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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, / Z( S+ Q5 ]5 ?; E( {
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
8 Z8 w9 M  Z2 `8 \. L- \Dreamers
3 {1 Z% Y: o% \( g% z/ S; tSavages* }! _' P1 K. }% y! U
Poets. I4 J! `4 K- ]
Builders of canoes,
5 W0 }- @8 p9 c% `  jBlack smiths
' Y# p% Q+ m3 L, y6 E. d7 ZMurderers,
1 Y1 ]5 M* z9 @. P0 p5 V7 YRisk takers,
0 T0 Y% C* M; `3 o* \" ]1 pMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
# S, c) I9 }/ F% |! Y) P: L0 LAs I think of what could be.
9 h2 ~9 W+ f) t4 hThe world is so big to me
1 \5 C: h& j6 S2 ^& N2 rI wonder what it means to be
% O  h; B5 ~8 D6 W7 {0 u8 BI looked up at the star and smiled
: ]* B9 W$ K; {  b( L0 x$ mThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 7 k& s# @  A9 |8 V0 m) R

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; D$ B7 P# B% H- ]" h; A. G
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。  Y6 E/ o0 j$ O
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 a; n4 k+ N1 u& @7 q, bA poor old Guy;
8 h7 I0 R' c0 {Legs in a bonfire,! C& g( D4 T; K* d2 u* \+ w' K( d/ ~
Head in the sky7 j: |7 s6 ~& x3 N8 {% P" q8 L9 x  _2 D
Lonely, with the feel of betray3 k0 V# I0 k  l
Heart empty and hollow& u2 U; K  u+ n& o, y- A0 F
Alone I stand8 Y) j8 x: _: x. G: _' I
I am useless to all
$ ^. K2 J3 L$ QBut I wish I were a dove
6 Z0 F8 t$ i7 z% gGiving myself to the world, to the fire; Y0 ], B. q  K1 P0 q( K" w2 b
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind; v' \, K' c; ~* V3 X% o
I sent prayers to my god0 y! k: M5 K) ?& d
Though he does not answer' k& Z$ k8 N9 ~6 c. T+ [
He bless me with the gift of hope % T( L/ U. t! @7 H7 R- @
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
' L$ U7 I" l3 z2 g) p- ]' p( y$ ^加油加油,经常写写!
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