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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,   O( D' {* ^- u$ ~( e/ J9 F8 d8 j
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  2 `$ V3 K; s9 d+ ]: j# Z$ y( q) }
Dreamers
( R! I) D1 g% x. D9 m2 dSavages% F: z) f6 d: _! N7 w9 V& M" q4 v
Poets
' H* N* o/ P: q  V6 \" z9 |( R8 RBuilders of canoes,, ~+ z1 k  m& H( Z: a
Black smiths7 f" e  x( U+ [% Q, u/ f
Murderers,
! {$ U" _* h7 HRisk takers,  W$ P. E8 \) T4 k8 s4 q! z7 l
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
- W; n& ^5 ]9 N& X# jAs I think of what could be. - k. Y0 N# h- `  e2 S4 C
The world is so big to me % `- Z; O6 m4 J" Y. {% u
I wonder what it means to be
6 X* h& D, d0 n3 }5 q! l) FI looked up at the star and smiled / X1 p9 _: m3 a4 @
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. - h0 q& l5 A; D% e( o" o9 a
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% U7 H7 h+ s- I9 H1 G! Z评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& ]: a* ^0 l" j$ m$ s9 R# k
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,. T4 Y$ f; ]. Z4 ~. V
A poor old Guy;. |. r% q4 O, L8 S* o" W) S
Legs in a bonfire,
- i4 A5 K4 O1 IHead in the sky1 B& m) h/ y6 E9 n
Lonely, with the feel of betray
/ f6 r  Q& Q: `" m0 A3 bHeart empty and hollow
: ^4 Q! i! c% d$ O2 _& h" j% j- D/ W+ jAlone I stand
; y! V% q9 Q3 o/ o* `% x" _. {I am useless to all
( d& \1 C) X  ]* ~, p' DBut I wish I were a dove * }+ X6 o3 T0 k/ ]. y2 s. h. a7 Q
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
* D  `6 ~! G* |( F, j* d4 kI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind( _' y1 a1 W' E
I sent prayers to my god/ f, T* S6 ?- [2 J+ B
Though he does not answer! d8 g' m8 A1 d1 n
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; o( I7 I% H3 j' Y, w
加油加油,经常写写!
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