西西写的小故事

悟空 · 发表于 2005-3-30 20:53

西西今天看图写了个小故事. 我鼓励她后, 她要求我贴在网上给小辣椒小气球LOVELYKID等小朋友们看故事.

One day four children were bored. Then their parents asked if they would like to go skating. Then the children got excited and said that they would like to go. They all went to the lake. They enjoyed skating. Then one of the boys step on a piece of thin ice. Then He felll into a hole on the ice. All the children heard him calling for help . All the children called for help. Some adults heard the children called for help. Then the adults who heard the children came running toward the lake. Then one of the adults pulled the boy out of the lake and the children lived happily ever after.

Kuryuki · 发表于 2005-3-30 21:45

great

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁 · 发表于 2005-3-31 08:29

紫色辣椒 · 发表于 2005-3-31 11:00

好！

斑点狗 · 发表于 2005-4-9 11:38

还行

我行我酷 · 发表于 2005-4-25 19:05

不错

小叶子 · 发表于 2005-4-28 12:06

hao! JIa jing!

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁 · 发表于 2005-4-28 13:31

我行我酷 · 发表于 2005-5-2 18:37

十里桂花香 · 发表于 2005-5-4 19:12

好!

叶雪 · 发表于 2005-5-15 12:49

good

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西西写的小故事

好！

非常好的！