SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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9 n$ e8 [8 Q( w5 |& X  x4 nAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
; a" M# r! N% ~  w4 X9 W3 `Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
! Z9 d0 {# h% U1 }$ Q* ^3 m  TABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
$ a- @! R$ v; ?$ f' uPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
8 Y3 l& B& w. A- W' lPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
! X; L/ e" q) I. Y3 O8 ?Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
# a/ D+ k5 J! vAirbag: passenger
: a+ b0 s7 v3 y% O2 @1 @Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

- U- t8 l8 R, e9 L7 v' R, S0 Y& c/ m**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
  M1 K9 @8 m- L$ G5 l$ F" ~Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ _4 a- _* f0 R( Y; _% P这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

& b6 O  b: F- DBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
( d+ {; {( A. O2 M/ `; F+ V这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
+ `  s% ]: Y6 G5 `& l$ ZSALE A CAR
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) j; h* B: A$ `- G3 F/ xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% d4 ^7 q  s+ r5 t* \& r! A- e+ rFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
, ?- p. ?, E: V7 t0 ^Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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+ Z' ~$ _) K7 D/ s0 ESorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
. a0 ~3 `$ p$ u. M, NYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

( B. b* P1 U8 ?5 L. `" G4 NLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.