我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
9 w7 j" Z. o+ G6 A% ^是十多年前的作品了——
6 L( a1 r: k: xSummer's Coming

, Y3 P4 C3 _, X% o6 [Faster, hotter and sweater,
  `0 V, w* j6 B# aSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
: `: U2 ]/ u  E8 qFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
% a3 R* g4 p) A/ G' [/ p) CLet myself go ---
' R/ j6 v' o3 m9 dGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

0 A" L$ w0 X7 f; Z5 n/ x4 k: \9 X9 [Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
" I' |8 Q) f* o- B& i! `I can prepare nothing;
* Q$ x1 D. j/ Z' VMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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5 M7 t& D1 F) l* N4 s一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
# U6 u( \% b0 [2 `" w* L5 `5 LIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

% S) t2 ?) K) U) v: A[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ a# _: q; v& D! W4 [. Jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
2 t5 T. a; W5 C/ K夏天来了