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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember5 q0 c7 n$ F) E& |% P: B

# f$ `% }/ }/ @/ y: J  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was. |8 g8 P3 B/ x! X  _" p4 G" v( }( i

4 i# F$ U# k* E5 k+ uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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* e( i" e0 G" z' A# L was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely : x! V( t" S' ^( d
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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# m7 {/ p( w, w7 pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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' g. P  _' l) mfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my . u# E7 G& k6 T
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deaest daughter.- F+ E, a+ a$ V& f& P- M

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
( n) D, e% k9 R& |we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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