我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
( v1 |( ]+ Y0 C' V0 i; bSummer's Coming
9 w. c: G, {+ B! M# k
Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
& G+ V' K( K* ^4 \9 T  @1 yGo to the wild rain
/ c" A/ n0 N4 \8 [6 T& z9 N. JWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
$ Q, Y: Q+ g/ @, o  rGood-bye, my childish dream.
# C, n! b/ n. _- \I can prepare nothing;
7 u/ {8 d- T* n& L3 AMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ h  Z4 O0 |5 [, r; ?but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了