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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架( j. R0 n' E; [) U5 @5 Q- Q  f) e

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(一) 对立观点式 % H: a4 R* ]8 n( |; z4 ~: p/ x4 \
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) % N" g1 q$ f9 T8 r6 X1 |
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: l! P9 H  e4 pThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… & T4 W% k( q9 J9 c/ }* H2 x% G
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ' t3 B: n) V3 f# w5 \0 L' s
A is superior in another way, this is… / M9 N' v. o8 a
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 C9 |% C' W  s1 r8 o8 f; sFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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( S) Z* d3 |+ Z1 u0 a2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
7 a, [+ @% t1 v. M/ b" X, Q* YFor A, A 的一个优势
: L( n1 a. a/ d$ ~2 ]Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
8 b. _6 Q: z0 C! ?" O3 v4 fFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- a8 E  V# D, pon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 r0 a' q' ~/ p+ h7 hmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
  u; s" W' @7 {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 7 F2 n6 J3 s' D; J5 P5 b: t, F

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(二)单一观点式 9 H' J4 m8 `! e' O8 v& t
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) / T( g5 ]6 ~! D) f7 h$ n
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
/ Y+ g* f7 P% U  XAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 3 x! W1 u0 t8 d# D" x# d" E
There is no denying that…
: o$ @3 t/ P' G# j% L. wAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
, x2 H9 ~7 W( a5 T( \Finally,… ! n7 Q. L+ K) w) R+ }
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 7 y, C6 E! J  W0 n9 j
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) ) q0 K( F3 a/ Y
(本类型只agree)
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: u" u1 |0 W8 f1 y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. + N% J' ?: g; H4 p% Y
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 0 o4 i5 k/ |- r1 a6 F( \# ^6 B
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 3 V. x/ I  s" T# J
A is superior in another way, this is… ' ~% L% O; A  c3 j
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ' Y  j+ [) f' D
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 i- `7 g+ E3 R% n! u) X5 W; O

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 " |" D' j8 t! @% R# \+ ?1 d
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9 s- S, D, x, O; nThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. ; L% \% W- `8 h  v& y' k9 S
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
4 k9 y" j# A; Y- M& M1 F& \  hThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
0 F7 H2 g1 w( V$ m6 K; _What is also worth noticing fact is that……
% i1 b3 G- s( t; tC is superior in another way, this is… 9 h- m9 v8 l# m% ]* f" L+ k: X
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, \2 D1 `& y2 C0 ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. " x0 n- o8 e- Z& a# ~* \/ |
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/ X0 s9 s4 A# P2 L6 L: w! `$ ?陈述这个事实 / \0 T) {( |  g  ?8 ]3 A5 C
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
! S0 _: n7 V4 j! q' GOne of the primary causes is that… 3 ?5 b. `8 y  o% ?
XXX also results from…
. M( x6 d- m+ U- W, D… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* T  c9 X* Y2 }To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 0 g. X8 Y9 a# S

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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* w) A9 r! k+ e% a6 O, t  YOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… - S" a$ K" j- n8 D$ Z
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
$ d7 f. m% ?2 e- W7 U! u+ S/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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: ^7 O: g4 I. c8 `8 U( d8 _$ l  Ma more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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3 Q6 {6 h8 ?$ m3 Z: tIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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$ j: [& _# m# A, w0 ]; t再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架., G; R' l, ~1 C8 ~& w2 i+ b& @1 i

8 A# B2 u( X; Z7 z" a3 F: n[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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