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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
- o( h, M% ]$ i3 d4 K" k; WI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ) y9 ?' \3 D( l1 v4 f8 {( F5 `
Dreamers
1 Z9 L) {8 U6 z2 jSavages
+ B! j: }1 |! v4 A0 A' rPoets& ^* ^" y9 g) q5 }& W
Builders of canoes,
# k2 _; c7 U6 a1 vBlack smiths) H3 ]1 b( q6 R! S0 w6 G& F
Murderers,9 r5 i0 i0 D5 o7 p/ }
Risk takers,( u9 u6 ^1 t0 d" c+ z5 W" F
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
" d; X( Y' n7 W' kAs I think of what could be. + h/ o( x# J0 B  N0 T9 l
The world is so big to me " Q5 i; K- s; }) N2 I" S4 Z8 o- ~
I wonder what it means to be* u3 s1 Q- M4 \: P5 [; S3 t
I looked up at the star and smiled . `: s; ?2 v. v$ g9 H0 m" C& E
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。) S- @2 N7 w- Y* p) o0 e! Q$ d
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。1 r- z, V7 f, Y
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,; `( u5 `' G9 s1 c8 c
A poor old Guy;
# l0 B( M+ v% ?1 TLegs in a bonfire,
% E& h# a7 R0 c' B7 yHead in the sky/ j7 X- @  v8 v1 W
Lonely, with the feel of betray, F1 _4 U$ ~- {, N7 ?2 }2 n5 \/ ^3 j0 {
Heart empty and hollow
6 n# g3 A8 F( H9 Z, T% ~Alone I stand
$ m# Y5 z3 i( n6 |% ?2 II am useless to all 4 P! d; x5 f7 `% i
But I wish I were a dove
, |8 ^( `$ m0 Z0 m8 QGiving myself to the world, to the fire
  ?% k$ o4 e4 t3 s! Y, ]I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind( Z6 f* k, y, o# w/ G) T
I sent prayers to my god; Z, a( \0 c; o6 H# Z- u: O$ \
Though he does not answer" v' \" J9 W% r4 G: U; k, d
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ U, p2 V, I! v3 d& H0 f; a
加油加油,经常写写!
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