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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一), Y4 h! m* B" q3 x  E- H
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     One day I always remember4 g) U- c8 Y- [

8 {, _9 w1 i. ?9 G6 K; Z+ O2 z+ t% R7 [  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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3 D# f: `: `& v6 ?# ^put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my8 h( Z# p' }% r
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid- f, Q  l* x) O1 S0 V

* x& }+ d; R# e9 R4 X) w was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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6 X% Z6 C% e' |2 d/ M+ otrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing$ {7 T8 }& E  e; N0 e! |1 b% a

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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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. w0 s2 m( v/ e- c6 a! cAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will" K: s" F4 \) L) q4 L. p; Z
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.$ r: P# Q9 y7 |- N
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
" u7 |3 I8 ?5 z: j3 Q8 @we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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