TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
* ~& E" y* D' M) K7 F(一) 对立观点式
9 @% u  q8 l- h1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 P4 O8 M8 F! A5 O8 `+ QWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ j4 }8 M/ _1 T4 z! `( bIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 T: g5 A" R& |; ^From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
  T" u# H/ E4 R7 j, d1 SFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) U4 g2 F9 z+ l6 von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
2 G: Y* Y" S  Pmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 f- L' F: `. `% ~: c/ iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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. q, ]6 [' f5 }) D. [& e(二)单一观点式
! U% H( m4 _; h  A0 I1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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$ x9 b+ @8 |0 D, n! I7 p. ]7 j首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
1 T3 H. H- o$ P1 ?After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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  {; S4 o5 l" k8 @- ^２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 ^- x7 T- c5 AA is superior in another way, this is…
/ D9 f  u, @: K4 n* ?6 d( o0 X! {It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
( d; H6 |, X$ k* rWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
3 h$ `' z4 [. r7 x' h) MFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
/ I% F+ t, |* _1 G: G9 t. a. mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
7 w' Q% X3 J2 j5 o$ C6 G2 y1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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) d' ?4 C& o. l' _# F! O陈述这个事实
/ K8 P- r+ U6 z: lAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
( \5 a" n6 F5 A… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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/ |3 D, n9 {+ \3 ?" G) s1 P4 v8 ^" b2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
% w* h3 Q+ S8 hThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
6 H$ H5 J2 ~2 w1 O' O$ J/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

. u' ^$ F( ~% f  F& h( }再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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( Q$ w% ]* g% ?% l* e[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]