我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
" u, U" m5 v' j4 R! y7 S' ?Summer's Coming

) r$ m- {2 \0 }" f! J3 IFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 _4 [1 y. O5 n* C2 fFrom the colorful nature
: e% C+ t4 a& u  P1 z5 h5 |$ [) A3 sTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
8 G. a/ g+ a! s" R. K) @I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

" s  A) M/ l0 d  z& @0 j5 L一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

( G/ G5 r9 z, X* Z3 V: ~[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
& A7 B. D, M8 L/ n( N" ~7 m夏天来了