SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
; L2 \1 o- o% }4 zTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
: h" K9 w8 @' X) O. f2 f8 p$ qAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
# _9 ?4 A& B* h' I7 c3 T& v3 Z% @Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
1 h! u' o: ~& y: ]  w* @, S, mAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

! g, p) P4 Z) M0 u4 ~" c**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)

兰君子

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& g. T5 b% Z- V4 m% y8 @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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8 L# C& \% W/ q; z  z* x6 Q, OIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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4 D9 c5 W. d; q& t; s" H* _* v; @IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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' B0 ]+ Y+ ]+ o# }Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# a! S. |6 i  Y4 i3 m8 y, }这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

; X: y* d0 {# i2 L3 `8 L' d' WBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  g( _* M: m- H* L这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

+ P! @6 |! ?, K# i# g" YSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
* n! s2 Q. ?( d2 e2 V; UYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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% I( W: \$ P" y% P"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

- _! v- n& N. Z$ HThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.