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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 3 N9 c, j% S0 I7 ~+ t8 T9 m" P1 y
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改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. 9 B7 a" ]/ i4 ]! _
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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7 W) X4 g3 D' X2 }1 T6 q 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. $ [! J( `" A; x. D B" V
7 V3 N( B8 B5 \, p 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. * N5 y! Z0 A6 x# l! h: z
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 0 c! c1 Z! O& q
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. , L8 ^6 b1 S, ~) g0 C
& S8 U3 z& e7 i* c& E" M* B 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. ; J [# u# h' H
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6. Their brain is still very young. * b! _0 e* \. A; M6 W
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改进: They are still immature. 5 Z6 M k2 E+ ?$ \: b9 f) w, x ?. H
1 w" f2 H% ^& ]; P: V; x7 B 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. : F0 b. B% d' ~7 D0 J. M6 t
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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; [; L8 ^ w3 J" D 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 5 d4 W2 t7 J7 v) e& ]
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. " v8 S2 g2 f) D& q
; g: w0 I5 V& { 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 1 }% E8 m4 V8 r
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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( k6 I3 x( W, R) v+ e* R8 r0 S2 g 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. . R2 P) n" ^' i1 R; ^. B
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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- P( J! s8 V& S- M' t( o4 I 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 9 b d. C8 |3 N# n
8 `0 }; H* e4 l1 o) @ \5 } 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. , q( x z% F; V8 e) D) B5 C
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. ; K8 N: B2 |- a% ], ]; F3 W' I
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. a* b- Q% V/ `! x
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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; i/ e( ?) s5 J 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. - t6 ]. A# C! D
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. 0 l4 X6 b0 x7 i/ w. d8 g& a; k
+ K6 E/ k# X8 M8 X8 Q7 G9 T. o 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ; R( l. l+ |$ ]% V8 l r( {
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. % |8 a2 n, Y% y
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. 4 c- k z& Z r" t3 U$ [
+ l/ Y! G2 o( f; t. p; Z: O 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. ; ^4 @4 n$ s* d0 m* d; m
* P" {$ S3 F( `. y" Q* f E 19. They cannot think clearly.
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( S8 U# l- K: u+ _4 [ 改进: They cannot think straight.
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8 S0 E/ \! I) A 20. Money can improve their living standard. / c. [1 v( h' [! V2 \4 g# Z
/ S2 P3 U# g4 \# h& x; F9 U+ | 改进: Money can improve their life.
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. + x5 M; R9 P* p/ \( b
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. , F2 |; t: ^5 O+ r8 c
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. 4 A$ Y- g$ R- G- j0 j% B
7 v$ j0 g$ x* o. { 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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# o, X9 z( l' \; t 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. ) X9 |0 n' t# K; c( F: ?& o% i
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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/ ^* @; V* t- b# M 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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" K' q& f0 ~; a1 y) T 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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3 k0 j: J1 D7 l8 o/ B) ] 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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0 ?0 Y# @+ N9 n) h% C2 W2 l- g 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 9 ?* ? Z' v: j
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 2 `4 @# Z+ d9 n5 q# @
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 6 g, l" z7 V( n3 g: o* `
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. " I$ V$ P4 k' g
_. n: \! B6 [1 @4 S) S1 K 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 7 E# W7 p4 p7 D8 ~
% z3 j/ k9 Q7 I' u* g% Y( l 28. What's about nonsmokers? K# i. t: o3 v* @
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改进: What about nonsmokers?
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& z. E- _& |. K0 [: h 29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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, {/ V4 U5 H+ P* T( R) {* r7 J 改进: Why not be a non-smoker? C2 D7 B, W: q& W' W" b2 k
9 B i& E+ A8 }9 _6 M% u2 p 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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, Q, A: {) _, i3 E 改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. + _3 \5 ^! W% G2 D9 `% I
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? & l/ Q# A$ T! m- Y
0 e3 x2 Y$ i9 _% h4 O* b 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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: y/ Z/ A B% k9 `" R 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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: |$ M9 D% y5 v% p4 s$ x y 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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0 H6 c. a y u' E/ _ 34. I agree the latter idea. , ^6 Z9 v, j$ l7 }
* s C, t0 i# N 改进: I agree with the latter idea. : B, }4 W/ o8 D7 `7 u- s/ X
* E0 C# j! x. {: W 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. " Y5 | Q! K9 u, _6 }% G+ {
1 y8 P. H& E7 A 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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. H0 f! l5 U3 B; M" v 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 0 }, Y' u4 l& R8 L
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. " `0 w0 y, {: m% R9 Z) D
4 `( B" v# v" j- w 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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38. No one knows all the things.
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7 B2 f4 w6 P- p( D 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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4 B8 c K: @1 d 改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. ; D& O7 z. e" A" B
' p) A5 w1 E0 X% v& ]- c( h 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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3 j( k U* \& E$ U 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 9 p0 r0 F( b, A5 _5 ^/ u( Z( G, X# O
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply 8 Y% a/ G$ i* p- o4 U, G( }
- h% p$ [% \7 r* Q) Y 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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2 H- H# `/ @: e9 k 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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8 @1 S9 s' N" c& k5 r 43. They will learn the bad habits. , x' ?% |% |1 u, g
j8 W) A* |5 l+ ^0 m, U1 R6 h 改进: They will develop bad habits.
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- E- H& P& \' O# l 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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$ l4 j: z8 o M8 Z. [2 a 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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" n% ^7 |' {) n' m 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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) n( G) j4 I7 w- b* n. a 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. . r! T" y H3 m! }
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. ) t4 N. _; a$ A: l/ J' p
4 H9 m1 }5 i1 z 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 8 r5 ?4 v# `& @! a, i" f
/ p" ?* z6 J' u$ e; |7 T 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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( W9 ~" V" K7 |9 ~ 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone.
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