我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
2 y0 [4 {8 {" D4 _5 _9 ~是十多年前的作品了——
( ^* T  J% ]1 W& VSummer's Coming
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7 Y, ]- {% o$ I, G- {* D* UFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
5 ?+ C2 H3 S8 K& l! zFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
; m, U( }. e) @: ?/ F1 {I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

6 j, e* _) G6 O# X8 B一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
% h7 M9 X; y( K! _It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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" x# X' u" \; C' `' ^[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ j, p' z: z" z' k( qbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了