锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

, W  R# {! n+ F% ~" R- Y0 e( f　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

; u" `. J8 Y  m7 w, W　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

2 M5 h+ j" S8 U* N' p3 j- l0 V　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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; F; D# T5 A& w) b, x4 A# |　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

( j4 e3 l4 r7 h+ p　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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1 _% P3 r' k  g7 P　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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' R' k  W3 D. G( s6 R% t　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

8 B* z1 [% ~* q% i9 J　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

0 y8 v9 _/ B1 \  D5 z6 @* E1 l　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

$ ]) ]& S; _0 E　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  G; ^, P( R/ q9 c! Q. }; n　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  z  Q# k. W- x4 n　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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. b4 }' q/ Y& O( p- l- r　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

' k2 B7 r8 e9 D4 a　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

/ ?  c! ?7 V. @( G9 d- X　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

- N1 t+ w" `4 S　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

' x2 a* }2 C9 S　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

9 U1 x/ \' k+ }, z& F　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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0 h9 h: J1 @: W8 y　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

6 {: A$ q2 o9 V　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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0 z- ^' W& R' b6 Q+ f1 k  K3 D　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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1 e' B1 q  N" j3 D" ?　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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5 _9 ?9 q" i! Q8 f6 R1 b* l　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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+ Z- C3 |9 g; T  a　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

6 ^/ ~# K7 D$ X7 Y　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

) \5 H+ i* h2 m　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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" d8 A# L! `4 \! ^: a) E1 H　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

7 c, Q( f* Y) K9 R3 \　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

0 I9 ^  _/ z! y+ a; `6 z　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

3 p1 a, v( j/ `　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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! q3 @: B6 x% Z% z! B& ^　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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7 ?) b7 i6 q" o. p7 @$ P　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

/ O# F5 k/ o' K6 |0 T1 z+ p9 t0 f　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

* p1 I4 H) I2 d3 U9 V　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

1 m( z0 @* X& L+ u  H: \. w　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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; Q4 l/ }7 I1 C4 `% I　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

) q+ O) j) z: b3 H5 d" z　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

" p, }; E: V9 R/ _　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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6 K$ L. |3 _* E! J" R0 t1 y5 r/ D　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

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* K4 J8 E- F0 L: o* }4 a　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

0 n& D: _4 S# q　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

4 E% Y- c3 |) K( L8 ]- S　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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+ x, I% n. Y, [3 w2 {# x　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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7 |+ {5 J  Y) |* D. K　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

! y1 q6 `8 G5 W9 p6 y　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

4 j, ?& k' B  x　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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6 K! s7 S# r+ _! m0 s$ |9 ?　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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+ k# `. ?$ z: e5 G4 V% \　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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) A; W: D$ j4 {$ t  |* Q) B( |2 m　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

) B( ^9 {! v: u, a* l* F　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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9 a! p- F2 n1 d" y+ \　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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6 k. w* v& [, A/ q# O8 Z& n　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

$ l& @! R+ N9 S' l7 U! ?　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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* Z9 A  q* H/ v* a　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka