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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
3 B$ p, q& u5 T! j- J# Q* kI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
6 z. v% B2 s' v2 L& kDreamers
% k: j3 J& i' WSavages" |  P, ?' k& t  w
Poets
/ [. q6 d8 U7 L! W* MBuilders of canoes,; W4 M2 q, F1 d1 F' P% h% x
Black smiths
* u& q! z: k" y% f! S& p2 q  c% V6 gMurderers,
7 \' Y) R" g' e, z  y! ARisk takers,
  T. f- e7 C, C5 XMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ ~: }: x$ I9 H1 L
As I think of what could be. / t# U2 ]$ h5 q6 C2 T7 K$ \
The world is so big to me
, Z4 p6 M) I9 e; E, L3 pI wonder what it means to be
$ i6 E. L3 K4 `1 E2 c0 ZI looked up at the star and smiled
& f2 ~# p. i# E) I& j1 r/ @0 xThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ; f- D% Z: `, R
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。- f6 q0 e6 g: r7 q6 e" Y
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
& u/ `  M6 W; {! v( X顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 q8 S, L! H2 P; |! d0 rA poor old Guy;# f& k& y1 S! a6 E5 {' {: C
Legs in a bonfire,# U9 [8 Y, @2 y, d# e; h
Head in the sky% a6 u* P# Y5 |
Lonely, with the feel of betray
( ?) k2 e2 }3 y9 D8 p8 vHeart empty and hollow$ a# D; z5 \) V
Alone I stand
3 ~% O$ M8 v1 b) n" q, u4 OI am useless to all
7 G( v( c$ u* HBut I wish I were a dove $ X2 D' J0 C7 Z/ y/ ?
Giving myself to the world, to the fire6 ~- M: n- w. z; @( H8 C5 ?9 ~( D
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind$ S2 g% c1 K" U1 g+ O! j
I sent prayers to my god
. e# u& {, k4 ^% ~- R1 K7 k0 dThough he does not answer: i3 i* S1 }. l# O8 F
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
, g% f$ {* y0 t/ V2 H加油加油,经常写写!
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