天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
: W" P( U1 B! S8 K- aTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

5 B7 @# k6 a( K" Q( O0 ]) i: h$ h! n鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
; C" H% q. Q/ o: j/ Z) NTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

: K: {8 q8 R! @; Y, P- B' I哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.