我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
) G2 x" c) ~+ V是十多年前的作品了——
+ W  v: r  N4 F# d, R1 K+ GSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
8 s; x6 l! O) @Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
) O% C1 L# p0 M8 F* ?& DWashing my heart and soul.

) j2 Z' H" p# k; a4 r! N, ^% vGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
0 H0 h0 z3 O4 o4 z2 ], ~% ~* ZMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

9 x) S7 u/ g" V2 s! R4 l一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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" B0 i$ k. d- B, G! u[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
6 K3 ]# {  a2 c6 N: C# M& C夏天来了