请大家帮忙看一下这样的雇主信行不行？(CEC 申请)

zhddz

June 20， 2012

& u2 N  k1 r. |- n; sAttention: To Whom it May Concern
Reference: John Smith's Employment at XXX Company

This letter is to confirm that John Smith has worked with XXX Company full time (40 hours per week) as a junior structural engineer designing steel connections and developing connection design tools from May 23, 2011 till June 20, 2012. Mr. Smith's annual salary was $xxxx per annum plus benefits.
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4 W4 b. |+ J$ l5 H9 fAny further questions about Mr. Smith's work at  XXX Company can be directed to me, contact information given below.
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, S# [& K+ m. }1 YYour truly,
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5 Z  X8 S4 o6 D4 m  v# |, X; e" e* XXXX

trixie

看CHECKLIST (IMM5610)的要求. 篇幅这么短小惊汗,一共三句话:) 看上去还挺全. 语法和拼写有错的地方.然后就LETTERHEAD, SUPERVISOR'S PRINT NAME AND SIGNATURE.
你自己捉刀的?

davidli

路过+学习

zhddz

trixie 发表于 2013-1-19 22:51
/ M* a8 G7 R1 s看CHECKLIST (IMM5610)的要求. 篇幅这么短小惊汗,一共三句话:) 看上去还挺全. 语法和拼写有错的地方.然后就 ...

' F' g8 r5 ?2 `9 \6 \' W这是我雇主写的，我对着checklist检查了一遍，该有的东西都有。就是短。不知道行不行。

trixie

内容上除了"BENEFIT"没有写明是什么福利,其他倒是都全了.最最重要的是它的LETTERHEAD, 签字人的头衔和联系方式.用正式的公司信签. 最好出信的日期晚一点, 你的都是半年多前的了. 留原件,交复印件. 想要更保险,连同雇佣合同/工资单一起递交.

littlefish2011

楼上的正解。

flying54739

我以前是自己写的，然后让雇主签字。雇主也省事，自己也可以按要求写。

candytree213

they need to write job duties,

renwoxing