我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
" x; O: u" u9 e# k* K0 ESummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
9 c4 k4 ^% e5 ]9 c% |Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
0 Y  g) i: H9 Z. h! X& I; F# kTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
  x. x% A* \9 _Let myself go ---
1 B  A- \1 {: N, l/ O& SGo to the wild rain
! E9 x6 k" V( U( V3 lWashing my heart and soul.

' W$ L& s! F7 _# }5 o: l' n1 pGood-bye, my happy spring;
$ O: G5 r0 o* c: F7 y- r$ YGood-bye, my childish dream.
( ?) e  J$ U3 m5 a& YI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

: ~8 M- w" h! [一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
& ?* R9 @* e) j  _/ I, B9 A/ vIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
+ @5 l1 T4 A# R- u
[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
0 i3 l" P( R  x夏天来了