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发表于 2005-7-7 14:15 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
MONSTER SIR:BOB
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     Hi, my name is Andrew. Today is hot day and Sunday. So everybody wants to go outside for playing. Somebody play football, somebody play baseball, somebody goes swimming, somebody plays basketball but not today, and somebody goes shopping. Everybody is very happy but also in one the oldest house have one monster he’s name is monster sir: Bob he hate everybody very happy also he like everybody very sad. So he started to kill people. So somebody just want kill MONSTER SIR:BOB but the lost. But also bob’s people many is dead but bob is very happy because he is win. ( The can’t be. )4 soldiers said . and than the start one big wars again. And than the lost again. So hey hey my troops is come and I have good plan, now I can’t tell you anyway, my troop dead, but bob is tired and than I finished him. I think now you knew what my plan is. My plan is first I use a robot troop and I knew troop is dead I already knew that. And I knew he finished my troop he is very tired, so I can easy to finished him.7 U# M" u: T8 [( G% E9 L# P$ |
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发表于 2005-7-7 17:52 | 显示全部楼层
什么?
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发表于 2005-7-8 07:21 | 显示全部楼层
不错~
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发表于 2005-7-8 22:35 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
写的不错!
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发表于 2005-7-10 16:16 | 显示全部楼层
顶~
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发表于 2005-7-10 19:14 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-7-11 07:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
good
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发表于 2005-7-14 00:31 | 显示全部楼层
......我10月才过去,英语太差,根本看不懂......
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发表于 2005-7-15 09:16 | 显示全部楼层
Originally posted by Tony.D at 2005-7-14 01:31 AM:) D2 Z0 s: A# k
......我10月才过去,英语太差,根本看不懂......
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没关系,在这里待时间长了就该发愁中文不好了。
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发表于 2005-7-15 09:24 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是啊~
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-7-15 14:11 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-7-16 15:49 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-7-17 16:11 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
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发表于 2005-7-17 19:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
顶~
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发表于 2005-7-21 19:53 | 显示全部楼层
顶~
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发表于 2005-7-22 03:20 | 显示全部楼层
可以使用:金山快译!
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发表于 2005-7-22 03:21 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
不过实在是太简单的`自己能看懂呵`
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发表于 2005-7-22 17:06 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-7-22 17:53 | 显示全部楼层
加分
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发表于 2005-8-20 16:02 | 显示全部楼层
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