我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
; ]8 d1 f- V, `7 U- rTo my life and dream.
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, B1 f. M! t! R7 @Following the summer's step,
3 ~9 @8 m, S( e5 [8 w& i! e8 VLet myself go ---
6 x9 V9 f* e+ }% A3 R7 KGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

) n% P# N+ y# w% s7 ZGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
+ u2 ~% o, l, l. x: L- U8 M+ A# G) pI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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4 P1 h& i( K1 r$ D" U一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

% u6 j. ^1 Y# h[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
& I' u3 I1 G6 s6 V- _  Wbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 [$ |: S! ?* o% q" ~0 C9 C7 q夏天来了