我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
! G2 b9 y/ b6 w2 c是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

' i" G- n- F% Q# f: U+ ]! @2 C4 }; eFaster, hotter and sweater,
  r* W' Q. s$ x  ESummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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) H- H) A9 t& iFollowing the summer's step,
  l* _% G6 A1 b  U0 DLet myself go ---
6 g' y" V* B' y, X$ W, |( Z8 mGo to the wild rain
& U% A& S8 }$ o% h# P$ Z% H2 @Washing my heart and soul.

1 A$ g: o3 I8 v# d2 M2 _- zGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 T7 q+ F3 F3 }  e; A一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
% T; W0 X9 X, j$ U% ?% r6 z6 MIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了