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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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(一) 对立观点式
4 z) h3 b& F0 E1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. , V8 U/ P& K2 E  s
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… . R+ I0 `1 \) E% X
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… * v: R1 S  z* _" e
A is superior in another way, this is… ) Q( s- h4 ?3 ^% z
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… : j. b# I" b$ n$ k
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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% D3 g' A0 B: U& c: b# W5 Z! A- q/ J7 }2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ! S, Q* \: H! R5 A7 T  Z

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1 }9 T% Q! ~/ r! k- w. [To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.   ~% J( P3 q& S9 I' ]/ q
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; }) @) c* Z4 W- ]& l2 q* AFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... $ ~% d0 I9 o) o2 B: {6 B# v$ ~3 R2 n0 H
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
" H( j6 E) f/ ~moreover, B的优点2,for example…
7 G4 f, ^& a7 b8 Z' ~: xFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 : i: G# ^/ J- E2 Y
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) ' R- p, |6 W) c$ D* J. {, _# n
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 5 ?# E9 D4 K# r4 s2 |7 v, ]$ n0 M
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 4 Q( v' W6 k) `5 r+ ^! T& W2 T
There is no denying that…
* i' D# N$ `5 D, IAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 6 B* E( y( ?' K( M" |% y
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Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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( e+ h) c+ ~- D9 G' r* U2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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9 d/ T1 I; g, Z, \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. ( p1 _" a& z  H2 ?+ |
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… / `- K/ h2 H+ \- ]& c& O+ C" X2 t# N
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… % u1 I5 y* Z) }( c& ^: E# n( g
A is superior in another way, this is…
  o7 i1 S* H* E2 D( w4 J. nIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
! A( w; T8 n/ t% v4 SFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ( }$ @* m; ~9 i3 N+ `' [% l  K
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' g+ _+ y" p2 Y8 P! \, T0 o(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
) _2 i" N. ^+ gWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 4 L9 G: K% x  o: d# d; i! l
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ \# O1 Q  E& M1 k$ U- {What is also worth noticing fact is that……   G0 j; R) w; Y9 @! v) ]4 M' I4 Z( [# Y
C is superior in another way, this is…
# l. [7 o% `( F' ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
7 ?3 Z) P7 p6 B  kFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
2 ^  P, \! c1 i# O! f! e/ Y" B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. - Q1 b0 i1 x3 d) `

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陈述这个事实
! v* f! Z7 m2 B  yAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 7 S6 G5 S+ y$ Y* ~6 r$ n4 M( O$ U
One of the primary causes is that…
3 {* d7 D; _" M# d6 x8 gXXX also results from…
8 x/ t2 o( `: {; J… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- H$ L& b# i  D( ~9 TTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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% j5 y: q, v9 r7 Y% ~3 PThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.   w! U  O+ ]; W: _( ~. D; a

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& d& D, u/ G; N2 g, e! e, O/ BOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… % f/ `$ ]( p5 C% E0 w( h' l
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
+ F0 a$ x* K; l+ h. |/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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( y0 x& r( b; ~a more subtle point which we must consider is that…   r1 T# P2 d) [1 ]" I: {

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* F5 @9 T( d) Y+ VIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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