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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
% r# f  E9 O3 H5 d; jI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ' \  n# I+ t' i# C
Dreamers: k0 K1 A  _9 Z& S
Savages% K1 @, Y% F* N& z% P
Poets6 s, E5 k7 E- }) L) c' E* N: B
Builders of canoes,
2 }! h. i7 G+ R/ N1 pBlack smiths* J8 L& s( T& D
Murderers,* _: i" g, j9 M
Risk takers," q$ e* {* t: \
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 G3 s* S4 D* E$ t- J
As I think of what could be. % @0 ?/ s2 k- q( X. ~
The world is so big to me
( s+ c' X; O' PI wonder what it means to be5 M+ S( C( m: b' _$ v, }: }
I looked up at the star and smiled ' d1 G+ h# O% D
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. + U, P, Z4 Q* v( ?
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。3 R- i- i6 p+ G$ F6 |2 j0 A
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。) ~: E$ c/ V, s. M
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,0 v6 O- Q( A! v  |7 Y$ f% o
A poor old Guy;8 y9 g( i  ~# E3 `" Z+ L9 k- H
Legs in a bonfire,
0 A7 {+ P* b/ T" o' B" o& S) tHead in the sky
* M/ Q9 C6 A: `- u; G8 C- oLonely, with the feel of betray0 V! q) U$ d7 P: P: f- P% v
Heart empty and hollow7 y4 c, s8 x! j5 ]+ W4 c
Alone I stand1 A1 {% H, `% `6 J: p! H3 D, c4 m2 r
I am useless to all
% o9 M9 J6 B. J) [# Y% aBut I wish I were a dove 1 K' c* n$ b4 u8 J" g3 H
Giving myself to the world, to the fire1 z" Y$ F. {( V" l4 c
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind' \1 m( K" Z# ^% Y
I sent prayers to my god' D  Y. m5 Y0 d" O( `. _: Z
Though he does not answer
0 W) j% |5 z5 @; }  ^8 GHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
. z' \- m: h/ A! P$ @% ?# V加油加油,经常写写!
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