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I just wrote a poem
3 l. a e& J/ P bBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
2 a" d! C' [* i' J: lHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem9 V+ ] V1 B. H
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you " @/ x3 C. j) P8 n: d5 n+ f
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 2 s/ `3 C* T$ a* x0 a
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ( k1 D! y7 J9 ?$ ^2 D
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
( T% u" c( S9 ^$ ] Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 6 A' ^- L7 a7 c% `; z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness / Z7 ^3 u% Y, r. z3 M4 x$ h" b2 [
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday . w% t! M; M% c6 ]5 W7 R7 y
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 `% V3 O. l/ |- `$ r0 Z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness" B2 X% R- B% G/ q
somehow I lost myself inside again ) L6 {4 J2 c0 [7 K h+ B
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
4 r( K( w3 g9 ~6 N somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion. v6 ?6 Z, [4 N7 ~4 Y Z) w
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 c/ o4 c6 V( m9 o8 K9 HBasically, I almost finish this poem
+ G. Q6 l$ ]- a6 e I am 一个人de精彩( e# G- `- m- R- O% |* D
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 y$ o/ X- R- Y, e3 { h
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
