我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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0 p% T# r% b, G0 i' l6 f* AFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
9 }* T: d4 s" A9 HTo my life and dream.
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& f1 l* m# R7 {0 F( XFollowing the summer's step,
6 s# L6 A' ^, r( x. PLet myself go ---
" z' P$ a4 s  H9 h3 j" E- E% _Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
) X3 Q6 |; Y$ s9 h" p; vGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
9 M( c) @. ~, N3 i' \. M$ e, {" \It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了