作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

) x" n+ O) G2 u0 z% a$ z8 z% X　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

) b9 M5 P! O2 M& W, Oput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

' A1 b( A: I/ M+ ?) o, g every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

6 ]( |2 Z; B. c0 n4 z  _9 xthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

5 X$ B/ Q! _3 y% F& Z% ]  h[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
4 y, c# m) I: I0 t& }- i: F+ X# E4 xwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！