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I just wrote a poem6 D, H( M3 P3 g1 C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! Q* U; w6 }1 c$ i" N
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) i/ ~% ~4 G3 \4 _! m
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you - O4 j+ w$ D8 `
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us / T" A# R p! E
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & K8 k& P$ b- G. s' z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me . [ S1 r" \ D# k2 S+ d
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
& _4 e* f3 M d7 U3 ^4 t) I: m. _; o) g Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
2 Q3 p! a3 z) U/ z* c' N1 aHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 G0 e0 E1 t, _
somehow I realized you were still in my heart $ n6 A) Z4 O" u7 @+ M
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
" W; \# q) i2 Q5 z3 j9 s) J4 k somehow I lost myself inside again - `: B. C6 m6 M- r q9 y
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
' A# G9 G4 @( w- t+ k3 Q K; E somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion/ R+ Q# L$ ]! Z& i# }: v, D
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 o+ ?6 ]2 a6 \4 l" i5 KBasically, I almost finish this poem
9 v5 v% d; A& d) V. G# g5 m# ~ I am 一个人de精彩5 x" @ m$ A1 i% H7 s; D# G
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
