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I just wrote a poem4 T/ T/ | h1 E0 N# S) P
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.1 w D9 H; H) b' e% @# V
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) Y" }6 e; u0 j8 z% }
Thanks a lot!!!4 W) R, q; h3 h
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
$ ~: k' v9 G: E; r1 q: ? Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
3 Y, t. U4 V, i8 P+ }- @8 { Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world - p. Z4 n9 P: b5 Z$ b2 D, [1 R1 P/ N
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 8 S" y, A4 i, f V
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
' ]( v6 z' A* m Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * g4 H% }$ U. u( W; q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - h6 A- v: |" \) Q$ |4 O; x
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
B R, x9 _$ ^4 P5 I4 A somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
& \. W4 }9 N: n: k* f5 t1 X M5 ~ somehow I lost myself inside again
" ~8 Q5 M; d3 n" MNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 0 Y* a. M+ i8 ?5 W- P1 ^+ d! n
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
2 p3 c' A3 J- m& A* ZFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................+ T; A' S( L8 i8 ~2 z A
Basically, I almost finish this poem2 H1 }+ y8 a4 f W
I am 一个人de精彩
5 @- y! m; b; K" s5 q I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- w; r& @' N2 T5 q) X' d
But........
% n9 w6 c0 {3 H }5 |Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
