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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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& w% N: H, Z8 {' E( K  o     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was0 A* C" F* N" k, Q7 s

, q7 V, _8 c$ a( wexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to- a) v2 y" C2 x! @9 R" z  z8 m

" ^# B% _& m5 }" q5 T- I: fput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my% @# K6 T/ }$ u' p  P1 _7 ^9 D$ U
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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: K, Q- f4 V# \) Q was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 v* v. U) k+ H, A+ x0 Xtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ; j6 u( p& D% h" B

0 b2 A& S# _! l6 N% lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing; }' Z- E  Z2 n
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard " v, g5 q, {1 O1 N- U; w

  r1 @  i" g. ], m* Tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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2 G9 @$ i: p+ _- p, u0 _: S# o+ fdeaest daughter.2 Y6 s' V, u" l8 r0 ]4 e: t
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8 Z8 q+ r, [, H- g7 C& P) gAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will7 l  N; u: r3 l; |: [

$ _& t5 U& H# d never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.7 |0 R1 }: m' E! n& o: S

: p5 f! g# b+ ?) V+ f2 [2 v4 [[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
  o  U4 k! k! \, u2 {we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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