锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

4 z; T( E, [: a- Z0 o　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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9 z! r. f1 c" B- d! z$ y7 _8 a　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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! z4 p5 g+ p0 M9 X5 u2 ?. S　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

7 G) ]. K' C+ G* O0 r; P* V! b　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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2 d% z2 @/ p: E2 b- c) q7 B　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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, `+ O$ o& d/ A1 O# Z　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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) |% `& |9 p4 q: z+ j& V. q- c　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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3 {2 ^# }) z) w　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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! E9 H6 P% _+ {% a( X　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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# k7 \6 v- R1 a& A' {& ~　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

1 Z2 T7 M& H+ O) T　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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+ A0 `2 s. J  ^* r& m% ^　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

: N! u6 V4 c$ }( \　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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0 n7 F* m+ o+ W( B' {　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

3 T$ y" P. @; X6 |　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

' S8 [+ x+ p! m' F. |# t# [' G) B　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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4 K  [* l* V. k" r  l8 a. D6 Y　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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8 ]7 Z5 i+ B: H! x% H6 [9 C　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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- ]# n' o  F) S; u+ l4 a) A- @) k　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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, D# Y& ~8 D' A. x" E　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

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+ ^* V* ~' h, h( ]1 I　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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' P+ l) e2 F$ O0 p0 f　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

0 a- f! U. a8 }+ o: j　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

3 }) y" O- D. K8 Q3 N　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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# U4 r( K, `8 H% |+ a' s& V, l3 [　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

# R1 q: K' S+ s　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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) ^( i$ \5 o8 j" Y3 S! P- v3 ]　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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' W2 Z0 H( I5 U6 a$ Q5 `　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

) g  Z. }0 e( [5 b　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

3 v4 O7 P- `$ [2 R, N+ i; H& u　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

; s/ {% {6 k1 Y  _　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

( h4 \2 S7 A0 ]  B8 m　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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" X& q' H3 l+ E3 J  f3 Q　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

# P  T& {) \, B, m6 r# G( y　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

* f9 `7 ~, G5 B, m: c　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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% w6 I& ~) t+ L4 u$ K8 I　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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5 U$ c$ V- F' S　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

) o- \; Z) r9 x- ~* C; R3 ~　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

$ j  E9 y' h% Y' W　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

$ o# [% ^' b! L　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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" J. A& I7 |3 d( a, i) q　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka