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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)8 S& v+ l( j2 |' z) L7 {5 R
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     One day I always remember" M* H4 M6 [+ Z

) J* X: W6 }( g( T$ [9 A% \: e1 I  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was3 q6 \, @( j; ]: @/ {

3 a5 _# N& g: z+ J  `exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my& h8 g- E: l2 l0 d1 b3 v1 p, H, [

+ X0 d; S. |+ ?3 U. V little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid( w) {0 w" _; a" K" B6 q" S

/ B0 e  A' r' k" s was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing6 J, {/ d# c% w# \7 X, P
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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- I8 m" s& E. W% R% l' E) Nfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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- n- ^  E' ]; JAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will' K) I/ ?( ?2 |6 v* t% G' R
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
4 F: ?3 N8 {: p* H! Qwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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