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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, $ Q, R$ x9 b1 K9 k: Y
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  4 O) W3 r& q; i/ ]2 Q2 ]
Dreamers1 B# V% D7 d% z  Z, i: y+ D
Savages
* c' P  D4 O  Q) t- U* N0 V- w0 aPoets! C' O" I+ \' \' b1 [: a/ T/ \
Builders of canoes,
% U8 w5 P. ]9 r! U8 l. h: LBlack smiths
9 k8 Z& f! t9 z- B5 o5 [Murderers,
, P, O# e+ R! KRisk takers,
( I- H% n! A" I" P7 s  Y) c, iMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 C; ]0 J9 u7 w. b# Z" v. EAs I think of what could be. ; w* F/ ]7 G3 A( S3 g" z
The world is so big to me
" `3 D1 S/ q/ S1 `9 V1 xI wonder what it means to be
% k6 o5 P, z0 m* i8 x5 R: QI looked up at the star and smiled
0 k  L1 y' Q0 l4 \, E0 u; JThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 0 {3 x) a7 Q$ V/ A

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
& D4 _  T# e) V8 k/ }# ]; v" _评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。7 ?0 v  y( L8 V* O
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,3 C& I0 z2 V# o5 X, w
A poor old Guy;+ h5 E! T  P( x; Q  `8 R! Q. ?4 i
Legs in a bonfire,! |7 b  C3 n" t) I! L
Head in the sky
/ ^0 l* e' P# w1 q% S9 LLonely, with the feel of betray
' v3 B3 f, w: z/ qHeart empty and hollow* x9 j" i& ]' i% d$ P
Alone I stand
3 X8 Q7 `2 ]5 I* O+ E' XI am useless to all 1 F, F1 N  A4 C5 Q& U4 n$ _
But I wish I were a dove
! `: R; \' a& ~7 A' X/ O/ QGiving myself to the world, to the fire" J! z" Q' c3 ]- e& _: S6 S6 X: w
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
7 |' }4 C7 {, [) Y1 L8 fI sent prayers to my god
/ u+ ~' w! ~4 J* J% g0 ]4 h: AThough he does not answer
* m4 g1 ~; W5 I+ x% W! G' THe bless me with the gift of hope 2 T2 ~' b) v, b$ X# S/ e1 K
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 s/ r5 ~$ c' W/ ^& K" c+ z加油加油,经常写写!
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