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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 0 H8 L4 [4 g/ S7 v0 C- V1 @6 h
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ' ^$ G5 r0 g2 `6 m" L
Dreamers, E% @" |% o/ ^# C2 U
Savages
1 e0 y, h% g, S' `Poets6 Z: K$ v& K, F4 H; }- h' X% [
Builders of canoes,
: t7 \. d3 d) z( A% T1 eBlack smiths; L, r/ _& X# Q. ^. b
Murderers,
# N  Q9 K. v7 u" uRisk takers,0 }. s, s' w0 _' B  h* s5 B) n+ n
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
1 f, H0 z$ G' @/ {+ t4 @As I think of what could be.
) s- S) i6 p! z8 k; {The world is so big to me
- G! [8 Z7 r0 h) tI wonder what it means to be
, q1 J1 B$ R7 kI looked up at the star and smiled ' A, [  w% J( E
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. : b; N( g8 W( `3 U. C0 T  T
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* |8 n6 r! \/ l) c$ v5 o评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
$ W. n0 B5 m& j4 Y! p顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- |9 r" F3 `* F0 U- ~: `
A poor old Guy;8 y5 E, `$ F4 n* J
Legs in a bonfire,! _9 H# B- Y1 r' P: N
Head in the sky6 H" T# W: D/ {. b0 M. N
Lonely, with the feel of betray! l* L5 a' j# @; c
Heart empty and hollow
( S7 s7 [7 W9 G: C9 N) e; a) KAlone I stand" x: i8 P& Y: u/ k& A1 C: ~3 G
I am useless to all 7 s4 W. J4 k: X6 m1 ]$ R- N+ b( q! c
But I wish I were a dove
. [2 a# l4 p$ PGiving myself to the world, to the fire
, o8 t/ x5 @% t1 Q% eI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind$ U1 d4 I* @5 Y6 A$ N2 E
I sent prayers to my god: s" J6 V" j7 k9 R4 o5 j9 m% q
Though he does not answer
- ]' ^) n0 G% b9 ~He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。7 C1 I6 ^/ ]$ G
加油加油,经常写写!
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