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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架' A, h7 q' ~& P8 L

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(一) 对立观点式 ( y" s( w2 T% G3 y
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) ( g. a4 d  O) Q4 N5 I7 {4 ^. G

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
& {- C" e: {0 m5 E0 S& A% sThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' \* A+ F3 n  A0 _What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 ^# G9 J; C7 r4 f( e2 S" ]
A is superior in another way, this is…
, S9 W$ ]+ ]/ W- kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 [6 L8 j5 Z; o7 Z8 oFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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9 C& h/ h# h. b! ~6 y8 lTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
9 x: A$ N5 O7 [For A, A 的一个优势
8 r) p3 h$ B1 {( l* kWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
* O  m0 c# ?7 [$ G- M1 d' u8 n  k# [Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 2 a: F! n! m. p4 b- y, }
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
% g7 ^. M7 `# a$ B' Omoreover, B的优点2,for example… 7 D( G* r9 Z- X% x
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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7 Z# Z$ @0 T# G6 }1 E) D: g5 T9 h(二)单一观点式
& }  O- }( m* {& X, Y5 h1 n) E1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 4 R! Q  A% J( m! Z7 h

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. - |- q+ b7 h/ G! e1 t
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. + M4 y$ \$ V# W1 d3 B2 q
There is no denying that…
9 _) Q' L" j( A/ d% _% }2 EAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
" v  G. r8 b$ {0 x3 ]Finally,…
/ D. s% l1 z1 t. k  {4 N1 JBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… % k5 w5 z/ ~+ \4 S/ E. }- g
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. & `8 o: Q& {. [0 w8 K& w
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… * B% X( X+ x# r6 y
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… , X9 u5 c4 J; f, Q: @9 m0 F) C6 H
A is superior in another way, this is… ; j; ]' G0 b- g+ _+ t
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… : W3 o* ~' e0 x8 u8 v( d
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ m* W" a6 {) l(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 ; c8 _2 P) N" B" V8 w5 z* y
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
# @, M8 k+ _" T! M9 q9 aWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. & A' p) M0 |8 h7 j5 i/ g+ X
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……   }7 O0 l) ~# F5 g5 a" i8 p* k
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 0 T3 W! r$ [4 I4 j
C is superior in another way, this is… 3 ]8 c7 ~; W6 n
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C , z& Q. [9 h: V3 h  w2 x
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. : F' C- H; D& \
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型 " h2 X/ `( ~- c! Y
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. . R( b7 e; v5 K" g+ k

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, j; s2 M/ K" J6 A' P陈述这个事实
4 j* y, {) Z: _4 gAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
. V' z* j3 q- w5 |- `: ~  u" HOne of the primary causes is that…
* J1 p* q0 G1 uXXX also results from…
1 e3 g% L6 ~% l# }… is responsible for xxx, as well.
0 a5 p  |$ W& a" e& uTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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3 S, Q5 q  e9 d) F, a2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. & O, \: r$ ~4 N: I

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8 f( |# D$ b4 X& nOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… $ {( r7 c* r- Y4 l$ O$ [; Z
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
' }0 R; J! m" d( X: |/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 8 E5 [( f& `# s; f, F: ?; W
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' M& b- f* h/ w. ta more subtle point which we must consider is that… 3 Z, v) _% C: \4 J$ e% n* Y
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$ T5 ?( r& V7 D9 w% qIn addition/ furthermore
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( @) D2 I: w5 I- k& \In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?& v  S# D2 ~- ~" U1 ~& m) C
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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