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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was2 n' q4 I  z9 G0 o+ n
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my$ G' `5 K7 n3 M. g; z. f

+ o4 x0 F2 Q2 w3 w4 \% t- p7 d little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,' I& @1 l' r( r. C* I/ j
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid9 b  I" {7 B1 _- y
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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. B$ G% k: h$ ?5 strusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since & z9 H% q) X( r( r* d0 E* h* H7 @

8 l/ O1 e0 P7 U* I# Ithat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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9 ~0 V! C9 \9 }& g on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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- N" g& @  `4 k. wfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter." o" b9 _; |& q2 D1 @1 U. z
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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& ?% X. t: e7 v# {( P8 K" }; i[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ K# ^$ P+ E2 L/ ]we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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