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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 5 k- ~! I8 L; k3 B' ]
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 0 x& c5 v5 `* M+ \! Z: a
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! k! k. e6 A* k5 F  }
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… - D1 X  i# p$ @
A is superior in another way, this is…
$ i7 ^" i; [9 }3 w9 n: Q8 G, cIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ; \+ H3 @; z2 [
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ' t7 ^: n1 a" A) _% U# f3 X  k

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7 R0 U4 _6 }1 M; q2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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5 l) N2 L& r" k9 OTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 4 ~) z* ]" }: ?1 O' R
For A, A 的一个优势 ! {3 a; z- J  @3 l; s0 ?
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, & J6 G$ u- j2 p; _) h8 E. o
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... ! O+ s$ r! Q0 G
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… . r8 H' ~5 V1 x
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 Z9 s+ _) U0 y6 N) N0 EFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 8 b, T! ]" v. J' Y# J* P. X6 @# e
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(二)单一观点式 9 V3 v/ D( D, L% q. H
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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) J- V  c# I" F8 X, k" e首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
0 G/ s( U- i. t1 jAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' B, B) [* q: P' sThere is no denying that…
# X2 q$ N9 M- A$ t1 ?" L& _5 P& dAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ |( x! I& o7 A5 aFinally,…
2 N* b, b+ R6 ^; e! b4 T' j. cBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…   M+ t7 ~; i& [$ A- c, D

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! [* `; a2 T7 a7 T( p2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)   s, A2 p9 v+ |; R' m
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4 M/ \3 r5 C  n(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
# [! n" g+ e' X0 B0 a) V$ W# mThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… - L7 B' }# h3 O, L
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… : E2 F& q4 \( U  w$ Q7 w
A is superior in another way, this is…
3 I  n+ v6 k$ C  {It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
5 U6 Z$ N( [+ U* R' H3 P7 S  eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 ; M) ~1 _$ M$ P

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$ q' Y9 v5 y$ l0 b% c% @% R/ VThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ R: g9 P6 c; r7 ^7 W- vWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
3 O. K" M4 @- L) I9 U1 MThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 2 g  C" a/ G* S4 W
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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. T1 x% O3 }' D$ o. w* yFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
& ^. i& X/ ~1 X% XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. , ^" r0 @, h; O7 f, ?" _
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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; k8 _! b; h* o4 o% f* q1 M(四)原因解释型 + o, O/ [( I2 G% ^6 g4 `
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陈述这个事实
% y' ]6 M& M9 H+ H2 _6 `/ i; YAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% B) a$ P0 E9 K1 I/ f1 R# ]One of the primary causes is that…
) }, p, O6 t# t( WXXX also results from… / i/ v0 ]8 t7 r( J0 h' v2 ^/ \
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
/ g! I* f( l! c3 pTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX : K8 [& n5 Y  d1 u

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4 C2 L+ n" s; m6 C  u- {2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. * _" p- @  V  M+ Z! Q
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 1 \: y- c3 o- i) o7 n5 x6 ^0 S
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8 Z/ x0 r) @& P1 xOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
0 [. T( p! w6 P% }4 Q5 t* v/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
0 S. P3 [! i6 h/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… : S6 W" N. W  R. d% d% q- S" t
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… / d* v" N! c+ q( C' P/ m
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- v9 ]- E. s# m" i" M  v4 x1 Z4 uIn addition/ furthermore
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1 M; \3 Y* R9 KIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?/ v- E+ b: R5 `, V9 u: T, T3 P

3 x- n! c+ z1 \; T+ ]3 |再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.7 [7 M1 J) M! `4 t  `$ M. F
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