我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
3 o1 a8 r% u, S9 X6 o7 A+ y3 NSummer's Coming
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" r* u7 U' }1 O# ~Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
2 n/ h1 W6 `( S" g" D0 WLet myself go ---
1 Y3 S" t8 X+ j0 n: F" L4 R) I. CGo to the wild rain
. u& C! B* T1 k; @' {; mWashing my heart and soul.
9 M. n/ J8 p0 F& `- p6 c: g! h
3 J) b# ?! ]! ]7 @5 J; xGood-bye, my happy spring;
6 u$ ~  J% _# r4 dGood-bye, my childish dream.
4 t1 ]+ n2 O5 kI can prepare nothing;
/ F3 d: o2 y" J) Z" W# cMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

; s5 V+ J6 T' ]$ s- i* G一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

3 `8 I& U% F8 X[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了