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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem' [5 U9 y( i$ H$ `% X. }7 Y. F& v
Thanks a lot!!!
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. V5 D2 U# ?1 b# L8 UFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ) c8 N6 [/ }9 _0 U: h
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
, B7 k# H! t4 k9 ?( ^3 c Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
) t9 f1 Q& j& f7 [ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
" `" c/ j3 V& Y; B Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 v, u% C* k5 V! O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness % a$ U& B# R. g
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 7 N! Z; Q- H& {* [, c
somehow I realized you were still in my heart ! P: X5 T( M! e
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness% c- Q/ s" `: i4 V! T( C, F
somehow I lost myself inside again
( @. j$ P/ E4 t( g) tNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ R2 _- l- r7 X! f/ f9 s% z z( @ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
( Z! [ m! |- z4 s) E- OFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................* O7 K6 k2 [$ @! c# g
Basically, I almost finish this poem' `5 g5 |* F7 k8 c% G. d
I am 一个人de精彩
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But........
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