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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
( C+ q5 W% T. h& p# l; KI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  5 Q( d1 U- b9 S* L* O! ]0 x
Dreamers# S  V2 E( o  Z/ m* F  H1 w
Savages
3 [; E# s; U8 K3 _3 e5 C3 \Poets
7 s9 j+ F: |7 D3 M' p. Z+ u1 ~% BBuilders of canoes,
. x/ k- E- y6 q% I8 Q7 M* G, W4 TBlack smiths9 k5 T+ _7 F5 I/ P
Murderers,* I- Y/ \9 W1 @* T' x
Risk takers,
8 ?6 i0 t# _1 }. `" JMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
# J% i# q2 ^* I& T; Z" a: Q( }As I think of what could be. * S8 @2 i" P& e! x
The world is so big to me
; X3 ]+ ]6 r( e2 n' L' C  ?I wonder what it means to be8 o1 i1 ]8 e% H8 H1 V
I looked up at the star and smiled
0 [! [! N  P; v, w: XThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。3 p: s) O9 N) T( S
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。: H8 g. [$ a, h* }3 q4 z/ r
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,6 I5 b4 q% `$ D: f/ ~
A poor old Guy;
* Z# g% \# p* vLegs in a bonfire,/ ?+ \  ^( t% _! p: c: P
Head in the sky; R6 X! e1 }  ^* P* @/ S& [. e+ Q
Lonely, with the feel of betray  z9 M9 H" H& }+ q" O! Y; L2 h2 C
Heart empty and hollow
, S; y0 U5 Z* ]) ~Alone I stand# m8 t" C# [/ u2 l  T2 l
I am useless to all 3 C( u* _: `7 l+ v
But I wish I were a dove 0 y8 Y# Z! |1 d* k
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
% c* M! A5 X: e3 P6 X, {/ k/ |4 UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
6 X$ U' M  e$ a0 kI sent prayers to my god
' D# G* G! a) @  y; R% \6 f1 {) \Though he does not answer  o' F, O0 T) ]& b# m1 X0 f+ V
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
7 ^( H9 F$ U+ D- z加油加油,经常写写!
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