F; D+ ]( E- W
开车铲雪  挖土栽花8 \. J! o# `% D4 c' C" j  G
似不识  岁月为何物, q5 U8 e! t- |& w/ V& c
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
0 a5 y5 r% l, n6 Y( `7 J: z9 e邻居气宇轩昂
$ F9 D: ~4 u8 @9 \- w: o2 L如同女面朱熔基
: I6 n& u; y# ^" P7 h) }0 G邻居的字
) ]+ X( \( E  `则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
+ U9 c# M' f! M. N0 a, P% f7 F+ @说她属土龙
/ h/ ^6 s, K, d8 f; _6 T其笛声也悠扬& f/ G  Y6 P# E& C' Z
那是从隔壁传来的* i+ x) F6 Y+ i% Y" @
唯一的声响% ?) v; E! s& `# F* \0 b
那不知名的曲调; P8 n8 Y' d' |4 C! X6 I
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑
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* W. g* K" t# C1 t英文版,欢迎指正:2 y7 j' A( i* f0 |' ?

% T  U, b4 x# BLiving here for more than thirty years,6 C2 ^$ ]% W6 Q5 ?6 z$ J
my prestigous neighbour
/ H6 j6 h5 x: W+ ^is the only first owner of the unit properties
  e/ O( d5 j+ H' W$ w5 E5 {; T: Fin our community ---
  v% y! K6 ^6 C8 i4 D7 n, d8 W0 Etens of townhouse condos.3 k# c, c3 p% ]/ u. v, i( Q

8 G$ h6 j' |4 ?* U# f$ cNeighbour is more than eighty years old,3 y6 y, W. J" Z: t% h1 X4 K
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
7 [* e* {2 K% CShe has white hairs and red faces.% z! g% l. v: h
Her light-footed movement) [2 l9 a( ?+ \6 m( G( q! ?! U5 V
is just like a flying swallow.% P" P0 P1 _5 ]/ w; X; r+ \1 D

) K8 ], B# w! j3 e+ Z7 q9 v5 WShe shovels the snow on her door lane
' I8 J' w% c  x, ~" a0 kbefore driving her own car;
6 c" u: Y0 ]) P) Sshe digs her back yard4 |3 {5 P& W/ A7 s5 g# X* P
to plant flowers ---) ]8 ^4 f% l7 E8 J7 `! c$ h
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
! O! j) G: d) [neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
: S  Z8 a3 v3 y# U4 D6 g! `as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
# V7 P0 k7 E3 N' q6 K6 w2 nNeighbour's handwriting
4 E% [. F5 r7 C; s( ois so vigorous as to be the old trees+ N  g- K& Y; t3 l
interwined by dry vines.
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0 L  I5 {6 Y' K8 I! Q& E5 aNeighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.2 K. a8 \4 b, R+ {" `. P+ m- v/ K
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.) z# U  m5 c5 Q. w# n9 L* F) ]( n+ K
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---
( n5 Y$ w( s$ x- j% J# M  s4 k2 l* Fthat is the sole sound going into my ears/ r7 T+ g* c$ A0 x
from the next side of my wall;
" z  S4 C! `8 {2 pthe unknown tune is extolling
6 X) C9 _+ d9 R8 \. q0 Zthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,' O# h; `; H: h/ G" C. O' C; d
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 - W" |9 ^" f1 |' F. I

- T* H- m$ [7 n2 ^土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
大型搬家
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 5 @1 |, C& b( ^9 w2 Q& D* j" e
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
5 ~6 N# K* O. g! W. zJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

8 C! d  C5 I) Z7 t0 n: |- O从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
& u" `- \. ?1 ~( v# U6 a+ k% O另外,翻译改动一处:
+ Q  N" C% l2 R% I# r  |# Y9 z/ ?Her light-footed movement, _  j2 {6 z4 ^" B
is just like a flying swallow.
! M9 E' S0 c7 k% F2 G修改为:
" ?. X; s+ D. e% `/ J3 }( a2 N- WHer light-footed movement
9 Y8 {+ P' |0 H1 iis just like a swallow flying.
鲜花(2) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
6# Justing
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3 @) P# [3 W0 a6 V( {真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 3 x$ g9 K/ g! x% e
6# Justing
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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