锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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9 j- s/ v; g! [) ]9 Z5 m2 Q/ Y　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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) |+ A4 n" r: M, `5 ]. M　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

% J# J6 y, f, V) p6 I6 |8 p( a% Y" f　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

* }9 b: u: y4 x& l0 J2 q1 d　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

! F" W6 q" n( |5 Q0 h/ N　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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" T- e* y9 P! ^% ^9 i$ X$ m　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

! g4 L6 g2 v* E# u5 E　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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7 ~2 S" _# H* l1 c; b4 H, W, n　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

+ N$ s& @/ `! K) J0 }6 l& v　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

! K' ~" T( {$ s9 f　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

$ T% P. J* e8 m% p3 {9 _  ]2 T　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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5 I( h7 q0 `( u% M1 |$ K' m* j6 S　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

$ u! `( q' A5 ^! F　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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# i: N$ }7 P5 q" m+ W　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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3 T# U' o% h; S# q) J- Q& C　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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+ N# h$ U1 a* X$ S9 Z& X　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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6 l: C8 a+ g0 V% b　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

9 g! [+ G* r/ r1 M8 _- A　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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8 k( C, A3 C7 v　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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/ F& ]9 O/ g+ v+ h, Q$ _　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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: x& P: ~! ^; P3 F, e/ Z　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

) f2 f& {+ F" L6 J+ x　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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0 z# D9 z4 a) P1 q( {4 c2 c4 p　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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% Q& q. T2 R% x, A7 Z, H　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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, X# M' e/ N2 K! @5 ?　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

( d8 n2 x: N9 ?% {% T8 I　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

$ N9 w1 @/ O+ s7 H2 T　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

+ k2 l& ?5 Y) }+ I  j( e& h　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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8 \. K0 h2 r" ]! u5 n　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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) Q: M3 q6 G  P2 t/ r2 v& ^9 P- U　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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" j* f8 G3 F2 g' c& d1 M　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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9 n$ ^+ W9 s6 Z, A4 w, \5 D8 T: w　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

! u- ^2 i# ?& A8 |　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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2 E' K$ b3 H6 w& S; ]　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

1 h, d* G; ]2 Y% Q0 M　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

' W2 L, o1 T1 R. h% d　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

2 P( |# k; e0 Q* y2 l　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

- D* w# l% u" V　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

. I- m% W) u& c- v/ ]　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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4 W  F/ X9 L$ [3 }　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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1 R  z; l! X* v* P* p! m　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

$ Y  \) a% B- x+ W  @8 y　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

7 v! |7 r( G  @7 z* h8 \+ w: X　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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" C% C* Q4 ^# Z　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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. G5 p0 Q. h7 f# D% n0 D　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka