儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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好心的读者帮帮忙:
- n" c+ J9 m! i' M6 A9 |' A1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

: x; p2 Q2 l1 lHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
( ^0 k+ d  c' EI have written you this message because:

- y& H' j3 j/ N/ D0 a% V0 C- f& lI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

. r2 W+ ?9 o8 rYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

- ]  K4 @" ?$ w* ZI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

1 J+ W- x" [% m* s: s7 b. BYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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. O: N, M: F5 H/ NI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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2 f9 x% G, e; ~2 O/ tThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

* r, Y- h, ]. a' F" E1 OYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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& c  D/ y9 Q- h# D8 oI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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+ D2 M# f1 Q1 `* M' \You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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8 D$ d. K" n2 r- Y/ RI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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2 S0 |7 t1 {( r4 ]I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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9 Q; G0 y, \/ H6 D  ZYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。