我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
4 P) G; E  ~% e& z2 j是十多年前的作品了——
/ w5 q5 [8 W) v8 I% K& ]9 N6 J6 J' DSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
$ r; y/ [5 A' e3 ~# sSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
8 A0 F- ?% m1 S; ]& `1 BFrom the colorful nature
/ _6 j! c3 V0 A/ f/ _; O9 [To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
; a6 K6 R7 ^3 D2 T* |, _! mGood-bye, my childish dream.
: d  W7 n$ }; h) p: B: @I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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. ~$ W  H5 c( J4 }- G一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
; N7 m6 M# h, [/ f3 U0 {It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ X; s( e7 l) `* v) C夏天来了