我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
( u. }! R3 m3 O  V! W! I) o* HSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
5 S3 [& p, h! r, A: r) lFrom the colorful nature
% s" ^- D$ q& I' ?. `, dTo my life and dream.
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/ T; v9 t5 i, C2 m" Q  n& N6 [Following the summer's step,
! E. y# n' g! lLet myself go ---
* n* I5 T! N/ q( z! S, m2 lGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

4 s5 P8 ?9 S7 z5 x7 V3 qGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
( L2 `* u; r; \/ KIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了