埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 2240|回复: 5

我和我同学在学校写的诗

[复制链接]
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' e, Y5 Z( o: F. K. i6 y
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  1 x, u6 S6 ]5 t9 m* j4 T6 p' `
Dreamers
% m; V2 \6 g: |( fSavages
: R3 M3 U" T1 O& g- ]5 QPoets
8 Z: `& H# }- |) h7 ~5 J( QBuilders of canoes,
/ o5 u+ q/ B8 v( e1 eBlack smiths
" k$ Y6 I) c6 j/ Q/ `4 H2 t3 R9 m( uMurderers,. @- H- L5 u# J$ v/ _
Risk takers,
9 C: F6 j& c  j  O1 A: ?6 m+ ?9 SMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
# L8 X* i6 @. d: v3 N( ?As I think of what could be. 6 O/ s- H, i- I) x* U
The world is so big to me
0 ~$ V8 o2 s& PI wonder what it means to be
6 @  z) U7 M2 S" b* RI looked up at the star and smiled & W# c( j, M& R% U% ^
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
  H" _# V  {5 d# H. h7 S* p8 ?2 L6 m$ D! ~9 e
鲜花(754) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。2 m: |3 n$ d8 T8 P$ V. P1 t. R2 B6 X. C
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。. l& E. d+ Q8 ^
顶一下,支持支持!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,* Q, N0 I: z% _; B- c% ~; r
A poor old Guy;5 r! F* Q) c* @( [. @1 J) S' G
Legs in a bonfire,
$ [: e) ^& i2 i1 o- iHead in the sky
- Y2 w7 H3 c' Y6 yLonely, with the feel of betray
' ?4 I! _8 G; L, L& [( B5 J, Q' U' @Heart empty and hollow
$ w2 T8 M) c& b/ S# i8 I! X0 |Alone I stand
; N' U- G/ ], c4 q* Z  m9 c, sI am useless to all
/ z! {( n9 e+ g2 v1 ZBut I wish I were a dove
6 k! N! N. U- y' S! i: }" {/ pGiving myself to the world, to the fire/ N+ U4 _" R8 G' b
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind% D& R- F- T" i6 h' H' {! o
I sent prayers to my god
: w2 d4 p# v1 Z0 ~1 PThough he does not answer5 W  D3 }5 q9 j$ {
He bless me with the gift of hope / m+ D  ~) @: {9 L

3 m0 W6 B: F3 R. `: o- s, A
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。& w% y) E' B! u% I
加油加油,经常写写!
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2025-9-13 01:32 , Processed in 0.077000 second(s), 17 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表