我是第一次写英语故事，由于我来还没到一年，英语不是很好，请大家别小看我！7 E6 q$ U! U7 w( a
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5 D6 H7 l( b; o * V$ k1 H/ w4 ]! K. nA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.This big forest had a small og cain. 8 \2 w; t; u, |- C OThe hunter lived in the log cabin.Every day,birds needed to the forest's lake bath.But one day,the hunter , r' q- o- ]+ G. l5 R+ f. y: b
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[ 本帖最后由 dandan1234 于 2007-2-7 21:25 编辑 ]
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A long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest, there was a small log cabin.8 a& A" O+ }, R' \5 t5 Y
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter & G5 B/ E& G3 w- s" Y; \: o3 z4 ~
saw the birds.
原帖由 紫色辣椒 于 2007-2-8 21:39 发表 % Y# H1 j9 h: y- y) Z9 Y% qA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest。 there was a small log cabin.* @6 Z1 o9 U* q' t, ]: O8 t
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter : v: u% d- ]+ a# Z2 B
saw the birds.
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用。。 , ^/ u& A: [( L, n) H6 T1 r # v( y! J7 W( u) M8 x& ^9 v" m4 S" kThere was a small log cabin, and a hunter was living n there. |8 z! I$ `& ?) d! k
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会不会更好呀？我不知道。。可以54的我说 ; @! O4 ~1 @# t0 J( E3 v# a* M& C8 B$ |4 S
还有。。用 needs 在那个地方才对吧？ 3 l: @$ u6 {$ E/ _! G4 a- Y& Q0 d# n4 S( r
ps：54=无视
原帖由 墨林恋 于 2007-2-9 15:45 发表5 t8 V3 n, N0 E$ I3 c( m
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会不会更好呀？我不知道。。可以54的我说 ' d, l% T; M4 J x 2 @& z( o! z) L, O, R, K p还有。。用 needs 在那个地方才对吧？ $ R4 i! D, C& B' U2 S0 m% r c& ^" D8 K0 aps：54=无视
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