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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
$ b. ~4 X( b# i k% G,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 5 J, X1 M: c8 j; t; l# w) X# F4 h" Q
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
8 F/ e- K" Y% k: ^; l7 B1 a, u6 o( o现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.0 X: m \$ z7 [! C$ R
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.% H4 ~' @2 p% l; G
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.; u- ]; k* h% O3 f' x
夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.7 S8 R% M) y7 [* ?! F
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.- S' U: J) p7 S M2 L4 z
就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
: I E3 x* f d/ ] I- T$ G* y我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及* ^4 ?* S, z, D7 z* R7 f$ P
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
- Y& a1 E1 T* R, ]$ z+ O m世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.( k- i* Y" D1 t+ j" n4 Q- K
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
# E% h6 S9 P; a' ?想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.2 h8 m" K" h" G/ T; U+ f
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
$ V: F8 j' G- r1 I$ ~/ P- f: _寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?$ G- M" e5 A7 y- _% z& y# A6 z
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.3 K0 I( T/ E9 {8 _2 q6 v
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.9 z1 \3 F! A2 y8 Q- r
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
5 ]) {4 U7 [$ n9 w+ L多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?* `4 k4 r; t F
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….! B0 n9 `' v3 Y& b
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously; i# I$ v- t5 f7 z: v0 t
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
% T% G6 ^% S( G) ~3 E6 B" F4 J1 n多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, 8 n3 z- u( b) {9 a, P% v# H- B* }
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?0 A( ]4 L: s( i; }. }
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
0 B: t- D% w3 W* q: {: f! p. V永难平息的泪
7 W; y) z0 v; y# ?每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
; k7 l9 D r% ]: W; U* n~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.9 K5 m6 n, R. o t: k, G0 p8 B
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
/ |& ~' c4 ] a2 ]8 ^让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
4 e/ Y; I' R* p4 {; b5 w你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
; I, s6 |6 q/ B) U1 x! w一抹微笑；
7 M$ p" P& d! l7 }" c一个手势；
* t8 ~5 V, k: t: o' J9 l: y一片话语，8 ?5 h, y, f; e
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、3 i' H) L& Q6 h/ R0 ?. C) `6 {
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner' l; S. \1 [8 q( ]' w
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.# U9 w" H* R2 Z: W
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
1 Z+ ^2 @2 v; ?: M也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..2 |8 C+ p1 P% k* @6 G2 [/ z
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,0 U! [. z" y, q% }3 r
我并不以为然。; a+ F9 b* _+ {, M4 D
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed 6 Y4 L: b# x8 U/ z, W3 l3 |2 b
慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .* @) v+ E5 H+ x6 X+ _8 F
被一种情绪所左右，
) J' q' [) R' C) B( t4 R总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
0 G( G6 _/ T$ k即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you! l. Z+ T3 h5 I# z# R
也不问我是否喜欢你，1 J0 J# k# ]) d, o
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing. K/ q0 Z2 x2 k! }0 w ^
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you* X L( c9 S+ B7 k# P) L
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
) @2 E/ w; [& T9 H: }5 b; {心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
6 l" `' | ^9 R! T7 A% Q然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere . \$ n9 Q' |, r# }/ x+ u
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
; D3 i! a1 A. A" t记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
* w& B9 }; `9 O/ o; B' S$ Y3 v" x你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! X2 r. C( g3 s3 ^1 B( N
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
% a" D# \, W, ?9 W+ H哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
" `7 i- j: B3 K1 o+ `1 z一种声音，and your voice* T: Z( u3 i, S0 V& D6 ^
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.# O7 {& U. i( d1 x5 W' k# v* x
掺杂著幸福的感觉。' J+ S( C% j- F. e
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
: _. H2 }' B2 \( ?, C* O+ N. h象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
8 g5 p/ e/ v7 ?% D" u倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
6 l* T& |- y5 u3 E/ m; O3 D1 D纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
! A6 N3 c) T. I5 Y# O0 [你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss; |& ? Q0 v0 b, E6 P4 }3 M' w
有一个能够让思念的人，/ S, J% c& N0 N! N. ~8 w# ^
其实也是一种幸福。
: U" K: I- K2 [4 l! e5 d尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
8 _0 }9 N6 i3 o* N柔柔的海风，& U) }1 n- _: a& o
甜甜的夏天。9 S m2 \- x- d5 Z' p9 L3 L/ T
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy : V9 J% D+ ^) t6 j2 s
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.( Q2 l. u: _ O8 w1 ~
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.$ W0 D4 N/ y8 s+ s5 d7 R0 ^
想和你有共同的情结，
; W h; S: H$ L" S% |共同的心愿。
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$ B5 k! `) D! p2 i q好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
5 {3 e3 X+ T6 `& b; }* u' D一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together
: m2 r' \9 T0 t/ O3 ?+ o或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
* U+ B: ] g! f/ K8 X或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
* F+ T! i' @3 b4 q, x『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
- E4 z. K' [6 m6 b+ O, l我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
+ M. j; J5 L! h! U* R4 i% [浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”+ }' J. b* f; i) u9 K
或是轻轻的一吻，
* ^6 o. y. g; E) E再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』) G, ^& R: _' \4 I
就足够了. That is enough.
0 r" T7 A0 b6 k% c2 \# e1 x9 o# c9 V这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 4 X, J7 _7 J b3 S* I$ o) d
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout./ m; L6 p& f I
萌出了芽，
3 r% @: e% n: A) M& Z一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
, F4 y* W% l4 P: I$ }1 f浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
. q* k2 W' {7 h% z3 h如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
0 t; M# O) q/ S# `7 r. n能够牵著你的手," b' H9 r$ O( E: L
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
) D( f0 A+ v: Q3 ]6 k0 d让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
' i6 g. } B- K \慢慢地细读，
6 w% V- {4 y4 i6 r, C: W$ d我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
" R9 @) A7 i+ r( W在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me C4 V& X2 K c* b6 i/ R) _& L
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
- c8 O6 g# n6 Q G5 q就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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