TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)



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, B. e9 Q0 @2 M; s: S; Y8 Q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 m% ^& |1 Q! ^& b1 b( vThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% z0 ^- o  R( G" [' H2 GWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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, g2 N% \( f1 U, ~7 y) vIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
! a/ l' f+ ^& H/ e9 H7 qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
% i; v1 C2 L' cFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
4 X5 U' G7 B, Y$ T( Q& }Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 T& S1 ]$ W) ~moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
9 p( w& U2 U) w  A/ H! @1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
  k7 g: l# j& yThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ H" Z# B8 ]! V2 Y: X; @* W8 q$ ^) ?From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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; j1 N9 S' c! T! {3 b% n& p0 O(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
) |, m' n" p. Q) P0 LWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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2 A, F( x% A$ W+ [( GFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
! s% \, `( c" J7 L5 \# }% ](In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
6 n* `; O; z1 F1 v* J1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
% G$ Y/ y3 B, |! wXXX also results from…
' ^$ y+ u8 `' S5 d! _# h… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
# ^0 @8 M/ f) W; g# d8 c0 _/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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, r( f% x# {' ~1 S$ ~8 {3 C/ ]  tIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]