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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember; T9 H9 U, M, E4 O' Y9 k- W1 C
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was0 b' b/ c: L) T

" A. O+ C7 \$ J* e! ^exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to; ]% l1 A, Q7 B; q' E
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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+ N2 X+ F: W& x" z+ b" L1 E little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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5 [9 Y0 I4 q+ n, |3 L1 ~2 o3 a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid4 w$ ?' Y* p" ~

  f8 c# Z, U5 g" y was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 9 o$ U: ^! \0 x* f

- c( ?7 f/ J: ~: Btrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since   ~: w, g6 L9 K; ^6 }$ x# c8 o4 G4 t  J

) b! U  r& A! Zthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing& S4 I4 d9 @6 [( [

2 T5 l( o0 V* |7 U+ g/ G( ? on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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5 O+ t: {! i, \9 c- u2 Vfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ) E; V& Q% S, c; u) Q
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deaest daughter.( ]% i* M8 H4 o& L6 z

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will1 h" q9 o/ Y! Z$ T6 O

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
, a9 F, H: Q' U9 O  ^we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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