翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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( e+ `( ^7 M! l$ F) F7 o0 tCold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
4 M& j' d5 U/ s, S% Nwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
out.
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: L" Z/ l$ M/ H. U7 l) V1 K此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。

9 W! X6 O0 W2 Z5 R4 C. a0 ^Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
* u, c" ?7 p$ l* aSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
. j2 |. V4 G0 W9 ^face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
3 J# C$ U& I* m5 N3 |hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
0 q( z; r5 z+ I1 S姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。
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8 p9 }1 {  |3 E" H* r  J& i& f# {Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
9 b# D  g# f; P/ fgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
& N/ g% _$ c; Z% F: h+ G& h: @3 Xfrom God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

  ]* @% }) _$ b5 t灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
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# R7 L& J( E6 ~# m2 j8 |2 PDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
$ T1 {( i( Q9 l9 G4 qmy pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.

往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
1 ]% m/ {0 T& x休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
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5 ?  B4 p" Y& Y于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。
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My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
& I" g9 x2 \- _9 }3 T( v3 a: gyet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
2 H2 I8 Y5 d! y0 u; R( e# {0 qChristmas bell!

6 d& E. Z* N5 i6 G/ c妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
3 E6 ~) U4 H! t皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。
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# t: x& }: Q" L& {: XThe bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
/ ^0 u7 A  @: ~  g8 Dnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.

; N5 A, L# S: I( b1 H钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
8 J6 M) ]. T9 e! b7 S0 l' C# L而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。

Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表

, l, ^' d2 [- S  c- K; y( j你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
+ W+ s/ N1 T6 x% H, r  l' ?' Y( V! j此老杨非彼老杨也！

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) H1 J8 n; c0 M3 K- @) r其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

% w& t! |7 }' x8 {# I2 [是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

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我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表

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$ ~3 {/ I0 }# M+ k* W我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
$ a. ?$ i  o- m/ e: f7 x怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

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Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢