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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember( m- S$ _9 u0 ]* h  J. Z6 Q
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, p0 Z7 f+ s2 x) `, ~* r4 S, W
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to9 Z1 w9 X# ^  o. Y1 T+ V
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my  M5 i5 y5 [- v4 D/ u  N

% H! D/ q, ~" G# }3 M6 P, C' h) ^ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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$ t; [# P8 u2 @# Q3 \that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing# I" ~3 \* g, v1 f# C7 T8 |' c) Z
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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4 y3 W$ \, |: ^- b# M9 @0 {: xAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will# I, H0 Q- K- w: L- n5 J
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ @9 o8 E2 l0 \- z; Uwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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